John August

Follow Up

Full Circle

Episode - 351

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Big Fish, Follow Up, Los Angeles, News, Scriptnotes, Software, Story and Plot, Transcribed, Writing Process

John and Craig talk about the way that movies tend to bring their stories full circle, and what that means for writers trying to figure out their story beats. They discuss rhyming, bookending and how properly setting up the central thematic question helps make the answer feel meaningful.

We also answer listener questions about putting one’s work on YouTube, annotating scripts, and arbitration.

Links:

* Our next live Scriptnotes with Jonah Nolan & Lisa Joy (Westworld) and Stephen McFeely & Christopher Markus (Avengers: Infinity War) is TONIGHT, Tuesday, May 22nd at the ArcLight in Hollywood. Proceeds benefit [Hollywood HEART](http://www.hollywoodheart.org), which runs special programs and summer camps for at-risk youth.
* [John’s statement](http://johnaugust.com/2018/on-big-fish-family-inclusion-family) on one theater’s choice to cancel their performance of Big Fish over the inclusion of same-sex parents.
* [Highland 2](https://quoteunquoteapps.com/highland-2/) is officially out! [This](https://www.nytimes.com/2018/05/11/movies/is-your-script-gender-balanced-try-this-test.html) is the New York Times article about our Gender Analysis feature.
* [Names on the Globe](http://www.amazon.com/dp/0195018958/?tag=johnaugustcom-20) by George R. Stewart discusses the pronunciation of L.A.
* [One space between each sentence, they said. Science just proved them wrong.](https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/speaking-of-science/wp/2018/05/04/one-space-between-each-sentence-they-said-science-just-proved-them-wrong-2/?utm_term=.40216d38feb5) is a Washington Post article by Avi Selk about whether to put one space or two after a period.
* According to Craig, [Fun Home](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fun_Home_(musical)) is a good example of a moving bookending.
* [The Sandman comics](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Sandman_(Vertigo)) by Neil Gaiman
* Dan Harmon’s [Story Circle](http://channel101.wikia.com/wiki/Story_Structure_101:_Super_Basic_Shit)
* [21 Things to Know Before Losing Your Gay Virginity](https://www.advocate.com/sexy-beast/2018/5/17/21-things-know-losing-your-gay-virginity#media-gallery-media-13) by Alexander Cheves
* [Moodnotes](http://moodnotes.thriveport.com/) is an app that tracks your mood
* [The Scriptnotes Listeners’ Guide!](http://johnaugust.com/guide)
* [The USB drives!](https://store.johnaugust.com/collections/frontpage/products/scriptnotes-300-episode-usb-flash-drive)
* [John August](https://twitter.com/johnaugust) on Twitter
* [Craig Mazin](https://twitter.com/clmazin) on Twitter
* [John on Instagram](https://www.instagram.com/johnaugust/?hl=en)
* [Find past episodes](http://scriptnotes.net/)
* [Outro](http://johnaugust.com/2013/scriptnotes-the-outros) by Olufemi Sowemimo ([send us yours!](http://johnaugust.com/2014/outros-needed))

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode [here](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_351.mp3).

**UPDATE 5-30-18:** The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2018/scriptnotes-ep-351-full-circle-transcript).

Putting Words on the Page

Directors, Follow Up, Formatting, Los Angeles, News, Scriptnotes, Software, Television, Tools, Transcribed, Treatments, Words on the page, Writing Process

John and Craig discuss the digital tools of the trade. From outline to first draft to production rewrites, screenwriters find themselves facing different challenges. We talk about what works for each of us. We also speculate on what impact Highland 2’s gender analysis tool will have.

Then we answer listener questions about following the “rules” of formatting, from creative scene headers to “hey reader” notes and tips for introducing characters who play important roles later in the script.

Links:

* Our next live Scriptnotes with Jonah Nolan & Lisa Joy (Westworld) and Stephen McFeely & Christopher Markus (Avengers: Infinity War) will be Tuesday, May 22nd at the ArcLight in Hollywood. [Tickets are on sale now](https://scriptnotes.brownpapertickets.com) — proceeds benefit [Hollywood HEART](http://www.hollywoodheart.org), which runs special programs and summer camps for at-risk youth.
* [Frank Oz](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Frank_Oz), in case you’re curious
* Look how fast [Highland 2](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ehKDtQ3Dbhw) loads War and Peace compared to other programs!
* [Scriptnotes, Ep 125: The One with the Guys from Final Draft](http://johnaugust.com/2014/the-one-with-the-guys-from-final-draft)
* [Welcome to Southern California](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4-l13UMBlkM&app=desktop) includes a 1953 pronunciation of “Los Angeles”
* [Less](https://www.amazon.com/Less-Winner-Pulitzer-Prize-Novel/dp/0316316121) by Andrew Sean Greer
* [The Scriptnotes Listeners’ Guide!](http://johnaugust.com/guide)
* [The USB drives!](https://store.johnaugust.com/collections/frontpage/products/scriptnotes-300-episode-usb-flash-drive)
* [John August](https://twitter.com/johnaugust) on Twitter
* [Craig Mazin](https://twitter.com/clmazin) on Twitter
* [John on Instagram](https://www.instagram.com/johnaugust/?hl=en)
* [Find past episodes](http://scriptnotes.net/)
* [Outro](http://johnaugust.com/2013/scriptnotes-the-outros) by [Larry Douziech](https://www.larrydouziech.com) ([send us yours!](http://johnaugust.com/2014/outros-needed))

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode [here](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_349.mp3).

