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Short answer sprint

December 4, 2007 Adaptation, QandA, So-Called Experts, Television, Words on the page

Questions have been backing up in the inbox for a few weeks, so I thought I’d do a Short Answer Sprint to work through a few.

questionmarkIf a friend or co-worker tells you an anecdote, or describes a character eccentricity of one of her relatives, and you use it in a screenplay are there any legal ramifications? I have no intention of using the name of the friend’s relative (I don’t know it), but the story and the relative are so funny and eccentric, respectively, that a very amusing character could be made from them. Do I need to get my friend’s permission to use this information?

— Derek

Legally, no. Ethically, yes. Particularly if said friend is a writer who might be planning to use it herself. I borrowed an anecdote from a screenwriter friend in Go: the moment when Simon accidentally sets the hotel room on fire. I changed pretty much everything about it, but I checked with him first to make sure he wasn’t planning on using it.

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questionmarkI’m writing a scene between a Chinese immigrant woman and a man from Mexico. Both characters speak in broken English, and I’m wondering how to correctly write broken English with a Chinese accent and speaking pattern, as well as how to do it for other languages. Do you just write the dialogue in “good English” and then somehow note that the character has a thick Chinese accent? How would you tackle this challenge and could you an some example or two?

— Jules Hoffman

No time for examples in a Short Answer Sprint. But when writing non-standard English, you walk a fine line between “giving the flavor” and “annoying the reader.” So here’s the simple advice:

1. Use the speaker’s words
2. Use the speaker’s grammatical structure
3. Don’t try to duplicate the exact speech pattern on paper

If you have more than two apostrophes in a line of dialogue, you’re probably overdoing it.

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questionmarkI’ve been building a bit of a gut. Too many years of balancing a day job with writing time and squeezing in food when I could led to some really bad eating habits. One of the perks, though, was that I became a “Shit Camel.” I could go for a week without taking a dump. Sure, it was a massive, hour-long endeavor that afforded plenty of reading time whenever I did take a crap, but it left the flow of work or writing largely undisturbed.

Now that I’m eating better and trying to work this fat off, I find that I’m visiting the john much more often and depositing much less when I leave. I hate that. This has been especially annoying in the past few days since I blocked them off for writing time only.

All this is to ask, what do you eat as a writer? Are you hunched in front of your Mac for hours on end like a crazy Korean gamer, with Red Bulls and candy wrappers scattered everywhere? Or do you have some kind of healthy eating regimen that keeps you energized? Just curious, because distractions of any kind really destroy my momentum.

— René Garcia

Writing is sedentary, and sedentary people tend to get fat. But most screenwriters — even the fat ones — defecate more than once a week. Yikes.

In terms of health, I eat pretty sensibly. If you’re trying to lose weight, South Beach is actually very easy and sane. Excercise-wise, I lift three times a week. (A lot of writers go to my gym, for reasons unclear.) I do less cardio than I should, but I’m walking 4+ miles per day picketing, so that kind of makes up for it.

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questionmarkI am a beginning screenwriter and I am very intimidated by plot design. I love reading good screenplays because the plots seem like clever puzzles where each piece fits snugly but unexpectedly into a grand scheme. When I try to construct plots on my own, however, I feel they seem contrived and unrealistic. It seems like a very intellectual process to me, even though the ultimate goal is an emotional one. Do you have any advice for someone struggling with this? I’ve read about three books on screenwriting, and they make plot structure seem so basic, but it doesn’t feel that way when you’re creating from scratch. Any helpful words from you will probably do a lot for me.

— Jim

Screenwriting books make everything seem so tidy, when actual screenwriting is gory and difficult. Plot and structure are really just the answer to a single question: what happens when?

Look at your story from your main characters’ perspectives. What are they trying to do at each moment in the script? What do they know, and what do they learn?

Then look at it from the audience’s perspective. What do they know, and what do they expect will happen next?

A good plot keeps surprising both the main characters and your audience. Probably the reason your plots feel contrived is that you’re trying to drag your characters through some pre-determined series of structural benchmarks, rather than focusing on what’s interesting and surprising right now in this scene.

