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Scriptnotes, Episode 722: Orality, or Writing to be Spoken, Transcript

February 17, 2026 Scriptnotes Transcript

The original post for this episode can be found here.

John August: Hola y bienvenidos. Me llamo John August, o Juan Augusto, si prefiere.

Craig Mazin: My name is Craig Mazin.

John: Tú, ahora mismo, estás escuchando a Scriptnotes, un podcast sobre guionismo y las cosas que interesan los guionistas. Craig, it’s nice to see you again.

Craig: Ay, caramba.

John: I just felt like doing it. I do it in French every once in a while. I just haven’t done it in Spanish, maybe ever, so I felt like, “I’ll just try doing it in Spanish.”

Craig: I’ll tell you what, we’re going to have to run this by Melissa and do a little accent check on you.

John: Yes, I sound like a North American person speaking Spanish, hopefully. Like a guy who grew up in Colorado who learned Spanish in grade school.

Craig: That sounds about right.

John: That sounds about right, yes. Today on this show, Craig, I am coming in hot with a thesis that I ran by you a little bit at D&D this week.

Craig: You did, yes.

John: I believe that screenwriting is distinct from other literary forms largely because of its orality, so morality without the M on front. As screenwriters, we write things that are largely meant to be spoken, not just the dialogue, but the action, the screen description, everything, which raises the question: Are we in fact oral storytellers that just happen to be writing things down? Is every script just a long pitch? I’ve got a tiny bit of data, and Craig, I think you’re going to be game, so let’s have this discussion and figure out whether we are mostly just storytellers who are writing things down rather than other traditional scribes.

Craig: Yes, I already know where I’m leaning on this one.

John: We’ll find out. Well, dig into it.

Craig: Dig into it.

John: We’ll also answer listener questions on deliverables and undeniable scripts. In our bonus segment for premium members, I want to look at the movies coming out in 2026 because some people are quietly predicting that it will be one of the biggest years ever at the box office, and I think they’re probably right. Craig, maybe you should start writing movies again.

Craig: Well, I’ve got one coming out.

John: You’ve got one coming out, in fact, yes.

Craig: I’ve got one coming out that I wrote 10 years ago. It’s like an echo of a memory. Also, yes, because after doing television now for quite some time and still some time to go, the thought of prepping something once, casting it once, shooting it once, editing it once, posting it once, is amazing. I love that idea. Also, the length of the shoot, because I remember a 40 or 50-day shoot heading into that, or I think one of the Hangovers, it was 78 days. It was like, “This is going to be forever.” No.

John: Luxury. A luxury.

Craig: Oh my God, it’s 78 days. Are you kidding me?

John: Craig, here’s my pitch. A movie is like a series, but there’s just the pilot. How great is that?

Craig: It’s Episode 1 and the last episode, which is [groans]

John: Yes.

Craig: I actually have been thinking quite a bit about when all this is done, maybe a little palate cleanser of a movie would be nice.

John: All right. Before we get to that, there’s actually some news. This is where I say, WG members, check your email because there are member meetings coming up about the next round of contract negotiations.

In the West, we have meetings on February 11th, February 18th, February 21st. In the East, we have a meeting on February 17th. Go to one of those member meetings because that’s where you find out about the contract negotiations coming up. There will also be special, smaller meetings for people like Craig who are out of the country. There’ll be Zoom meetings after that.

If you can come to one of the meetings in person, it’s always better because you can ask your question in front of other people and just get a sense of, “Oh, there are actually a lot of writers in this union.”

Craig: Oh, yes. I think everybody in the union currently still has that sense.

John: Yes, I guess we were on strike at some point, so we saw people.

Craig: Sometimes I think about this, right after a strike and heading into the next contract negotiations, as we are, there are still a bunch of new members who came in after the strike, but everybody in the union now has been in a strike. I would say a good chunk of us have been in two. It’s like an army of grizzled veterans walking back through the forest. Then the new kids, the rooks, show up [crosstalk]

John: Yes, they put the fresh recruits in.

Craig: “Get in line, this is how it works.”

John: Yes, there will be some people who’ve never been to a member meeting, who’ve never seen, “Oh my gosh, this is what it looks like when we’re a bunch of us in a hotel ballroom.”

Craig: Sometimes you get an earful of some weird shit.

John: You do.

Craig: [laughs]

John: Yes. What happens in those things, we don’t discuss in a broader sense. We don’t talk about the specifics. I will say there was a moment where a comedian stood up and started to give a set. It’s just like, “No, no, this is not the place for that.” That person has become much more famous in the time since. I just remember them as this person who was inappropriately trying to do a set and is a much bigger celebrity now. Anything could happen. I’m not encouraging you to try your material in these rooms.

Craig: No, it’s not the place to do it. Because anyone can talk, inevitably, there’s a type of person who legitimately has a question and wants to ask it and must ask it publicly because that’s the way it works.

John: Totally.

Craig: Then there’s a type of person that gets very excited to talk in front of other people. They might be a little weird, and that’s fine. The people on the stage, hopefully, are very [unintelligible 00:05:16] stayed and sober and helpful and clear.

John: Yes, that is the goal. All right, let’s do some follow-up. We have a longer piece here from Ace. This is going back to Episode 719 when we talked about not having time to do your best work.

Drew: It says, “It’s a pain point for so many editors in our business. Most often in network TV and lower budgets, the schedule defaults to the guild minimum days to deliver the editor’s cut. The expectation is to keep up with camera, and then cut the show in four or five days before the director arrives in the bay. I’ve not met an editor on the planet that thinks that this is a sustainable timeline. In the old days of film, there was significantly fewer dailies, but in the digital age, we still use this outdated scheduling model due to our guild deals. We need more time before the director’s cut begins.

In stories with major action or tonal sequence editing, it takes time to refine the edit and get it to play emotionally. Hard to do when you don’t have enough time to watch everything. We can get an assembly together, but most editors have told me that they either shortcut to the deadline or stay late on their own accord. I can’t tell you how many times I’ve been at the office until late at night with another editor trying to get through an avalanche of dailies just to keep up with the unreasonable schedule so that our directors are given the best experience during their days. We don’t complain. We help, and we work hard. We want our work to be the best work before we show anyone.

This applies to everyone in our pipeline. DITs want to make sure that their color and metadata is their best work. Our assistants want to make sure that materials are grouped correctly and organized to the best of their ability. When the schedule is too tight, everyone grinds, mistakes are made sometimes, and people don’t feel like they’re doing their best. In contrast, when we have enough time to do our best work, I’ve seen director’s cuts done a day early, I’ve seen fewer notes in the longer term of a post schedule, and everyone on the team is a lot happier overall.

My hope in mentioning this is that the DGA may discuss this issue more at the upcoming negotiations and find a healthier, holistic solution to post-production schedules in collaboration with IATSE. We all want to do our best work and tell these stories in the best way.”

Craig: I have many thoughts.

John: Yes, I’m sure you have many thoughts. I would say on a macro level, I get what he’s saying because he’s saying what we all feel sometimes as artists and people who are working in this business is that if I had more time, I could do this better. I’m forced to rush to do this, and not to the best of my abilities, and that’s so frustrating. It’s also the first time I’ve heard it called out, but it makes sense that we do just shoot a lot more now, and we print a lot more now, so there’s a lot more footage to go through. That’s something that editors, assistant editors, and other people are doing at the very start of the process. Craig, I know you have opinions about the post-production workflow and the value of editors.

Craig: The big thing here, Ace, is that everything you said, with the exception of the last thing you said, is absolutely correct. Let me walk through. The problem here is, Ace is signaling out network TV and lower budgets. Everybody gets screwed on that schedule. That schedule is not designed to create quality, although there are people who have managed to do it, and those people are magicians. That schedule is designed to hump out episodes repeatedly, quickly, over and over and over and over and over for half a year, ba, ba, ba, ba, ba, ba, ba, ba, ba.

That means the writing has no time to be written, the show has no time to be shot, so the writers are cranky, the editors are cranky, the directors are cranky, the people who run the post-production are cranky. They’re the crankiest because whatever they got, they got to get it through. The editors are cranky. Then the directors become cranky again because they get about 12 minutes to ‘edit’. Then the show runners are cranky because they get that cut, and they go, “The hell is this?” Now I got two days. Plus, then we have five minutes to mix it, and it’s out the door.

The whole thing is a fast food assembly line. It is bad for creativity, and it is unfair to people who are trying to do good work. Is there anything to be done about that? Not if that’s the machinery you join. It’s not like they hide it.

John: Ace is specifically saying it’s most often in network TV and lower budgets. In network TV, there is a pattern for how you’re supposed to be doing this in the sense of the writing is not that distant from the actual airing of the show. Friends didn’t have three weeks to put everything together. Those things had to happen quickly. It’s really the struggle of if you’re doing something like that, if you’re doing reality shows that have a fast schedule, if you’re doing Love Island or just nearly real-time, you’re not going to be able to do your best work. I guess the meta question is what is the best work you can do, given the constraints, and how do you maximize the output given the constraints that you have?

Craig: I don’t think you can. To me, time and the availability of time for each part of the process is the thing that separates some television from what we call prestige television. It’s not actually the quality because sometimes prestige television is bad, and sometimes network television is good, but by and large, it’s time. On our show, we take time. There is no minimum editor’s assembly cut. When they’re ready, and they’re happy– They got to get something to a director but–

Let’s talk about the directors for a second. This is the one thing that I think Ace isn’t quite right on, and it’s the DGA. At least in what we’ll call non-network television models, it’s the showrunner who’s really doing the final edit of the show. I spend more time editing through each episode than any of our directors because the directors get, I think, a week and then they go. Typically, they’re going on to work on other shows. They’re not in the mix. They’re not there to carry this to the end. Really, that’s when I dig in, and I take weeks because we really dig in and we do have a lot of footage and we do take our time. I want to give my editors their best chance.

The DGA is not the gatekeeper here. IATSE, certainly, as a representative of the editors, can advocate. You can’t really talk to the WGA because the WGA represents writers, not producers. A writer-producer like me, they represent me up to the hyphen, and then they don’t. The people to talk to, I think, would be IATSE directly with the AMPTP to say, “We want our editors to get more time.” If I were running a network show, I would rather give my editors more time than the directors more time because the editors are looking through every little tiny thing. That’s just my two cents.

John: Let’s talk about the showrunner there because the showrunner is a writer and producer. That showrunner has some sway over how things are going to be done and how the money and the time is going to be allocated. Powerful showrunners may be able to choose to shift some time and money in order to put more time towards editorial, but there’s a cost to that as well. There’s other things they can’t be doing. There may be less time in production because they’re having to move that thing. They’re always making choices. There’s always compromises, and that’s the thing you’re butting up against is choosing where to spend your time.

It was great having Eva Victor on the show last week because they were talking about they had all the time in the world for prep, and then the reality of making anything is that you have less time in production than you would hope for. Then, in the future, I think you tend to have a lot more time and a lot more leisure because there’s not the pressure of, “We’ve got to hit this release date,” unless you’re backing up against Sundance or something. You got a lot of time. That’s one of the reasons why I think it’s going to be perfected more because you have the time.

Craig: There is financial pressure on independent films. Every single week you keep your post-production office open, you’re paying the editor, you’re paying the assistant editor, you’re paying the PA, and lunches and all that. You’re absolutely right. It’s a question of resource allocation. I am a little crazy about this. I don’t fight with HBO ever. There are times where they have to figure out how to deal with me because I don’t get crazy. I sort of go, “Look, this is an immovable object.” The immovable object is, “Well, how long do you need to edit this until it’s good?” That’s how long. “How long is the mix going to take?” Until it’s good, and I’m going to make it better than you think it should be, and it’s going to take longer than you think it should be, and that means I’m going to be spending more money than you think I should be spending.

I think Season 1, they were like, “This guy–” They’re lovely. I’ve come to really enjoy their company. They’re great. They back me, and they support me. They just had to sort of get accustomed to my thing and see that it worked, that there was a benefit to it. I do think that one of the things I am responsible for is protecting my editors and making sure that they get the time they need because this workflow from DIT through, remember, then there’s a whole workflow on the other side of color timing, DI, and all that stuff that has to happen and we have to lock the picture in order to mix. I have my editors at the mix; editors are the most important part of this thing. Once you say, “That is a wrap, everyone, great job,” pile up the trucks and drive home, everything now, as far as I’m concerned, is about editors and editing. They need to be protected.

John: Next up, we have a follow-up from Lesley. She is writing about your comment about Steve Jobs.

Drew: Leslie says, “I’m a historian and the executive director of the Steve Jobs archive. In Episode 719, you talked about knowing whether your work is good enough, and Craig recommended watching Steve Jobs’ keynote introducing the iPhone in 2007. I thought you might be interested to see the attached email Steve sent to himself about a year before he died. I think it speaks to the question of why he cared so much about his work.” Craig, do you want to maybe read this because this would be good for you?

Craig: Sure. Steve Jobs wrote, “I grow little of the food I eat, and of the little I do grow, I did not breed or perfect the seeds. I do not make any of my own clothing. I speak a language I did not invent or refine. I did not discover the mathematics I use. I am protected by freedoms and laws I did not conceive of or legislate and do not enforce or adjudicate. I am moved by music I did not create myself. When I needed medical attention, I was helpless to help myself survive. I did not invent the transistor, the microprocessor, object-oriented programming, or most of the technology I work with. I love and admire my species, living and dead, and I’m totally dependent on them for my life and well-being. Sent from my iPad,” which may be the best sign-off there possible.

Well, this is an interesting meditation on gratitude. It’s interesting. She says, “I think it speaks to the question of why he cared so much about his work.” I’m going to go out on a limb here and say that the historian and executive director of the Steve Jobs Archive knows him and his work better than I do, but I’ll tell you what I get out of this is humility, especially for somebody who changed the world in a profound way and in a way that continues to ripple ahead. I sense great humility here, which is a remarkable thing.

John: Yes. It’s also the recognition that you are a part of a process that started before you and will continue after you. The fact that he was in it the last year of his life also makes sense that he had this realization. Is it an email that he would have written to himself five years earlier? I don’t know, but it makes sense for where he’s at in his life.

Craig: The thing that really grabs me is, “When I needed medical attention, I was helpless to help myself survive,” but he didn’t realize that at first.

John: Yes. He didn’t.

Craig: That was a fatal error. He felt like maybe he could help himself survive. He chose, I guess, what we call alternative therapies for a very serious cancer. It’s hard to say if he would have lived or not had he engaged in science-based, evidence-based medicine faster. Thank you, Lesley. That was lovely to receive. I’m very glad that you were listening.

John: This email reminded me of a piece I read this week by Kevin Kelly, who was a former editor of Wired, who’s now, I think, in his 80s, and still blogs and writes a lot. This was him talking about, as a young man, he backpacked through Asia and hitchhiked everywhere, and so just relied on other people helping him out. This is really talking about receiving kindness.

He writes, “I believe the generous gifts of strangers are actually summoned by a deliberate willingness to be helped. You start by surrendering to your human need for help. That we cannot be helped until we embrace our need for help is another law of the universe. My New Age friends call that state being pronoia, the opposite of paranoia. Instead of believing everyone is out to get you, believe everyone is out to help you. Strangers are working behind your back to keep you going, prop you up, and get you on your path.

The story of your life becomes one huge elaborate conspiracy to lift you up. But to be helped, you have to join the conspiracy yourself. You have to accept the gifts. Although we don’t deserve it and have done nothing to merit it, we’ve been offered a glorious ride on this planet if only we accept it. To receive the gift requires the same humble position a hitchhiker gets into when he stands shivering at the side of the empty highway, cardboard sign flapping in the cold wind, and says, how will the miracle happen today?”

Craig: That’s beautiful. I love the idea of all of us as sort of less narcissistic Blanche DuBois, depending on the kindness of strangers. There is an idea about prosocial behavior that suggests that, because there is an evolutionary benefit for us to be part of a group, we have an instinct, therefore, to be helpful to a group so that they will let us into the group. You could draw all this back to a selfish gene theory, which is fine; it doesn’t matter. What matters is that we have it, and it does feel good. It feels good to help people; it just does.

There are people, I think, who don’t experience that feeling, but I know you and I do. What is this episode? 7-what? Well, why are we doing this? We’re doing this not because we have been sentenced by a court. We like it. It feels good to help people. It really, really does. I love this idea of pronoia, the presumption that people are actually out to help you. That’s great.

John: As I look at the protests in Minnesota this week, and I look at the marches in Sub-Zero weather, and people trying to get in the way of ICE doing terrible things, that resonates for me. It’s the people who don’t know who they’re actually helping, but they know they’re helping. That’s a crucial aspect of being human.

