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Gorilla City and the Kingdom of Toads

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September 25, 2012 Chosen, Follow Up, News, QandA, Scriptnotes, Television, Three Page Challenge, Transcribed

John and Craig talk about the new show John sold to ABC, which leads to a conversation about the differences between studios and networks, and how writers end up having relationships with both.

We answer a listener question about what writers mean by a “weekly.”

The bulk of the podcast centers on four samples from the Three Page Challenge, covering a range of genres from heist movies to fantasy to broad comedy. You can find all four entries in the links, so read along with us.

As always, our thanks to these brave writers who’ve shared their work. If you want to send in your own entry, there are some simple [rules to follow](http://johnaugust.com/threepage).

LINKS:

* [Chosen, or I Sold a TV Show!](http://johnaugust.com/2012/chosen-or-hey-im-doing-a-tv-show)
* [Liz Brixius’](http://www.deadline.com/2012/09/nbc-buys-soap-from-writer-liz-brixius-and-producers-sean-hayes-lawrence-bender/) new show
* [Military comedy](http://www.deadline.com/2012/09/bruckheimer-tv-produced-military-comedy-lands-at-nbc-with-put-pilot-commitment/) from Jerry Bruckheimer
* [X-Files self-dealing lawsuit](http://www.nytimes.com/2006/01/23/business/23carter.html?_r=2)
* [The Sarah Connor Chronicles](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Terminator:_The_Sarah_Connor_Chronicles)
* [Scriptnotes iTunes reviews](http://itunes.apple.com/us/podcast/scriptnotes-podcast/id462495496)
* [Fox writers deal](http://www.variety.com/article/VR1117970235?refCatId=13)
* Three pages by [Henry Fosdike & Lloyd Morgan](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/FosdikeMorgan.pdf)
* Three pages by [Jeffrey Stoltzfus](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/JeffreyStoltzfus.pdf)
* Three pages by [Virginia Lee](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/VirginiaLee.pdf)
* Three pages by [Sandy McDougall](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/SandyMcDougall.pdf)
* [NewerTech Voyager Q Quad Interface Dock](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0026S7HP0/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=B0026S7HP0&linkCode=as2&tag=johnaugustcom-20)
* [WD Green 2TB hard drives](http://www.amazon.com/dp/B004VFJ9MK/?tag=johnaugustcom-20)
* INTRO: [Press Your Luck theme](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFj2hxi5kNY)
* OUTRO: Simon and Garfunkel’s [At the Zoo](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8bTIiRH44Xs) covered by Japanese folk duo The Side of a Hill

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_56.m4a).

If you’re listening to us on the website and like what you hear, why don’t you say some nice things about us [on iTunes](http://itunes.apple.com/us/podcast/scriptnotes-podcast/id462495496), wouldja?

**UPDATE** 9-28-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-56-gorilla-city-and-the-kingdom-of-toads-transcript).

Chosen, or Hey I’m Doing a TV Show!

September 19, 2012 Chosen, News, Television

I often remark how television is where the best storytelling is happening these days, both in one-hour dramas and half-hour comedies. So, after a few seasons of staring longingly through the fence, I’ve decided to get back into that game.

Josh Friedman and I just set up a new show called Chosen, produced by 20th Television for ABC. It’s a one-hour drama. I’ll write the pilot, and if the show goes to series, Josh will run it.

We’re keeping the logline under wraps, but it centers around a family facing unusual circumstances.

In addition to his [awesome-but-nigh-abandoned blog](http://hucksblog.blogspot.com), Josh created and ran [The Sarah Connor Chronicles](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Terminator:_The_Sarah_Connor_Chronicles), which I loved dearly. I only wanted to do a show this season if I had a partner who could write it and run it extraordinarily well. That’s Josh.

Between this and the [Chicago opening of Big Fish](http://www.suntimes.com/entertainment/stage/14959954-421/chicago-catches-big-fish-musical-for-pre-broadway-run.html), it’s going to be a busy six months, but I’m excited for all the new challenges.

Standard before-you-get-too-excited disclaimers:

* Most scripts never go to pilot.
* Most pilots never go to series.
* Most series don’t last.

So while I’m extremely enthusiastic about this show’s chances, I’m not plotting a fifth season just yet.

