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January 25, 2022 Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig look at midpoints, the murky middle of the movie, and why writers shouldn’t overthink them.

We follow up on script formatting, firing your reps, screenplay “rules,” and how Sisyphus can achieve happiness. We answer listener questions on omitted scenes and imaginative children.

In our bonus segment for premium members, John and Craig debate the ethics and issues surrounding NFTs.

Links:

  • Bo Yeon Kim’s Tweet on Bong Joon-Ho’s MOTHER Script
  • Script University’s 20 Common Sense Script Rules, in No Particular Order
  • Read Aloud Software Suggestions Table Read, ZoomText, JAWS, VoiceDream
  • DnD for kids Level 1 Geek and Being a Dungeon Master for Kids
  • Flee animated film
  • Wikipedia Timeline Game
  • Papers, please by Lucas Pope
  • NFT Articles Why it’s too early to get excited about Web3 by Tim O’Reilly, My First Impressions of Web3 on the Moxie Marlinspike Blog, Blockchain-based systems are not what they say they are by Molly White
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • Craig Mazin on Twitter
  • John August on Twitter
  • John on Instagram
  • Outro by William Phillipson (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Megana Rao and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 3-1-22 You can find the transcript for this episode here.

We See and We Hear

January 18, 2022 Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig rant about prohibitive screenwriting advice and declare their allegiance to the “we see/we hear” convention. They analyze scripts from this year’s awards season to argue good story trumps all else.

We also answer questions on screenplay fundamentals from parantheticals, action lines to script length.

In our bonus segment for premium members, we consider: what is the screenwriting equivalent of boot camp?

Links:

  • The CW is for sale!
  • Annie Hayes on Writing with an Invisible Illness on John’s blog
  • Being the Ricardos by Aaron Sorkin
  • The Lost Daughter by Maggie Gyllenhaal
  • The Mitchells vs. the Machines by Mike Rianda And Jeff Rowe
  • Passing by Rebecca Hall
  • Belfast by Kenneth Branagh
  • Tick, Tick, Boom by Steven Levenson
  • Willy Wonka Script at the johnaugust.com library!
  • Vigil show
  • MIT Mystery Hunt 2022
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • Craig Mazin on Twitter
  • John August on Twitter
  • John on Instagram
  • Outro by William Brink (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Megana Rao and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 2-2-2022 The transcript for this episode can be found here.

Mistakes of Yes

January 11, 2022 Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig consider the choices writers and characters make based on fear, flattery, or FOMO. They offer guidance on how to make authentic choices and discern between want vs. being wanted.

We also look at reshoots, both what they mean for production and the final story. We tackle listener questions on agents attending meetings, bad outlines, and unsupportive partners.

In our bonus segment for premium members, we discuss how to discuss movies at a party.

Links:

  • A Good Life is Painful by Sean Illing
  • The Sweet Spot by Paul Bloom
  • Crazy Italian chocolate cake (egg free chocolate cake) by Chelsea Winter
  • Baba is You
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • Craig Mazin on Twitter
  • John August on Twitter
  • John on Instagram
  • Outro by Owen Danoff (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Megana Rao and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 1-31-22 The transcript for this episode can be found here.

Scene to Scene

January 4, 2022 News, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig welcome the new year by discussing the art of transitions. They go beyond screenplay-specific terms to examine the psychology of moving through story beats.

We cover the history of screenplays, the different ways to think about a scene, and how to create a punchline for each scene.

In our bonus segment for premium members, we talk about transitioning out of conversations in person and on the phone.

Links:

  • Blog post on Transitions
  • Scriptnotes Episode, 446: Back to Basics at 03:57 of this episode
  • Scriptnotes Episode, 493: Opening Scenes at 26:06 of this episode
  • Scriptnotes Episode, 89: Writing Effective Transitions at 44:12 of this episode
  • A Trip to the Moon the 1902 Science Fiction Film by Georges Méliès
  • The Texas Sharpshooter Fallacy
  • Ron’s Gone Wrong
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • Craig Mazin on Twitter
  • John August on Twitter
  • John on Instagram
  • Outro by Henry Adler (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Megana Rao, (with a segment produced by Stuart Friedel!) and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 2-2-2022 The transcript for this episode can now be found here.

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