Craig: Yes. The concept that you are going to be 1 of 1,000 people, and of that 1,000 people, some of you may die, but that may create some small movement on the needle. The civil rights movement in the United States was very much– Whereas the civil war was just you were sent, and you had to do it. What they find in war is that people really are just trying to defend their friends; they’re not trying to defend their side. To march across a bridge with the expectation that some of you are going to get bitten by a dog, some of you are going to get hit by a fire hose, some of you are going to be beaten with batons, that incredible scene in Gandhi where the march on the salt works happens, that is the highest form of pronoia, is, “I’m going to help you by putting myself in a position where I will actively be hurt.” It’s not just that I’m out to help you; I’m also out to get hurt myself to help you.

We do these things because of the unity we feel. We went on strike. There are rules, and the rules say you have to strike. Although there’s a way out of it. There is a way out of it. You can say, “I’m financial core. I still can work on [unintelligible 00:22:18] cover projects, but I’m not subject to the rules, and I can work, and I don’t have to strike.” When we strike, what? I don’t know. Three people do that, maybe?

John: Basically, no one does it. Yes.

Craig: Basically, no one. Regardless of what you feel about the merits of any particular strike, you have a sense that if you can suffer a little bit for the betterment of your group, it’s worth it, or suffer a lot. It’s what keeps us together. I love this concept.

John: What I see in both Steve Jobs’ email and in this blog post by Kevin Kelly is recognizing that you are benefiting from others doing that on your behalf. It’s so easy to overlook that. We think of ourselves as protagonists who have to go out and do the thing, but it’s recognizing that we are also the beneficiaries of other people helping us out. Again, it’s gratitude, and it’s also just remembering that you’re part of this bigger experience, and that no one is an individual. We often talk on this podcast how relationships are everything, and we think about the people in our lives who we know directly, but it’s also relationships with invisible forces and invisible groups that we can’t perceive.

Craig: Yes, the shoulders of the giants upon which we stand.

John: A little bit more follow-up. Brian wrote in about Eva Victor.

Drew: “Thank you so much for inviting Eva Victor on. A key reason their interview was excellent for me was the fact that Eva made this film like an auteur. Scriptnotes is largely focused on the craft of screenwriting, which is great, but rarely does Scriptnotes do a deep dive with a true indie auteur who did it all to create a worthy film from scratch. It’s fascinating and inspiring, and this is the core reason why I pay the premium subscription for Scriptnotes.”

John: Oh, well, that’s lovely.

Craig: Yes, well, we got your $5. That’s all we care about.

John: Haha.

Craig: Yes. [chuckles]

John: I think Brian makes a good point. It’s that we’ll have Rian Johnson’s on and stuff like that.

Craig: Greta Gerwig.

John: Yes, Greta Gerwig. We don’t have a lot of auteurs who are just doing their own thing, and that’s why it’s so nice to have those. Now that I think about it, we do have a fair number of auteurs. Christopher Nolan. We have mega auteurs.

Craig: Yes, and Chris McQuarrie. The thing is, what I would encourage Brian to consider here is actually not to diminish what a writer-director does because it is exciting, but to remind them that if you sit down and talk to most people that we call an auteur, they’re going to very quickly start pointing at the people that help them.

Just to stay on theme here, I write and direct episodes of this show. Am I an auteur? Well, I’m going to start talking to you about my editors. I’m definitely going to talk to you about the actors. I’m going to absolutely talk about the cinematographer first and foremost, the production designer, and then you start going down the line of all the people that worked to do something, the visual effects people, the artistry. You’re not really an author. It’s not. I wish I could just kick that word back over to France.

I used to say this, and I think maybe people thought, “Well, because he’s not a director–” Well, I direct, and the whole [unintelligible 00:25:19] filmed by thing still makes me want to vomit. It’s ridiculous. It’s an insult to literally everyone who worked on the movie. It’s such a joke. I feel that way about auteur, but I get Brian’s point. If I just replace the word auteur with writer-director, then this works great.

John: Yes, filmmaker. Yes, for sure.

Craig: Yes.

John: Lastly, a bit of praise that is not specifically towards Craig, but a relative of Craig’s.

Drew: This is from Hannah in Lethbridge. Hannah writes, “This is not a question, and it’s not for John and Craig. It’s for all the listeners who heard Craig plug his daughter Jessica’s music and thought, ‘Hmm, yes, but dads are going to dad.’ I’m here to tell you that dads are going to dad, but nevertheless, Jessica’s music is amazing. I came across her in the wild, and I only just put the connection together. Way to go, Craig, and Craig’s plus-one for producing at least one amazing artistic thing.”

John: Craig doesn’t have to talk anymore about his daughter, but Jessica really is a unique, singular talent. It’s very nice to see her and to know her from before this was discovered out in the world. Listen, independent of her relationship to Craig, she’s going to do some amazing things, and it’s just neat to see it from the ground floor. She’s recording new music now. We’ll see, there’ll be albums, there’ll be things, but she’s a real talent.

Craig: Yes, I really got in on the ground floor. I was there from that first breath. Well, I’ll tell you, Hannah, that’s lovely to hear. I’m so glad that you appreciated that, and I will share this with Jessica because, no surprise, I don’t believe she subscribes to the podcast. What I really like, Hannah, is that you’re from Lethbridge, a place where I’ve spent quite some time. I’ve even spent time in that Lethbridge casino. Lethbridge is a–

John: I have no idea what Lethbridge is. Tell me.

Craig: I’m going to tell you. Lethbridge is a town in Alberta. It is a city, and it’s pretty close, I think, to Montana. It’s down towards the border there. It’s like a factory town, a little bit. There’s a big vegetable cannery. The trains go through there to pick stuff up from the US. Well, probably not now anymore. It’s a blue-collar city, but you could feel a spirit. It’s funny. I’m like a guy that spent time in a lot of weird Canadian cities, and I dig it. I liked it. I like Lethbridge, and I like that Hannah is there in Lethbridge, and I salute you, Hannah, and I salute Lethbridge. Had a great time. Casino is small. I’m not going to lie. It’s a small casino, but it was trying.

John: All right, let’s move on to a marquee topic here. My thesis that I’m trying to defend here is that screenwriting has notably higher orality than other prose writing. I stumbled across this because there was this thing called Havelock’s Orality Tester. I’ll put a link into the show notes, too. You can paste in some text, and it tells you how oral it is versus how literary it is. The idea is that some text basically kind of is written to be spoken aloud, and some stuff is just written to be read with your eyes.

The definition that they have on the little site here is: Orality refers to the characteristics of speech that distinguish it from writing, the patterns, rhythms, and structures that evolve for memory and performance before the advent of literacy. Drawing on the work of scholars like Walter Ong and Eric Havelock, this tool analyzes text for markers of oral tradition, formulaic expressions, repetition, sound patterns, direct engagement, and the agonistic tone of a spoken debate.

It put some text in to score. A higher score suggests that the text carries the DNA of the spoken word. If you paste some stuff in, you see it tags things. Things like a literary marker might be qualifications that signal uncertainty. Nuance, that would be impossible in live speech. Nested clauses, this is a thing you run into all the time. In a novel, you can have many nested clauses, and your eyes can track back and figure out, “Where am I at in the sentence? What am I actually referring to?” If you try to say that aloud, you would get lost. A lot of Trump’s speech issues are because there’s just the clause within a clause, and it never comes back to the original thing. It’s like, “Wait,” you get lost.

Craig: I think there’s a problem underneath that problem.

John: There’s other things happening there, too. I think we know there’s a decline that’s happening there. Literary stuff will often acknowledge opposing views before it counters them, which is not a thing you tend to do in speech. Embodied action, a description of physical actions and bodily experience, that’s a thing that tends to happen much more often in oral tradition than literary tradition. We saw a bit of that in, I think, Kevin Kelly’s thing, which I would say actually felt spoken, where she’s talking about standing on the side of the highway holding a sign. You’re putting yourself in the body of that person in that space.

Other orality markers, using first and second pronouns, asking questions, imperatives, so musts, the commands. Contractions, discourse markers: well, so, anyway. Interjections, short clauses, fewer nominalizations, where you’re taking a verb and making it into a noun. It’s all just tracked for me. It’s one of those things where it’s like, “Oh, yes, that describes a thing I’ve noticed but never had a word for.”

Craig: I think this would be incredibly useful for screenwriting teachers whom I’m often railing against, to use at the beginning of a class on screenwriting, because very few people who begin have spent time reading screenplays. I certainly hadn’t. What I had spent so much time doing was reading literature because I was a student. I was reading Shakespeare, Faulkner, short stories, and essays, all of which really were not oral. They had low orality. They were highly literate.

Maybe the closest thing that I was reading at the time that felt like maybe it would fall into orality was Stephen King. His books tend to feel like that. He has these long paragraphs in italics that are really designed to be spoken. They’re beautiful. I always loved those. I think this would be an amazing way to start with people and say, “You’re going to have to actually weirdly forget all that, because even though you were taught that was the stuff that’s going to help you be a writer, it’s not going to help you be this kind of writer.”

John: Another thing which is striking about screenwriting, which I don’t know it tracks for orality, but it feels like it would, is that screenwriting is a present tense. We’re not referring back to characters [unintelligible 00:32:07] the past, but the actual action of a screenwrite play is in the present tense. You’re right there. You’re describing a moment that generally you’re in with the person who is hearing you, who’s there. That’s why it feels so alive and so active.

When I say that a screenplay just feels like a long pitch that’s written down, yes, there’s specific grammar we use in screenplays, the ints, the exts, the transitions. If you notice what we do on the page, what a lot of screenwriters like you and I both do, is we’ll often end sentences that go into the transition that it continues to the next thing.

Craig: Always.

John: We’re always bridging those things so that it reads well, but it’s really so that it sounds good. It sounds good to say aloud.

Craig: Yes. We know when we listen to people telling stories that flow is important, a sense of continuity. What it implies is that the person who’s telling you the story knows where it’s going. We’ve all had the experience of listening to somebody tell a joke and watching them realize they screwed up or can’t remember, and it comes to a hitchy stop, and you think, “This is not going to be that funny anymore,” because they don’t have confidence in it, which means I don’t have confidence in it.

With your screenplay—this is something Scott Frank said to me a long time ago—he said, “You want to feel like the person who wrote this is in complete control of it.” That is different than good and bad, but it is sort of an essential start, that they needed you to read that so that you would read this, and then the next page is this on purpose, and never just like, “Oh, wait, a scene is happening,” or they’re correcting something. The plates are getting wobbly as you spin them, and you lose confidence.

John: Yes. None of this should be taken as a slam against literary style-

Craig: Oh, God, no.

John: -because I think all of the sophistication that you see in that is so important that there’s things you can do in a book or in a scientific article that is very clearly good for that medium, and that it’s just, thank God we have it, and thank God we have the innovation and the centuries of literacy to be able to do that kind of stuff. It’s just different from the oral tradition, which I’m arguing screenwriting probably really stems from.

If you think back about the origin of screenwriting, it started as just a list, and then it became just like some descriptions of how it’s going to come together and feel. Even playwriting, obviously, it’s off the dialogue is an oral tradition, and Shakespeare was an oral tradition before it was written down, and that’s why there’s multiple folios and controversies over where stuff came from. The scene description was so minimal, it doesn’t have some of the DNA that screenwriting does, which is basically creating visuals all the time.

Craig: I think this is such a nice distinction to make because it also helps people who may, in a snobby way, think that screenwriting isn’t real writing understand that it’s just a different kind of writing; it is trying to achieve a different feeling, but it is writing nonetheless. You have the Richard Brodys of the world who insist that screenwriting is not art, whereas I guess apparently writing refuses. I think you may fall into that trap if you are over-educated to the point where you have become blind to the existence of another kind of writing entirely. I don’t quite imagine how that can even happen, but apparently it does.

There’s a cultural value to this because I think some cultures have simply relied more on orality than others. Western culture has tended to be very much about the literary tradition, with wonderful exceptions in drama. They’re still doing Death of a Salesman. That clearly is art, high on the orality scale. Of course, we’re still performing Shakespeare and ruminating and iterating on Shakespeare in so many different ways. Western civilization tends to get very fussy about the literary stuff.

Orality, I think, as you go around the world, you may find that it’s higher or more prized in those cultures than it might be in some ivory towers here in the West.

John: We’ll see. Listen, I’ve not read Havelock or Ong or any of the original material here, but if you want to experiment with this yourself, I’ll put a link in the show notes to this orality tester. It’s fun to just grab some text from your stuff, but also just grab a few paragraphs from a scientific paper, a literary paper, or a newspaper, and see what it is, because it’ll give you a score. More interestingly, it’ll break down why it’s giving that score, and it’ll highlight the sentences and what it’s noticing in there that has aspects of these certain discourse markers or epistemic hedges, and what it’s seeing in there that’s giving you this instinct.

Craig: One final question, as I look at it, is this going to scrape stuff as we put it through, because it is .ai or–?

John: Yes. I don’t know. If you’re pulling stuff that’s already on the internet, I don’t know that it’s actually a thing to worry about.

Craig: Yes, it’s already out there.

John: All of the stuff I put in there is stuff that’s already on the internet, so it’s fine. Again, I don’t think that any writer should change how they write to get a higher score in this. I don’t want anyone’s work to be like, “Well, you have to hit this number on this.” That would be a giant mistake. I think what you and I are both arguing for is that I think an important part of learning about screenwriting should be to understand how it tends to feel on the page and why it tends to feel so spoken on the page.

Craig: Yes. Conceptually, this is a great place to start, so you understand where you’re heading as opposed to where you think you might be heading.

John: Exactly.

Craig: Great.

John: Cool. Let’s answer some listener questions. I see one here from Lori.

Drew: “An increasingly common piece of screenwriting advice is to just write a script that’s undeniable, but what does that even mean? Does ‘just write an undeniable script’ mean the way to sell a script is to write a script that sells? Is telling someone to write something undeniable actually useful advice? If so, what does it really mean other than write something good and marketable?”

John: To me, this reminds me of– and I cannot think of the source of this, but when someone says, “Oh, yes, next time we’ve got to try harder.” It’s not like you didn’t try as hard as you could last time. It was no shortage of effort; it just didn’t happen. It just didn’t work. Undeniable feels like one of those, “Ah,” it’s something you’d say about something after it succeeded, “Well, it was undeniable.” Well, plenty of people denied it.

Craig: Yes, of course. Nothing is undeniable. There are people who have written a script, the movie gets made, they win an Oscar for that script, and other people are like, “I hate that. I hate that script. I hate all of it, and I would deny it.” The problem, Lori, is everybody is desperate to try and say something. There is nothing to say. We’re saying that as guys who’ve been doing this for a while. When you really get down to this question, and I think what’s underneath this question is, “But how do I write something that people are going to love and make and buy and give me a job?” and all that.

The answer is that you’re going to write something that they will want to buy and make, and they will be impressed by. There is no way to advise you how to do that. None. We try to give you general advice about how to write things in ways that we wish we would have had to maybe get there a little quicker, but write something good for whom? You only need to write something that one person says is undeniable. You can send it to 80 people, 79 of them deny it. This is not an undeniable script, but if one person buys it, job done, you did it. The truth is, no, it doesn’t really mean. It’s much. It’s a mouth filler to answer when people are asking you for some sort of give me a step one through seven method of writing a script that people will buy. It just doesn’t exist.

John: Lori, in the longer email, notes that Lawrence Kasdan wrote The Bodyguard in 1975 and his script was rejected 67 times and became a giant hit. He’s undeniably a great writer, but did he write the undeniable script?

Craig: No. He is not an undeniably great writer because they denied him.

John: Here’s what I’ll say. After the fact argument, oh, well, that script was undeniable, and it wasn’t the case. What is genuinely helpful about a script is a script that feels like only you could have written it. When someone reads the script, is like, “Wow, that’s a really effing great script.” I don’t think anyone else would have written that script that feels like specifically your script. That is an achievable goal, I think.

That’s something that writes something that’s really good that is unique to your interest and skill set and experience. It’s going to help you out more than trying to hit “undeniable”.

Craig: Yes. There is a certain solace I’m supposed to be taking in the fact that the greatest living screenwriter, Lawrence Kasdan, got rejected 67 times with a script that went on to be massive hit. It’s hard. We do give the phrase break in a little too much stick because as we point out, you never stop breaking in.

There is a moment where credibility is achieved. It is fragile. It can be smashed within seconds into pieces, but for a moment, because of something that occurs, you get a little bit of credibility. Your job is to leverage that credibility and build upon it to get more credibility until there is a point where you are so credible that people would rather believe you than themselves.

At some point, if you sit Larry Kasdan down and you’re like, hey, we were thinking about doing the Star Wars movie. What do you think about this? He’s like, “I don’t really think that’s the way to go.” Then you’re going to go, Larry Kasdan, because he has so much credibility. When you begin, you have zero. You get a little shred. Get a little shred and you build on it. It’s not easy to get that first shred.

John, you’re absolutely right. Really, the only way, other than be a very talented writer and write something that’s very interesting to people, is to write something that is somehow specific to you. You don’t even have to know how it’s specific to you. If you just write honestly, it’ll be there.

John: Nick has a question about deliverables.

