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Setting, perspective and terrible numbers

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July 10, 2012 Challenge, Scriptnotes, Story and Plot, Three Page Challenge, Transcribed, WGA

It’s two parts craft and one part business as Craig and John discuss the alarming earnings report coming out of the WGA, plus a deeper look at setting and POV.

For feature screenwriters, it’s hard to find a silver lining in the [WGA’s report](http://www.wga.org/uploadedFiles/who_we_are/annual_reports/annualreport12.pdf) on 2011 earnings. Numbers are down significantly, both in total dollars and the number of writers earning anything at all.

2011 earnings chart

Of course, you don’t have to be employed to write a script, so we spend the rest of the show talking about two crucial aspects of screenwriting: choosing effective settings and deciding on POV.

Setting is both a macro and micro decision. Early on, you need to figure out where your movie takes place. Everything about your story will be impacted by the world you choose. Then as you write individual scenes, you look for environments that provide opportunities and challenges for your characters — and for the director. Film is a visual medium, so smart screenwriters consider what settings will suit a big screen.

Perspective, or POV, is about figuring out which characters have storytelling power in your movie. Which characters can anchor a scene without the hero? Which characters can do voiceover? The choices you make greatly effect audience expectation, so it’s worth thinking about at the very start.

Finally, we talk about the Three Page Challenge. On an upcoming podcast, we’ll be critiquing three pages (and only three pages!) from listeners’ scripts. If you want to participate, visit [johnaugust.com/threepage](http://johnaugust.com/threepage) for details.

LINKS:

* [2012 WGAW Annual Report to Writers](http://www.wga.org/subpage_whoweare.aspx?id=230)
* [Bridesmaids](http://www.bridesmaidsmovie.com/index.php)
* [The Shaggs](http://www.shaggs.com/)
* [PB2 Peanut Butter Powder](http://www.amazon.com/dp/B002GJ9JWS/?tag=johnaugustcom-20) on Amazon
* [Cambridge Ivory Wirebound Notebook](http://www.amazon.com/dp/B003VIVX2M/?tag=johnaugustcom-20) on Amazon
* [The Scriptnotes Three Page Challenge](http://johnaugust.com/threepage)
* INTRO: [Lite Brite commercial](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Huat89z2WrA)
* OUTRO: [Super Mario Brothers on Classical Guitar](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d3UTHj16ukM)

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_45.m4a).

**UPDATE** 7-12-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-45-setting-perspective-and-terrible-numbers-transcript).

Endings for beginners

July 3, 2012 Scriptnotes, Story and Plot, Transcribed

John and Craig look at how to write satisfying third acts. That doesn’t necessarily mean a happy ending, but rather one that feels earned.

If the first 10 pages of a script establish a contract between reader and writer — give me your undivided attention and I will make it worthwhile — the last 10 pages are where that contract is paid out. This is where screenwriters generally need to spend much more time, yet it’s often hurried and rushed.

Looking at the headlines, Craig fills us in on Hayden Christiansen’s lawsuit against USA Network’s Royal Pains and what it means for screenwriters. (Expect to be signing new forms.)

We also discuss a listener’s lament that studio execs have learned all the wrong lessons from the success of Avengers (and the failure of Abraham Lincoln: Vampire Hunter).

All this and vocal fry in the new installment of Scriptnotes.

LINKS:

* [Hayden Christensen Wins Big Victory Against USA Network in ‘Royal Pains’ Appeal](http://www.hollywoodreporter.com/thr-esq/hayden-christensen-royal-pains-usa-lawsuit-342497)
* INTRO: [ABC’s 1976 Bicentennial Celebration](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tImKevSPH6Y)
* OUTRO: [Chet Atkins, Stars and Stripes Forever](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cyiq6lewgOk)

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_44.m4a).

**UPDATE** 7-6-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-44-endings-for-beginners-transcript).

Pen Names and Divine Intervention

June 26, 2012 QandA, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

This week, John is a bit under the weather, so Craig takes over moderator duties as they tackle four listener questions:

➤ When you spec a script based on a producer’s idea, who owns it?

➤ And on that topic, do producers ever really buy an idea?

➤ How much divine intervention — or other coincidence — can a movie support?

➤ How do pen names work for screenwriters?

In follow-up, Clive Barker is writing — but not directing — that Amazon Studios project. John regrets the error. And in verb-related news, metal can’t pound, but it can pound flat, oddly enough.

All this and two cool things in this week’s Scriptnotes.

LINKS:

* [Plague Inc.](http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/plague-inc./id525818839?mt=8) for iOS
* [English Verb Classes and Alternations](http://www.amazon.com/dp/0226475336/?tag=johnaugustcom-20) by Beth Levin
* [Researcher’s findings in the Amazon pit him against Noam Chomsky](http://chronicle.com/article/Researchers-Findings-in-the/131260/)
* [The Baseball Codes: Beanballs, Sign Stealing, and Bench-Clearing Brawls](http://www.amazon.com/dp/030727862X/?tag=johnaugustcom-20) by Jason Turbow
* [Robin Ventura vs. Nolan Ryan](http://mlb.mlb.com/video/play.jsp?content_id=12745349)
* [ScanCafe](http://www.scancafe.com/)
* INTRO: [Godzilla intro](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oTItRfN-LO8)
* OUTRO: [What’s My Name](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7iY7c_rqowM) cover by VanJess

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_43.m4a).