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questionmarkI read in your comments, some time ago, that you had a mix tape you listened when you wrote for “Go” to help you get in the right mood. Did any of that music find its way into the movie? If so, how did that happen? ex. did you suggest it to the music director? If not, why not? Wasn’t it a key factor in setting tone for you?

— Dan

None of those songs made it in the movie — and that’s fine. A playlist is a great way to help capture a certain tone while you’re writing, particularly when you need to get back into a mood. But it’s really just for your own preparation. Screenwriting is a lot like acting in that way, incidentally. Actors often have touchstones to help them get back into a role. Music is a great one.

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questionmarkAre you inspired to help new writers because you had the good fortune of a mentor when you were starting your career, or do you do it because you had to figure it out on your own?

— Annabel

I didn’t have a mentor, at least not for any significant period of time. I started this site because I remembered what it was like having 1,000 questions about screenwriting, and no good place to ask them.

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questionmarkStop me if you’ve heard this one, but do you think the stop of “Ops” was related to the imminence of the somewhat similar secret-adventures-’round-the-world “The Unit”?

— Matt Waggoner

The Unit is a lot like Ops — but done as a CBS show. I don’t mean that as a slam. They figured out how to take a potentially risky premise and turn it into something embraceable by a mass audience. What’s funny is that we met with Scott Foley for Ops (at Susina, the coffee shop featured in The Nines). He read the script and really liked it. We liked him, and would have cast him in a second. He’s an undervalued actor, and a nice guy.

But no, I don’t think The Unit derailed Ops. Our project hung around longer than it should have largely based on my name and the quality of the writing. It really wasn’t a Fox-appropriate show, and it’s for the best we never shot the pilot. (The two Ops scripts are in [Downloads section](http://johnaugust.com/downloads) if you want to read them.)

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questionmarkI’m in early discussions with a producer about writing a biopic. One thing that has come up in these discussions is the producer’s insistence that the movie adhere to a traditional three act structure and not be ‘episodic’ – and I agree with him in principle (I’m frequently dissatisfied by biopics for this very reason), but I also feel that the complicating factor in this case is that lives simply don’t unfold in three acts – they are, by their very nature, episodic. I was curious as to how you might approach this kind of assignment in terms of finding a three-act story within an episodic sequence of ‘true’ events.

— M

History is history. Movies are stories, and good stories have forward momentum. Your challenge is finding the thread(s) that keep the main character working towards a goal, with obstacles, setbacks, and moments of success. And that may not be possible. There are many remarkable people whose lives are surprisingly resistant to dramatic staging. There hasn’t been a great biopic of Lincoln, Da Vinci, or Einstein. [Amadeus](http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0086879/) succeeds because they elevated a fairly minor character in his life (Salieri) and told a largely fictionalized story through his eyes.

Don’t try to tell the story of a great person’s life. Tell a great story using the details of a person’s life.

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questionmarkThis may be kind of a loaded question, but have you ever read Stephen King’s Dark Tower books? They’ve just been finished, thirty-some years after the first book was started, and are so old fashioned and evocative of Rod Serling — like some weird combination of The Lord of the Rings, Sergeo Leonne’s Spaghetti Westerns and The Twilight Zone — that a movie adaptation has to happen eventually. The fan base is much too huge. Could you ever see yourself considering adapting this?

— J.R. Flynn

This is an example of how long questions sit in the box sometimes. [JJ Abrams is now adapting it](http://www.mtv.com/movies/news/articles/1574452/20071115/story.jhtml).

But to answer your question: sure. I could see myself doing it. But JJ Abrams or not, I try not to dwell on the projects I’m not writing, because that can drive one mad with frustration. As busy as I am (when not on strike), barely a week goes by that I don’t see a project announced in Variety which causes that spike of envy. If that ever goes away, I’ll probably quit.

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In the re-design of the site, I inadvertently got rid of the “Ask a Question” link. Until I find a good home for it, you can ask a question [here](http://johnaugust.com/ask-a-question).

Strike, day 29

December 3, 2007 Strike, Television

As I’ve noted earlier, picket signs are surprisingly light. However, the large surface area makes them an attractive target to even the slightest breeze, which was the main problem this morning on the picket line. It wasn’t windy enough to rip them out of your hands, but I found myself constantly fighting the air, my sign an ill-designed rudder against a tedious current.

