John August

Transcribed

Getting to page one

Episode - 41

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Follow Up, Screenwriting Software, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

On the 41st Scriptnotes, John and Craig discuss screenwriting software, knowing when to start, and the Game of Thrones finale. But before moving on to new business, they update us on two topics of podcasts past.

Last we heard about Disney and Amazon Studios, there was a [vacancy atop the former](http://johnaugust.com/2012/the-disney-dilemma), and the latter had [decided to become a WGA signatory](http://johnaugust.com/2012/amazons-new-deal-for-writers). Now, Disney has hired Alan Horn as chief, and Amazon has announced its first project — but with no mention of the writer.

After they weigh in on these new developments, John tells us about the pros and cons of writing his most recent script in Scrivener, which opens up into a larger discussion about where screenwriting software seems to be heading.

Craig and John then adress a common frustration of beginning screenwriters: How do you know when you’re ready to move from the planning phase onto page 1? Diving into a script too quickly is a recipe for second-act problems, but overplanning can be just as dangerous. Where’s the sweet spot? What must you know about your story before you start, and how much familiarity is overkill?

They then move onto a listener-requested discussion of the Game of Thrones season finale, plus this week’s two One Cool Things.

Rawson Marshall Thurber, enjoy this Google alert made specially for you, courtesy of episode 41 of Scriptnotes.

LINKS:

* [Scrivener](http://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener.php)
* [Fountain](http://fountain.io/) and [Highland](http://quoteunquoteapps.com/highland/)
* [Fade In](http://www.fadeinpro.com/)
* [Final Draft iPad Writer](http://www.finaldraft.com/products/mobile/writer/)
* [Bronson Watermarker](http://quoteunquoteapps.com/bronson/)
* [Stencyl](http://www.stencyl.com/)
* [Flight](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xnVNNR6CEOE) trailer
* [Craig’s Wordplay post](http://www.wordplayer.com/pros/pr14.Mazin.Craig.html) on building marketing hooks into your screenplay
* INTRO: [Silver Spoons](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71RyZuJHpj0) opening
* OUTRO: [Garden of Your Mind](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OFzXaFbxDcM&feature=youtu.be) by Mister Rogers (remix)

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_41.m4a).

**UPDATE** 6-14-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-41-getting-to-page-one-transcript).

Death and feedback

Scriptnotes, Transcribed

Craig and John talk about Craig’s decision to abandon [his once-bustling blog](http://artfulwriter.com/), while John weighs the pros and cons of comments and community.

How important is feedback? The Scriptnotes podcast gets [overwhelmingly positive](http://itunes.apple.com/us/podcast/scriptnotes-podcast/id462495496) reviews — 99% are five stars — but how much of that is helpful or constructive?

We also go into follow-up about The Death of Screenwriting (as a career) and announce the first-ever Scriptnotes Live podcast, coming this October at the [Austin Film Festival](http://www.austinfilmfestival.com/festivalandconference/).

LINKS:

* [The Artful Writer](http://artfulwriter.com/) (Craig’s blog)
* [UC Verde Buffalo Grass](http://ucverdebuffalograss.com/)
* INTRO: [I Learned It By Watching You](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y-Elr5K2Vuo)
* OUTRO: [Black Sally](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GdEONARGHCM) by Funkoars feat. Maurice Greer

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_40.m4a).

**UPDATE** 6-7-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-40-death-and-feedback-transcript).

Littlest Plot Shop

Scriptnotes, Story and Plot, Transcribed

Craig and John take a look at the difference between plot and story with some help from the Littlest Pet Shop and Game of Thrones.

Plot answers the “what” questions: What happens next? What is in the mysterious vault? What secret was the dowager keeping?

Story, however, is much more concerned with the “whos” and “hows” and “whys.” Characters have their own needs and impulses. The trick of good writing is to match up what the characters want to do (motivation) with what the screenwriter wants them to do (plot).

Mild spoiler alert: In the last few minutes, we discuss recent developments on Game of Thrones, but in a general-enough way that it’s not likely to impact your enjoyment if you’re behind. Still, caveat spectator.

Finally, two bits of housekeeping:

* We post [full transcripts](http://johnaugust.com/transcript) of every show a few days after they air.

* If you [subscribe to us](http://itunes.apple.com/us/podcast/scriptnotes-podcast/id462495496) on iTunes, please leave us some feedback. For next week’s show, we’ll read the reviews ranked “most helpful” live, no matter what they say. Which may be a terrible idea. We’ll see.

LINKS:

* [Littlest Pet Shop](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRgWqd36Mww) videos
* [Plot Wizard](http://plotwizard.com/)
* [Plotto: The Master Book of All Plots](http://www.amazon.com/dp/1935639188/ref=as_li_tf_til?tag=plottomatic-20&camp=14573&creative=327641&linkCode=as1&creativeASIN=1935639188&adid=1GY1MPCHFA0R96HJ5TC6&&ref-refURL=http%3A%2F%2Fplotwizard.com%2F)
by William Wallace Cook
* Craig recommends Joe Nienalt and Daniel Vang’s [Will-Read-Your-Script Fundraiser](http://messageboard.donedealpro.com/boards/showthread.php?t=67391) for the American Heart Association
* John recommends this [all-your-barcodes-together card](http://keyringthing.com)
* INTRO: [My Little Pony](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J9J2vF3Q3o8)
* OUTRO: [Black Horse and the Cherry Tree](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sz_1UXMXKP0) by military band Sidewinder at the White House

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_39.m4a).

**UPDATE** 5-30-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-39-littlest-plot-shop-transcript).

Let’s talk about dialogue

QandA, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

Screenwriters can learn story and structure, but the ability to create real, tangible characters is more elusive — and ultimately more important.

The best gauge of good writing is whether a screenplay’s characters feel distinct and alive. A lot of that comes from how the characters speak: what they say and how they say it.

John and Craig offer some tests to see if your screenplay’s dialogue works:

* Could you take one character’s words and have another say them?
* Can you picture a specific actor speaking each character’s lines? Or, even better, are there actors you *can’t* picture saying them?
* Do the characters all sound like you, the writer? Or do they have distinct voices?

This week’s listener questions include recycling material, writing large-group action scenes, and possible novels. Craig then rants about the evils of Zynga and the wonder of 1Password.

How do you do an imitation of Denzel Washington? Find out on episode 37 of Scriptnotes.

LINKS:

* Jay Mohr’s [Mohr Stories](http://itunes.apple.com/us/podcast/mohr-stories-smodcast.com/id448795390)
* Jane Espenson (and Douglas Petrie) on the [Nerdist Writers Panel](http://www.nerdist.com/2012/05/nerdist-writers-panel-37-jane-espenson-and-douglas-petrie/)
* Derek Haas’s [Popcorn Fiction](http://www.mulhollandbooks.com/popcornfiction/)
* [Lightning in a Bottle](http://www.mulhollandbooks.com/popcornfiction/stories/Lightning_in_a_Bottle_by_Craig_Mazin.html) by Craig Mazin, on Popcorn Fiction
* [Snake People](http://www.mulhollandbooks.com/popcornfiction/stories/Snake_People_by_John_August.html) by John August, on Popcorn Fiction
* [1Password](https://agilebits.com/onepassword)
* [Ski Safari](http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/ski-safari/id503092422?mt=8)
* INTRO: [Misfits of Science](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nT6pJyuyez8) stereo remix by Stiks1969
* OUTRO: [No Frills Love (Extended Dance Remix)](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KjCSQGlNCbU) by Jennifer Holiday

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_37.m4a).

**UPDATE** 5-18-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-37-lets-talk-about-dialogue-transcript).