Drew: “Assume you’re in development, unpaid, on a feature script and doing notes for your producer or agent/manager. Assume you’re generally okay with their notes and assume you’ve made a good faith effort to address them, what do you actually deliver? Obviously, you send the revised draft of the script incorporating their notes. Do you also send a version with the edits starred, redlined, something else?

How much transparency do we as writers really want in this situation? On one hand, highlighting the edits demonstrates that you made them. On the other hand, do we want to show how the sausage is made? Is it acceptable to simply deliver the final revised draft that incorporates their notes and an explainer doc or transmittal email pointing the reader generally to the notes that you’ve incorporated?”

John: This is a good general question. Do you send the starred changes, or do you just send the new draft? I tend to email first saying like, hey, do you want starred changes, or do you want the full draft? If they say they want starred changes, give them the starred changes. If they want just the clean draft, that’s great.

I’ll tend to make both. I might send different ones to different producers if there’s multiple producers. It’s not a giant hassle to do starred changes in most cases. If I’m doing a big rewrite, I won’t even turn on starred changes because I know that so much is going to change. It’s not helpful for someone. If every page is mostly stars, it’s useless.

Craig: Assuming that you have– I don’t like the fact that you’re unpaid, by the way.

John: Maybe this is like, he sent his manager a script like, oh, let’s go out with this thing. The manager’s like, “Oh, this is not ready yet.” If it’s a spec that the management sought out, yes.

Craig: The sausage is not being made on the page with the asterisk. The sausage is being made in the sausage inside your skull, my friend. That’s where the sausage is made. No one’s getting in there. Don’t worry about that. The mystery is still the mystery. It’s not like handing them a script with asterisks is going to have them go, “Oh, this is how they do it. I don’t know. Let’s just get rid of this guy. We can do it ourselves.”
They can’t. Typically, in a situation like this, I will send both. I’ll just send, here’s a clean copy and if you’re interested, here’s a copy with asterisks. Up to you. It doesn’t matter to me. I don’t care. The sausage is safe in my head.

John: The sausage is safe.

Craig: The sausage is safe. Do we still title these episodes? Because if we do– [laughs]

John: The sausage is safe.

Craig: The sausage is safe.

John: We do title these episodes.

Craig: Excellent.

John: That may be the one. Let us go to our one cool thing. I had an article, but I also have a game to recommend, so I’m going to do both because I can do both. The first is an article that I think our friend, Ken White, may have first linked to. It’s called Quantum Computing for Lawyers, a subject post by JP Aumasson. We hear about quantum computing, especially post-quantum cryptography a lot.

This demystifies that, explains what’s going on and why our timelines may be a little too fast for it. We may be overthinking this a bit at the moment. Essentially, quantum computers work differently than conventional computers. They’re doing a bunch of things at once in ways that are hard to understand for our little brains.

Because they can, in theory, break our normal cryptography much more quickly, by just– The mathematics works out that they can just do things that would break normal cryptography, which hurts for encryption and Bitcoin-y stuff. We have to think about new ways to do that. Mathematically, there are ways to do that. It makes it much harder for it.

This article just does a really good job demystifying some of it and also saying, you know what? We may not actually get quantum computers in any reasonable timeline, so don’t assume that it’s going to happen. A good demystifying article. The second thing I want to recommend is a game we played once in the office and once last night called Swoop. Craig, have you heard of Swoop?

Craig: Swoop.

John: Swoop may be the next heated rivalry, Craig because it is a sensation crossing the country. It is a card game, and it looks like Uno or a typical card game. You can play it with normal decks of cards, but it’s helpful to get the real deck. It’s a Midwestern game that shares aspects with Scum and Asshole and other summer camp games.

Craig: Oh, yes. I played those.

John: Essentially, you are trying to empty your hand and your board and be the first so you don’t get stuck with points. It has a really nice mechanic. It is super simple to pick up. I will also put a link in the show notes to this video made by the people who make the decks, which is so Midwestern and kind of cheesy, but actually explains the game really well.

Craig: I’m in their website, I’m looking at their website. The Midwest is pouring off of this. It’s serving Midwest. I like it.

John: We played it with seven people last night. It’s probably good with three, but you can just play with as many people as you have. It’s a really fun game. What I like about a card game is that when it’s your turn, you’ll be paying attention, but you don’t have to pay that much attention when it’s not your turn and it moves pretty quickly.

You can keep other conversations up in the air, which is, I think, a game night where you have to focus too much on the card game. It’s not fun.

Craig: No. All right. Swoop.

John: Swoop.

Craig: Swoop.

John: You’re going to say swoop a lot, which is just a fun word.

Craig: Swoop. Nice.

John: Craig, you’ve got an article. You’ve got science for us.

Craig: I’ve got science. It looks like we’re going to double dip on science here. This is a report of a study in Stanford Medicine, their medical magazine, where they report on things. There is a team at Stanford, which is probably where they found this, that has figured out how to perhaps reverse the degenerative disease that I guess we’ll cover under arthritis or osteoarthritis.

As people get older, they begin to lose cartilage between the joints. It becomes very painful, there becomes swelling. This just causes a real loss of quality of life. Of course, it’s incredibly expensive for societies to help people like this. What they have found, because they were chasing stem cells and platelet-rich injections, they found this other thing.

There’s a thing they call the gerozyme, which is a protein that is basically driving the loss of tissue function and blocking the function of this protein, gerozyme or 15-PGDH. It basically allows stuff to build back. In theory, if this pays off and it works in human trials and so on, there may be injections that will– I don’t have any cartilage in my big toe on my left foot. It’s gone. It’s gone because of an injury.

Basically, over time, it injures things. There’s an inflammation process. Cartilage just dies. It’s painful. I could get it back. As you get older, John, you’re going to start feeling it. If you don’t feel it already, you’re going to start. There are people who, unfortunately, genetically are predisposed to getting this much earlier.

It’s rheumatoid arthritis. There’s a lot of ways where this can be very disabling and painful. They can regenerate adult tissue, in theory, just by turning something off as opposed to putting something in. That’s exciting. Quietly, they just said, hey, we may have fixed a massive problem, but we’ll find out.

John: Yes, we’ll see what happens in human trials.

Craig: Early days.

John: I think this is only good news, but it does remind me of a thing I liked so much in the movie I Am Legend, if you remember the movie I Am Legend. Emma Thompson is on this news program and they say like, oh, so in a word, what have you done? It’s like, I think we’ve cured cancer. It cuts to the zombies that come through the whole thing.

I don’t think this is going to be the thing like, oh, we regenerated cartilage and now we have zombies running throughout the thing.

Craig: Yes, zombies probably no.

John: Probably not zombies.

Craig: I say probably.

John: Instead, we all just become shark people who were made entirely of cartilage.

Craig: I would love that, honestly.

John: Honestly, if I could squeeze under doors because I had cartilage, if everything was just like my nose, that’d be great.

Craig: You punch me and I’m like, ouch but also nothing’s broken. You just bent me a little bit.

John: No worries. I bend, but I don’t break. I’m like a bowel knocking a little branch.

Craig: Yes, lovely.

John: I learned the Spanish word for branch this week. I’m doing Anki, which is the flashcards for Spanish and for other languages. I do that every day. Rama is the word for a branch or a limb. I just like R-A-M-A. It’s just a great word, Rama.

Craig: Rendezvous for branch. Rendezvous with Rama.

John: With the branch.

Craig: Rendezvous with branch. I like that.

John: Yes. When the bowel breaks, the cradle will fall. It all fits together.

Craig: It works.

John: That’s our show for this week. Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt. Thanks, Drew.

Craig: Maybe.

John: Edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Craig: Could be.

John: Our outro this week is by Jennifer Lucy Cook, a first-time outro. I love when we have a first-time contributor. It’s also an especially good one. It’s just different, and I just love that. I don’t want somebody to come in and just kills it. Thank you to Jennifer Lucy Cook. Thank you to everyone else who’s submitting outros. Please keep them coming in. I just love hearing new things after 700 episodes.

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Craig: We wrote a book.

John: We wrote a book, remeber that.

Craig: Forgot about that.

John: There’s a book. There’s a book out there in the world.

Craig: How’s that going?

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Craig: Nice. See, people want it. It’s full of useful advice.

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We’re not like a box office podcast at all. It’s just really notable this year. I’m excited to talk with Craig and Drew about that. Craig, Drew, thank you so much for a fun show.

Drew: Thank you, John. Thanks, guys.

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John: All right, Craig.

Craig: Yes.

John: 2026, we’re already in January as we’re recording this. We have Avatar as a holdover, which is still making a ton of money. The Housemaid, which I didn’t even know was a movie, which cost $100 million. It’s a giant hit. Do you know what that movie is?

Craig: No.

John: It’s Amanda Seyfried and Sydney Sweeney. It is thriller, sure, female-centered thriller, bad husbandy stuff. $100 million.

Craig: I love a bad husbandy stuff kind of thing. Do they kill him?

John: I don’t know. I haven’t seen the movie, but I know it’s in the discourse. Apparently, it’s a fun watch in a theater, which is why we make movies.

Craig: People in our business, not the people like you and me who make things, the people who run stuff, they’re like, “This movie actually is a really great thing to watch in a–” Yes, it’s called a movie. They’re all supposed to be like that. They all work like that. Yes, you could watch a movie like Pitch Perfect, you could watch it on streaming and enjoy it. Absolutely.

You don’t need to go to a theater to do it. So much more fun in a theater. Movies that are movie movies are fun in theaters. Of course, that’s why we built them.

John: Megan worked because it was a movie. It was a movie you’d watch in a theater, 100%. Here are some of the big titles coming out in 2026, which is just an absurd list. Avengers Doomsday, the Spider-Man sequel, Toy Story 5, Super Mario Galaxy Movie 2. The New Dune. Star Wars: Mandalorian and Grogu. The Odyssey. Project Hail Mary. Minions 3. Supergirl. Zack Krager’s Resident Evil.

Craig: I can’t explain how excited I am about that.

John: It’s going to be so good.

Craig: Finally. [laughs]

John: It’s finally here. We wanted to have Zack on the podcast. Maybe we can get him on for this. It’d be great to have him on. The Hunger Games, the new Hunger Games. The Devil Wears Prada 2. We know something about that movie and people who make it. Jumanji, the live action Moana. Those movies are going to open. There’s no question that those movies are going to generate some box office.

Craig: Yes. It is interesting. Of all of these, I think, is Project Hail Mary based on a book?

John: It’s based on a book that’s a giant hit.

Craig: Right. None of these are actually a fully original film. Those are going to come surprise us, I think.

John: They will surprise us. That’s, I think, an important point here is that the locks are just the thing because we already know they’re going to exist. They’re sequels, they’re parts of IP, but Weapons was a giant hit and that didn’t come from anything. Sinners was a brand new thing.

Craig: You see all these big movies, what’s great is if these big movies get people flowing in and out of theaters, they will also flow in and out for movies like Weapons or Sinners or the Weapons and Sinners to come because those are the movies that create more.

John: Because they have an amazing trailer that plays in front of all of them. I also have a list here of just the wildcards. First off, Michael, the Michael Jackson movie. I don’t know how that’s going to work. People are really excited about it. Giant question marks. Even on audio podcasts, you can see the question mark floating there. Verity is the new Colin Hoover movie. Disclosure Day by Steven Spielberg.

Craig: Always bet on Spielberg.

John: Yes. Clayface. Clayface is a–

Craig: It’s just a funny name.

John: It’s a great name.

Craig: It’s Clayface. A lot of this stuff, I don’t know when Clayface was actually invented for DC Comics, but I’m going to guess the ’40s or ’50s.

John: Probably, yes. That feels right.

Craig: Let’s do a little lookup on Clayface right now. It feels like such a Dick Tracy-ish name.

Drew: June 1940.

Craig: 1940, okay. Back in 1940, I can absolutely be like Clayface, man with a face of clay. Oh, my God. Clayface. That feels ripe for 1940. It’s just like that he’s still Clayface, man. It doesn’t matter what year it is. It’s Clayface. You know why? He’s got a face made out of clay.

John: It’s good stuff. Practical Magic 2. Mortal Kombat 2. The Cat in the Hat. Godzilla minus zero. Focker in-Law. Wuthering Heights.

Craig: That actually, I’m putting a chip on that.

John: I’m putting a chip on Wuthering Heights too. I don’t understand people who are like– come on.

Craig: Wuthering Heights has always worked.

John: Yes, and people are like, “Oh, but it’s not really Wuthering Heights because the casting is weird.” No. The casting is exactly what she wanted it to be. I’m excited to see it.

Craig: Are the people in it good? Then the casting is right. It doesn’t matter.

John: The Bride. Scream 7.

Craig: Scream 7. Kevin Williamson, tip of the hat.

John: Yes. He created a franchise that just keeps on going.

Craig: That’s a real number. That’s impressive.

John: Ready or Not 2. Masters of the Universe. That’s before we get to the animated movies. We have Hoppers. We don’t even know what these are.

Craig: Where is the movie about the sheep detective?

John: That’s right there in the– It’s hybrid. It’s half animated.

Craig: Okay, yes. Fair.

John: Hoppers, Goat, and The Sheep Detectives, which one of the people on this podcast wrote.

Craig: I’m telling you, The Sheep Detectives is going to surprise people. It really is. It’s adorable.

John: Craig, I don’t believe in Polymarket, I don’t believe in betting, especially sports betting. I don’t want to bet on a movie, but if I were to put some money on a movie, I think I would put it on that because I feel like it’s undervalued at the moment.

Craig: I would trade it as an insider trader and as somebody that is generally a negative Nelly and a worry wart and is expecting the worst, I would also put some money on The Sheep Detectives.

John: I would also put some money on, this is going to be a frigging banner year for movies. Will we hit 2019? Probably not, but will we hit really high? I think we’re going to do great. One or two of these big movies might slip and move to ’27. That can happen too. I just can’t think of another recent year where we’ve had so many just giant titles coming onto our screens.

Craig: Yes. It’s pretty impressive. Also, it’s interesting to see how things like The Devil Wears Prada 2 are– it really is like so much time has passed that it gets to be something else.

John: It’s its own thing as well.

Craig: Yes, it’s its own thing which I like that more. Even Toy Story 5, it’s been a while.

John: It’s been a while. It’s a good concept that’s toys versus the iPads. It’s like, yes, that’s a good idea. I don’t know, I’m excited for the movies. There’s going to be a lot of Barbenheimer weekends where there’s two giant movies. Hopefully, they’re the right combo where they both succeed, and that’s going to be fun, too.

Craig: Yes. It’s pretty crazy. Look at this. Wow.

John: Yes. Listen, it’s a weird time in Hollywood, the mergers, all the hand-wringing over everything. Also, it feels– What I hope is that the box office is so hot that people are like, “Oh, yes, you know what? Making movies, that’s a business there.” It is a business. That we can look at the success of each of these movies and not think like, oh, that did really well for that streamer and it brought subscribers.

No, it actually brought dollars into a box office that you can count, which I like. It’s an old-school way of thinking like, “Oh, was that movie successful? Let’s look at the numbers. Yes, it was incredibly successful.”

Craig: If it’s flipped around where television was maybe the farm system to develop talent to go on to be in movies, like George Clooney was on ER, a development system, so then he becomes a big movie star. We had writers who came out of television to become big movie writers and directors and so forth.

Let’s say it’s flipped around. Let’s say now it’s more like movies make interesting people that then make amazing shows because that’s the economics of it. I don’t care. All I care about is that there still be a place to go and watch things with people, especially comedies and thrillers, but anything you want. Netflix surely looked at what happened with K-Pop Demon Hunters and went, okay.

Because before it was always like, oh my God, Ryan Johnson, Greta Gerwig are forcing us to do this because they need their movie to be here. You could tell it was just like, we’ll give you a little window but the energy around K-Pop Demon Hunters and the theatrical experience, even they can’t miss it, which maybe is why they’re buying Warner Brothers. Maybe that’s it. They really do want a way to just keep that experience going.

John: If we take Netflix at their word that they see themselves as competing not just with other streamers, but with YouTube and TikTok and all the other things that people are pulling on their attention, then theatrical does make sense because that’s a space where you are not on your phone, where you’re not doing other stuff, where you have a person’s full attention for their time and you are able to monetize it and create culture and art that you can then take to your streamer. That does make some sense.

Craig: Makes a lot of sense to me.

John: Yes, if we ran the industry, yes.

Craig: You want to do it? You want to put a bid in?

John: Sure. That’s the future of Script Notes. It’s a podcast about screenwriting that then just took over.

Craig: There’s nothing stopping us at this point. Let’s just try.

John: Why not? Thanks, Craig. Thanks, Drew.

Craig: Thanks, guys.

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Scriptnotes, Episode 721: Preparing to Direct (with Eva Victor), Transcript

February 17, 2026 Scriptnotes Transcript

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John August: Hey, this is John. Standard warning for people who are in the car with their kids, there’s some swearing in this episode. Hello and welcome. My name is John August.

Craig Mazin: My name is Craig Mazin.

