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The One with the Austin Winner

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May 17, 2016 Follow Up, QandA, Rights and Copyright, Scriptnotes, Story and Plot, Transcribed, Words on the page

Remember the live show in Austin, when we promised we’d read one lucky listener’s script and talk about it on the air? This is that episode.

John and Craig talk with Amanda Morad about her pilot script Betty Bureau, offering praise, suggestions and a few next steps. You can read Amanda’s script in the links below.

We also answer a few short and simple questions about rights and clearances.

Links:

  • Escape Room LA
  • Scriptnotes, 248: Pitching an Open Writing Assignment
  • Scriptnotes, 228: Scriptnotes Holiday Show 2015
  • Master of None, S1 E4: “Indians on TV” on Netflix
  • Individual bonus tracks are now available in the John August Store
  • Watch Matthew edit an episode of Scriptnotes
  • The Austin Film Festival
  • Betty Bureau by Amanda Morad
  • @amandamorad on Twitter
  • screenwriting.io on referencing proper nouns in your screenplay
  • Director J Blakeson answers John’s question about the background Big Fish poster in The 5th Wave
  • Hollywood jumps without CGI
  • The Empty Cup Awards
  • Hamilton: The Revolution on Amazon
  • Outro by Paul B (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 5-20-16: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

The One with Lawrence Kasdan

April 26, 2016 Film Industry, QandA, Scriptnotes, Story and Plot

John and Craig sit down with screenwriting legend Lawrence Kasdan to discuss Star Wars, Raiders, The Bodyguard and how he’s shaped some of the most iconic big-screen stories and characters of our lifetime.

This 90-minute interview comes as part of WGFestival 2016 Craft Day, and features audience questions as well. Our thanks to the Writers Guild Foundation and the Academy for hosting us.

Links:

  • The Writers Guild Foundation
  • Lawrence Kasdan on IMDb and Wikipedia
  • Scriptnotes, 73: Raiders of the Lost Ark
  • The Raiders story conference transcripts
  • Scriptnotes, 235: The one with Jason Bateman and the Game of Thrones guys
  • Akira Kurosawa’s Yojimbo and Seven Samurai on Hulu
  • William Goldman: Four Screenplays with Essays (including Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid) on Amazon
  • Lawrence of Arabia by Robert Bolt
  • Casablanca Blu-ray on Amazon
  • Grand Canyon on Amazon
  • Outro by Matthew Chilelli (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 4-29-16: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

The One with the Idiot Teamster

April 19, 2016 Directors, Film Industry, Follow Up, News, Scriptnotes, Story and Plot, Transcribed

John and Craig welcome writer-director Lorene Scafaria to talk about her new movie The Meddler and some of the unique challenges faced by female directors.

She joins us as we play a new round of How Would This Be a Movie, tackling global hums, killer grannies and airport conspiracies. We also discuss movies that are often used as shorthand in Hollywood, from Raiders to Die Hard to Midnight Run. (But never The ‘Burbs.)

Next week we’ll be making minor server changes. If for some reason the next episode doesn’t automatically appear in your podcast app next Tuesday, you may need to resubscribe. Sorry, but it will be worth it to listen to special guest Lawrence Kasdan.

Links:

  • Subscribe to the Scriptnotes mailing list and stay up to date on live shows, bonus episodes and more!
  • John’s blog post on why he’s voting no on WGA Amendment 1
  • The Scriptnotes Wikipedia page is ready for your edits
  • Lorene Scafaria on IMDb, Wikipedia and Twitter
  • The Meddler on Wikipedia and Rotten Tomatoes
  • New Republic on The Hum, and 12 hours of the Taos Hum
  • mental_floss on the Denver Airport, and RationalWiki’s Denver Airport conspiracies page
  • The Star on the Internet Black Widow, and her Wikipedia page
  • Film Dialogue from 2,000 screenplays, Broken Down by Gender and Age, A Polygraph Joint
  • Thanks For Ruining Another Game Forever, Computers, by Jeff Atwood
  • Los Angeles Times on Escape Rooms, and Escape Room LA
  • Omaze and The Meddler’s Call Your Mother shirt, benefitting Hope North
  • Outro by Matthew Chilelli (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 4-22-16: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

Outlines and Treatments

April 12, 2016 Film Industry, Follow Up, Projects, QandA, Scriptnotes, Story and Plot, Transcribed, Treatments, Words on the page, Writing Process

John and Craig look at the non-screenplay things screenwriters end up writing, most notably outlines and treatments. We discuss some of the ones we’ve written (with examples), and offer advice on writing your own.

Also, how do you deal with sudden success? And what should a writer-director say when talking to a Very Famous Actress about starring in his movie?

Our live conversation with Lawrence Kasdan is this Saturday! Find out more about the all-day Craft Day featuring many previous (and future) Scriptnotes guests in the links below.

Links:

  • Get tickets now for the 2016 WGFestival, featuring John and Craig’s interview with Lawrence Kasdan, and more
  • BuzzFeed talks to Karyn Kusama
  • Overnight on Wikipedia, IMDb and Amazon
  • ID Theft treatment
  • Original Big Fish outline
  • Big Fish sequence outline
  • Short Circuit treatment
  • D.C. pitch
  • D.C. pilot outline
  • Alaska write-up
  • Ops write-up
  • Ops Iraq outline
  • @TomSchnauz on Twitter
  • Watch the performances from MCC’s Miscast 2016
  • Tesla Model 3
  • Outro by Rajesh Naroth (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 4-14-16: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

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