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Screenwriters hate cell phones

October 11, 2013 Follow Up

Back in May, I hosted a panel entitled Storytelling in the Digital Age. The Academy [posted clips](http://www.oscars.org/events/turning-page/index.html) of my discussion with the makers of Zero Dark Thirty and Star Trek Into Darkness, but I also wanted to share my introduction to the event.

And then I forgot. And then I got really busy. So here, now, is how it started.

My presentation began with a (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A7pT0AHsfzY), followed by some observations before I introduced my guests.

Tonight, we’re going to talk about technology. Usually when I come to see a panel about technology at The Academy, we’re discussing innovations like digital cameras and high frame rates and visual effects — we’re focussed on how we put images on the big screen.

But tonight I want to talk about how technology affects *storytelling* in movies. And this clip package is an example.

Twenty years ago, if you wanted to get a bunch of people stranded in the woods, it was pretty easy. Now these characters would almost certainly have cell phones, and as a screenwriter you have to address that. The last scene you saw there was from a movie I directed, and what Ryan Reynolds says is probably true: *It’s going to keep happening.* Technology is going to keep advancing, and our movies are going to have to change to reflect that.

It’s not just characters talking on cell phones. If I’m being honest, I don’t talk on the phone all that much. If I want to tell someone something, I text or email. And that’s really uncinematic.

We haven’t quite figured out a good way to show texting. Sometimes we’ll do a closeup on the screen of the phone, or we’ll superimpose what’s being texted on screen, like they do in the BBC version of Sherlock.

It’s not ideal. No one comes to movies to read.

We come to movies to see characters interacting with each other, doing things. And one of the things they’re often doing is trying to find out information. In a thriller, they’re trying to uncover the facts, and you send them into dark and mysterious basements. In a romantic comedy, they’re trying to find out about someone they have a crush on and wackiness ensues.

That becomes harder to do in an age of Facebook and Twitter and LinkedIn. We don’t want characters Googling things, but sometimes, that’s what they would realistically do.

Technology has changed things, and movies have had to change to reflect that.

But it’s not all bad news. Not at all.

To me, this clip package is an example what’s great. It was cut together by Zig, an editor at the Academy, inspired by a terrific 2009 [supercut by Rich Juzwiak](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XIZVcRccCx0).

A supercut is an amazing thing that could really only exist in a digital age. What he’s doing is going through hundreds of movies and snipping out just the parts where people’s cell phones fail them. As writers and as an audience, we might subconsciously know that characters’ cell phones get taken out of commission a lot in movies, but when you put them all together like this, it becomes blindingly obvious.

That’s one of my themes tonight. Storytelling in the digital age is about making the invisible, visible.

What’s Next

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October 1, 2013 Broadway, Directors, Film Industry, Follow Up, Los Angeles, News, Projects, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig discuss what it feels like to finish a project — the combination of excitement and relief, joy and sadness — as Craig advises John which project he should write next now that Big Fish is set to open.

In film news, a new fund aims to back films directed by women, while Los Angeles appoints a new film czar with considerable studio experience.

All this, plus Craig recounts how he nearly saw John take a fist to the face.

Links:

* [Lobot](http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Lobot)
* LA Times on the [Gamechanger Film Fund](http://www.latimes.com/entertainment/envelope/cotown/la-et-ct-film-fund-gamechanger-female-directors-20130926,0,4152777,full.story)
* LA Times on [LA’s new Film Czar](http://www.latimes.com/entertainment/envelope/cotown/la-et-ct-garcetti-appoints-sherak-film-czar-20130926,0,6798783.story)
* [Patti Lupone stops the show to yell at a photographer](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WruzPfJ9Rys) on YouTube
* [Box](http://www.botndolly.com/box) by Bot & Dolly
* [Rear projection effect](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rear_projection_effect) on Wikipedia
* Big Fish production designer [Julian Crouch](http://juliancrouch.com/portfolio/Welcome.html)
* Big Fish’s [Ryan Andes](http://ryanandes.com/), and [on Twitter @AndesRyan](https://twitter.com/AndesRyan)
* [Blind soldier uses tongue device to ‘see’](http://www.theguardian.com/society/2010/mar/15/blind-soldier-tongue-sight) at The Guardian
* [Outro](http://johnaugust.com/2013/scriptnotes-the-outros) by Scriptnotes listener Matthew Chilelli

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_111.m4a) | [mp3](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_111.mp3).

