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The Mystery of the Js

Episode - 63

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November 13, 2012 Follow Up, Scriptnotes, Three Page Challenge, Transcribed

Craig and John dive back into the Three Page Challenge entries, along with an overview of the 500+ contenders that have been submitted.

In response to listener curiosity, John and Craig also talk about their recording set-ups, and then follow-up on Star Wars, Karateka and Derek Haas’s busy schedule.

All this and more on the 63rd installment of Scriptnotes.

* [Audio Technica AT2020 USB microphone](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B008BSWBJQ/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=B008BSWBJQ&linkCode=as2&tag=johnaugustcom-20)
* [Sony MDR7506 headphontes](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B000AJIF4E/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=B000AJIF4E&linkCode=as2&tag=johnaugustcom-20)
* [Heil Sound PL-2T boom](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B000SZVZ74/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=B000SZVZ74&linkCode=as2&tag=johnaugustcom-20)
* Dan Benjamin’s [guide to podcasting gear](http://hivelogic.com/articles/podcasting-equipment-software-guide-2011)
* [Michael Arndt writing new Star Wars](http://insidemovies.ew.com/2012/11/09/report-screenwriter-michael-arndt-in-line-to-write-star-wars-episode-vii/) from EW
* [Karateka](http://karateka.com)
* [The Right Hand](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0316198463/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=0316198463&linkCode=as2&tag=johnaugustcom-20), a novel by Derek Haas
* Three pages by [Mark Cowling](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/markcowling.pdf)
* Three pages by [Kelli Bowlden](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/kellibowlden.pdf)
* Three pages by [Nick Scott](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/nickscott.pdf)
* Three pages by [Steve Marcarelli & Billy Lalor](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/marcarellilalor.pdf)
* [Reach Gum Care Soft Woven Mint Floss](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B003O34OL6/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=B003O34OL6&linkCode=as2&tag=johnaugustcom-20), the best floss in the world
* INTRO: [Buck Rogers in the 25th Century](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CO8kFHCXiEg)
* OUTRO: [Total Recall](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lemj0NHE3k0) by Flosstradamus ([Flosstradamus on iTunes](https://itunes.apple.com/us/artist/flosstradamus/id274043171))

(Note: Moreso than most weeks, we have a lot of links to stuff on Amazon. If you buy through them, you’ll help pay for some of our bandwidth costs.)

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_63.m4a).

**UPDATE** 11-16-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-63-the-mystery-of-the-js-transcript).

Moving past micro-budget

November 9, 2012 First Person, Follow Up, Sundance

Long time readers might remember Michael Mohan from back when his first film, [One Too Many Mornings](http://johnaugust.com/2010/one-too-many-mornings), was being self-released. He claims that more people saw the film from the mention on this blog than a front page ad on YouTube.

His second film, Save the Date, comes out on VOD today. It features Lizzy Caplan, Alison Brie, Martin Starr, Geoffrey Arend and Mark Webber. Here’s the red-band [trailer](http://www.youtube.com/embed/vsXA7RTjdMY):

Michael offered to write-up some backstory of how the film came to be. For any writer/directors trying to escape the micro-budget world, this might be of particular interest to you.

—

first personWay back in 2007, a friend of mine sent me the script to Save the Date. I was a rabid fan of one of the writers, Jeffrey Brown. Jeffrey is actually a graphic novelist. His early books depicting his failed relationships are some of my favorite books of all time. (You may actually be familiar with his latest book [Darth Vader and Son](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/145210655X/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=145210655X&linkCode=as2&tag=johnaugustcom-20)).

I fell in love with the script. Like his other work, the characters actually felt like people I knew. The film had a director attached and was on its way to production. I set it on my shelf, eagerly awaiting when I could see it in theatres.

In 2009, I reached out to Jeffrey for a very different reason. I was about to get married, and hoped I could hire him to draw a comic of my wife and me. A wedding gift. To be clear: I didn’t know Jeffrey, I just wrote to the email address on the back cover of one of his books. He graciously wrote back agreeing to do it.

The night before our wedding, at the rehearsal dinner, I noticed that my wife’s gift to me was about the same size. And when we simultaneously opened our presents, I discovered that my wife had the exact same idea. We both wrote to an artist we did not know to commission a work for us. Hers was of our first date. Mine was when we moved in together. We then commissioned a third work, a meta-piece documenting the moment we opened these gifts.

illustration

Fast forward to 2010. One Too Many Mornings was about to premiere at the Sundance Film Festival, and I was figuring out what to write next. A friend who was working with Jeffrey’s publisher told me that the director of Save the Date had dropped out, and the project was sitting idle.

