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January 12, 2016 Film Industry, Follow Up, QandA, Random Advice, Scriptnotes, So-Called Experts, Story and Plot, Transcribed, WGA, Words on the page

Craig and John discuss the impact of Star Wars knocking down all the records, both for the industry and big-screen sci-fi.

We also look at yet another start-up that promises to separate hits from flops, the shocking revelation that critics are humans, and three new WGA proposals. Finally, we look at ways to let an audience know a character’s name.

Note: This is also the long-promised vaginosis episode.

Links:

  • Mexican Coke, New Coke and the history of Coca-Cola on Wikipedia
  • Bacterial vaginosis at the Center for Disease Control and on Wikipedia
  • Vaginal douching on WebMD
  • Scriptnotes, 112: Let me give you some advice and Dear J.J. Abrams
  • Star Wars: The Force Awakens on Box Office Mojo
  • Get your tickets now for Scriptnotes, Live on January 25 with Jason Bateman and Lawrence Kasdan, a benefit for Hollywood HEART
  • ScriptBook and The startup story of Scriptbook
  • Box Office Shocker: Movie Reviews Matter in 2015 from The Wrap
  • WGA Asks Members To Amend Guild’s Constitution on Deadline
  • Ghost Streets of Los Angeles on BLDGBLOG
  • Vilmos Zsigmond on Wikipedia, IMDb and remembered in Variety
  • Outro by Mary Webb (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 1-14-16: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

Feel the Nerd Burn

December 8, 2015 Directors, Film Industry, Follow Up, QandA, Rights and Copyright, Scriptnotes, Three Page Challenge, Transcribed

Craig and John discuss three new entries in the Three Page Challenge, looking at how simple mistakes and confusing word choices can hurt the read.

Also this week, a follow up on functional revenge, a brand-new version of Highland, and Craig gets big laughs on The Daily Show with Trevor Noah.

Links:

  • The Daily Show with Trevor Noah, December 3, 2015
  • Craig in The New York Times and on Jezebel
  • Download Highland 1.9 now and sign up to be a Highland 2 beta tester
  • Does Revenge Serve an Evolutionary Purpose? from Scientific American
  • One Hit Kill is now available for purchase
  • Projection Problems Plague 70mm L.A. Press Screening Of Quentin Tarantino’s ‘The Hateful Eight’ from Indie Wire
  • Three Pages by Jody Russell
  • Three Pages by Mark S.W. & V.P. Walling
  • Three Pages by Matthew Gentile
  • Submit your Three Pages here
  • The Wall Street Journal on How Cyndi Lauper Wrote Her First No. 1 Hit, ‘Time After Time’
  • Secret Hitler is now on Kickstarter
  • Amazon Prime Now offers one hour delivery
  • Email us or tweet John or Craig for advice on things that have nothing to do with screenwriting
  • Outro by Roman Mittermayr (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 12-11-15: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

The Batman in the High Castle

December 1, 2015 Follow Up, How-To, QandA, Scriptnotes, Story and Plot, Transcribed, Writing Process

Craig and John discuss epic world-building, and the promises and pitfalls for writers attempting to create fictional universes.

From Gotham to Hogwarts, Middle Earth to Narnia, world-building is at the heart of some of our biggest movies and series, but are we creating settings for our stories, or stories for our settings? We also discuss the differences between portals, lived in worlds and just-beneath-our-noses.

Also this week: whether a screenwriter is better off with a poorly-reviewed hit or a well-reviewed flop.

Links:

  • The Huntsman: Winter’s War, Official Trailer
  • Buy your tickets now for the 2015 Scriptnotes Holiday Show on December 9th with guests Riki Lindhome and Natasha Leggero, Malcolm Spellman, and Alan Yang
  • The Evolution of Batman’s Gotham City by The Nerdwriter
  • The Marvel Encyclopedia and The DC Comics Encyclopedia
  • The Development of Star Wars, as seen through the scripts by George Lucas
  • Henry Darger on Wikipedia
  • The Man in the High Castle, by Philip K. Dick, and season 1 of the TV adaptation on Amazon Prime
  • Middle Earth and The Perils of Worldbuilding by The Nerdwriter
  • EcoLog 590D
  • Outro by Jon Spurney (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 12-3-15: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

Only haters hate rom-coms

November 24, 2015 Follow Up, Genres, QandA, Scriptnotes, Story and Plot, Transcribed

John and Craig talk romantic comedies with screenwriter Tess Morris, whose film Man Up is unapologetically part of the genre.

We discuss what distinguishes rom-coms from other comedies, and why they get singled out for disdain and death-of articles.

Also this week: Amazon Storywriter, overused dicks, and follow-up on Whiplash.

Links:

  • Buy your tickets now for the 2015 Scriptnotes Holiday Show on December 9th with guests Riki Lindhome, Natasha Leggero and Malcolm Spellman
  • Jon Bon Jovi on Wikipedia
  • Amazon Storywriter and Fountain
  • Scriptnotes, 224: Whiplash, on paper and on screen
  • Tess Morris on IMDb and Twitter, and Man Up on Wikipedia and Rotten Tomatoes
  • Why Are Romantic Comedies So Bad? by Christopher Orr
  • CinemaBlend’s 30 Best Romantic Comedies Of All-Time
  • The New Yorker on Nick Bostrom
  • Wait But Why on The Fermi Paradox
  • Fallout 4, and on Amazon
  • The Vista Theatre
  • Outro by Jon Spurney (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 11-27-15: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

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