John August

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Producers and pitching

Episode - 55

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Follow Up, Pitches, Producers, QandA, Scriptnotes, Three Page Challenge, Transcribed

What’s the difference between a reader and a producer? Much more than one high-profile online analyst seems to believe. John and Craig discuss what producers do, and how one plausibly gets started.

From there, we talk pitching. Beyond the plot points, you need to be able to show why you’re dying to write this story, and why you’d pay money to see it.

In follow-up, we talk about visas, HSX, and find out how often the screenwriter is actually mentioned in negative reviews vs. positive reviews.

The first-ever Live Scriptnotes is coming this October in Austin. Follow the link for more details.

And we’re opening back up submissions for the Three Page Challenge. Follow the link and follow the rules, please.

All this, and Craig takes umbrage at sweet tea, in the new Scriptnotes!

LINKS:

* Tim Miller’s report on our perceived [negative screenwriter bias](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/scriptnotes_critics.pdf)
* [HSX](http://www.hsx.com/about/)
* My [original issue](http://johnaugust.com/2009/how-scriptshadow-hurts-screenwriters) with Scriptshadow
* Scriptshadows asks [What the hell does a producer do?](http://scriptshadow.blogspot.com/2012/09/screenwriting-article-what-hell-does.html)
* [Tejava](http://www.tejava.com/), pretty good bottled tea
* How to submit a [Three-Page Challenge](http://johnaugust.com/threepage)
* Scriptnotes Live at the [Austin Film Festival and Screenwriting Conference](http://www.austinfilmfestival.com/)
* INTRO: [Star Trek The Animated Series Opening](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RhQFGH527PE)
* OUTRO: [Please Please Please Let Me Get What I Want](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vOXIlbw4sh8) cover by Pacific UV

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_55.m4a).

**UPDATE** 9-20-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-55-producers-and-pitching-transcript).

Eight Reasonable Questions about Screenwriting

QandA, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig tackle eight questions on the profession of screenwriting, ranging from studio execs to sharing credit to pitching via video.

It’s a big show. We cover a lot. And then we talk for quite a while about the unique beauty of Zoe Saldana and Bradley Cooper, because that’s what real screenwriters talk about.

And there’s news! Hangover 3 is in production, Big Fish has announced its Chicago dates, and Frankenweenie comes out October 5.

All this and more in episode 54 of Scriptnotes.

LINKS:

* [Big Fish musical to debut in Chicago](http://www.suntimes.com/entertainment/stage/14959954-421/chicago-catches-big-fish-musical-for-pre-broadway-run.html)
* Josh Hallman’s (http://youtu.be/nstuFTBFnnw)
* [HSX.com](http://www.hsx.com/): The Hollywood Stock Exchange
* [The Words](http://www.thewordsmovie.com/)
* HealthMap [Vaccine Finder](http://flushot.healthmap.org/)
* INTRO: [Eight Is Enough](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OWMJoV0ozIM)
* OUTRO: […Baby One More Time](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A4YG_HH_heI) by Jessica Hendy and Jacob Yates

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_54.m4a).

**UPDATE** 9-14-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-54-eight-reasonable-questions-about-screenwriting-transcript).

Action is more than just gunfights and car chases

Scriptnotes, Three Page Challenge, Transcribed, Words on the page

John and Craig are all action this week, looking at how screenwriters write those things characters do in a movie.

It’s a part of the craft that often goes unnoticed — unlike dialogue, you don’t hear the writer’s work — but smartly-written action pays dividends, helping readers see the movie you want them to make.

We follow-up our discussion with a look at four (!) samples from the Three Page Challenge that focus on action, with ample praise for those that do it well and some suggestions for those who fumble a bit.

Also this week: a short history of (annoyed grunt), better known as d’oh!

If you’re listening to the podcast on the site, do us a favor and also [leave us a review](http://itunes.apple.com/us/podcast/scriptnotes-podcast/id462495496) on iTunes. Great reviews help other listeners find us, and further Craig’s singing-to-a-stadium agenda.

LINKS:

* Dan Castellaneta [explains Homer Simpson’s “D’oh!”](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UGiJOHDJEss)
* James Finlayson’s [“Doohh!”](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P52rREUyPFo&t=49s)
* [Meltdown Comics](http://www.meltcomics.com/blog/)
* Three pages by [Ben Jacoby](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/BenJacoby.pdf)
* Three pages by [Trevor Hollen](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/TrevorHollen.pdf)
* Three pages by [Randall J. Knox & Jason Zahodnik](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/KnoxZahodnik.pdf)
* Three pages by [David Stripinis](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/DavidStripinis.pdf)
* [Sleepwalk With Me](http://www.sleepwalkmovie.com/), a film by Mike Birbiglia
* INTRO: [GI Joe Epic Opening](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EX_9jKFpQKM)
* OUTRO: [Raw (remix)](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0sYT0lo3d0A) by Big Daddy Kane

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_53.m4a).

**UPDATE** 9-7-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-53-action-is-more-than-just-gunfights-and-car-chases-transcript).

Grammar, guns and butter

QandA, Scriptnotes, Transcribed, Words on the page

Craig and John celebrate one year of the podcast by going H.A.M. on the passive voice, the present progressive and other reductive nonsense rules.

While you should feel free to split infinitives, we’d strongly recommend you avoid the 100+ lines of really bad dialogue you’ll hear far too often in movies. Thanks to Go Into the Story for compiling these.

After that, it’s time for six listener questions, on topics ranging from spec scripts 101, overseas copyright, to following up after a chance meeting.

All this and more on the first anniversary episode of Scriptnotes.

LINKS:

* [Passive voice](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Passive_voice)
* [Present progressive](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Continuous_and_progressive_aspects)
* [Clichéd dialogue](http://gointothestory.blcklst.com/2012/03/definitive-list-of-cliched-dialogue-3.html) from Go Into the Story
* [Throwing Shade](http://www.throwingshade.com/) podcast
* [Build & Analyze](http://5by5.tv/buildanalyze) podcst
* [5by5](http://5by5.tv/) podcast network
* Slate’s [Political Gabfest](http://www.slate.com/articles/podcasts/gabfest.html)
* [Nerdist Writer’s Panel](http://www.nerdist.com/podcast/nerdist-writers-panel/)
* Trailer for [The Right Hand](http://vimeo.com/47316693), a new book by Derek Haas
* Gizmodo on [the simplex algorithm](http://gizmodo.com/5934150/the-algorithm-that-controls-your-life)
* Audio-Technica [AT2020 Cardioid Condenser Microphone](http://www.audio-technica.com/cms/wired_mics/a0933a662b5ed0e2/index.html)
* INTRO: [CBS Special Presentation](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6W9V9SZPHAY)
* OUTRO: [Oh My Dayum acoustic cover](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VfbQ4gww7aI)

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_52.m4a).

**UPDATE** 8-30-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-52-grammar-guns-and-butter-transcript).