John: You’re listening to Scriptnotes, Episode 721, a podcast about screenwriting and things that are interesting to screenwriters.

Let’s say you have finished writing that script that only you could write and perhaps only you could direct, but how do you learn how to direct? Today on the show, we’ll talk with the writer, director, and star of the much-acclaimed film, Sorry, Baby, about their journey behind the lens, which landed them best directorial debut by the National Board of Review and a lot of other awards attention. Welcome to Scriptnotes, Eva Victor.

Eva Victor: Oh, thank you for having me. You know what? You guys have gotten me through some interesting, difficult days. Your voices are very comforting to me. It’s interesting to see your faces.

John: Weird, huh?

Eva: I totally attribute faces to voices, and it’s a very surreal moment. Thank you for this. I’m excited to be here.

Craig: It’s great having you. I’m sorry if we are disturbing you, if the cognitive dissonance is freaking you out.

Eva: Exactly. Thank you for saying that.

Craig: Yes. I want you to feel okay about this, but you might not. I get that. I remember the first time when I was a kid, I would listen to Howard Stern on the radio. I had no idea what Howard Stern looked like. Then they started putting up ads for Howard Stern around the subways and stuff. I was like, “What?”

Eva: That’s a particularly surprising one.

Craig: Yes. That was really shocking. Well, Eva, I have a little bit of like, okay, you were comforting me, too, because even though I don’t spend a lot of time being cool and looking at things that other people are looking at, for some reason, back when you were doing videos, I guess on YouTube, but maybe there was something else, I saw you did one where you’re talking to your imaginary or potentially real offscreen boyfriend, “Babe,” about the heterosexual pride parade. I loved it so much, and it sent me down a whole rabbit hole of all of your videos, and I just thought you were hysterical. It’s so funny.

I have to say, not surprised at all that somebody as funny as you has made a movie like this because I think funny people are better at drama than drama people.

Eva: You know what? That is so cool. The journey of the year has been accepting that I did make videos in the past. I think I was-

Craig: You’re awesome.

Eva: At that moment, it felt really right for that to be what I was talking about. Looking back, I’m like, well, that day that video made sense, but now it’s random, but also have to give it up for whatever journey your journey is. It’s your journey, and that’s okay.

Craig: Tell me about it.

Eva: I’ve come to terms with the fact that there were skills built there. One of the main ones is moving through humiliation and putting yourself out there and feeling devastated by yourself to make something happen, and the pain of not doing something is greater than the pain of doing something and feeling ashamed.

Craig: Sure. Well, that’s what we do, and I like the way you phrase that. The pain of not doing things is worse than the pain of doing them, but the point is pain. Welcome to the show.

Eva: Welcome to the show, okay.

John: I wanted to save talking about short-form video to the bonus segment because we had Quinta Brunson on the show, and she came up at a BuzzFeed, and you were doing Comedy Central, and she learned so many crucial skills there. I want to talk about what skills transfer, what skills don’t transfer, and what you learn from that, but before we get that, we’re obviously going to talk about your film. I also want to answer some listener questions on talking to actors, writing exercises, when to share the script with people.

I also want to confess that the poster for your film is great. It’s you holding a cat, and so I assumed for months before I watched the film that, oh, the baby is the cat, that she’s talking to the cat, and the spoiler is that it’s not about the cat. It’s not about the cat. The cat is a small part of the movie, the adorable part of the movie, but not a large part of the movie.

Eva: I know, and the poster conversation was one of the more intense parts of making, because I went in this huge circle, and the main issue was trying to communicate a tonal movement through an image, and all the images that I was compelled by were sentimental value. I was like, oh my God, that’s the best version of a dramatic poster, and that’s what, if we had made a drama, simply a drama, it should have been– It was interesting, after having worked on posters, to be like, “This is the best image for the film.” That said, it is deceptive, and then I got a lot of feedback that people were like, “I can’t watch because the cat dies,” and I was like, “Oh my God, no.”

John: Again, another spoiler, the cat does not die. The cat thrives in the film.

Eva: That’s the only thing that does okay.

Craig: The cat starts healthy and just gets healthier?

Eva: No, grows up. It’s perfect. It’s a perfect cat.

John: Indeed. There’s another famous screenwriting book called Save the Cat, which apparently your film follows, but we have our own script notes book that’s out there in the world, and we have two little bits of follow-up on that before we get into the meat of the episode.

Eva: Whoa, look.

John: What, wait, what? Oh my God, there it is.

Craig: She’s got it in front of her. Oh my God, incredible.

Eva: Because you know what? I really need it. I’m a little bit through it, but I have to pause because it got to, it called me out a little too much, and I need to recuperate.

John: Not by name, but just by implication.

Eva: It’s like, “Eva, you are a bad writer in it.” I was like, “Oh.”

John: Oh my God. We almost took that one out and it almost dropped in the line edits, but you know what?

Craig: We figured it would be motivating. John, what do we– oh, we have some follow-up from Liz.

John: Drew has the flu, so he’s on the call, but he’s a rough voice. Craig, do you want to be Liz in the script notes book?

Craig: Sure, I’ll be Liz. Liz writes, “I bought the script notes book for my husband Nick, a longtime listener, for Christmas. I’m an author and through a series of unexpected events, ended up in a pitch meeting for a script this week, my very first time pitching a script. My husband suggested I read the pitching chapter in the book. I did, and the advice in there was such a huge help. The meeting was a big success, so thank you so much for writing this book.” That is so nice, it’s almost too nice.

John: Yes, it’s really nice.

Eva: Tell me the me- where’s the sad part?

Craig: There’s no conflict.

Eva: Where’s the underdog? Jeez, [unintelligible 00:06:32] must be nice.

Craig: Right. I kept waiting for my husband. Once I heard my husband suggest it, I thought, oh, this is going to lead to we’re getting a divorce, but-

Eva: Story-wise, interesting, yes.

Craig: Unfortunately for us, Liz’s life is nearly perfect.

Eva: Liz, I’m so happy for you, but you are incredibly unreadable, but congratulations.

Craig: Liz and her perfect husband Nick. Well, thank you. It is very nice. I’m glad. Listen, that was the point, Liz, was that we would help people. It’s nice to see that it’s working in the world.

Eva: You know what? The paper is good paper for a book that’s more– because it’s very paper-paper. It’s not glossy. It gives the energy of more of a manual that you can look to where you need to. That, to me, the paper makes the stakes approachable. It makes the book approachable to me. I thought that was very thoughtful. Orange is amazing, so you guys nailed it with that. The content of the book is amazing too, but also the look and the feel is really powerful.

John: All right, so that is a review from Eva Victor, acclaimed filmmaker.

Craig: That’s pretty great.

John: A lot of people have been leaving reviews online, which is great also because it helps people find the book. Thank you for leaving them on Amazon or Goodreads. I want to single out one reader who gave us only four stars. Fine, you can give us four stars.

Craig: That’s good. It’s four out of five. That’s great.

John: Yes, but most people are five stars. Four, it pulls down our average when someone gives us four stars rather than five stars, which is fine. This man wrote, “2,105 words on the Scriptnotes’ book.”

Craig: What?

John: I’ll put a link in the show notes too so people can read through it because it’s really impressively written. It’s a guy, Dimitri Papadimitropoulos.

Craig: His name is 2,105 words.

John: It’s incredible. What I like so much about his review, he says, “The book’s generosity is not that it is kind, though it often is, but that it treats the reader as an adult, someone who can tolerate complexity, contradiction, and the unglamorous truth that artistry is frequently indistinguishable from persistence.

Eva: That’s a five-star review to me. I don’t know where that–

Craig: It feels like it’s a six-star, and he might have tried to go to six, but it just busted him down to four.

Eva: That’s okay.

Craig: That’s common.

John: Eva, I thought that was a good jumping-off point to talk about artistry frequently is indistinguishable from persistence because that is the thing about filmmaking is that you say, “Oh my God, that was an amazing movie,” and it’s like, “Yes, but it wasn’t just brilliant because it was brilliant because the person had this great idea, it was so much hard work day after day, year after year to get things done.”

I think it’s the thing we talk about a lot on the show, but as I went through my career and as I’ve met and worked with some great directors, it’s just been always such a revelation. It’s like, “Oh, you’re just working really hard.” I think it’s a thing that’s just underappreciated, especially as we get into sometimes award seasons and you think, “Oh my God, this is the person is a genius, that person is a genius.” It’s like, “No, they’re just working really hard.” There’s luck and there’s all these things. There is talent, but it’s all these things.

I want to maybe frame some of our conversation with you around this because you came up, you have some experience, but as I’m reading through the press notes on this, you wrote the script not even necessarily intending to direct it. Can you talk us through the journey to this is a script and now this is a script I’m going to try to direct?

Eva: Yes, totally. I think that theme is very relevant for me. I feel like there was a moment that I realized my career would never be made by somebody else. It picked me up out of oblivion and gave me an amazing role that was the big role for my– There was this realization of you are the one who has to get you where you want to go. I have always been like, “Well, I’m not going to fail because I don’t work hard. I’m going to fail because I’m missing some intrinsic quality that people have.” I was like, “It’s never going to be because I don’t put in the hours.”

That discipline has kept me from I think mentally losing my mind. It’s like, “Well, what can’t I control?” I can write more. I can study. I can watch films. I can get my day job to a place where I’m making enough so I have these hours. I had a development deal with the studio that happened because of my internet videos. That was a very difficult experience because I was turning in page one drafts for, honestly, years thinking that if I just wrote the perfect draft, then I would get the momentum and attention from the people I needed to make that film happen but that didn’t come. That made me lose my goddamn mind. It made me really internalize something about I am fraudulent, I can’t do this, I’m not meant to write.

Then I wrote scripts for a body horror thing that didn’t make sense, but it had a lot of heart. I sent that around to people through my agents at the time. My rejections were very impersonal nos. The one person I’d met before I sent this script to read it and said, no, but the rejection letter meant everything, was Pastel, Barry Jenkins company. When I met Barry, he was like, “Your videos…” which I was even at that point ashamed of or whatever. He was like, “It’s filmmaking. It’s just not the way that other people do it. It’s a small version, but you are directing this. You’re making decisions about how people look, where the camera’s going, and what people are saying.”

I think that gave me this optimism or like, “Oh, man, someone sees the hard work behind these.” Then when I sent them the script, they sent a very generous no and made this really beautiful letter about the script and what was valuable about it emotionally. Then why they weren’t the right partners for it. That was weirdly like a letter that I read and cried out of like, “Oh, but there are people out there who are understanding.”

Then I had been, over the course of five years or so, been stewing on the idea for Sorry, Baby, but was like, “Man, the words, if I start writing them down too soon just for this particular project, I’m going to get too depressed about how bad it is compared to what the story means to me.” It took me a really long time to piece together the writing of it. Then finally, I sat myself down in a cabin in Maine and was like, “It’s time. You’re writing this.” I wrote it and sent it to Pastel again because I was like, “They get me.” They were like, “Okay, what do you dream of for this?” I was like, “Well, I’m going to act in it…” hoping that–

John: I want to clarify, at this point, you are an actor who’s been cast in things independently because you have acting credits. It’s not crazy to think that you’re going to be acting.

Eva: Right. It’s not crazy, but it is a different thing.

Craig: Yes, but there’s that concern that, oh, well, if we had Jennifer Lawrence, then maybe we would get the blah, blah, blah.” You’re like, “No, it’s going to be me.”

Eva: It was very clear that when I’m the lead actor, that means that the film is this big.

Craig: This big. [chuckles]

Eva: I was like, “I’m willing to sacrifice whatever thing that is.”

John: Eva, can I ask you about the script that you sent to Pastel? Does it closely resemble the movie that Ashley has made? The footprint of the film is very small. It’s a cabin in the woods and while the times are shifting around it, the actual literal geography it’s inhabiting is very small. Was it always that way?

Eva: Yes, it was always that small. It’s very similar to the script that we shot. There are some changes. Mainly, I did a little work with Pastel around the character of Lydia. Then once we got Naomi, that opened it up for me of how this person talks. There were a few scenes that we adjusted the dialogue. I have not had this sense, and I don’t know if I will, how little we had to work on the scripts. What do you think?

Craig: I think you worked on the script a lot. I think that what people sometimes think is that all the work on the script happens after the “first draft,” which is never really a first draft. Some people do write first drafts, but a lot of people hand a script over that they have been– you’ve been thinking about it for years. Then when you went to your Stephen King cabin, what came out was something that was already thought through. There was an enormous amount of intention and structure and care and thought.

I suspect, having seen the movie and having seen the way you directed it, that you had already directed the movie in your head. You saw it. You saw it, you heard it, you felt it, you smelled it. It’s all there. It’s okay for that work to happen earlier. I think it’s the best thing. I think it’s why people say yes. There’s a certain kind of movie that you can write that’s about, oh my God, the aliens are crashing to the moon, and you can figure that shit out as you go. For this, what I was so impressed by was how seamless the writing and the direction was. You are a walking billboard for what I think should be the gold standard for how we make feature films, a writer-director.

I just feel like even though there’s a conspiracy to convince all of us that somehow directing is this unattainable thing as opposed to writing, which we can all do, no. No, it’s not. You’re doing it already.

Eva: There is so many layers of the reasons why I didn’t think I would want to direct it that all have to do with not understanding what the job is and you can learn things to do a job. That you’re not born with information, even though it feels like you are. The college I went to, I never had any interest in directing. It was mostly plays where I went. I had no interest because I was like, “Well, this kind of guy does that and that kind of looks this way and talks this way. I don’t want to be in charge like that because I’m not compelled to be him.” It’s like, “Oh, I have my own way of doing that.”

It took a bit of soul searching to realize, oh my God, I’m desperate to direct this. I know how it looks and feels. I need to hire geniuses around me to help me find the words for visual language. It was a lot of, I don’t know, but I want to do it. I think I don’t know is so awesome.

Craig: Best words.

Eva: You’re allowed to make your first movie. You’re allowed to be doing something for the first time because you have to do it. I really fell in love with also– What was reassuring to me was the process of collecting images and moments and pieces, almost like a little scrapbook of information was a very enjoyable private process of building a world. I felt, as the work of director unfolded and I discovered what it was as I was doing it, each part of it felt like a miracle.

At one point in the edit, I was like, “Thank fucking God I like this and it’s [crosstalk].” I love it and I need it. Thank God because otherwise, why would you ever put yourself through this deeply intense experience that lasts forever?

Craig: It lasts forever and every day lasts forever, but also is way too short. It’s this nightmare of time that is never enough and is yet too much. I just feel like you’ve put your finger on something incredibly important, which is we all have a sense, whether we’ve learned it from school or from culture of the kind of person director should be. A kind of person a director should be is a man and he is a big– He’s Michael Bay. Basically, in my mind, it’s–

John: A bit of that personality.

Craig: It’s Michael Bay and I am not Michael Bay. I will never be Michael Bay. I don’t have whatever that is. That’s not me or Ridley Scott. I’m also not that. I am an ink-stained wretch, but ink-stained wretches are also wonderful directors. I love that you overcame the internalized image of what is because I honestly think that’s the thing that hurts us the most is we just start with a belief that we’re not.

Eva: Yes. Trust me, now it’s a different issue, but that one I overcame. I’m not to get through that, but I’m like, now it’s the first, honestly, if we’re going–

Craig: Please.

Eva: Now, because the writing of this film, now my experience of it is nostalgia for a time when I now remember it as flow. I don’t think it was. I toiled over that script. It was just I sent it when I was done with it. Now I’m like, “Oh, yes, directing, whatever, but writing, you guys, this needs oil. This is squeaky or something because it’s been so long. Now there’s eyes on me.” I thought the most painful thing was not having–

Craig: It’s the worst thing.

Eva: It’s the worst. Then this is also like, yes. I’m like, “Okay, now you’re trying to kill me by celebrating my film?”

John: How dare you say yes?

Eva: Well, just be honest, but also be nice. I’ve made a film. I only know how to make that film. It’s a mind fuck.

Craig: It is.

John: Can we rewind and talk about how you learned to make that film? That’s what’s so useful for so many of our listeners, is that you have a script and you have people say like, “We agree you should direct this. Now learn how to direct a film.” What did you assign yourself? What did other people send you to look at? What’s the process?

Eva: You know what? Yes. This I would love to talk about. First off was like, okay, you didn’t go to film school, so there’s a lot of fraudulence around not knowing things about film. I learned lenses will be good. Encyclopedic, ordering the books from film school, reading the books from film school. Research that was very dry, but I was like, “Let’s just read this. Let’s put post-its through it.” Quickly realized like, “Okay, this is simply information that actually I need.” It was a process of constantly being like, “Okay, that fills that need. Now what is missing still?” Then it became, I need to watch a million movies. I’d been watching movies, which is why I wrote a movie, but I was like, “I need to watch films. Then as I’m watching them, not fall into watching them, instead watch them.”

John: Look at them, study them, pull them apart. See what they’re doing.

