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Amazon Studios at AFF

October 24, 2012 Film Industry, First Person, Follow Up

Amazon Studios has been a [much](http://johnaugust.com/2010/on-the-amazon-film-thing)-[discussed](http://johnaugust.com/2011/amazon-studios-now-slightly-less-terrible) [topic](http://johnaugust.com/2012/amazon-studios-and-the-free-option) on both the blog and the podcast. Last week at the Austin Film Festival, the company made a presentation explaining how they work with screenwriters.

Reader Mike attended and took notes, which he generously offered to write up.

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first personA little bit about my background: I started out working at a production company as an intern and as a reader, kept working at writing and eventually got representation from a manager and an agent. I’ve had scripts go out and I’ve done the studio water bottle tour a couple of times, but have yet to earn a single penny as a writer.

I consider myself in that grey, ugly pool of zombie writers: Part alive, but mostly dead inside.

I’m guessing the crowd ranged from people like me to those who are thinking about writing their first screenplays. I had heard a lot things about Amazon (including on the podcast), so I went in with an ass-load of skepticism along with a tiny bit of hope. Unfortunately, very little during the panel moved the skeptic needle, and it pretty much pissed all over the hope.

Again, I can only speak for myself.

First, it wasn’t really a panel. There was one Dude at a podium, so it was more like a new-hire presentation at Dundler Mifflin rather than a Q&A with a studio exec. The Dude, head of development at Amazon Studios I think, seemed nice enough and intelligent enough, but he used the phrase “I’d rather not get into the details of that” way too often for my tastes.

Bullet points:

* Writers can upload their scripts to the Amazon Studios site as a non-WGA writer, or if they are WGA they can have their rep upload.
* Once a writer uploads his script, he cannot sell his script to anyone for 45 days. Essentially a free 45-day option.
* If Amazon is interested, they will option the script for a period of 18 months for $10k.
* If that script goes into production, the writer will be paid $200k, with some other pay-outs if the film reaches certain financial milestones.
* They also have open writing assignments from time to time, and these are handled much the same way, with writers submitting their work on the website for consideration for the gig.

All of this is well and good on the surface. I am not a million-dollar-screenwriter by any stretch of the imagination, but I do have some access to the lords of Hollywood. If I didn’t have anywhere to go with my scripts, I would probably be interested in what the Dude had to say. However, once he said they have somewhere around 10,000 submissions with 22 projects in development, it doesn’t take a Harvard grad to do the math and realize your odds are just as good in the traditional studio system.

The things that I found puzzling were mainly around their development process and their overall plan.

The Dude explained their development process by talking about information studios gather from test screening and how it is used. Basically saying that once you shoot a film, you have a test screening and get feedback from the general public on what they liked and didn’t like about the story, the characters or whatever. Meaning that the problem is that the film is already shot, so there is only so much you can do to alter it.

At Amazon (wait for it) they want to get public feedback (through their website) on the script as it is being developed so they can make changes before they begin shooting. They plan on doing this through several methods. They already have comic books made from a script in development that they are asking for feedback on. They are also thinking of making short videos and other things to get parts of the script out there and gather opinions from Amazon’s customers. The writer will get this info and incorporate it as notes for rewrites. Now, the Dude did say it is up to the writer to do what he wants with these notes. You be the judge on that. On one hand, I’d like to congratulate them on thinking outside the box on development. But I see problems with this, as I’m sure you do as well.

The other problem I had was with their overall plan: There doesn’t seem to be one.

They have a first-look deal with Warner Bros., but when he was asked questions about the deal he defaulted to the “I’d rather not get into the details of that.” He was asked what type of genres or budget ranges they were looking at, and he didn’t really have an answer. I would have been more impressed if they picked a direction, like saying, “We want to provide funding for small, independent minded stories that might not get a shot in the Hollywood system,” or saying, “We are looking for big, tent-pole, event movies.”

