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  • Long movies, producer credits and price-fixing
    Episode – 98 | Jul 16, 2013
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    John and Craig discuss the Apple ebook price-fixing lawsuit and its lessons for Hollywood, before segueing to the new credits system for producers. Then: Have movies gotten too long, and would making them shorter really save money?

  • Is 15 the new 30?
    Episode – 97 | Jul 9, 2013
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    Have first acts gotten shorter, or does it just feel that way? John and Craig discuss the pressure on screenwriters to “get to it” faster, and why that’s often the wrong goal.

  • Three Page Challenge, Live Edition
    Episode – 96 | Jul 2, 2013
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    Live from WGF Craft Day, Craig and John tackle three new Three Page Challenge entries…with the writers on hand!

  • Notes on the death of the film industry
    Episode – 95 | Jun 25, 2013
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    John and Craig discuss the death of the film industry as foretold by four prominent filmmakers. Is the way we make movies unsustainable? Is the system fundamentally broken, or just changing into something new? And why don’t we make romantic comedies anymore?

  • 10 Questions, 10 Answers
    Episode – 94 | Jun 18, 2013
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    John and Craig tackle the bursting mailbag, answering listener questions on topics ranging from the variable length of the TV season to underachieving agents to embarrassing IMDb credits.

  • Let’s talk about Nikki Finke
    Episode – 93 | Jun 11, 2013
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    John and Craig discuss the polarizing potentate of Deadline Hollywood Daily, then segue into what a healthy entertainment journalism ecosystem might look like.

  • The Little Mermaid
    Episode – 92 | Jun 4, 2013
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    Craig and John spend an entire episode discussing and dissecting 1989’s THE LITTLE MERMAID, looking at both its structure and scene work.

  • Bechdel and Batman
    Episode – 91 | May 28, 2013
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    It’s a week of pondering other people’s opinions. First, Craig and John take a look at the Bechdel Test: is it a useful metric for screenwriters, or just meaningless checkbox-ticking?

  • 50 Random Questions
    Episode – 90 | May 21, 2013
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    As promised, John and Craig answer a bunch of listener questions on everything except screenwriting, on topics ranging from sex to science to sushi.

  • Writing effective transitions
    Episode – 89 | May 14, 2013
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    How you get from one scene to the next can be just as important as the scenes themselves. Craig and John talk techniques and tactics for making those cuts count.

  • Ugly children and cigarettes
    Episode – 88 | May 7, 2013
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    Has a statistician cracked the code on successful screenplay formulas? John and Craig cast a skeptical eye at a New York Times article on Vinny Bruzzese, who claims to have done exactly that.

  • Moving On is not Giving Up
    Episode – 87 | Apr 30, 2013
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    John and Craig discuss when to stop rewriting a project and accept that it’s just not going to become a movie. Then we go bigger to look at when to give up on the dream of being a screenwriter — which starts with a hard look at why people seek out the career in the first place.

  • Taking notes
    Episode – 86 | Apr 23, 2013
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    Craig leads the discussion on how to survive a notes meeting. As screenwriters, our instinct is to defend, deny and debate — but these are almost always the wrong choice. By reframing the discussion about the movie rather than the script, you can often end up at a better place.

  • Another Time and Place
    Episode – 85 | Apr 16, 2013
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    John and Craig discuss the odd dislocation writers experience when writing movies in coffeeshops and windowless offices. We’re literally “someplace else” with our characters, but learning how to work in less-than-ideal circumstances is part of the screenwriter’s trade.

  • First sale and funny on the page
    Episode – 84 | Apr 9, 2013
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    Craig and John look at two recent court decisions that could have a big impact on how movies get sold and resold — and how writers get paid. First-Sale Doctrine is one of those intractable issues that involves freedom and control, bits and atoms, creators and consumers.

  • A city born of fire
    Episode – 83 | Apr 2, 2013
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    Writer Derek Haas (Wanted, 3:10 to Yuma) joins John and Craig to discuss gay slurs, refrigerator logic and his TV show, Chicago Fire.

  • God doesn’t need addresses
    Episode – 82 | Mar 26, 2013
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    Craig is sick and John is in the middle of tech rehearsals, but nothing will stop them from discussing another batch of Three Page Challenges.

  • Veronica Mars Attacks
    Episode – 81 | Mar 19, 2013
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    Craig and John discuss the big Veronica Mars/Kickstarter news in one of the more contentious podcasts to date. If you like umbrage, this is the show for you.

  • Rhythm and Blues
    Episode – 80 | Mar 12, 2013
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    John and Craig talk homesickness and daddy issues before diving into a discussion on what Rhythm and Hues’s bankruptcy means for the film industry — and similar scenarios screenwriters might face down the road.

  • Rigorous, structured daydreaming
    Episode – 79 | Mar 5, 2013
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    Craig and John take a look at an old post that found new life this week when it got picked up on Twitter and Reddit. We go beyond the bullet points to look at the process of writing a scene, from asking the basic questions to getting the words on the page.

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