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August 24, 2021 News, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John welcomes back writer/producer Kelly Marcel (Venom, Cruella) for an action-packed episode. They break down a scene on the page, and then Kelly walks John through how she adapts and rewrites scenes in real time on set.

We also discuss writing scripts with a star and why you should always cast your movies before writing them (at least in your mind). We follow up on day-and-date releases, taking a look at this year’s box office and streaming numbers.

In our bonus segment for premium members, we discuss dealing with visas as an international writer and the struggle of proving “exceptional ability.”

Links:

  • Original Movies Are Becoming Streaming’s Most Popular Content, Led By Disney+ by Kevin Tran for Variety
  • Foreign Writers on Getting a Visa
  • Venom Excerpt
  • Meet the Ipsums
  • Loóna Sleep App
  • Kelly Marcel and on Twitter
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt, check out our special 10th Anniversary Shirts!
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • John August on Twitter
  • John on Instagram
  • Outro by Michael O’Konis (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Megana Rao and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 8-27-21 The transcript for this episode can now be found here.

378 – The Worst of the Worst

August 10, 2021 News, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig examine why and how writers need to make bad things happen to their characters, and the ways in which hero suffering differs between features and television.

We also answer listener questions about WGA jurisdiction, becoming a signatory, timing a script for television, and why all scripts aren’t available online.

Then in our bonus segment for premium members, John and Megana discuss why she picked this episode to replay, what she’s learned from the archives, and how to follow up on a general meeting.

Links:

  • The Team America: World Police puke scene, with some bad language
  • The opening of Finding Nemo
  • Aslan’s sacrifice in The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe
  • Can We Stop Suicides? by Moises Velasquez-Manoff for the New York Times
  • The environment in Red Dead Redemption 2
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • John August on Twitter
  • John on Instagram
  • Outro by Michael O’Konis (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Megana Rao and edited by Matthew Chilelli. And special thanks to Megan McDonnell, the original producer of this episode!

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 8-13-21 The transcript for this episode can be found here.

Preproduction

July 6, 2021 News, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig discuss preproduction, with Craig sharing how he’s prepping for an entire season of television. From costumes to casting, we look at the showrunner’s decisions beyond just the words in the script.

Then it’s another round of How Would This Be A Movie, with further analysis on why certain movies get made.

Finally in our bonus segment for premium members, John and Craig debate what information belongs on a time traveller’s cheat sheet.

Links:

  • Zola Movie discussed in our HWTBAM segment on Episode 222.
  • The Criminals Thought the Devices Were Secure. But the Seller Was the F.B.I.
  • 1,000-Word Job Listing for a “Household Manager/Cook/Nanny and follow up An Interview With the Woman Who Wrote the Viral 1,000-Word Job Listing for a “Household Manager/Cook/Nanny from Ruth Graham on Slate.
  • Couple breaks up after being handcuffed together for 123 days
  • Must I really indulge my ‘psychic’ sister-in-law?
  • Decoder Ring: The Tootsie Shot
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • John August on Twitter
  • Liz Hannah on Twitter
  • John on Instagram
  • Outro by Michael Karman (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Megana Rao and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 7-15-21 the transcript for this episode can be found here.

Rebroadcast, Ep 180: Bad Teachers, Good Advice and the Default Male

June 22, 2021 News

In this rebroadcast, Aline Brosh McKenna joins John and Craig to discuss how movies featuring good mentors (Dead Poet’s Society, To Sir with Love) differ from films with bad mentors (Whiplash, The Devil Wears Prada). It’s not just that the teachers are bad guys; rather, the stories are structured completely differently.

We also discuss the “default male problem,” especially how it relates to comedy and the cleanest version of a joke. John asks Craig and Aline about some ethical quandaries he’s been facing, ranging from awards voting to who is a “friend.”

And in our bonus segment for premium members, John and Craig have a dialogue on dialogue. They discuss the process of developing the Scriptnotes book and the differences between how we speak/write/write speech.

Links:

  • Sign up for updates and sample chapters on the Scriptnotes Book here!
  • Aline Brosh McKenna on episodes 60, 76, 100, 101, 119, 123, 124 152, 161, and 175
  • Raphael Bob-Waksberg Breaks Down Comedy’s “Default Male” Problem
  • Writers on Writing: Simon Kinberg available in season four.
  • Read the Whiplash screenplay on Weekend Read
  • Evernote Scannable
  • The Comeback on HBO
  • Jason Hall in WGAw’s Written By
  • Ryan Reynolds is now on Twitter
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • John August on Twitter
  • Aline Brosh Mckenna on Twitter
  • John on Instagram
  • Outro by Rajesh Naroth (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Megana Rao and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

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