I had other concerns, but that was pretty much the thing in a nutshell. I think it great that someone with money is jumping in, and I hope for the best, but it looks like there are problems with hair on them, and I think there are some very rough growing pains in the making.

Gorilla City and the Kingdom of Toads

Episode - 56

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September 25, 2012 Chosen, Follow Up, News, QandA, Scriptnotes, Television, Three Page Challenge, Transcribed

John and Craig talk about the new show John sold to ABC, which leads to a conversation about the differences between studios and networks, and how writers end up having relationships with both.

We answer a listener question about what writers mean by a “weekly.”

The bulk of the podcast centers on four samples from the Three Page Challenge, covering a range of genres from heist movies to fantasy to broad comedy. You can find all four entries in the links, so read along with us.

As always, our thanks to these brave writers who’ve shared their work. If you want to send in your own entry, there are some simple [rules to follow](http://johnaugust.com/threepage).

LINKS:

* [Chosen, or I Sold a TV Show!](http://johnaugust.com/2012/chosen-or-hey-im-doing-a-tv-show)
* [Liz Brixius’](http://www.deadline.com/2012/09/nbc-buys-soap-from-writer-liz-brixius-and-producers-sean-hayes-lawrence-bender/) new show
* [Military comedy](http://www.deadline.com/2012/09/bruckheimer-tv-produced-military-comedy-lands-at-nbc-with-put-pilot-commitment/) from Jerry Bruckheimer
* [X-Files self-dealing lawsuit](http://www.nytimes.com/2006/01/23/business/23carter.html?_r=2)
* [The Sarah Connor Chronicles](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Terminator:_The_Sarah_Connor_Chronicles)
* [Scriptnotes iTunes reviews](http://itunes.apple.com/us/podcast/scriptnotes-podcast/id462495496)
* [Fox writers deal](http://www.variety.com/article/VR1117970235?refCatId=13)
* Three pages by [Henry Fosdike & Lloyd Morgan](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/FosdikeMorgan.pdf)
* Three pages by [Jeffrey Stoltzfus](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/JeffreyStoltzfus.pdf)
* Three pages by [Virginia Lee](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/VirginiaLee.pdf)
* Three pages by [Sandy McDougall](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/SandyMcDougall.pdf)
* [NewerTech Voyager Q Quad Interface Dock](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0026S7HP0/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=B0026S7HP0&linkCode=as2&tag=johnaugustcom-20)
* [WD Green 2TB hard drives](http://www.amazon.com/dp/B004VFJ9MK/?tag=johnaugustcom-20)
* INTRO: [Press Your Luck theme](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFj2hxi5kNY)
* OUTRO: Simon and Garfunkel’s [At the Zoo](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8bTIiRH44Xs) covered by Japanese folk duo The Side of a Hill

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_56.m4a).

If you’re listening to us on the website and like what you hear, why don’t you say some nice things about us [on iTunes](http://itunes.apple.com/us/podcast/scriptnotes-podcast/id462495496), wouldja?

**UPDATE** 9-28-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-56-gorilla-city-and-the-kingdom-of-toads-transcript).

Producers and pitching

September 18, 2012 Follow Up, Pitches, Producers, QandA, Scriptnotes, Three Page Challenge, Transcribed

What’s the difference between a reader and a producer? Much more than one high-profile online analyst seems to believe. John and Craig discuss what producers do, and how one plausibly gets started.

From there, we talk pitching. Beyond the plot points, you need to be able to show why you’re dying to write this story, and why you’d pay money to see it.

In follow-up, we talk about visas, HSX, and find out how often the screenwriter is actually mentioned in negative reviews vs. positive reviews.

The first-ever Live Scriptnotes is coming this October in Austin. Follow the link for more details.

And we’re opening back up submissions for the Three Page Challenge. Follow the link and follow the rules, please.

All this, and Craig takes umbrage at sweet tea, in the new Scriptnotes!