What I love about TV is that development means taking chances. They’re gambling on me and Josh and dozens of other writers. They’re not sure which shows are going to work, so they’re making more than they need. It’s not that money is limitless, but they need shows to fill their networks, and it’s worth it to spend money now to find the best ones.

It’s the opposite of movies these days, where development is about justifying how little money studios can spend, and how few movies they can make.

TV networks would also like to “only make the hits.” But they’re smart enough to realize that they won’t necessarily know the hits until they have them.

Keep in mind, this is development for the 2013-14 season. That seems impossibly far away, but that’s how TV works. The new fall shows debuting this week began their life a year ago. You’re watching the ones that made the cut. Maybe we’ll be among the next batch. Either way, I’m excited to get started.

Writing big movies for little screens

July 11, 2012 Television

Stephen Harrigan reflects on his career writing [TV movies of the week](http://www.slate.com/articles/arts/culturebox/2012/07/made_for_tv_movies_my_career_writing_the_o_j_simpson_story_take_me_home_the_john_denver_story_and_more_.single.html):

> As a writer of what I call colon movies (such as *Beyond the Prairie: The True Story of Laura Ingalls Wilder*, or *Take Me Home: The John Denver Story*), the ’90s were my golden decade. I was an A-list writer of B-list productions.

MOWs have largely gone away, but as a profession it is very much like feature writing — only with tighter deadlines and smaller budgets.

The format does come with its own bag of tropes and clichés:

> After I had been in the business for awhile, I started to grow aware of the word “turns,” and the more aware of it I grew the more determined I became to outmaneuver it. It’s the default word for the end of almost every scene: “He turns”; “She turns”; “She hesitates for a moment at the door, then turns back to face him”; “He looks away, and when he turns back to her she notices there are tears in his eyes.“ It became my personal challenge to write an entire script without anybody turning, like that guy in the 1930s who once wrote a whole novel without ever using the letter “E.” But after a while I gave up. It was too hard, maybe even impossible. People in my scripts just naturally needed to turn to each other to button up a scene, to give it a proper note of finality. Trying to write a screenplay without using “turns” was like trying to write a pop song without using “baby.”

I love Harrigan’s observation that subtlety is too much like vagueness, and in a script nothing vague can survive:

> You had to search and search until you found a story’s irreducible thread: a man on the run from a killer, a young girl growing into a woman, a victim seeking revenge. If the movie was about one thing, it could be about many things. But if you started out determined to make it about many things, it would be about nothing.

It’s a [long read](http://www.slate.com/articles/arts/culturebox/2012/07/made_for_tv_movies_my_career_writing_the_o_j_simpson_story_take_me_home_the_john_denver_story_and_more_.single.html), but thoroughly worthwhile.

Leaning into the weirdness

May 15, 2012 Television

Alex Morris looks at [how Happy Endings found its footing](http://nymag.com/arts/tv/upfronts/2012/happy-endings-2012-5/):

> Rather than improve ratings by noticeably changing course (as Parks and Recreation had done after its first season), the cast and crew leaned into the weirdness of their comedy.

> Coupe and Wayans, who play married couple Jane and Brad turned their characters’ initial overachieving-bobo quirks into a full-blown orgy of neuroses—the second season finds Brad wearing a shirtdress because “Daddy likes a deep tuck,” and Jane stalking a kid she thinks might be her egg-donor baby (in fact the parents didn’t use her egg because they thought she seemed just the kind of crazy who would stalk her egg-donor baby). Wilson gave her singleton an ability to rebound that verges on masochism. And Pally’s gay character, Max, so brilliantly overhauls TV’s go-to flamboyant stereotype that in one episode he slovenly hibernates for the winter, like a bear.

For me, Happy Endings can be hit-or-miss (the bear hibernation was a miss), but I admire the way it has morphed from another sorta-like-Friends show to its own weird beast. I wouldn’t want to hang out with any of these narcissistic self-defeating chatterboxes, but I like them hanging out together.

One of the amazing things about writing television is that unlike a feature, you can actually change course — provided you started with the good elements. You cast the roles you’ve written in the pilot, but you’re also looking at what the actors themselves bring. Writers and actors have a shared responsibility for the characters that’s unique.

Happy Endings is coming back for a third season in the fall.

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