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The Conflict Episode

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January 13, 2015 Scriptnotes, Story and Plot, Transcribed, Words on the page

Craig and John discuss conflict — why it’s bad in real life but essential in screenwriting. We define six forms of conflict common in movies, then look at ways to sustain conflict within a scene and throughout a story.

We also look briefly at Whiplash, both the conflict between its two main characters and the controversy over whether it should be considered an original or an adapted screenplay.

If you can spare the ten seconds it takes, leaving us a rating on iTunes is a great way to help others find Scriptnotes. Thanks!

Links:

  • Academy & WGA At Odds Over ‘Whiplash’ Screenplay on Deadline
  • Snowpiercer: Left or Right on YouTube
  • Star Trek: The Next Generation In 40 Hours by Max Temkin
  • Weekend Read now has 21 award season scripts (and counting)
  • Sous-vide cooking on Wikipedia
  • Sansaire home sous-vide macine
  • Slow-poached eggs from Momofuku
  • Spoiled Brats: Stories by Simon Rich, and its short story Gifted
  • Rate us on iTunes and help new listeners find Scriptnotes
  • Outro by Scriptnotes listener Jason Young (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 1-15-15: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

Doing, not thinking

January 6, 2015 Film Industry, Follow Up, News, Scriptnotes, Three Page Challenge, Transcribed, Words on the page

John and Craig start the new year by discussing Chuck Palahniuk’s advice to avoid thinking verbs. Then it’s a new round of the Three Page Challenge.

We also do follow-up on the Sony hack.

Links:

  • The Year of Outrage on Slate
  • North Korea responds with fury to US sanctions over Sony Pictures hack
  • The LA Times on The Interview’s opening weekend
  • Chuck Palahniuk on thought verbs
  • Three pages by Mike Litzenberg & Bridge Stuart
  • Three pages by Meredith DePaolo
  • Dunning–Kruger effect
  • Three pages by Mimi Jeffries
  • How to submit your three pages
  • D20 Critical Hit Mini Cake Pan and Death Star Ice Mold on Think Geek, and Smarf L’Héroïque on Shirt.Woot
  • Critical Hit LED D20 Die on Think Geek
  • Vitamin D3 on Wikipedia
  • Outro by Scriptnotes editor Matthew Chilelli (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 1-8-15: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

Advice to a First-Time Director

December 23, 2014 Directors, Film Industry, How-To, News, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig offer advice to a director taking the plunge, with guidance on both getting the work done and getting the performances you want. From there, we segue into a discussion of the Perfect Director, the next installment of our Perfect series.

We also pay a visit to the Logic Police, whose notes are often frustrating but sometimes correct.

But we couldn’t not talk about the messed-up situation with The Interview and North Korea. It’s a terrible precedent, but the mistake is putting the blame on any one studio. Without coordinated group action, it’s only going to get worse.

Links:

  • Sony cancels The Interview release after theaters pull out
  • Interesting Ball by DANIELS
  • Skype Translator
  • Outro by Scriptnotes listener Brandon S Meyers (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 12-29-14: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

Twelve Days of Scriptnotes

December 16, 2014 Film Industry, How-To, Scriptnotes, Television, Transcribed, Writing Process

Craig and John welcome special guests Aline Brosh McKenna, Rachel Bloom, B.J. Novak, Jane Espenson and Derek Haas to talk about writing books, movies and especially television.

Aline and Rachel just finished shooting a pilot called Crazy Ex-Girlfriend. We discuss the genesis of the project, and how sexism is just stupid.

B.J. tells us about the joy of reading Inglorious Basterds, and how the key to success is apparently editing your high school newspaper.

Jane and Derek teach us what really goes on in the writers room, from secret lingo to codes of silence.

Plus there are songs!

Recorded with a live audience at LA Film School as a benefit for the Writers Guild Foundation. Huge thanks to everyone who came and supported the show.

Links:

  • The Writers Guild Foundation
  • Aline Brosh McKenna on episodes 60, 76, 100, 101, 119, 123, 124 152, and 161
  • For Universal Pictures, Zero Blockbusters Equals Record Profits on Forbes
  • Showtime Nabs Comedy With Musical Elements From Aline Brosh McKenna on Deadline
  • Rachel Bloom and on IMDb and YouTube
  • B.J. Novak and on IMDb
  • The Book With No Pictures and One More Thing, both by B.J. Novak
  • Jane Espenson and on IMDb
  • Derek Haas and on IMDb and episode 83
  • Aaron Sorkin sad that Newsroom writer’s objection to rape plot violated his privacy on A.V. Club
  • Intro by Scriptnotes editor Matthew Chilelli (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 12-19-14: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

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