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Crowdediting The Nines

April 12, 2009 Projects, The Nines

Norman Hollyn, head of the editing track at USC’s School of Cinematic Arts, has a [blog post up](http://filmindustrybloggers.com/theeditor/2009/04/10/crowdediting-working-with-a-lot-of-other-people/) about “crowd-editing,” the post-production equivalent of crowdsourcing.

> Right now, the Advanced Editing class at USC is made up of 11 students who have each taken the dailies of the feature film THE NINES (the really interesting and compelling, Ryan Reynolds/Hope Davis/Melissa McCarthy film directed by John August of whom I’ve spoken about a number of times) and are cutting it into an alternate version of that feature film. I assigned a different section to each of the 11 back in January.

> All of them read the script and we talked about the plot, the characters, the subtext, the arc of the story — in short, all of the things that go into editing the film. We were visited by John and his editor, Doug Crise. Then the students started cutting together the film, one scene at a time. We watched scenes in class and I gave notes, along with the class. At one point, about six weeks ago, we finally had the entire film assembled and watched it in class as a full-length first cut of a feature film and stepped back to critique it.

This is the cut I now have on DVD, which I’ll watch this weekend. I’m fascinated and a little terrified to see what they’ve done.

As I said when I debuted the film at Sundance in 2007, I would like to make all the source material for anyone who wants to recut it, assuming legal and logistical hurdles can be overcome. The [trailer competition](http://johnaugust.com/archives/2007/trailer-winners) was a start. This semester’s project at USC has been another helpful trial run.

Speaking in Rancho Mirage

April 11, 2009 News

If you live in the Palm Springs area, you can join me Tuesday night for a lecture/screening thing at the [Rancho Mirage Public Library](http://www.ranchomiragelibrary.org/).

Tuesday, April 14
7:00pm – 8:30pm

I’ll be showing clips from my movies (and one that isn’t really mine), talking about the process, and answering questions.

[The event](http://www.ranchomiragelibrary.org/events/programs.aspx) is hosted by The Friends of the Rancho Mirage Public Library, in association with the Palm Springs International Film Society.

Writing better action

April 11, 2009 How-To, Scriptcast, Video

A new screencast (scriptcast?), a little shorter than the [previous one](http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/scene-description).

In the audio, I say “parallel action,” but a better term would be parallel structure: You’re lining up sentences to omit the subject. Action sequences tend to benefit from these staccato word bursts.

On accident, by accident

April 9, 2009 Words on the page

One of the random quirks of language that pops up. Fill in the blank:

JOHN

Who opened my mail?

MARY

Sorry. I did it __ accident. I just wasn’t paying attention.

If you said “on accident,” you’re very likely under 30 years old.

In fact, among Americans in that age group, it’s becoming more common than the traditional “by accident.” And linguists [don’t know why](http://www.inst.at/trans/16Nr/01_4/barratt16.htm):

> Finally, why “on accident” arose is also unclear. Obviously, “on purpose” may have played a role in supplying an analogical form (I didn’t break the window on purpose; I broke it on accident). But “by accident” and “on purpose” have existed for hundreds of years without one causing the other to change prepositions, and we don’t hear “by purpose,” so why did the change happen when it did and why did the change have the direction it did rather than the other way round (in other words, to “by accident” & “by purpose”)?

My hunch? Start looking at popular kids’ TV shows and see when they started using it.

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