Immediately, I wrote a cold email to the producer, Jordan Horowitz, sending him the drawings above and expressing my passion for the script. Jordan was also headed to Sundance with a then-unknown film called The Kids Are All Right. We met in Park City and hit it off.

Jordan, Jeffrey, co-writer Egan Reich and I all agreed the script still needed work. While it was a passion project for everyone, there was no money. Everyone graciously allowed me to run with the script.

At this moment I was so ready to dive into the re-write, when suddenly my day job became more busy than ever. I was working for a boutique record label at the time, and quickly found myself bouncing all over the country filming bands, making content, and eventually directing music videos. While Save the Date was always on my mind, I constantly kept having to step away from the world of the story. My focus was split.

Little did I know that this complete career tangent ended up being a crucial moment in my artistic development. It’s one thing to direct a feature film on nights and weekends with your friends, having infinite time to edit. It’s another thing to listen to a song on Monday, shoot a video for it on Friday, and have only two weeks to edit it (with managers and label heads looking over your shoulder). The lack of time and abundance of pressure forced me to operate on a much more instinctual level than I was ever able to do.

For instance, the conception and execution for this video for Fitz and the Tantrums was so fast, it happened almost simultaneously:

From a directing point of view, it was really fun. But ultimately, these were merely exercises in style. They weren’t personal.

A blessing in disguise: that August I was laid off (apparently people download music illegally off the internet?), so I grabbed my team and made a short film. Yes, I had already made a feature film that had played festivals, but I really wanted to take this new process and apply it to narrative. We shot it for next to nothing, and worked in the spirit of the music videos: quickly and intuitively. We filmed it over the course of a weekend, by that Friday it was done. It was the most creatively fulfilling experience of my life.

I still had the feature script to finish, but no job to clock in to. I had earned a free flight, so I went to my parents’ house in rural Massachusetts. They don’t have wi-fi, and therefore it was one of the most productive periods of my entire life. Finally I was able to focus, energized from the experience of making the short. Jeffrey and Egan were on speed dial, should I need them. And the instant I had a decent enough draft of Save the Date, I booked my return ticket back to Los Angeles.

Here’s where timing really came into play, none of which was engineered. Ex-Sex was accepted into Sundance. The Kids Are All Right was nominated for Oscars. Save the Date was ready to be sent out. When people asked if I was a first time director, the answer was no.

The dominos fell from there. In the months that followed, I got my dream cast, producer Michael Roiff (Waitress) came on board, and financing showed up. When I look back, there’s nothing I can think of that I would have done differently.

still image

There are a few takeaways here, but they’re very simple.

When you discover something you truly love, hold on to it. Don’t forget about it. I hadn’t directed anything of note back when I first read the script for Save the Date and literally right now you can turn on your tv and watch it.

Focus on the work. Your instincts are what set you apart from every other filmmaker, so create any opportunity to sharpen them. This is what instills the confidence and trust in your collaborators to create the groundswell of energy needed to get your film off the ground. It can be tempting to get distracted by what I like to call “warp zone stories:” filmmakers who may make one short film and find themselves directing a feature for a studio. It does not make you a better filmmaker to waste your time lamenting over the fact that this hasn’t happened to you yet. That hasn’t been my path, and most likely it’s not going to be yours.

Make sure it’s personal. Even though I didn’t come up with the idea for Save the Date, it hit me on a very deep level. No matter what scale you find yourself working on, if you simply have to tell your story, you’ll find a way to get it done. Personal stories are also trend-proof: truth never goes out of style.

Save the Date is available on pretty much every VOD platform TODAY. [Watching it via iTunes](http://bit.ly/savethedatemovie) between now and Sunday will make the biggest impact. The film will be hitting theatres on December 14th.

A big thanks to John for letting me share my story with you.

Alt-universe panels

October 30, 2012 Follow Up, Scriptnotes, Transcribed, Words on the page

Craig and John ret-con the Austin Film Festival, placing themselves on panels in which they didn’t participate. It’s a chance to give the answers they would have given without the bother of being asked (or listening to other people’s opinions).

For example, Terry Rossio’s seminar on “The Throw” — his term for how you end a scene — was presumably terrific. We didn’t attend, but it’s fun to spitball what we would have said about this interesting and under-discussed aspect of screenwriting.

