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2007 Insomnia Film Festival

October 1, 2007 Education, Resources, Video

posterApple is sponsoring a 24-hour film festival for high school and college filmmakers. If you fall into this demographic, absolutely do it. You get 24 hours to write, produce, edit, score and deliver a 3-minute short film incorporating specific elements they only announce on the day.

I’ve had the pleasure of being a judge for the equivalent contest at USC, and while many of the resulting films are terrible, they’re mercifully short. A handful end up being truly inspired.

Some advice, since I obviously want my readers to win:

1. Think about the most obvious ways to incorporate the required elements. Then don’t do those.
2. Avoid bad puns. If all you have to offer is a witty title, you won’t score.
3. Go funny. While there will no doubt be one or two dramatic shorts in the finals, the winner will be funny.
4. Don’t forget to write a script. It’s tempting to rush out and start shooting. Spend a few of those first hours writing. What is the story? How does it progress?
5. Sound matters more than picture. If we can’t understand your dialogue, you won’t win.
6. Lighting matters more than resolution. A cheap camcorder with thoughtful lighting is better than a Red One at noon.
7. Prepare to edit. You don’t want to get back to your computer only to find it’s impossible to get footage from the UDX-HR5 into the Mac.It is, incidentally. I had to install Windows in order to use Sony’s proprietary software to access the camera. Uggh.
8. Protein, not carbs. Because you’ll likely be working all night, sugar will send you into a crash.
9. Plan ahead to think of what locations, props and (most importantly) people you might have at your disposal. It’s also fine to think of general story ideas, but don’t get locked into anything. If the required elements feel tacked-on rather than integral, you won’t win.
10. Lock your picture edit with enough time to tweak sound and music.

Other thoughts and suggestions? Add them in the comments.

(Thanks to [Daring Fireball](http://daringfireball.net) for the link.)

Trailer Competition: The Winners

September 26, 2007 Follow Up, Projects, The Nines, Video

We had 57 official entries. That’s a lot, and it’s about the most I could handle without my eyeballs exploding.Someone asked yesterday what I would have done if a thousand people entered. I would have curled into a fetal ball and rocked myself through tears. I’m happy to report that many of the entries were quite good, and it was genuinely a pleasure to watch them. Most of them.

I feel like I should pad this opening bit with a few more paragraphs explaining the organizational process (a shared Google spreadsheet), judging criteria (uniqueness > believability) and common elements (nearly every trailer had Hope Davis’s boobs getting groped). But all you really want to know is who won.

So without ado…

Best “Pure” Trailer
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“City of Untamed Lust” by [Michael Bell](http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.channel&ChannelID=198338721)

[Link](http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=18842951)

Note that the “pure” category means trailers that use only the footage provided, not that they’re necessarily true to the spirit of the movie. The latter really deserves its own category, so I’m going to use executive privilege to create one.

Could Have Been The Actual Trailer Award
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The Nines Trailer by [Ed Jones](http://www.youtube.com/user/DELT55)

You can see a much higher-res version of the trailer [here](http://stage6.divx.com/user/Lupino/video/1672732/The-Nines-Trailer—Competition-Entry).

Best Mash-Up
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The Nines (Holiday Version) by [cmikes](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LsmbbeQYRTw)

While these are the award-winners, there are a lot of honorable mentions and notable efforts:

* Most Lynchian: [DougJ](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ODwSlBKCNUQ)
* Best Tone Poem: [Jeff Campbell](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=luR7aD1MkeM)
* Best Music Video: [Klaudio](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6vgW_8Q95os)
* Notable Achievement in Cutting: [chicago3j](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ssZlM-jrgDA)
* Most Merchant/Ivory: [Andreas Climent](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ej5cBydCnjA)
* The “Without A Trace” Award for Aggressive Color-Timing: [gpschnyder](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uen9tSvrMCc)
* Best Tic-Tac-Toe: [joelarue](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7HVaX2Ux4uc)
* Most Punk Rock: [takahlah](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2KONqGftVpY)
* Props for the French New Wave: [CostaBravler](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pCaYWzsAFf8)
* Feels Small But Good Award: [joelnorn](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kf1KwKG6fIg)
* Best Sitcom: [Marcelo Iglesias](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8VV6F0WYr3A)
* The KevanRCraft Award for Generosity in Commenting: [KevanRCraft](http://www.youtube.com/user/KevanRCraft)

There were at least another half-dozen that were solid, mostly ones that played it fairly straight. They didn’t stand out because, well, they didn’t stand out. As much as one tries to keep fresh eyes, after the first 20, it’s the novel ones that get noticed.