Eva: Exactly. I became very into backwards shot listing films. A photo of every setup and blending them up and understanding when we return to the same set, it was very mathematical. When are we returning to the same setup? How long are we on Laura Dern’s face and Certain Women before we get to his face? Why? I became more aware of my taste. I was like, “Oh, I like the economy of not moving until we have to.” I became aware of what the film was needing from a visual standpoint.

I was backwards shot listing and would write out the shot list. Obviously, it’s not a complete picture because you never know what someone left out, but you get a sense of how cohesive vocabulary is built in a film. Certain Women was a really helpful one for me because that is three parts. There was chapters to that film and they’re related. How do you make three women who are strangers become related?

Then I created a shot list for my film, which instead of shot listing, because that felt random, I drew storyboards of everything. By the way, I had ample time. Man, fill your day with some shit to do because no one is knocking right now. We were just taking our time. It was drawing everything and every frame of the film. You could go through the storyboard and watch the film, which some of the shots are really what is in the storyboard. Then obviously, some very important changes were made in collaboration with my DP, Mia, who making decisions for good reasons later on. It was like an instinctual storyboard. What is the first thing that feels right?

Then I shadowed my friend Jane Schoenbrun on I Saw the TV Glow. I was like, “Oh, I’m ready.” I’m not ready, but I’m ready to start being ready. I’d been on set as an actor, but on set as an actor, it’s like, “Come in. Do you need water? Do you need Diet Coke? You’re good for the day. Good job.” I find acting very stressful in moments, especially when you’re there for some time, but not the whole time because it’s so vulnerable, but it is a different experience of things are hidden from you to protect you, which I feel complicated about, but whatever. Some things are just not your job to know.

When you’re on set sitting behind a director with nothing to do on the set besides watch that person, you realize how different people advocate for their film and the different styles of how people advocate, but also how a film is built moment to moment. It’s non-miraculous. It’s like by the end of the shoot, you have the pieces to go to the kitchen. Mixing metaphors is okay, I guess. That was my stuff. Then what you do is you take meetings with different heads of department, and through, they made a lookbook. Actually, I’m going to make a lookbook in return, and then you have a conversation with Image, and then you become specific.

The cool thing about directing a film is you make decisions every day over time. The film is built over time, and that was reassuring to me too because at first you’re alone, but then you bring people in, and it’s not just yours. That’s a relief really to, okay, you got that character thing, fucking God, that’s yours. Say it how you want to say it.

Craig: I think that what you just said from start to finish is, I’m going to use the word probably because I want to be kind and charitable to film schools, it is probably worth more than four years of film school. What you just laid out there, in part because you just belied the need for film school. You taught yourself what you needed to learn. I love that. I went through the same thing because I didn’t go to film school. There’s a special technical film school for directing, which you didn’t go to, and I didn’t go to, but we’re smart. We read stuff quickly and learned things quickly.

The thing about lenses, I don’t need a semester on lenses. I need 30 minutes on lenses to get the basic breakdown of it, and then I need to be on set and go, “Can we try something longer?” The cinematographer’s like, “Yes, you know what? 50. That’s cool.” Then you’re like, “Oh my God, that’s the thing.” You start to get muscle memory. All of these things you laid out, the way you storyboarded, the way you broke things down, reverse-

John: Reverse shotless thing is so crucial.

Craig: -shotless thing is genius. That’s genius.

John: I want to just pause for a second because people may not quite know what we’re describing. You’re watching a scene in a movie, and you can figure out, okay, well, we are a close-up of her, but there’s also a two-shot and there seems to be a wider shot, and so you can basically figure out, what were the actual shots they had on the day to make that thing? That was the plan going into it, but then you can also look at, how did they actually use it? When did they move into coverage? When did they stay wide? All the information is right there. You can see it because it’s in the film, and that is so useful.

Part of this is reminding me of, I don’t know, people who watch Drag Race. There’s bedroom queens who basically, who do really good drag at home, and they’re on Instagram. There’s also obviously queens who need to go out and actually perform in front of other people. That to me is the transition from you shotlessing at home and then going to a set and seeing Jane direct it on the set for her movie because you are watching like, “Oh, this is what it’s actually really like. This is what the actual decisions look like in the field where it can’t be perfected on Instagram.” You’re making choices moment by moment.

I’m sure you found this, and Craig, I know you’ve encountered this. When you are on a set and it’s not your movie. You’re still watching the monitor, and you have so many opinions. It’s like, “I can’t believe we’re moving on. There’s no way that’s going to cut right. That’s not what it is.” You recognize, no, but the director knows what they need. They know that, okay, between these two things, they know what’s important.

Craig: Sometimes.

John: Sometimes. Craig’s also a show writer who obviously does have control of a film.

Craig: Every now and again, they go, “Okay, we’re moving on.” I go, “No, we’re not.”

John: No, we’re not.

Eva: Declaring we’re moving on is like, well, that’s crazy. You can’t really go back on moving on. Okay, you have to be sure.

Craig: My thing on moving on is before I move on, I check with the tent. Who’s in the tent? My script supervisor is in the tent, and a producer is in the tent. My assistant is in the tent, people who have been watching this, and I’m like, “Are we feeling okay about this? We’re good? Do you think we got it? We got it? We got it. I feel like we got it. Okay, moving on.”

You’re absolutely right. It’s like an abandonment, and it’s the worst part of directing is that you have to do more than you have time to do so you move at such speed, but you get better as you go. You are, I assume, a much better director week– I don’t know how many weeks you shot for. Let’s say five, four?

Eva: 24 days.

Craig: Five weeks. Week five, you were a better director than week one, almost certainly.

Eva: Definitely. You know what? You don’t really self-reflect like that but then Naomi was there the whole time. She was there the first day, and she was there the second to last day. She was like, “Bitch, what the hell?” She was so proud of me. I was like, “Realize, so true.” You know what? There was actually something else I wanted to add, which was a really pivotal part of my building the film two years, was we did shoot two scenes from the film in a very small– Me and my DP and a group of my DP’s students at NYU came to shoot in an Airbnb in New York where we both lived two scenes, and the prompt for my producers who produced it and it was a practice setting, the prompt was, two scenes that scare you.

I did a scene that was terrifying for me to direct because I didn’t understand the mechanics of the movement of the people, a lot of movement. Then the other one was as an actor, this scene in the bathtub where Agnes tells Woody what happened.

John: It’s a Sundance Labs thing. That’s exactly what you do.

Eva: Exactly. Then I worked with an editor, Kate Broca, who that was the moment when I was like, “Oh, you cannot cut from a Y to a Y.”

Craig: Ah, love this.

Eva: I’m like, “Oh, man, what a master class in failure and a good [unintelligible 00:30:51]. I didn’t really realize it was a test, but then there was this moment when they were like, “What would you have changed about how you shot it?” That was the moment when they were like, “Okay, yes, you understand what you would change.” Also shadowing a set is very interesting because I shadowed a couple days on Billions, the show that I was on, just to watch those directors. The budget of that shoot is one real particular thing. The vocabulary of the show is very heavily covered. We go over every shoulder, clean, we do everything.

Then Jane’s film was a particular budget that was much larger than the budget I was going to have but to go backwards, to get a sense of scope and how much can you get done in a day when you have more days, when you have less days, when you have an actor who can only be there three days. Just to get a sense of a few different things, to understand that things on your set will be particular to your set.

Craig: I think you did a fantastic job. It’s funny, I was watching through and I was noticing, first of all, I have a particular– It’s just taste. It’s not that I don’t like when people move cameras around. I just don’t like it when cameras move around for no fucking reason. I like a camera to be still and I like the people to move around. I loved how still it was so frequently.

I noted as I was watching how many scenes didn’t really seem to need coverage. You had a nice two-shot and it worked that way. That’s how the character were interacting and it was great. The scene that I was like, there’s one that was probably tricky, was when Decker and all of his grad students are around a table. Shooting around a table is a nightmare. It’s a nightmare that nobody– I’d rather shoot a car chase than a scene with that many people around a table.

Eva: That makes me feel better because I’m like, “How do you fucking shoot a car chase?” Would never break that–

Craig: It turns out it’s because you can edit the shit out of car chases, but the eye lines around a table, that’s nightmare stuff for me. You did it really well.

Eva: Thank you. There are a few mistakes in the film, continuity issues, and one of them is in that scene, I’ll never say what it is. Okay, you just have to live with the fact that happened. I think, honestly, Billions prepared me for that.

Also, so much of understanding a scene is who is the scene about and his special attention to Agnes. It’s like, that helps. That helps these boys can be in a two-shot, a three-shot, and they will be cut to highlight that this is less vulnerable.

Craig: Then you got to explain that to them. Sometimes actors don’t like that.

Eva: No. They’re my close friends, so they understand.

Craig: It’s a tricky one. You’re like, “No, I actually think that you guys come through better in this.” [crosstalk]

John: Just so we can see the chemistry between the two of you.

Eva: When I’m in a movie, i.e. one other time besides this, now there’s no bullshit of I know I’m a character. If I’m next to someone who is on set every day and I’m here three days, I get it. I’m here to get you here. It’s interesting. It’s interesting.

John: Eva, you’ve perfectly set up a question we have from Anne. She writes, “How should writers talk to actors? Specifically, do you tell them about their function within a script, or do you just talk about the human being their character is?” It’s that balance between this is the character, this is who you are, the world is that, and functionally, this is what I need you to do. This is your job at this scene. What’s your instinct there? How you talk to actors?

Eva: Depends on the actor. I feel like I’ve now been in enough rooms where people don’t know I’m an actor or they forget. I hear people talking about actors, “Be careful.” I don’t talk about actors like that. I really think what they do is psychotically intense and next-level vulnerable. When I wrote Sorry, Baby, every character I wrote as if I got to play the character. I was like, “You’re going to say something I like. I want the words to be good because what if I do it?” It was very important to me that every actor was who they were in the film. I obviously was a part of every casting decision, but I’m like, “The world is as important as the people who lead it.”

I don’t know, talking to actors, you get a sense of how an actor wants to be treated. Some actors want to be handed off the role, and that I love to do. I love to be like, “You’re the expert now, go fly, you know more than me.” Often actors who are writers too are like, “I get who I am in this.” It was interesting because Naomi is completely brilliant. We never rehearsed. She really wanted to just do it. She’s so connected.

It was a very different process than, for instance, Lucas Hedges, who is brilliant as well, equally brilliant. We rehearsed for weeks beforehand. It was amazing to work with actors who I was learning from who were more seasoned than me because I was like, “Oh, every actor, their soul is how they do things.” It’s great if an actor knows themselves well enough to say, this is how I like to be treated.

John: Let’s go back the other way then. You’ve cast an actor in a role. What is that conversation like? If you’re the director, how do you have that conversation about let’s talk about how you like to work? Any tips on how to have that conversation with an actor?

Eva: My thing was always offering up meetings, calls, rehearsals, and going off of how they responded to that and what they needed for their process. My process as an actor was- I worked with Rebecca Dealy, who is an amazing casting director and also an acting coach, and so my process was also about building my character privately- I think offering everything that anyone could want and then respecting whatever they need.

Craig: That’s a great way of thinking about it because as much as I understand the impulse here that Anne has, which is tell me how to talk to actors or should we give actors this information? They’re all different. Big surprise. They’re all different. One thing that one actor craves is the thing that another actor will throw an absolute fit over. Learning that is easier for some people. It’s probably easier for you, Eva, than it is for me. I’m a little dense. It takes me some time sometimes to realize, oh, this person doesn’t need that and this person does need that. Just because this person needs it doesn’t mean that person.

It takes me a little bit of time. I’m not instant with it. I let them know when I start. I’m like, “Feel free to tell me, hey, this would help, this would not help.” Then my attitude is, I’m here to get the best performance out of you. Help me help you. What do you need?

Eva: There is, I discovered, a lot of value in acting across from your actor because it’s like you’re not coming down from on high with a note. I don’t really believe in the idea of a note. Anytime a director has given me a note– I like the idea more that a director delivers a secret or an idea or just that like, “What if she had this thought?” To me, there’s an immediate trust that happens if you’re in a scene with someone of, I have to have your back and you have to have my back. When I’m acting with you, I can’t judge your performance, [unintelligible 00:39:05] whatever you say. If I have an idea of what you could do differently, I’m going to give you something different, which is–

Craig: Oh, that’s interesting.

Eva: It’s less condescending of, I have an answer. It’s more like, “What if I said it like this? What happens with you?”

Craig: You direct them by altering your performance.

Eva: Not in secret.

Craig: No. You let them know. That’s amazing. It’s funny. I do wish they were like– because I want to be a good boy. Really, more than anything, I don’t want actors to feel like, I don’t know, I don’t want them walking away going, “He’s just difficult today.” I want to do right by them, but sometimes it’s impossible.

John: Craig, you’re trying to balance, you want their performance to be fantastic and you also have to look at the entire scene and entire story, everything around it. That’s the challenge, is you’re always balancing all these different competing desires.

Craig: I’m not acting.

Eva: Every day on set, you have to make a calculation of like, “Okay, if I give this person this thing, then this is taken from this person.” If I go late this day to make sure I know I have it, but does this actor need to feel like they have it, that will report me because it’s their first day, because this scene is vulnerable or whatever. That calculation of like, “Okay, we are going into overtime and because I haven’t done that, I can do that this day,” constant calculations of what is best for the film. Having to kill your darlings even of like, that person will not be happy with me tomorrow, but I won’t go late tomorrow. It’s a busy mind.

Craig: Oh, man, is it ever. It’s like your busy mind has made something absolutely beautiful. I really do appreciate it. I know we have more questions, but this isn’t a question. This is for me. It’s just a statement. What I love so much about what you did was you made a movie about relationships and half of the movie, and I’m just guessing, but half of the movie by weight is you alone, and it’s still about relationships. It’s always, there’s always a ghost in the room with you. It’s incredible how dialed in you are to the only thing I care about in stories which is relationships, and just so well done, just so well done.

Eva: Thank you so much. There are so many ghosts that are on the cutting room floor that in the script, I was like, “Yes, that is my favorite thing in the script that just once the film starts to become–”

John: It tells you what it wants to be. I was looking through the script yesterday and I noticed like, “Oh, these are whole scenes that are in the movie,” and basically what you cut were things that broke out of your POV. The script had scenes that did not have you driving the scene, and then those scenes, they didn’t last in the movie, and that’s not surprising, and I’m sure they were delightful. I’m sure they’re really funny, but the things that were there, they weren’t absolutely necessary, and therefore they fall out.

You had the first scene at a sandwich shop. You had two guys talking about paninis. You had an Agnes and Natasha scene. You had two jurors talking. They’re all funny and great, and I could totally imagine why they were in the script, and I can completely see why they weren’t in the finished movie, and that’s also directing.

Eva: If you had told me we were cutting those scenes, I would have been like, “Let’s just not fuck each other.”

Craig: That’s the fun part. You don’t know.

Eva: It’s crazy, and it makes me so relieved that we shot more than we needed. I mean, I know obviously there are sacrifices that have to be made when you have more pages. It just took everything, but honestly, strategically, those scenes for me, the way I felt about them in the script were like, “I’m deliberately giving my audience intermissions, energetically intense stuff,” but then it’s like, right, an intermission makes tension fall through the floor, so why would you ever do that?

I was like, I didn’t understand that they would change the pace of the film and would be so jarring that whatever tonal shifting I was trying to do that kept people locked in, there was a jolt that was too jolty and would make no one trust me with the other transitions of tone.

Craig: Yes, people lose confidence.

John: Absolutely. Well, I’m really happy that the script you’re putting out there shows the scenes in there because it’s such a good lesson for like, you can see like, oh, this is the shape of a movie before it films, and that this is the shape of a film afterwards, and you discover things along the way. My question is, how early did you know those scenes were dropping out? Was it after the first assembly where like, “Oh,” or did it take a while to figure out that those were things that weren’t helping you out?

Eva: I went through the mental intensity of shooting the film mainly happened in the edit where I was finally seeing myself on screen and the energy of the film wasn’t diluted by cut, and then you shoot a piece at a time, but when you watch it, you’re like, “Oh my God, this is a sad movie.” I was surprised somehow that it was a sad movie and I had to [unintelligible 00:44:19]. Take a second, I really fought for the sandwich scenes, but the second that, for instance, there was a first scene with John Carroll Lynch, and then there’s a panic attack scene, and the second, that first scene–

John: It’s so good. The second scene is so good.

Eva: The second scene becomes-

John: Important.

Eva: -completely different. What that scene did in the film was it gave us too much information about Agnes being mentally unwell that it’s math. It’s constant calibration, constant, “Well, yes, what if we try?” It’s like puzzle making, and you just have to try everything because you are going to get basically questioned by everybody on why each thing, and you can only choose it if you know what it is.