  • SAT QUESTION:
  • “An ill-designed rudder against a tedious current,” is a reference to…
  • (a) the strike
  • (b) Nikki Finke
  • (c) the “New Economic Partnership”
  • (d) friend-of-the-blog Paul Rudd

Three hours gives one a lot of time to contemplate these answers, along with the Perforated Picket, which I hope to have in production by the SAG strike. I wouldn’t want Mila Kunis knocked over by a gust.

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On the line today, I met blog reader Deanna, who’s working as a post-production PA while half-finishing TV specs. I shared with her my ultimate TV spec idea, which I invite her and all readers to run with, because I certainly won’t.

“Desperate Heroes.” You insert the characters of Heroes into Wisteria Lane. Bree takes over for HRG, with Claire as her daughter. Matt is married to Lynette. Gabrielle is having an affair with Sylar, who is trying to figure out why men keep throwing themselves at her, and whether it’s the kind of power that merits brain-eating. Edie has a super-strong alter-ego. The two best eye-scrunchers — Susan and Hiro — flirt and meddle, ultimately making things much worse. Through it all, Mary Alice continues as narrator. ((Honestly, Suresh, your voice-over is my least favorite part of the show.))

Yes, pulling this off would be very difficult; you’re trying to showcase two very different styles simultaneously. But I’ve had to staff TV shows, and a well-executed version of this would get my attention.

*

While writers have the picket line and rallies for mutual support, the strike has taken a toll on people throughout the industry. A group of friends are putting together an event for families affected by the strike.

To that end, if you are not a writer and are out of work because of the strike, you and your kids are invited to a free afternoon of mini-golf and arcade games at the Sherman Oaks Castle Park. Pizza, ice cream and the works included.

WGA writers thank our community
December 11, 2007
4pm-7pm
Sherman Oaks Castle Park

Interested? More info after the jump.
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Puppies and air vents

October 31, 2007 Asides

Ever since I called “Hack!” on characters crawling through air vents, readers have delighted in sending me stories of real-life duct-sliders. Here’s the latest installment, courtesy of Derek Haas.

Authorship in the digital age

October 30, 2007 Follow Up

A few weeks ago, my friend [Howard Rodman](http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0734912/) was asked to give a talk at the 2007 Rencontres Cinématographiques de Dijon, speaking on a panel entitled “Copyright and Droit d’Auteur in the Digital Age.”

Being a reader of the blog, Howard asked if he might incorporate a few of the observations from my [Challenge of Writing in the Digital Age]() speech a few weeks earlier.

I said, “of course.” Especially if he would let me link back to his speech. It’s all very [Creative Commons](http://creativecommons.org/).

As I said at the time, I think my speech would have been improved by focusing on one or two issues, rather than the sampler platter I offered. Here’s a chance to demonstrate that fact.


Authorship in the Digital Age

**a talk by Howard Rodman**

howard rodmanAs the representative of what is, literally, a Writer’s Guild, I’d like first to talk about authorship. As someone who creates intellectual property that is licensed to others, I’d like second to talk about copyright. And ultimately, I’d like to talk about the disruptions, confusions, multiplications, collisions, perturbations, conflagrations, and weird opportunities wrought in both the areas by digital technologies.

Authorship
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When someone painted on the wall of a cave in Lascaux, he—or she—was the author of that painting. The painter may have been doing it on behalf of a large group, expressing a grander vision. But the person who wielded the instrument, who left the mark—that person was the author.

This is clear. But anything after that—anything involving reproduction—begins to get fuzzy.

Let me throw out a bunch of questions:

* The person who takes pen in hand and writes an essay, is that the author? Well, yes.

* A medieval monk who copies a manuscript, is he the author? He’s the one wielding the instrument, he’s the one leaving the mark– But is he the author? Most of us instinctively would say, no. Because authorship involves more than the reproduction of a work—it seems to involve the creation of a work.

Each technological change brings about a new confusion of the concept of authorship.