A general observation is that the successful trailers were the ones that picked a simple concept and stuck with it. Many trailers felt like they were driven by what footage was left in the bin.

Even though the official contest is over, I’ll keep seeding the footage, so if seeing these trailers has inspired any non-participants to try their mouse at it, by all means go ahead. There’s a [new thread](http://lookforthenines.com/forums/topic/post-competition-cut-your-own-trailer-thread?replies) set up to keep track of post-competition entries. I’ll be checking in occasionally, and if one catches my eye I may post it here (and at [lookforthenines.com](http://lookforthenines.com/)).

Thanks and congrats to all who participated. It was really refreshing to see the movie cut to ribbons reinterpreted.

Trailer competition judging in progress

September 25, 2007 Follow Up, Geek Alert, Projects, The Nines, Video

Wow, that’s a lot of entries. I’ll be announcing the winners tomorrow morning.

Erik Beeson, who so generously helped with the hosting and torrenting, sent along stats:

* total torrent file downloads for both torrents combined: 808 (includes search engine crawlers)
* dv torrent: 162 completed downloads
* mpeg4 torrent: 79 completed downloads
* mpeg4.zip: 242 (the direct download)
* total completed (torrents+direct): 483

Thanks to everyone who helped seed the footage.

Having now looked at dozens and dozens of clips on YouTube, I’m struck by the wide range of picture quality (talking pixels, not professionalism). Considering we all started with the same clips, one might not expect such a variation. [My entry](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xmpHrRAZs18) is near the middle of the pack in terms of blockiness.

If any readers/competitors have tips on how you kept YouTube from over-smushing your video, please share.

Trailer competition FAQ

September 20, 2007 Projects, The Nines, Video

**What should the tone of the trailer be?**

Whatever you prefer. It can be funny, scary, dramatic or simply weird.

**How long should the trailer be?**

Most trailers are between one and three minutes, but if you feel like cutting a 30-second spot, or a half hour masterpiece, go for it. I reserve the right to stop watching after four minutes, however.

**How can I get Alex Wurman’s score?**

The entire score isn’t available, but Alex has ample samples up at his website: [alexwurman.com](http://www.alexwurman.com/Music%20Clips/MusicClips.html).

**What program should I use to cut my trailer?**

Whichever one you prefer and understand. Final Cut Pro (or its little sibling, Final Cut Express) are great choices for the Mac, but there’s also Premiere, Vegas, and many flavors of Avid. The new iMovie would seem like an ideal choice, since it handles MPEG-4 footage natively, but it’s pretty limiting in practice. The older iMovie (iMovie HD) is actually more capable for this purpose.

**Why are some clips silent?**

In some cases, there was no useful production sound. An example is when Ryan is running. The ATV carrying the camera was incredibly loud. Only in one or two clips did we deliberately drop out sound in order to avoid spoiling a plot detail.

**I’m intimidated. What if my trailer isn’t that good?**

Allow me to set the bar very low by showing my sample entry, which I hacked together in about an hour. It’s no masterpiece. I wanted to try for a vastly different tone, and show off a variety of the shots available in the footage:

**Can I Digg this?**

While I’m leery of the server getting overwhelmed, it seems only fair to share. And the torrents should scale. So if you want to, go for it. Best to digg the [original article](http://digg.com/submit?phase=2&url=http%3A%2F%2Fjohnaugust.com%2Farchives%2F2007%2Ftrailer-competition-details&title=Trailer+competition+details).

**How do I ___?**

There are a lot of smart people reading this site, so if you have a specific question, don’t hesitate to ask in the comments section.

**Can I enter more than one trailer? More than one category?**

Absolutely. Knock yourself out.

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