Craig: You have to be able to justify it. Everything does impact everything. It’s like making a jigsaw puzzle, but when you put one piece down, the colors change on the other pieces. It’s a really weird thing to do, and it is hard to say to a great actor like, “Oh, by the way, we left one of your–” People have left scenes with Meryl Streep on the cutting room floor. You just have to do it sometimes because you find what you needed, and everything was a theory. The fact that your theory worked out 98% of the time is insane. It’s miraculous.

Eva: Really wonderful actors, they know that the movie working makes their scenes work. In the Natasha scene that got cut, when I told Kelly, who plays Natasha, “We cut this one scene,” and she was like, “Yes, that makes sense. It was the same scene as a scene before.” I was like, “Oh, sweet, Kelly, nice to know.” I was just like, “Oh, yes, people get it.” People understand that what that does for something else is more.

John is able to be proud of the film because of how his character experienced as a breath of fresh air, completely new energy, 75% of the way through the film. There’s real power in that. Yes, it’s nice when actors get why. I wish every script that you could read was a shooting script. My God, would that be– That is the one cool thing about when you get to know people. There’s a lot of cool things about getting to know people who do this, but one of them is you can make them send you shooting scripts instead of–

John: The sanitized, yes.

Eva: I’m just like, “This is a key to the kingdom,” which I feel like should be more possible.

Craig: Yes, I agree with you. It’s also comforting to see how a great movie had a shooting script that was 90% correct.

John: I think we’ve actually achieved our goal and our thesis, which is basically that it’s not brilliance, it’s actually mostly just hard work. You can’t distinguish and differentiate between the two of them. This conversation about like, “Oh, no, it was just really hard work.” Yes, inspiration and incredibly talented people, but also hard work and constant questioning of, “Wait, am I actually doing this right?” Eva, thank you so much for this education.

Eva: I have a question for you guys. You have both had psychotically successful things. I am curious about your return to the page. Maybe this isn’t your experience, but I am–

Craig: I’m scared.

Eva: -conflicting that– Well, beyond scared. I think reconciling with the fact that each process is humblingly different than another process and work in a new way that you have to relearn, but coming off of attention.

Craig: Attention is the poison, so you can’t. In my experience, when attention is as focused and relentless as it is on something like you and your movie during award season, it is poison in your veins. It’s a beautiful thing, of course. It’s a sign that people connected and loved what you did, but attention causes pain and you need to be alone to write. I really believe that. I don’t think you can write in a room with glass windows and everybody staring at you. You need a little time. You need a little time to flush it out.

I call it going down the well. That’s what Bella Ramsey and I call it, going down the well. You’re going to go down the well and you’re going to be at the bottom of a well for a bit. People are going to wonder, why are you at the bottom of a well? You should be on top of the world. You’re like, “I’m crying a lot.” They don’t understand, but that’s okay. Then the attention, this is the best part.

Eva: Goes away.

Craig: I mean, oh my God. You think it won’t because they just can’t take their eyes off of you and then it’s gone. Then you’re like, “Oh, thank God.” Then, of course, later you’re like, “Oh, no, it’s going to come back.” That’s a different dread. My advice is give yourself a little bit of time.

Eva: Thank you for saying that. As you’re saying that, there was this journey. I was making these videos. It was daily attention on the videos. The turnaround was so psychotic. DMs from people that would break my mind. What had to happen was I stopped. I had Cold Turkey run away for a few years and decide who am I, what is going on, what do I want to write, what do I care about, and it’s like, “Oh my God.” I totally did that and I needed so much silence. Hearing you say that, I’m like, “Oh shit, I actually know about that and that’s amazing.” It’s a different thing, but it is this crazy thing.

John: I would also say that I suspect your curiosity will overcome your fear at a certain point because your curiosity is, as I’m sure driving you through a lot, there’s things you want to explore and do. Just the same way you were intentional about thinking about how you want to direct, you’re going to be intentional about thinking about what do I want to do now? What is interesting to me? What is a thing I want to tackle? You’ll find a clever way to do it.

It could be a new original story or it could be an adaptation of something that you’ve always like, “Oh, I know how to do this thing. Why does this thing not exist in the world?” Then you’ll make that thing and it’s going to be awesome.

Eva: Isn’t that crazy? Thank you so much. You guys are so nice. Always time with everything. Yes.

Craig: It’s really annoying. It’s annoying. We have no problem accepting that for our physical selves. No problem at all. You cut yourself as a kid, it hurts, and then it scabs up, and the scab is itchy, and then it goes away, and then it’s pink and weird, and then it’s okay, and then it’s like it never happened, and it’s just time. We are so frustrated that our emotional pain takes time.

That’s what Dennis Palumbo, who’s a therapist that I went to for many years, and he came on our show and talked on our show, he would often say to me, I would say like, “When does this stop?” He would say, “Tincture of time.” I’m like, “Shit, but also good.” Tincture of time. Yes. A little bit of time. You’re going to be fine. You’re going to be more than fine. You’re going to be great.

Eva: Thank you.

John: Let’s do our one cool thing. I have a book that I’m reading that I really love that I want people to read. It’s called Girl on Girl: How Pop Culture Turned a Generation of Women Against Themselves. It’s by Sophie Gilbert. It’s really good. I think you’d both like this a lot. It goes back to some earlier times and the cycles of feminism, post-feminism, and to this churn that happens. Women, and particularly young women, get co-opted into this system of beliefs and any attempt to form an identity for themselves gets marketed back towards them. It’s really smartly done.

Here’s from her opening chapter, which is her thesis. She says she wanted to understand how a generation of young women came to believe that sex was our currency, our objectification was empowering, and that we were a joke. Why were we so easily persuaded of our own inadequacy? Who was setting the agenda? I just loved her framing on all of this because it just does feel like you have girl power, and then it becomes a thing that is sold back to women that they can buy and purchase.

It’s about culture. It’s capitalism. It’s also really about porn, which I hadn’t thought so much about, but the degree to which porn is always on the edges of culture and warping things in a weird way. I thought it was just a great book. Sophie Gilbert’s Girl on Girl. It’s a book out from last year, but I’m just now reading it.

Eva: That is amazing.

John: Craig, what do you got?

Craig: My one cool thing is the Vancouver SkyTrain. I love riding a train, but I’m a New York boy. I love the subway there. The subway goes pretty much everywhere, and I love it. Vancouver is not New York. It’s a much smaller city. It doesn’t have a subway. It’s got this little monorail thing. I just never took it. I never got on it. I was just like, “Oh, it’s a train.” The studio complex where we are based and where all of our stages are is just walking. It’s like a two-minute walk from a SkyTrain station. I was like, “Should I take a train?”

I am so obsessed with riding the SkyTrain. It is so much better than driving. It’ so much better. My mood driving to work, I get in my car and I’m already angry that I’m driving. Then my blood pressure and rage accelerate so that when I finally arrive at work, I am already just at a 9 of pissed. Then I have to go to meetings. The SkyTrain is like, ah, and it’s clean. There’s a train that comes every three minutes. In the subway in New York, you’re like, “Oh, I just missed it. It’s going to be 12, which is really 15, or there’s a stoppage.”

This thing never stops. Three minutes, just [onomatopoeia] and it’s lovely. I’m not saying anything that a lot of Vancouverites don’t know, but if you do live in Vancouver and you haven’t taken the SkyTrain, and you’re wondering, fantastic way to get around.

John: Love it.

Eva: They’re going to be so happy you said that.

Craig: I should get money.

John: Absolutely. Eva Victor, do you have something to recommend to our listeners?

Eva: Yes. I was going to do this mini Nutella that I got in Spain today. Instead of that, I have decided to shift my one, so this is me sneaking in two things. There is a website called rainymood.com. If you go rainymood.com, you can listen to rain sounds and it can be a tab open on your computer while you do other things. I find it incredibly relaxing. You can also listen to music while you listen to rainy sounds, which I think is really beautiful. Rain has always been a comfort to me and consider checking it out.

Craig: The website has rain. It’s like you’re looking through a window that has rain coming down. It’s a beautiful website. This is really nice. The SkyTrain is its own vibe. Also, it’s Vancouver. It’s always a rainy mood. This is shocking right now, what’s going on behind me, the fact that it’s not raining. When I go to sleep, my iPad is doing white noise, but it’s technically brown noise because I’m baby still. I’m just an old baby. The older I get, the closer I return to looking like an actual baby. Soon, the diapers will come.

This actually seems like something that might be nice for when I’m writing because I don’t like specific noises, but rain is comforting like that. This is lovely.

John: Love it.

Eva: No word.

John: No words.

Craig: Love it.

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Craig: We’ve been siphoning $5 a month out of her pocket for a long time.

Eva: Five is a fucking steal. You guys are seriously doing more than $5 a month, but I love it.

Craig: Thank you.

John: Thank you so much.

Craig: Maybe just Venmo then.

Eva: I’ll send a [unintelligible 00:58:02] to you two.

Craig: You’re a big filmmaker now. I don’t know.

John: Absolutely. You can send and become a premium member at scriptnotes.net where you get all those back episodes and bonus segments like the one we’re about to record on short-form video versus directing feature films. Eva Victor, congratulations on your directing of your feature film, your writing of it, your starring in it. All the attention for it, which is wonderful, but will also pass and then allow you to do the thing after that next. It was so great having you on the show. We’ve tried for a while and I’m so glad it finally happened.

Eva: I am so happy. This is such a milestone for me in a way that’s beyond, so thank you.

Craig: Thank you, Eva.

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John: All right. Eva Victor, we first became aware of you, Craig specifically, because you were making funny videos. You were working at Comedy Central. You were doing other stuff too. Can you talk to us about what you learned making those videos, but why it didn’t take a transfer directly to what you were doing for making a film? That era in making short videos, what was that like for you?

Eva: The most important skill, as someone acting in the film that I was directing, was to look at a take and quickly know if I had what I needed in my performance or if I needed to go again. The muscle of judging my own self and giving myself a note was quite harnessed, which was really helpful because I wasn’t afraid of what I saw. I knew what I looked like. I knew how I sounded. Mostly, was noting myself. I rarely gave notes to other actors. It was more just like, “Let’s do one like this.” I wasn’t building someone. They did that. They did an amazing–

I think also, understanding visual vocabulary and having one vocabulary for one piece. I was making videos, and then that got me the job at Comedy Central. I started making my videos at Comedy Central. I had this series there, which was this web series on their YouTube called Eva vs Anxiety. I got an episode of that, and they made me script stuff. I was like, “Oh, man, I like to come up with the things.” They’re not funny once I write them down or something. I liked when it was more exploratory, but I had to script them for the process of working there.

The first episode we shot was shot with, in my opinion at that time, high production value. It became clear to me, this is not funny for this medium. It actually requires me to hold the phone, and I have to be the director of it because if someone else is, you can tell. It just was, oh, the visual vocabulary that’s appropriate for this medium right now is handheld. You can almost see my arm in it. It has to be for this thing to be funny.

Craig: Editing that chops off the last word. It’s a very–

Eva: Yes, like no air. Yes, exactly. I think part of the reason when I got to, Sorry, Baby, I was like, the first shot’s going to be like 100 seconds because I now can take time. Just understanding that each thing is going to have its own way of being and a way it needs to be. Also, me just doing a monologue, listen. Also, it was interesting because at the time, whenever I took meetings, the only thing I ever heard was, “Well, what’s your Fleabag?”

I always said to people, you would not recognize it because it wouldn’t look a damn thing like Fleabag. What are you talking about? I think there was this limited idea at the time that like, “Oh, if I make these videos online and those translate to Twitter, that means when you make a film, it has to be as close to that because that’s what we know get the views on Twitter.” I’m like, “No, it would be a totally different scope and story.”

In a lot of ways, it opened a door to me practicing a lot and messily trying to understand how to build something. Also, it got me in the door. Once I was in the room, it was hard to find people who could see past the idea of a viral video. That’s what I was useful for.

Craig: I think it’s notable that you dealt with authority in an impressive way because I think when I was starting out, I was young, I was maybe 24, 25, I would put authority ahead of my own instincts all the time because I’m like, “But that’s their job. What the fuck do I know?” I think one thing that your generation has the benefit of is that you had a platform to do it yourself minus any authority. The authority came to you because of the things you did without the authority. When they start to dish out the authority, it feels like there’s a reasonable chance for you to go, “No.”

Eva: Yes, or you make something with the authority and you’re like, “Well, yes, this isn’t working.” They are like, “Wait, so how do you make it work?” It’s like, “Well, right.”

Craig: I stop listening to you and the things that you want me to do.

Eva: Something that was hard about working at Comedy Central was we would have meetings on a weekly basis about who was watching the videos and how much they hated any of the women working there would comment about how ugly everyone was. We would have meetings about how are we going to work on that. Then it was also like, “Well, the viewership base is people who we can’t isolate.” It was a lot of corporate stuff that I was like, “This is crazy I’m in this meeting.”

Then again, I guess that probably also prepared me for nothing shocking to me now. Sometimes you meet with people and it’s like, “Damn, that’s a crazy thing to say to me but the men on the internet said something so much worse.”

Craig: I made the mistake of going to– I never go on Instagram. I have an Instagram account, but I never use it. I went there because my daughter put something on there and I wanted to watch it. Then because I never use Instagram and I’m on the website, there’s things on the left that have red numbers. I’m like, “Are these my friends talking to me?” I click on it and it’s just like a list of people literally telling me to die. Because I make a show based on a video game and it is a little crazy.

It didn’t feel great, but then I was like, “Wait, close the box, put box back in lead lined coffin, put coffin back in ground, never look at again.” No one is ever going to tell me in a meeting like, “Honestly, our feeling is that you should die.”

Eva: Not your people, but just people in general.

Craig: Maybe right on again.

John: Craig, I suspect that five years from now, you and I are going to be talking with a filmmaker who came out of Instagram, Reels, and TikTok. Just like there’s a film grammar for what you’re doing at Comedy Central for those videos, there’s a film grammar for TikTok, for Reels. These people are incredibly talented at what they’re doing. They’re so smart and so sophisticated and they have such high production values, but it’s just not a film TV kind of thing. Them learning how to do that, it’s going to be so fascinating.

A friend of mine has a bunch of YouTube creators who are so smart and so good, but this last summer they did this thing where they all made short films, which is just really trying to learn what the film grammar is like. It’s just so different. Because you’re really good at one thing, you think anything, I’m great at being in front of a camera, but it’s different as Eva will tell us.

Eva: I will say, if you want to figure out how to do something, you have to watch a million things that they want to do. It’s the only way. If you want to make a movie, you watch movies. You have to watch movies from every time of the world. It’s interesting because I feel very grateful that when I was making videos on Twitter, there was 13 people doing that. Man, is it a crazy place now? I don’t know. There’s so much talent.

I am really excited to see what comes because access to an audience has never been easier, and that is so much of what stands in the way of people being able to do things. Having an iPhone is like–

John: Yes, it’s crazy. Eva, thank you so much. Congratulations again.

Craig: Absolute joy.

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Scriptnotes, Episode 720: Watch Your Tone, Transcript

February 5, 2026 Scriptnotes Transcript

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John August: Hello, and welcome. My name is John August, and you’re listening to Episode 720 of Scriptnotes. It’s a podcast about screenwriting and things that are interesting to screenwriters.

Today on the show, how do you sell and produce an original series in this age of streamers and IP? To help us answer that question, we welcome back the co-creators of the new spy series Ponies, Persons of No Interest, Susanna Fogel and David Iserson. Great to have you back on Scriptnotes.

David Iserson: Great to be back. I listened to this show enough that it is still freaky to see you do the thing that I hear you do.

[laughter]

John: Last time you were here, it was Episode 361. This is Episode 720. It was halfway through. Every 360 episodes, it’s like a year cycle. You come back on the show.

David: This is how hard it is to get a thing made. It goes from script to production over the half-life of Scriptnotes’ journey as a podcast.

John: That was for The Spy Who Dumped Me. Now you’re back with another spy show, so spies are in your pocket.

David: We’re back with something that has some shared DNA in that we wrote it, and that it is about spies, but it’s a very different tone, very different feel. I think we learned a lot of things for making that movie that we didn’t bring into this show. It’s a different beast, but it is still things that we gravitate to. We shot them both in Budapest.

Susanna Fogel: Budapest. French stories–

David: About two women.

John: That’s true. It’s hilarious, but the tone is specific and strange. I really want to get into it because I was struck by sort of Ponies is a tone I’ve not seen on a show in a while, which is fun to say. I want to talk about that.

Susanna: Aw, thanks.

John: I want to talk about the series, but I also want to answer listener questions on trusting your judgment, how to tell if you’re talented, and differentiating character voices. In our bonus segment for premium members, I want to talk about taste. We did a little bit of this before we got on mic, but what is taste? How do you cultivate it, and should you even worry about taste? We’ll get into taste. Let’s remind listeners who weren’t here for episode 361–

David: What were you guys doing?

[laughter]

John: What were you doing? It’s okay. Answer and remind us who you are because Susanna Fogel, and the time since we saw you last, you went off and directed a whole bunch of things. Pilots for the Flight Attendant, The Wild, A Small Light. You directed the features Winter and Cat Person all in the time since we’ve seen you. You’re so busy and prolific. Congrats.