Now, in the digital age, authorship is more and more diffuse. More fugitive. More difficult to locate.

Let me throw out some examples.

The American television personality Stephen Colbert, on his show on Comedy Central, stood up one night in front of a green screen and did this: “ZIP. ZAP.”

He challenged his viewers to use the material in creative ways.

Within less than 24 hours, versions popped up on YouTube. Colbert having a lightsabre battle with Star Wars characters. Colbert having a lightsabre battle with Dick Cheney.

Who is the author of these pieces? Is it Colbert? The writing staff of The Colbert Report? Comedy Central? The viewers who composited his image with new or found footage? George Lucas? Dick Cheney?

Last month the American screenwriter John August released his directorial debut, a film called The Nines. He also posted on his website some raw footage from The Nines, and encouraged the readers of his blog to download, remix, go wild. All manner of trailers for The Nines went up on the web: sad versions, funny versions, music video versions, poignant versions, violent versions, red kryptonite versions. This was John’s project, John’s vision. He wrote and directed the footage, he told his audience to edit. Is he the author? Are they the author? Is this a collaboration among authors who have never met? Is this, in a sense that the Surrealists would recognize, a cadvre exquis? Or is this a unique artifact of the 21st century, something that could not have existed prior to the specific technology that makes this strange new hybrid art form possible?

Now let me pose a more personal question about authorship.

I write a film. Meaning: I sit in my basement, and imagine characters, and imagine a story, and because there was nothing, and now there is something, I consider myself to be the author. I send it out, the screenplay attracts a producer, attracts actors, attracts financing. Now the film is made. Now I am in a theater, and the lights darken, and I am seeing on a large screen, and in the company of a large audience, the characters that three years previously I had dreamed up in my basement.

After the company logos, the first thing I see is a title that says “a film by.” But that name isn’t my name.

The last thing I see is small print which reads, “for the purposes of the Berne Convention for the Protection of Literary and Artistic Works and all applicable copyright treaties, the author of this work shall be considered to be TimeWarner Inc.”

So my work, the work that I wrote, is bookended by two statements of authorship, neither of which is mine.

There are two possible reactions to this. One is to descend into an abyss of self-pity. The preferred reaction, of course. But the other is to recognize that the changes brought about to concepts of authorship by technology, the changes brought about to concepts of authorship by copyright, make the old notions sentimental at best, and, most likely, obsolete.

Copyright
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Let me now talk about copyright.

The concept of copyright didn’t exist until after the invention of the printing press. It didn’t have to. There was no need to protect things from being copied when there was no technology other than the pen for such copying.

In 1556 the Stationers Company maintained that once purchased, the rights to a manuscript belonged to the printer, and the author had no further say in its distribution, or stake in its revenues. So we see that the MPA has its roots in the 16th century.

Next, Charles II passed the Licensing Act of 1682, which established a register of licensed books.

Then in 1709 the Statute of Anne (not to be confused with the statue of Anne) named for Queen Anne. The first real copyright act. For the first time authors, rather than printers, are invested with the right to have a say in the reproduction of their work.

This was in sync with what was to become the French concept of droit morale, which began in many ways with the French Revolution (insert space for applause here) and the writings of Beaumarchais.

And so the principle of copyright, which in many ways still obtains today: you created it, you control its reproduction and distribution.

But there is another need, another social good: that of the free and unimpeded exchange of ideas. So the Statute of Anne also established a 14-year term of copyright (with a 21-year term for works already extant), as a way of balancing the author’s right to profit from his or her work against the public’s legitimate need to have works readily available.

Copyright law ever since has been a balancing act between these two competing needs, both legitimate, both reflecting desirable social outcomes.

But in the 20th century, as the drug manufacturers and the large intellectual property conglomerates became more powerful, they exercised more control over patent and copyright laws—and the balance has shifted.

In 1905, the patent holders went to Washington and essential bought themselves a new concept: work for hire. This was the first exception in American copyright law to the longstanding and intuitive concept that the legally-recognized author of a work is the person who created it.

Work for hire is what we do, as screenwriters, when we get an assignment. It means that we are creating something without most of the rights that typically inhere in the act of creation.

