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Love and Money

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April 2, 2024 HWTBAM, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig look at four unbelievable stories in the news and ask, How Would This Be a Movie? Stories include a finance journalist who was scammed out of her savings, men who offer dating bounties, a franken-sheep made of cloned animal parts, and how standardized tests changed one woman’s life.

We also reveal which modern classics we’ve never seen (We meant to! We’re sorry!) to decide which – if any – we need to watch. But first, we follow up on D&D for kids, ESL, AI in reality TV, and Tiffany problems before answering listener questions on formats and recommending your spouse.

In our bonus segment for premium members, John and Craig look at new guidelines for AI and how they might affect our future.

Links:

  • Weekend Read 2
  • “Creep” post by @davo_arid on Twitter
  • Full list of movies we haven’t seen
  • The Day I Put $50,000 in a Shoe Box and Handed It to a Stranger by Charlotte Cowles for The Cut
  • Wanted: True Love. Reward: $100,000 by Angela Chen for the NYT
  • Montana Man Pleads Guilty to Creating Massive Franken-Sheep With Cloned Animal Parts by Matt Novak for Gizmodo
  • How the SAT Changed My Life by Emi Nietfeld for the NYT
  • D.C. – What It Is
  • Fighting Fantasy books
  • LA Hero Workshop
  • Sodalitas
  • OSR’s Oz and Neverland
  • Questlings
  • Color My Quest
  • WyrdScouts
  • The Excellents and Nancy Druid
  • Hero Kids
  • TTRPGkids
  • Hide’n’Treat and Snuffle Mat
  • Jaina Grey’s reviews for WIRED
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Check out the Inneresting Newsletter
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • Craig Mazin on Threads and Instagram
  • John August on Threads, Instagram and Twitter
  • John on Mastodon
  • Outro by Tim Brown (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 4-2-24: Listener Luke Rankin created a Letterboxd list of all the movies featured in this episode. You can view it here.

UPDATE 4-30-24: The transcript for this episode can be found here.

Whispering Loudly

March 26, 2024 Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John welcomes back Pamela Ribon (Nimona, My Year of Dicks) to quietly ask: what’s with all the whispering in movies these days? They discuss trends and techniques in voice and volume, picking the right moment to whisper, and the value of voices across decibel levels.

We also revisit Pamela’s work on Moana to look at what you can learn from reading early drafts, ponder the threat of TikTok and YouTube, follow-up on vetting potential co-workers, and answer a listener question on writing animation.

In our bonus segment for premium members, Pam shares all her star-studded stories from sitting in the 5th row at this year’s Oscars.

Links:

  • Pamela Ribon on Instagram
  • Listen to Sassy
  • My Year of Dicks
  • Nimona on Netflix
  • Hire Survivors Hollywood
  • Dune: Part Two Clip
  • ‘Fundie Baby Voice’ Seems To Be Everywhere Now. Here’s What You Should Know by Caroline Bologna for Huffpost
  • In a World – Smoothie
  • Natural Born Killers 1990 Draft
  • Natural Born Killers 1993 Draft
  • Lin-Manuel Miranda on ‘I Want’ Songs, Going Method for ‘Moana’ and Fearing David Bowie
  • More (Outtake) from Moana
  • How Far I’ll Go from Moana
  • How Bad Can It Get for Hollywood? by Mark Harris for NYT
  • This Sitcom Got WEIRD When Nobody Watched It by David Friedman
  • Researching An Old Sitcom With AI by David Friedman
  • Coucou French classes
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Check out the Inneresting Newsletter
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • Craig Mazin on Threads and Instagram
  • John August on Threads, Instagram and Twitter
  • John on Mastodon
  • Outro by Vincent DeVito (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt with help from Chris Csont, and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 4-29-24: The transcript for this episode can be found here.

Is This Person Going to Ruin Everything?

March 19, 2024 Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig wring their hands and ask, how do you make sure the person you’re hiring isn’t a monster? They look at best practices for vetting colleagues, sussing out problematic people, and managing your own emotions when you’re the person with power.

We also discuss writing for non-native English speakers, using three examples to illustrate the importance of syntax, musicality and authenticity. But first, we answer listener questions on giving notes and kids playing D&D.

In our bonus segment for premium members, we spill the kool-aid on our fears and fascinations with cults.

Links:

  • Strands from the New York Times
  • Anatomy of a Fall – Clip
  • Past Lives by Celine Song
  • Irma Vep – Clip
  • Is This Hollywood’s #MeanToo Moment? by David Mack for Slate
  • How to play Dungeons and Dragons for kids
  • RuPaul Doesn’t See How That’s Any of Your Business by Ronan Farrow for The New Yorker
  • Recursion – Glitch Games
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Check out the Inneresting Newsletter
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • Craig Mazin on Threads and Instagram
  • John August on Threads, Instagram and Twitter
  • John on Mastodon
  • Outro by Eric Pearson (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 04-22-24: The transcript for this episode can be found here.

What If? Hollywood Edition

March 12, 2024 Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig explore the counterfactuals of Hollywood history — the relatively small moments that, if the coin toss had gone the other way, would have massive ramifications on the world as we know it.

What if Edison was allowed to keep his monopoly on motion pictures? What does our industry look like without the Paramount Consent Decree? What if George Lucas died in his car accident? Would superhero movies have dominated our culture if Iron Man had bombed? What studios would have gone down if Titanic had sunk? And what if Netflix had stayed with its DVD-only model?

In our bonus segment for premium members, John and Craig talk capitalism and solve its problems once and for all.

Links:

  • What If? by Robert Cowley
  • Thomas Edison: The Unintentional Founder of Hollywood by Garrett O’Brien for the Saturday Evening Post
  • United States v. Paramount Pictures, Inc. on Wikipedia
  • George Lucas: The Car Wreck That Changed His Life and Led Him to ‘Star Wars’ by Tim Ott for Biography
  • When ‘Titanic’ Was Expected to Be a Huge Flop by Jake Rossen for Mental Floss
  • ‘John Carter’ Changed Hollywood, but Not in the Way Disney Hoped by Richard Newby for THR
  • Financial Interest and Syndication Rules
  • Post-Quantum Cryptography
  • S’more! S’more! His artisanal marshmallows were the greatest. Then he tried to scale them. by Adam Rogers
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Check out the Inneresting Newsletter
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • Craig Mazin on Threads and Instagram
  • John August on Threads, Instagram and Twitter
  • John on Mastodon
  • Outro by Zach Lo (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 04-22-24: The transcript for this episode can be found here.

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