Susanna: Thank you. I go for long stretches of time where I’m not working, and I’m in my pajamas, so when things come out all at once, and it looks like that’s my regular density of work, I feel excited that that’s how it looks.

John: David, when we talked before, we talked about you working on SNL way back in the day.

David: Yes, that was my very first writing job.

John: Yes. Since then, United States of Terror, Up All Night, New Girl, Mad Men, Mr. Robot, Mozart in the Jungle, Run. Since the last time you were here, you also had young kids.

David: Yes, I had identical twin girls who, by the time this episode airs, will be two years old.

John: That’s incredible. As Craig and I often describe on the podcast, kids are the death of a career.

David: Sure, yes.

Susanna: When we started working on the show, they were negative six years old. This is how long we’ve been working on the show.

David: Working on this, I wasn’t married, I didn’t have kids, and I’m married with two kids. I brought my kids and my wife overseas to make this show. I couldn’t get them on camera, but they are a part of the show in that they were there.

John: They grew up in it. My daughter grew up in and around the Big Fish musical, the long journey of that.

David: Sure.

John: Every incarnation she was a part of and saw, so her DNA is somehow in that show as well.

David: Did she run screaming from this industry as a result of seeing us?

John: No, she loves it. She loves tech rehearsal, which is where they’re painstakingly rearranging lights, and actors will move two feet, and they’ll reset the lights. It’s the most tedious process. She was maybe six, eight years old during it. She would sit there at the table for hours watching it. I couldn’t believe it. Now she loves all production stuff.

David: That’s amazing.

Susanna: That’s so cool.

David: I remember when I started off in this industry, and you’d hear people being like, “The last thing I would ever want is for my kid to be in this industry.” I was talking to Vic Michaelis, who’s an actor on our show yesterday, about how all of our toddlers love musicals and how we would be just distraught if they just wanted to be in tech or accountants or just something. We just essentially just need them to be in showbiz because it’s the only thing we understand.

John: At Sundance Labs, I was there with this married couple. She was a writer, and he was a writer-director. For years, we’d see them up there, and they had young kids and like, “Oh, we want our kids to do other things.” Other kids are Maggie Gyllenhaal and Jake Gyllenhaal. Somehow, it does just rub off. Let’s talk about the genesis of this series. Where did this come from? It feels like it should be based on a book or something else, but it’s not. It’s just a thing.

David: It’s not based on a book. You can, as I did, take a deep dive into many, many books about spies in the ’70s, abouty the American Embassy and the British Embassy during the Cold War. There’s a lot of sources that give a window into what this world is. There was an idea that kept coming up when I became interested in, and just to predate even that, my interest in just the aesthetics of the ’70s and the Cold War. It came out of a trip I took in my 20s to Prague and Budapest and Berlin.

You just can see there’s a communism museum in Prague and the DDR museum in Berlin. The aesthetic of this time is such a weird version of what American pop culture looked like through this weird prism. I just was really captivated. If you come to my house, you will see I have a large mural on my wall about the second and third dogs in space from the USSR. I have weird old watches. I love this look and this feel. For me, I would read these books.

The idea that kept coming up again and again is that although maybe film and television, Cold War-era film and television made it seem like spy operations were happening with some success, the Americans and the British really couldn’t run a spy operation in Moscow. They just couldn’t. They tried to. They would be followed everywhere. I think that idea of it was a desperate time where they’d be willing to try anything was something that Susanna and I started talking about.

From there, the most ethereal way I sometimes think of writing is that sometimes it is just there. It is almost behind a wall. As you start naming a character and just finding details of it, it really took form. For us, we just started talking through these characters, and then everything became very clear very fast.

John: The logline of the show is set in 1977. It’s following two secretaries who are working at the American embassy in Moscow. They become spies after their husbands die in mysterious circumstances. The engine of the show, at least at the start, is them trying to figure out what actually happened to their husbands. That’s the logline. What was the actual pitch? What did you actually pitch to people? Did you write this first? Did you go in and pitch to Universal? How did this all come together?

Susanna: This was a really interesting and very singular experience of having a bunch of general meetings after Spy Who Dumped Me, where people were looking for us to do the TV version of Spy Who Dumped Me. We didn’t want to do exactly that. We didn’t want to do something quite as comedic. We didn’t want to do something broad. I had a general meeting at a network that is not Peacock.

David: That doesn’t exist anymore.

Susanna: No longer exists. That shall not be named.

David: It was Quibi.

Susanna: Exactly. The executive said, “Do you have anything that’s similar to Spy Who Dumped Me?” I said, “Not exactly, but David and I had been just batting around the idea of what if there were these two women in this era and they became spies, but it’s a friendship story, but it’s a little bit more grounded in terms of the tone, but also more action.” She said, “We’ll buy that.” She said, “We know we’re not the coolest place to sell a show.”

David: We know Quibi is not the coolest.
[laughter]

Susanna: She said, “I know on the downside, we’re not the coolest place to sell a show. On the upside, you don’t have to pitch it to anyone else. If we don’t do it, we’ll give it back to you, and we won’t be assholes about it.” After having pitch fatigue about trying to sell everything else and just the amount of time you waste or spend with maybe limited rewards, the idea of just getting a yes and being able to actually just go write the thing and not have to spend six months, it was such an appealing thing that we just said yes.

David: Absolutely.

John: Why is that such an exception? Because I never hear that story. It makes so much sense from both sides. From your side, you don’t want to pitch to every place. You just want to go to the one place that will actually maybe do it that feels right. From their side, they don’t want a bidding war. It’s the right idea. If it did go out further, they might lose it.

Susanna: I know. I really admired just her autonomy in saying that. She wasn’t the head of the network or anything. She just said, yes, we’ll buy that as opposed to needing a bidding war to tell her that it’s worth buying.

John: Exactly.

Susanna: We just took the yes, and we wrote it. We had a great experience developing. Then that network folded into a different network. We wrote backup scripts. We were many years spending waiting to see if this would go at that network. Ultimately, it didn’t. We reshopped it with multiple scripts and a Bible and a chap.

John: Multiple scripts that you’d written because you never had rooms together?

David: We just had one script. We had one script. Then we had figured out what the rest of the show would be. This was deep pandemic because I remember I was house sitting for my in-laws when we pitched this to Peacock. I think we only pitched around three places. Other people had heard the premise, and it wasn’t for them. We couldn’t–

Susanna: Mostly because it was an original period piece, and everyone says, “Don’t try to sell that.”

David: It was very scary because this is, again, what people tell you never to do right now. Period. End. Original ideas are both not things that people tell you to try to sell, and we pitched to peacock.

Susanna: Let’s dig into that a little bit more. You’re pitching the show, but the script is already written. At what point are they reading the script versus you pitching first and they’re reading afterward? Because I’m going through this with a project that’s already written as well. Were they reading the script first, and then you could answer specific questions about the show, or are you pitching broad strokes? Did you have–

Susanna: These details are so fuzzy for me because it’s been so long.

David: I’ve done both versions of this. I’ve pitched shows in the past and then handed them the script at the end of it. I’m almost positive they’ve read the script before, and then we pitched.

Susanna: I think because they were inheriting a bunch of ideas already, we shared those ideas, I think.

David: Yes. Then also because what we’re going to talk about is tone. I don’t like pitching tone. I think tone is a really– it is such a vague thing to pitch. It’s–

Susanna: Trying to describe why a joke is funny.

David: Try to describe something, and then also just having to find a comp, and then the comp might not be right. I think that we gave them all the script and we pitched the show. I think at that point, because this is just what television is now, we had many seasons of ideas. We pitched the first season in detail and then said, “Here’s where we would go with season two, and here’s where we would go with season three.” Yes. It was pretty elaborate.

John: The show is visually very distinct and interesting. Were you bringing visuals to the pitch to show them what it would look like and what it would feel like, or was it just talking?

Susanna: Oh, yes, we did. Part of the idea behind the aesthetic of the show is that, like David was saying, there was an explosion of color and pattern. When you see Cold War content, mostly it’s really dramatic, and it’s really dreary-looking. There isn’t summertime, and there aren’t flowers, and there aren’t people with lively patterns on their clothes. The reality is, looking at pictures of people in that time, there’s so much vibrancy to it, in an imitation of American pop culture in a way.

We really wanted to do a loudly colorful look.

John: Yes, [unintelligible 00:12:06].

Susanna: Yes, so it could still have the muscularity of a spy thing, but also the fun of just people wanting to watch things that pop, because it was actually how a lot of the world looked. Yes, that was what we wanted to show in the deck. We wanted to say, this isn’t a dreary, depressing thing. Not only do we not want the tone to be that on the page, but we also want you to know that this is going to be a fun show to watch with lots of a feast for the senses when you’re looking at the clothes and the design and all that.

David: I think for me and Susanna, sometimes you hear people use the word entertaining almost pejoratively. Entertaining is the kind of show that those are the shows you fold your laundry to. They’re not the serious, important shows.

John: They’re lean-back shows rather than lean-in shows, yes.

David: I don’t feel like that is true in the media that we grew up with, the movies we love, the television we love. It just is how film and television has become a little bit bifurcated now. I think we are always trying to lead with being entertaining, and part of that is trying to be visually bold, but also to try to be as significant as we hope to be. To not make it light, to not be soft, to have the emotions real, to try to work to the top of our abilities, but also to not bore an audience. I think being visually bold comes hand-in-hand with that idea.

John: You get the yes from Universal for Peacock?

David: For Peacock, and then went to Universal.

John: It’s always so complicated. Are you going to the studio, or are you going to the network?

Susanna: Yes. We didn’t have a studio on at our first buyer, and so we came to Peacock clean of that. We did bring on a producer in the interim between parting ways with this other Network and shopping it around. I brought on Pacesetter, who had produced this Gillian Flynn show that I directed a couple of episodes of Utopia for Amazon. I had a good experience working with her. I floated it to her and said, “Can you–” She was doing a lot of commercial but elevated stuff, and I thought that she’d be a good match. With her, she became our partner, and then we had her on the journey since then. UTB came on.

David: We went right to networks, and then the networks laid it off to the studios. When we pitched to Peacock, we pitched, among others, to Alex Sepiel, who is somebody who we just knew forever. You lived in a Melrose–

Susanna: He was my neighbor in a hipster, downtrodden version of Melrose Place when we were in our 20s, where we just-

John: Yes, we all have those.

Susanna: -had gross, slummy apartments and a sketchy landlord who was running from the law. He and I were on a trivia team together every Monday. I knew him really from way back. Every time I’ve pitched to him since, it’s like there’s a legitimate familiarity there of just we know too many of each other’s dirty secrets from that time. Anyway, having him as our executive has been really fun. It was fun to work with him because we just know him. He’s a peer. He’s the person who shares our sensibilities, our taste.

Susanna: You have this deal to be making it at Peacock Universal. You have a script written. You need to write backup scripts. Then, at a certain point with backup scripts, you get the order to finish writing everything and to go to a series. How does it work? Did you ever have a room? How did it all fit together?

David: If it were so simple. We sold this in deep pandemic, and it just took time. Basically, between selling it in whatever 2020, 2021, where we got what they call the cast contingent pickup, which happened on the eve of the actor strike.

Susanna: On the eve of the strike. It all took a while.

David: It all took a while. This ultimately just became years. We were paid at different points to do two more scripts. Then we also just were waiting around. We wrote two more after that, just betting on ourselves and assuming that the show would eventually get picked up.

Susanna: We got the cast contingent pickup as we were waiting for actor offer. Actually, we were waiting for an actor deal to close. We’re like, if the deal doesn’t close, it’s not picked up, but it probably will. Then they’re going to be rushing us so fast to get these scripts ready. We should–

John: Just do it.

Susanna: Even though we were grumbling about it, we were like, “We should just write these ourselves.”

David: I think at that point-

Susanna: We had Amelia.

David: -we had Amelia, and we were just making her deal. We just wrote two more scripts. Then–

John: There’s five scripts as you’re coming into–

David: Yes. We did do a writer’s room because we believe in writer’s rooms, but also because we had– This is a spy show with a lot of heavy plotting that we were just doing ourselves piecemeal over the course of many years. We just wanted some smart, interesting people to vet the plot, but also vet the characters. We wanted to build to a really satisfying ending and set up everything that we need to in hopes of a new season.

Susanna: We also felt like maybe if I was going to be directing the first couple of episodes, that we might get in a situation where they would send me over there to start working on crap, and we’d be separated. We just wanted to have as much of it buttoned up as we could before I left.

David: Fortunately, it didn’t happen. We had everything written by the time we started.

John: Eight episodes, right?

David: Eight episodes.

John: Eight episodes. It’s written before you go. Are you block shooting it? How are you figuring out the best ways to do that?

Susanna: Well, I want to say one thing, which I think we can admit now because it all worked out, which is that we definitely lied about having episodes four and five written when we–

David: Yes, and tell them.

Susanna: We had to be like, “We’re thinking it could be something like,” and we go through the whole process. I am glad we did it that way. It made us really interrogate those scripts. We had a lot secretly done.

David: We shot blocks. Yes, we shot two episodes at a time.

Susanna: I knew I wanted to do three or four, and we were trying to figure out– Normally, if it wasn’t a show that I also wrote, I would come in and do the first two or three.

As we were in the writer’s room, my thought was, I knew I wanted to do the first couple. Then there was a mid-season episode that I just was personally really connected to. I knew I wanted to do that. We were like, how can we be creative? I was going to do a middle block so I could do that.

Then, as we started breaking the finale, it sounded like it was so much fun that I called Jessica during a lunch break, and I was like, “I’m going to be really annoyed if someone else directs the finale because now I love it. Can I do it?”

She’s like, “Yes.” Anyway, I ended up basically being there the whole time more or less. It was fun having the experience of breaking the episodes and deciding there which ones. I got attached to different episodes as a director, too, which was nice.

John: Talk about your writer’s room. How did you pick writers you wanted to be in the room with you? Obviously, the two of you have a clear vision, a clear voice. Were you looking for people who complemented you in ways, things you weren’t particularly good at? What were the criteria, and how many writers did you end up ultimately bringing in?

David: It’s funny because we had this conversation a lot, and I’d been in a lot of rooms. I’ve learned a lot. I’ve learned a lot of what to do and what not to do. Also, it was a thing that would keep me up at night before a room started because it’s like I’ve been in great rooms, I’ve been in not great rooms. I’m just like, “Oh God, I have so much pressure on myself of making sure that my room is one of the good rooms.”

John: It’s not just SNL, but also looking through your credits, you’ve been in some challenging rooms.

David: I’ve been in some challenging rooms, and every room I’ve been in, I’ve learned a ton, but also, yes, some were harder than others. One thing that I do feel strongly about from just witnessing it in other rooms is that I am not a huge fan of bringing in specialists. I’m not somebody who’s like, “Okay, we have comedy in the show, we have a mystery in the show. Let’s bring in a really good mystery person. Let’s bring in a really good comedy person.” Eventually, you want people to be able to write the show, and you want people to write the show fully.

Selfishly, we just wanted to bring in writers who at least had a sensibility like us. We wanted to bring in people who had different experiences and different perspectives, and a diversity of types of people. At the end of the day, we wanted people to be able to execute a script that could both have the banter that is emblematic of our show, have the emotional grounding that is emblematic of our show, and be able to speak to the twist. I read a ton of samples, and I met with great people. They met with great people that I would have hired, and I couldn’t afford.

There was a lot of shaping to find the puzzle pieces. What was really exciting putting together is that a lot of the writers just still came about being able to have a sensibility that was shared with different skill sets. We had a writer who was just really good at making a map of who knows what, when, and the board. That’s just not how my mind works. It was just really helpful to see it. Other writers who just really could hook into the emotions of the friendship, drama, and in a way that felt very personal, that we were just able to use there. We built a really nice family, a very small group of writers in a very short amount of time, and all people that we care a lot about.

John: Did the two of you ever disagree in front of the writers?

David: Yes, of course.

Susanna: Yes, probably.

David: Susanna and I have a sibling–

Susanna: We’re very like, “Shut up. I don’t want to do that.”

David: Yes. It’s also helpful to have your ideas challenged and to be able to back it up.

Susanna: The dynamic of the room is like Dave has so much more room experience than I do. At the same time, within a hierarchy of a room, it takes a while for people to know that they can challenge the showrunner’s ideas sometimes. It’s maybe like a learning curve with people knowing that it’s going to go over well if there’s a meritocracy of ideas in the room, and that’s how David is wired. Until they learn that, there’s a certain fear around pushing back on stuff, even if we want the ideas challenged.