**UPDATE 5-15-18:** The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2018/scriptnotes-ep-349-putting-words-on-the-page-transcript).

All About Family

Adaptation, Education, Film Industry, Follow Up, Formatting, News, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig partake in another installment of How Would This Be a Movie? Which story is destined for the big screen: The millennial mother with her surprise, Youtube-guided childbirth? The couple that has the same fight for decades? The Japanese families-for-hire?

We also follow up on the logic of multi-cam formatting, Georgia’s success in diversifying crews through training programs, and effective character descriptions.

Tickets are now on sale for our next Scriptnotes Live Show on Tuesday, May 22nd at the ArcLight in Hollywood, with guests including Lisa Joy and Jonah Nolan of Westworld.

Links:

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 5-8-18: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

Scriptnotes Live in May

Follow Up, Los Angeles, News

Our next live Scriptnotes will be Tuesday, May 22nd at the ArcLight in Hollywood. [Tickets are on sale now](https://scriptnotes.brownpapertickets.com), with special guests to be announced soon.

All of our live shows are benefits for great LA charities. This one is for [Hollywood HEART](http://www.hollywoodheart.org), which runs special programs and summer camps for at-risk youth.

When we were trying to figure a venue for the event, I asked on Twitter for recommendations. Friend-of-the-show Eric Webb went way beyond, compiling a list of most of the major auditoriums in LA. I’m including it here for anyone else who finds themselves needing a venue.

| Seats | Venue |
|——-|——————————————————————–|
| 3156 | Dorothy Chandler Pavilion |
| 2703 | Pantages |
| 2345 | Million Dollar Theater |
| 2252 | Walt Disney Concert Hall |
| 2103 | Ahmanson Theatre |
| 2000 | Los Angeles Theatre |
| 1976 | Orpheum Theater |
| 1897 | Saban Theatre |
| 1850 | Wiltern Theatre |
| 1800 | Fred Kavli Theatre (Thousand Oaks PAC) |
| 1800 | Royce Hall (UCLA) |
| 1700 | Mayan Theatre |
| 1600 | Valley Performing Arts Center Great Hall (CSUN) |
| 1600 | Theatre at Ace Hotel |
| 1152 | Grauman’s Chinese Theatre |
| 1413 | Alex Theatre |
| 1400 | Riverside Municipal Auditorium |
| 1341 | Regency Village Theatre |
| 1300 | The Rose |
| 1270 | Wilshire Ebell Theatre |
| 1235 | Bovard Auditorium (USC) |
| 1200 | Ricardo Montalbán Theatre |
| 906 | Tower Theatre |
| 900 | Forest Lawn Museum/Hall of The Crucifixion-Resurrection (Glendale) |
| 739 | Mark Taper Forum |
| 686 | Pasadena Playhouse |
| 618 | Egyptian Theatre |
| 610 | Geffen Playhouse |
| 600 | DGA Theatre 1 |
| 600 | Leo S. Bing Theatre (LACMA) |
| 538 | Eli and Edythe Broad Stage |
| 551 | Bing Theatre (USC) |
| 500 | Bram Goldsmith Theater |
| 496 | Tom Bradley Theater (LATC) |
| 473 | WGA Theatre † |
| 430 | Colburn School Grand Building Auditorium |
| 425 | Aero Theatre |
| 400 | Janet and Ray Scherr Forum Theatre (Thousand Oaks PAC) |
| 400 | Vista Theatre |
| 390 | Campus Theatre (CSUN) |
| 360 | El Portal Theatre |
| 350 | Harmony Gold Theater |
| 341 | Eileen Norris Cinema Theatre Complex (USC) |
| 330 | LA Film School † |
| 303 | Nuart Theatre |
| 300 | Kirk Douglas Theatre |
| 300 | Landmark Theatre |
| 296 | Lupe Ontiveros Theatre (LATC) |
| 294 | The SilverScreen Theater (Pacific Design Center) |
| 280 | Alfred Newman Recital Hall (USC) |
| 278 | James Bridges Theatre |
| 270 | Roy and Edna Disney/Calarts Theater (REDCAT) |
| 222 | Downtown Independent Theatre |
| 220 | Annenberg Auditorium (USC) |
| 200 | Renberg Theatre (LA LGBT Center) |
| 155 | DGA Theater 2 |

† = previous Scriptnotes live show venue