**UPDATE** 6-28-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-43-pen-names-and-divine-intervention-transcript).

Adam Davis, year five

June 19, 2012 First Person, Follow Up, Los Angeles

Adam Davis wrote one of the original First Person posts for the site back in 2007, when he [first moved to Los Angeles](http://johnaugust.com/2007/starting-out-in-hollywood) from Des Moines. In 2009, we checked in with him again, and found him [working as PA](http://johnaugust.com/2009/adam-davis-year-two).

At a reader’s request, I asked Adam to tell us what he’s up to now.

—

first personWhen I first moved out here to pursue the writing/directing dream, I was driving on the 10, a mile from my exit in Culver City and I kept looking for the Hollywood sign in the hills. I wanted to see that piece of iconography so badly, I risked taking my eyes off the road.

That’s when I rear-ended the car in front of me.

adam davisSix years later, I see the sign every day when I drive home taking Gower. I’ve learned not to stare. Since I last checked in with you good folks, I’ve seen some great gains in my day job and my writing. The day job is a bit more tangible to brag about to my parents because it’s tough to explain that holy crap my dialogue finally doesn’t suck!

So my days have been filled with working on promotions and licensing for the newly-minted [third-top-grossing film](http://boxofficemojo.com/alltime/world/) of all time. My set PA experience has paid off handsomely as I’ve helped produce two great partner spots, one featuring the littlest Earth’s Mightiest Heroes for Target, and the other featuring a massive film set rebuild for Red Baron. I’ve been creatively working on all the toys (Hulk Hands make their triumphant return!) and am most proud of the Hot Toys line that’s coming out.

I also worked on the line of kids and young adult books that came out with the movie, using my writing skills to great effect.

But enough of that detour. Highland gets backed up around Sunset anyway.

It was after a few failed short film and music video projects that I decided to focus entirely on writing and let the directing wait. It’s much cheaper and I felt I needed to get great at one thing before moving on to another trade. I subsequently entered my “content production” phase (still ongoing). I’ve banged out four features, three original TV pilots and one children’s book — some with my writing partner, others by myself — that are ready to hit the marketplace. We’ve also outlined a few features of various budgetary levels and are planning to pen a second episode of one of our series to hopefully make it easier to sell.

It’s been a consistent workflow: finish a draft, work on a new property’s outline, go back and do a second draft…some of these things happening simultaneously. That’s one of the benefits of a writing partner. For example, I’m doing the first draft of a new feature as my writing partner fixes and polishes the last draft of our other feature’s outline. When I’m done, he’ll take the second draft and I may start work on the first draft off the outline. Or he’ll take the first stab as I cook up a new idea. This is what we’ve been doing for the past three years.

And during all this writing, I’ve been hustling as much as I can. Talking to people about the projects, getting some reads, getting great notes, revising drafts as necessary.

I’ve had some “meetings,” but not like the “Come on into Screen Gems, here’s a parking validation” type — the more casual lunch or drinks ones. The ones where I don’t have to slightly-dress-up, but I still do. What’s important is whom these meetings are with: Not the people *of* power, but the people who *will have* power.

I remember John saying something along the lines of “the group of people who are your age will rise up together, and they’ll be the ones to help you.” His version of, “Be nice to the assistant, because they’ll be running the studio one day.” Completely true. I’ve seen many of my interns go on to production companies or lit agencies, and now I’m asking them to read my stuff in the hopes they can help me. Don’t be a dick, don’t burn bridges, and be grateful for people even reading your stuff.

But the one thing I’ve learned above all is to be patient. People can take a very long time to read. We all have lives, and they’re doing a favor. I’m not owed anything, and it’s been a hard climb back up the hill after deluding myself into believing I’d be directing a feature at 23.

I sometimes curse Robert Rodriguez’s [Rebel Without a Crew](http://www.amazon.com/dp/0452271878/?tag=johnaugustcom-20) for cooking up wild dreams that I thought would be a reality. But the book did me more good than bad: It showed me a work ethic that I still strive to reach and maintain.

I’ve learned that I’ll be just like all those other hard working people that struggled for 10 years to reach their dreams, or at least the beginnings of them. But those are now the stories I’m interested in. Not about the hotshot kid who really hasn’t had enough life experience, but the Eastwoods, the Scotts, the Abrams.

And in dark moments I do occasionally entertain the doubts that I’ll never sell a script or direct. But it doesn’t stop me from trying.

Because I need the writing. Three years of consistent content production has left me unable to go without it. I get cranky when I haven’t had my fix. Me typing this is a nice bump that will get me to that next scene tomorrow after work. I’ll keep writing what I want as more genre-mashing Pirate Gladiators vs. Sunkist Sodas are bought.

I know it seems stupid in this climate, but I still believe in good, original ideas. I need to hold onto some of that naïveté I had when I was staring off into the hills, looking for that beacon of hope that fuels all out-of-town newbies. But the plastic bumper of reality that is years spent working and learning is so much more rewarding, even if it’s painful.

I’ll let you know when the next collision happens.

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