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Notes from Sundance

June 22, 2009 Sundance

I’m up at Sundance for the Filmmakers Lab, where I serve as an advisor.

I’ve written about [previous sessions](http://johnaugust.com/archives/2007/summer-sundance), and the overall experience is remarkably consistent year-to-year. The projects change, but the work is largely the same — helping writers (mostly writer/directors) get their scripts into their best shape before shooting.

I learn a lot from the fellows and their projects — many of them are international, and focus on stories and situations I would never otherwise encounter. But I pick up a lot from the other advisors as well. I quoted one of them [on Twitter](https://twitter.com/johnaugust/status/2273804191) yesterday:

“Writing is betraying the people you love to impress people you’ll never meet.”

That was [Chris McQuarrie](http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0003160/), re-quoting an advisor from several years ago.

When writers give notes, they can often articulate issues in ways that feel more like poetry than problems. [Etgar Keret](http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0449316/) felt one script had a bunch of sticks very cleverly holding up the roof, but what it really needed was a central pillar to support the weight. [Susannah Grant](http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0335666/) wanted to help that same writer find a taproot to drink from. Both clever ways of expressing an idea that you wouldn’t get from a producer.

To the degree there’s a formula to the labs, it’s that sense of literary philanthropy. Not only are the notes you get here more thoughtful than a producer’s, they’re also genuinely disinterested and agenda-free.

Merlin Mann on getting creative stuff done

June 19, 2009 How-To

Skip ahead to 12:00, and it’s great. His advice about getting started is golden, and the easiest-to-forget advice that there is no magic.

**Update March 2011**

Player is offline, but you can visit [Maximum Fun](http://www.maximumfun.org) to find a range of interviews, including this one with Merlin Mann.

NPR on Twitter and The Variant

June 18, 2009 Follow Up, News, Projects, The Variant

NPR’s All Things Considered has a piece tonight by Alex Cohen about how artists use Twitter, including me with my short story [The Variant](http://johnaugust.com/variant).

If you missed it, you can catch the clip [in the archives](http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=105620633), or download it [here](http://public.npr.org/anon.npr-mp3/npr/atc/2009/06/20090618_atc_08.mp3?dl=1).

The “test screenings” I did with The Variant were hugely helpful, and led to some significant trim and changes, including the title and the very first sentence.

If you’d like to read that early feedback, I’ve unlocked the password protection so you can see their comments on [the first draft](http://johnaugust.com/variant/the-egyptian-variant) and the [revised version](http://johnaugust.com/variant/the-variant). (Obviously, both links are chock full of spoilers.)

Learning story as a director

June 17, 2009 Directors, Film Industry, QandA

questionmarkIf you would indulge a brief background, so the question has context. I grew up in and around the film business in Culver City. My godfather, whose name I carry around, was a Property Master for many years with Paramount. All that said, I wanted nothing to do with the film business — and stayed clear until my early 40’s. I have been a self employed business consultant for about eleven years now.

When I turned 43, three years ago, I took a crash course (three months) on film production. I think my motivation was really to explore my heritage some. Well, I got the bug then. I wrote, produced and directed my first short. It cost me like $2500. The story sucked like a hover, but the production value and the casting got good reviews. So I started going to lots of workshops on all aspects of the film business. I really would like to evolve to a producer/director type.

Recently I finished my second short film. My first short had eight cast and crew, this last project had over forty with some people from the industry helping out. I spent ten grand, and the short came out a ton better and I learned a ton more. I handled lots of set ups, producing, casting, and other things just fine. But AGAIN, the story was weak and thus although the film is a huge step forward –I’m not getting the story locked down. Doing films means more to me that anything I have ever done. I do ok as a business consultant, I make a decent living. But my little films, with all their flaws, mean so much more to me then anything I have ever done. I want to get good at the story part of this.

I will never be a great screenwriter, I suspect. I got some really good feedback from the industry people that felt very strongly I should stick with the directing and producing, though. I considered just optioning, and even started reading scripts. But that will not work for me. My brain needs to understand at an intimate level, the driving forces of cinematic storytelling — for me to establish my POV more solidly as a director, to be there for my talent as a fully prepared professional, and to know how to collaborate on scripts in development.

What would you recommend for a director/producer type that eventually, just wants to make really good films from really good scripts someone else writes. How do I learn to really master the driving forces of cinematic storytelling? I would GREATLY appreciate your counsel. I don’t want to give this up, as it means so much to me. But I have to get the story part to this equation on much more solid ground.

— Bob

Film is a hundred different skills and disciplines, and no one person is going to be great at all of them. ((Well, sure: James Cameron. But I’ve heard he can’t cut hair for shit.))

Fortunately, film is also a collaborative medium, which means you get to bring in people who are excellent at the things you don’t do as well. You have cinematographers, production designers, costumers and gaffers who make your vision possible in ways you simply couldn’t.

You’re not good at story. And while you may be able to get a little better with experience, the truth is you will probably never be great at it. So you need to find a collaborator who is. You need a writer.

I’d like to convince you to get over your reluctance to simply option someone else’s material. The vast majority of scripts written are never shot, and some not-insignificant percentage of those are pretty damn good. Find a script that won an award at a festival and convince the writer to let you shoot it.

If I can’t get you to simply sign on to someone else’s project, then let me encourage you to find a writer with whom you can collaborate. Many producers and directors have writers they go back to again and again. Most of the Merchant/Ivory films were written by Ruth Prawer Jhabvala. I’m working on my fifth Tim Burton movie. That’s all good.

The best filmmakers recognize their strengths and weaknesses. But rather than flailing themselves over their deficiencies, they enlist talented people to help. You’re a business consultant, so on some level you must understand that putting together a strong team doesn’t make the boss any less central to the success.

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