Other topics discussed this week include:

* Setiquette
* Kyle Killen’s secret shower
* Videogame storytelling
* Amazon Studios
* Pilots vs. presentations

Happy Halloween, everyone. Stay safe and dry.

LINKS:

* [Marti Noxon](http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0637497/)
* [Kyle Killen](http://www.imdb.com/name/nm3189831/)
* John’s [pitch and outline](http://johnaugust.com/library#dc) for D.C.
* [Amazon Studios panel write-up](http://johnaugust.com/2012/amazon-studios-at-aff)
* [Popcorn Fiction panel write-up](http://www.moveablefest.com/moveable_fest/2012/10/popcorn-fiction-derek-haas.html)
* [Terry Rossio](http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0744429/)
* INTRO: [I Dream of Jeannie](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JwpH_IYg0N8)
* OUTRO: [I Want to Be Evil](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SS02GeKuWQ4), by Eartha Kitt

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_61.m4a).

**UPDATE** 11-2-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-61-alt-universe-panels-transcript).

Another look at junkets

October 25, 2012 First Person, Follow Up

On a recent podcast, Craig and I discussed press junkets from the screenwriter’s perspective.

Tim from London wrote in to offer the view from the other side of the roundtable.

—

first personI’ve been working as a producer in the UK for the past 15 years, the last nine of which have been spent making various film-themed shows for a major TV broadcaster. A lot of these shows (be they weekly review-based programmes, or promotional specials focused on individual films or documentaries) are based around on and off-screen talent discussing their films, and so the majority of original material is gleaned from junkets.

Apologies to both John and Craig but unfortunately our paths have never crossed in the junket room — although Big Fish was one of my first junket experiences, followed a couple of years later by Scary Movie 4.

Junkets are an incredibly strange phenomenon, and the horror stories from the corridors of The Dorchester, The Four Seasons and The Hotel Du Cap are legendary. There’s definitely a movie to be made there somewhere — although both America’s Sweethearts and Notting Hill absolutely nail aspects of the experience.

The thing that has struck me more than anything is how few screenwriters seem to be invited to participate. I would estimate that less than 1 in 10, maybe even 1 in 20 junkets that I’ve attended has included the writer.

From my experience, I get the impression that writers tend to be involved in junkets when they themselves offer some kind of unique story the studio knows they can use to sell the movie. Examples include films like Juno or The Social Network where, at least in publicity terms, the writers could be seen as “the star” or “the story” in some circles.

Other than these two examples, I’m struggling to think of too many other occasions when the writer has played a significant role in a junket that I’ve attended. There are plenty of times when writers are made available for interview, but really only when it’s either a very big or very small film.

The behind-the-scenes folk tend to get forgotten — quite literally in some cases. I’ve seen interviewers not even bother taking interview tapes from directors, producers and writers from a junket. (I’ve always found this to be pretty reprehensible behaviour). I honestly think the reason for this is that very few of the outlets are specifically aiming at a film enthusiast audience or readership. They want the stars.

The upcoming James Bond movie, Skyfall, will be a great example of this. I can pretty much guarantee that the attending press will consist of no more than five percent representing movie-orientated publications or shows. The vast majority will come from news, lifestyle, gossip and celebrity type outlets whose main purpose will be to get their host seen on screen with Daniel Craig. Whether anything of interest is actually discussed is pretty much secondary to their show/newspaper/magazine featuring a big movie star.

I have no real problem with this, as it’s clearly the way the film companies are choosing to sell their product.

The more specialised nature of internet coverage is changing things, but it seems to be a very slow process. I don’t think the studios have been as proactive as they could be in embracing the opportunities that online provides for publicising a movie, as opposed to simply marketing it. To my mind it makes much more sense to utilise a writer or director’s publicity schedule by placing them with more filmmaker-friendly outlets.

For all the great work writers do to make a movie happen, let’s face it, they’re not getting a lot of airtime on E!, so why not use that junket day for something more direct and something more effective?

Personally, I always find it fun to interview writers, because they rarely seem to be caught up in the crazy hoopla of either making or selling the movie. It’s an opportunity to talk about the plot and the characters of a film without the conversation feeling like a sales pitch or a soapbox. More often than not, it feels like they’re just enjoying the culmination of the work that they were responsible for starting and are genuinely looking forward to seeing what the audience will make of the finished film.

Either that, or they’re just very good at faking it.

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