LINKS:

* Tim Miller’s report on our perceived [negative screenwriter bias](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/scriptnotes_critics.pdf)
* [HSX](http://www.hsx.com/about/)
* My [original issue](http://johnaugust.com/2009/how-scriptshadow-hurts-screenwriters) with Scriptshadow
* Scriptshadows asks [What the hell does a producer do?](http://scriptshadow.blogspot.com/2012/09/screenwriting-article-what-hell-does.html)
* [Tejava](http://www.tejava.com/), pretty good bottled tea
* How to submit a [Three-Page Challenge](http://johnaugust.com/threepage)
* Scriptnotes Live at the [Austin Film Festival and Screenwriting Conference](http://www.austinfilmfestival.com/)
* INTRO: [Star Trek The Animated Series Opening](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RhQFGH527PE)
* OUTRO: [Please Please Please Let Me Get What I Want](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vOXIlbw4sh8) cover by Pacific UV

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_55.m4a).

**UPDATE** 9-20-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-55-producers-and-pitching-transcript).

My Mac Pro problem, revisited

August 22, 2012 Follow Up, Geek Alert

Last month I wrote about my [Mac Pro problem](http://johnaugust.com/2012/my-mac-pro-problem). Short version: my 2006 Mac Pro tower couldn’t be upgraded to Mountain Lion, so I needed to get a new computer.

After weighing the various options, I decided to buy the new retina MacBook Pro for Ryan Nelson — who does all the graphics for us — and use his 2011 MacBook Pro as my main computer.

So far, it’s worked out pretty well.

I was already using a 2.5″ SSD as my main hard drive, so it was simple to swap that into the MacBook. Everything boots fine, and the machine feels as snappy as my tower did. With a new cable, I’ve been able to keep using my old 30″ Apple monitor. I’ve seen occasional striping and artifacts, but nothing terrible.

On the whole, it feels almost exactly like my old rig. I wouldn’t notice that anything had changed except that the MacBook Pro is completely silent — unless the fans need to spin up, which they do during podcasts, frustratingly. It’s odd having a laptop that operates only in clamshell mode, sitting on an milk crate under my desk. But not bad.

The biggest challenge has been figuring out what to do with the additional drives in my tower, which had all four bays filled, with drives for Projects, Media and Backup (which did all the Time Machine magic).

My first instinct was to just keep these drives in the Mac Pro and use it as a server. With FireWire 800, I was able to network to it and mount the drives. But it felt janky and unreliable, plus it meant a lot of power (and fan noise) to keep the Mac Pro running 24/7.

I wanted a dumb box that could just hold the bare drives. Not as a RAID array, but Just a Bunch of Disks (JBOD). So I tried a [4-bay unit by Icy Dock](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B003CNQPGU/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=B003CNQPGU&linkCode=as2&tag=johnaugustcom-20) designed to do exactly that. It worked, but the attached fan was much louder than I wanted, even on its low setting. There was also no easy way to make it sleep, and the best connection for it was USB 2.

Ultimately, I returned the Icy Dock and opted for a conventional external drive, the [3TB My Book by WD](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B004QGXOP2/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=B004QGXOP2&linkCode=as2&tag=johnaugustcom-20). It’s not totally silent, but I don’t hear it. It has FireWire 800, with an extra port for daisy-chaining. And it happily sleeps when the computer does.

3TB is enough that I could set aside a partition for Time Machine and consolidate Projects and Media down to the drive. I back up both the internal SSD and the external drive to a toaster-style dock, the [Newer Voyager Q](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0026S7HP0/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=B0026S7HP0&linkCode=as2&tag=johnaugustcom-20), which has also proved handy for bringing in all the data from my old drives.

I’m still hoping for a real Mac Pro tower than can hold a bunch of drives. But for now, this setup seems fine.

Meanwhile, Ryan loves the retina MacBook Pro. He’s encountered oft-reported software inconsistencies — new apps are breathtakingly sharp, while old apps look blurry — but the art he’s been able to make has been terrific. You’ll be seeing the results very soon.

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