Now, with every re-enactment of the copyright act, the term of copyright grows longer and longer. See, for instance that part of the Digital Millennium Copyright Act called (and I’m not making this up) the “Sonny Bono Copyright Term Extension Act of 1998.”

The 1998 Digital Millennium Copyright Act (DMCA), and the extensions that most likely will be passed in our lifetimes, virtually ensure that neither you, nor I, nor most likely our children, nor, most probably, our grandchildren, will ever be able to draw a sketch of Mickey Mouse without fear of exposure to litigation.

And so of copyright, which was intended to balance the needs of the creator and the public, now primarily benefits the large intellectual property conglomerates. In many senses, we are heading back to the Stationers Act, to the 1500s—except now the stationery store has gone digital.

The DMCA, which, in response to the threat of piracy which Bob Pisano will talk about most eloquently and forcefully, now forbids specific forms of copying—whether the material being copied is copyrighted or not. If I have a DRM-protected DVD of *L’arrivée d’un train en gare de La Ciotat,* a piece of footage as old as cinema itself, and as classically in public domain as any moving footage anywhere, and if I circumvent the DRM to copy that footage, I am committing a crime.

But there are other, countervailing forces. My attorney, the intrepid Michael Donaldson, who plays in the fields of copyright and fair use, says that the copyright laws are in some respects more fair now than they were forty years ago. As he puts it, “In the past, the public’s voice has been absent from the drafting table for copyright legislation. Disinterest was rampant. This was not an area of the law that many people saw as touching their lives. In large part because of the egregiously aggressive behavior of RIAA and MPAA, the public has been alerted to the many ways that copyright touches their lives. And the public’s voice is now being heard.”

Regardless as to whether you see the law moving forwards or backwards, what is clear is that copyright is fluid. And just as the concept of what is an author changed as technology and social relations changed, so has the sense of what is a copyright, and what that copyright protects, and for whose benefit.

Digital Age
—

As Walter Benjamin pointed out in The Work of Art in the Age of Mechanical Reproduction, after the printing press, after photography, when you look at an object, you are often no longer looking, simply and straightforwardly, at an object. You are, instead, looking at the original of a reproduction—with all the associated loss of aura. Is that the Tour Eiffel? Or is that the original of a million postcards, T-shirts, shot glasses, keychains?

The digital age raises this confusion exponentially. For instance: in most previous history, the machinery used to create was distinct from the machinery used to copy. Think of the quill pen and the printing press. Think of the Remington typewriter and the Xerox machine. But now the laptop on which one creates is the laptop on which one copies. The two processes become conflated. And when cut and paste no longer involves scissors or library paste but is instant, is seamless, leaves the thing from which it was cut intact, is pasted without any trace into the new work– The distinction between original and reproduction becomes more slippery, more fugitive.

Even more tellingly, every previous reproduction differed from its original. The painting of the painting was distinguishable from the painting. The cassette tape of the vinyl recording of Pierre Fournier playing Bach’s Sixth Cello Suite was inferior to the vinyl itself. But now the copy is not just almost as good, or virtually as good, or three-places-to-the-right-of-the-decimal-point as good: the copy is indistinguishable from the original. Does it even make any sense, viewing two identical digital files, to speak of “the original.” In this digital age, can even the word “original” retain its original meaning?

Lautréamont famously said, “Poetry must be made by all, not by one.” Perhaps this is what he meant, and perhaps, were he with us at this moment, Lautréamont would be dancing in wild celebration. But then again: perhaps not.

Anyone who is young, or who lives in a house with anyone who is young, or who lives and breathes and drinks in the media of the 21st century, knows that the 20th century’s hallmark distinctions between what goes on a big screen, what goes on a small screen, what goes on a tiny screen, is eroded, perhaps lost. We know, too, the erosion and elision of what is owned, what can be accessed, what is borrowed, what is shared, what is stolen. This is a brave new world for authorship, and a brave new world for the protection of authorship.

And it’s not a worry for the future. As William Gibson famously said, “The future is already here. It’s just unevenly distributed.”

On behalf of the Writers Guild of America, which fights for authorship in this difficult and wonderful time, I thank you.

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