**UPDATE** 10-4-13: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2013/scriptnotes-ep-111-whats-next-transcript).

How screenwriting style changed movies

September 30, 2013 Directors, Film Industry, Follow Up, Words on the page

Intrigued by a question asked at the live Scriptnotes NYC event, Tim Nicholas wonders whether the change in screenwriting style has affected [how scenes themselves work](http://somenotesonfilm.tumblr.com/post/62715721616/billy-wilder-physicality-screenwriting):

> A lack of “scenic density” is typical of what Bordwell calls the “intensified continuity style” that dominates post-60s Hollywood movies. Also characteristic of this style is less attention paid to blocking actors. Wide shots that allow actors to use their entire bodies as instruments of expression are less common, and filmmakers frequently default to one of two options for staging conversations: the “walk and talk” (think The West Wing) or the “sit and deliver” (see the previous link).

> Previously I’d thought of this as a directorial trend — Bordwell cites the proliferation of multi-camera shooting as one of its primary causes. Could it be that separate developments in screenwriting, with their own unique causes, also have an important role to play?

Nicholas uses Billy Wilder’s The Apartment as an example.

Attempting to answer the question during the live show, I proposed that part of why Wilder can go on for paragraphs about physical details is that he himself is directing the scene. But that’s at most a half-answer; Wilder’s scenes are more specific regardless of who is behind the camera. It’s not just blocking. The scenes themselves work differently.

Nicholas makes the case that something is lost in the modern, highly-compressed style:

> A contemporary screenwriter might condense those nine sentences to something like “Margie shoots straws in Bud’s direction, but he fails to notice them, even as they hit his bowler and cheek.” And one can easily imagine how this would be shot. The key thing missing would be allowing the action the time to take place. The trend today, first in screenwriting, then in directing, and finally in editing, is to replace the *depiction* of an action itself with the presentation of the *idea* of an action.

To me, that’s a terrific insight that speaks not only to filmmaking but most of popular culture. Increasingly, we replace the object with the reference, and the action with the outcome.

Scriptnotes Live from New York

September 24, 2013 Big Fish, Broadway, Follow Up, Scriptnotes, Story and Plot, Transcribed

John and Craig welcome their largest live audience yet for a conversation about Kickstarter, movie pilots and musicals. Joined by special guest Andrew Lippa, they talk about the special challenges and opportunities that arise when characters break into song.

It’s the biggest, gayest, most musical episode yet. Everyone sings.

Links:

* See [Big Fish on Broadway](http://www.bigfishthemusical.com/)
* If you don’t have your Scriptnotes USB drive yet, [email Stuart and let him know](mailto:orders@johnaugust.com)
* [Back episodes](http://johnaugust.com/scriptnotes) are available now
* The Yank! Original Cast Album [has been funded](http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1046922831/yank-original-cast-album)
* Aaron Cooley asks: [Why don’t movie studios make pilots?](http://hollywoodjournal.com/industry-impressions/why-dont-movie-studios-make-pilots/20130920/)
* [Andrew Lippa](http://andrewlippa.com/), and [on Wikipedia](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Andrew_Lippa)
* [Recette](http://recettenyc.com/) restaurant
* [Bid now](https://www.charitybuzz.com/catalog_items/371106) for a Big Fish backstage tour with John and Andrew (and support a Los Angeles public school)
* [Let us know](mailto:ask@johnaugust.com) if you’re in Vienna and willing to meet up with Craig
* The [Falsettoland cast album](http://www.amazon.com/dp/B000V9WJ68/?tag=johnaugustcom-20), and [on Wikipedia](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Falsettoland)
* Thank you and congrats to pianist and soon-to-be husband [Daniel Green](http://www.danielgreenmusic.com)

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_109.m4a) | [mp3](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_109.mp3).

**UPDATE** 9-27-13: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2013/scriptnotes-ep-109-scriptnotes-live-from-new-york-transcript).

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