Weirdly, although I didn’t have as much room experience as many of the writers that were under us, for a while, it was like I was the only person sometimes who would be like, “No, no,” because other people are just not sure if they can do that in a writer’s room just because of how those rooms work. We really do share tastes pretty specifically. It’s very rare that we have a disagreement about how something is executed. It’s pretty amazing, actually. I’ve worked with a lot of people, but there’s always a sense of if I have to miss a meeting or miss something, I know you’re going to make the decisions I would make, which is a relief, I think, especially if I’m off directing something. I don’t know. I know you’ll catch the thing if I miss it.

David: It was helpful in casting, too. It was just being able to see. Clearly, we had the same vision in our head of who the characters were because we would definitely be like, “Oh, of course, it is this person.”

John: I have almost no TV writing room experience, so I have all these showrunners who come through, and they tell me their stories. A thing that’s always struck me as strange is that you hire writers based on how good they are at writing. You’re reading samples, and you want really good writers. David, you were saying you want writers who can write the whole show, and yet for the weeks and weeks of the show, they’re not writing. There’s very little writing. You’re just using their brain. Isn’t that weird? Isn’t that weird that the people aren’t writing more during the course of the writer’s room?

Susanna: Especially in this room, because we had written so much. We were like, “Okay, there’s two available episodes for all of y’all to do.”

David: Yes. It is very weird. Also, when I think about other rooms that I’ve been in and rooms that I had no hiring and firing power and rooms where I was just an observer in, I think that people who are incredibly skilled at the politics of a room or just how to have a great disposition and have everybody like them or have really good ideas, all really great. If you can’t deliver a script, you’re toast. Ultimately, that is what the hard part is.

I would say that what makes you good in a room is being in a room more, but what should get you in the room is being able to write the script. A lot of the process of running a show is going back to my job’s past and where I didn’t do a good job, or where I would have done differently, or where I can see my place in it. I remember in a very, very early job, a very famous producer who I won’t name, but he has a voice like this.

John: It was Alfred Hitchcock, wasn’t it?

David: It was Alfred Hitchcock. He gave negative feedback about me that his certainty does not match with his experience at all. I took it to heart, and I really tried to internalize it. I didn’t know any other way to be in a room, but feel that I had to feel strongly about my ideas. Now, running a show, you can’t just be like, “Meh, it can be this, it can be that.” You have to be certain. It is a process of just knowing that, aha, I have the solution. Also, I am the 17th person down on the hierarchy of this room. How do I do that? It takes time.

I think now I absolutely love helping other friends with their stuff, coming up with ideas because I have no personal investment other than just wanting to do it. It’s not like if you don’t listen to my idea that it’s going to hurt my heart. I absolutely don’t care. I’ve now done so many versions of what a room is and what breaking a story is and what fixing a story is that I have all of that ammunition. I only have that because I’ve been in a lot of rooms, and I’ve only gotten those rooms because I was able to write the script.

John: Let’s talk about what is so specific and unexpected for me in your show is the tone in that, first off, it’s a period show that almost feels like it could have been shot in the time. Some of that is how Susanna you chose to direct it. You’re going for that pillar box format, so rather than widescreen, it’s square screen. Obviously, everything looks right and feels right, and Budapest stands in really well for Moscow.

The camera movements and everything else, it tells you that we’re in a ’70s place without a shot. The show shot in that time wouldn’t have looked like that. It would have looked crappy and then this looks great. That is part of the tone. Also, the comedic tone between the actors and how the world is presented and how the stakes are presented is just a little lighter than the equivalent other spy show would be. How really did you know that and how did you anchor into that?

Susanna: I think something that we’ve always been interested in is if most spy movies are on plot most of the time, if you went home with those people at the end of the day, they would still call their moms and fight with their husbands. They would still have a life where they’re not acting in character as spy. I think there is a truth to that. We just wanted to shift where the lens is sometimes to that. It naturally has the other parts of a person’s personality that come forward when they’re not on the job in a high-stakes situation are by nature, lighter if their job is high stakes. We’re interested in that.

If it feels true and grounded enough, then it doesn’t feel like the tone is confused. I think sometimes with a mixed tone and what scares people about it is people don’t want it to feel like you’re in two different shows and hopefully if it all feels grounded.

John: You feel like you’re one show, but it’s a very specific unusual show to sort of be in. The Americans is a great show where you have spies who are in their home lives. The difference is they’re incredibly competent. They see attention, even like they’re the best of their game and they’re still struggling with it. Here you have two women who are new to all this. They’re fish out of water as they’re getting started in this. That is essentially a comedic environment to be in. They’re in over their heads, which is relatable but also fun, but just that’s not a thing we see so often. We saw it in Spy Who Dumped Me, yes.

David: Both of us bring a lot to our work because I think this is just how we are as people in the world. I consider myself a funny person. I consider most people I surround myself with as funny people. If I am in a really tense situation, if I’m going into surgery, if I’m going into a funeral, if I have some sort of crisis in my life, I don’t know that part of me is still, I’m putting it away. People are still making jokes. This is another lesson I learned from actually, when I was very briefly on Mad Men was that the rule of writing comedy in a drama versus writing comedy in a comedy is that in comedy, other people in the scene are servicing your joke.

In a drama, there could be a funny person. The other person’s purpose in that scene is not to set up your joke. People are funny because this is the world that they’re in. Twila, in our show, Haley Lu Richardson’s character, is somebody who uses humor as armor in her life. That is just such a true thing for so many people who have-

Susanna: Not for me.

[laughter]

David: -had really difficult lives as she has, that is who she is going to be, and that is how she’s going to deal with crisis. B is very neurotic, not like you. [laughs]

Susanna: Not like you.

David: She’s going to spin out, and-

John: She’s going to overthink, yes.

David: -she’s going to overthink when she is in crisis. These are just true things that these people are going to do, and it is still going to be enjoyable. The fact that these are also people who have jobs in an office, and also Moscow is a really weird place, particularly in the USSR, and that is funny. We are able to try to live in a world that still feels like the world. That the stakes are high and that when there is a life or death moment, it was very important to us that the final sequence of our pilot, which I won’t spoil, but that it should really, really feel extremely dangerous, but there are still jokes before them, and there’s still awkwardness within it. Also, you better be scared.

John: I want to circle back to something you raised through, but was actually such a good point. I want to underline it. You’re talking about Mad Men and how, in a comedy, the characters are there to set up the joke for someone to spike. In a drama, that would feel really weird. There’s just an expectation about how people can be funny in a drama that’s just so different than a comedy, and so just a really smart distinction there. Thank you for that.

David: Oh, you’re very welcome.

[laughter]

John: A few last things. Looking through the script, it has ad breaks, and you feel them in the show also. Is that something that was always there? Did you ever consider taking them out? Because people were watching on a Peacock. They might have ads. They might not have ads.

David: We didn’t write them with ad breaks. We were asked to put them in.

John: Storytelling power. At what point did you know who could actually drive scenes by themselves? Because in the pilot, you established that Andrei can drive scenes by himself, which was a surprise when that happened. Talk to me about when you decided who could hold scenes by themselves.

David: Perspective-wise? Behind the curtain. We added that scene of Andrei late. That was the last scene of the entire series that we shot because we were looking at the already cut pilot. We knew how scary Andrei was because we knew. Because we wrote in the script, this is the scariest person you’ve ever seen.

Susanna: We knew what would happen in episode two.

David: We knew what would happen in episode two, but we needed to have the audience feel that when we see him at the end of the episode, that we are scared to death of his presence. We cast a fantastic but unknown actor, Artjom Gilz. If we had cast a famous movie star who was famous for being a villain, then we would already know– if Christoff Waltz walked in, then we wouldn’t have had to do that. We gave him perspective. I think we just learned more and more about our characters and what they brought, and who gets their own scenes.

Dane, Adrian Lester plays him, and he’s being Twila’s boss. He is somebody who is elusive in a lot of the shows. Part of what he brings is mystery. We don’t know what his life is really like. We don’t know what his secrets are. We have a sense that he has secrets. We really wanted to build several episodes before we could see him be vulnerable and display some of his secrets, and we get a sense of who that man behind the curtain is. For the first chunk of the season, we want to see him as this all-knowing, unknowable person that he projects to be in Twila. The audience know that that couldn’t be true because no one is like that.

John: The rules of the world you’ve established. No one is especially competent. It’s not like they’re bumblingly competent, but they have very limited power to do things. Literally, they can’t turn on the power to their own building, which is established. Let’s wrap up by talking about Budapest because I think you probably knew that this was going to be shooting in Budapest or someplace like it from the start. It’s not a show where you’re forced to go to Budapest. That’s the place where you go to shoot.

Susanna: It wasn’t Budapest for Boston.

John: Yes. That’s the place you go to do Moscow. It’s a reasonable place. Talk to us about shooting there, pros and cons, things you loved, things you learned, shooting there in 2025.

David: Just to get it out of the way, they have a bad government, and they passed some really bad laws while we were there. That did make shooting there complicated. Our studio’s lawyers were really great and helpful and supportive in just trying to make sure that everybody felt safe because they passed some anti-gay laws while we were there. It was very actually moving at the very end of our production. The Pride parade, which was a thing that they banned. The people of the city did it anyway. It was–

Susanna: It came in from other European cities. It was the biggest. It was on the cover of the New York Times.

David: Multiple and it’s larger than it had ever been. It is a blue city in a red country. Our crew, for the most part, was very progressive and lovely, but it’s complicated.

John: Are our crews in Budapest drawn from around Europe, or really, it’s a Budapest crew?

David: They’re Hungarian.

Susanna: They’re mostly Hungarian. Yes. Typically, they have a homegrown film industry of their own that is a different thing, but then they really are home to many– the huge economic part of the country is the film and TV that shoots there, mostly American and UK productions. They have an incredible brain trust and really skilled, top-of-their-game people. Actually, some expats. Our sound guy on our show, who also did Spy Who Dumped Me, did The Martian, and did all that, but he’s an American guy. He went to UT Austin and was living out in LA, and someone said come do a movie in Budapest in the ’90s. Then he just stayed in Budapest and married a Hungarian and had a family there.

There’s a lot of people there that are like– There’s expats living there. Then it’s a city that’s very used to hosting people who want to be insulated in a bubble of a film. It’s not aggressively thrusting you into the culture if you want to be staying at the Four Seasons and whatever. Not on our budget. You can. It has those amenities. I think it’s user-friendly. At the same time, if you stay there more than a couple of weeks, you just can feel the undercurrent of what’s going on in that, politically and otherwise, in the city.

David: It’s also beautiful. There is so much aesthetic that we needed from our show that we had sets, and our sets were beautifully built, and we were on a stage. I would say we were probably 60%, 70% location. A lot of those locations felt like we were in time capsules. We were in these beautiful old buildings that just looked incredible, that we just simply would not be able to accomplish in another place.

Susanna: I had shot Small Light in Prague. We looked into a couple of places like Prague and Berlin. Yes, just as things developed. I think it would have been more expensive, and we would have had a lot less production value, and we would have probably had to send a satellite crew to Budapest anyway, or a place like it. We just decided not to do that. It’s the same argument or the same debate, I guess, about shooting in a state that passes draconian laws here. You’re like, well, I want to make my thing. I want to employ the people. I don’t want to punish the crews that are living there for living there. Also, do I want to make a statement, which seems important to do? I don’t know.

It’s really challenging to figure that out. We can’t shoot everything in. I don’t even know what country to name that isn’t problematic now, so never mind. Greenland. No, just kidding. Venezuela?

John: No.

[laughter]

John: It’s a challenging time overall. Congratulations on the show. I really just dug it.

David: Thank you.

John: As this episode’s coming out, it’s just about to debut on Peacock, right? I think it’s two days later.

David: Two days later, great. Although I’m sad Craig isn’t here, I like that on this episode, as far as television shows created by people who went to high school in Frield, New Jersey, about the USSR, we’re the top one on this episode.

John: This episode. Very nice. Let’s answer some listener questions. We have one here from Richard.

Drew: “I find I can look at a scene on a particular day and think it’s the worst thing I’ve ever written, and then two days later I pick it back up and think, ‘oh, that’s actually not that bad.’ Do you guys get this too? If so, how can we ever truly trust our own judgment?”

John: I rarely do I read something and say, oh, this is absolutely awful. Honestly, the reverse happens more like, well, I absolutely loved something when I wrote it, and then I go back and it’s like, “Oh, it’s actually not so–”

David: It’s bloated and dumb and degressive. I think what I can relate to is I finish something and I think I’m happy with it. It did what I needed to do, but I do want a set of eyes on it. I think for that, you just need to have a very small brain trust of people that you really respect and trust. If you have a partner, if you have a friend, somebody who won’t lie to you if it’s bad, will also be meaningful if they tell you, this is really good. You did a really good job.

I think sometimes that is helpful. I also think that it is a trap to keep going back and reading the scene that you wrote a few days ago, because if you are somebody whose head does that, who looks at it and then hates everything, you’re really going to have a hard time writing that next scene. Just try to finish a version of it.

Susanna: Yes, I would say try to finish it. Then at whatever point you feel comfortable hearing it read out loud, that’s really useful too. We’ve had readings of scripts that we’ve written just for ourselves in Dave’s garage. It’s really incredibly informative every time.

John: The challenge, Richard, is you’re always, you’re both the creator and the critic. At the time you were writing it, you were the creator, and you had this feeling about it. Then you’re also the critic, and that critic is a separate part of your brain. Maybe your critic is an asshole. Maybe your critic is just not good. David, you were saying earlier about how you love helping out a person, helping out a writer, just contributing. Maybe your inner critic is just not actually recognizing what’s good and how to improve it. It’s just seeing all the flaws. Maybe just cultivate that critic a little bit more. Maybe talking to some other people about their work and being gracious with them will get you to be a little bit nicer to yourself.

Question from Daniel.

Drew: “I am a sophomore screenwriting student at an LA film school. I can tell my writing does get better with every script, but I’m not sure if I have that innate talent or ability you guys always speak about. Mainly because with every script where I say, I think I got it, I in fact do not have it. How did you guys realize that you have this innate talent and how long did it take?”

Susanna: Well, just to speak to the first part, I just want to offer some wisdom from a book that I didn’t write called The Work of Art that came out recently. I think it’s Michael Cunningham who talks about the fact that he doesn’t believe that there is such a thing as innate talent. It’s just having a personality that is so obsessively committed to something being good that it will just keep drilling down into something over and over and over until it becomes good. That, to him, is what makes a person skillful, not anything that they’re innately born with. I don’t know that I agree with that completely, but it did resonate with me that there’s an obsessiveness that people have, who I admire, that I think they share.

David: I think this question is very married to the previous question. First of all, definitely the stuff I wrote when I was in college, I wouldn’t share it now as a reflection of my best work, but there were moments throughout my adolescence or into college or into my early 20s where I would write a scene or a line or have an idea and it would excite me. It would be like, “Oh, that’s it. This is what I’m trying to do.” I couldn’t imagine not having any version of that and still being excited about writing.

I’ve got to assume, I’ve got to give the question, give her the benefit of the doubt that you must have had some sort of moment that excited you enough to start doing it. From there, yes, you just have to keep getting better, but you may have it. Also, a lot of very talented people worry that they don’t have that talent. That is also a very real thing that people–

John: Feeling impostor syndrome at this point in your early career is totally natural and reasonable and makes sense. You don’t know what you’re doing, and that’s true. I hope that in entering film school, you’re a sophomore now, people must have told you, “Oh, you’re a good writer,” and you’ve had some external validation that, “Oh, you really know how to do this. This is good.” There’ve been some moments where you felt yourself like, “Oh, this was a good thing I wrote. I’m actually proud of this thing I did.” That’s foundational. That’s [unintelligible 00:42:14] that gets you going to the next one.

There’s this meme I saw this week about thinking of yourself as a verb rather than a noun, thinking of you as the person who writes rather than the end product. Maybe spend this next year really focusing on writing as the verb versus generating this thing and that thing and that thing and see if you like the actual process of doing it. We talk on the show so much about how writing sucks. It’s not a fun thing to do, but you make peace with it. You come to accept that it’s part of this process of getting to work that you’re really proud of. Maybe just focus a little bit more on that rather than the quality and see if you’re digging it.

Susanna: I also think there’s a lot of noise outside the world of just you and your laptop or your notebook or however you write, and that when the noise gets really loud, it can be really hard to just focus on the actual nugget of excitement that you have. I talk to friends a lot now as people talk about how hard the industry is, and there’s a ton of negativity in the air.

Whatever you have to do to trick your brain into just being excited about a thing and sitting down and doing the work, like John was saying, that’s the most important thing you can do, is just to stay optimistic and excited about whatever it is you’re working on and not let the outside voices or your own internal critic stop you from actually just producing things. Find the spark, whatever that is. I know that sounds like a cliché, but it’s really important [unintelligible 00:43:35]

John: In finding that spark, I think it’s also reasonable to say, if you decide this is not actually a thing you like, a thing you would enjoy, it’s okay to say no. It’s okay to find something else you really do love. You only have the one life, so do the thing that actually really excites you and you enjoy it. More than talking about an innate aptitude or something like you’re born with a certain talent, maybe you have a set of interests and things that you actually want to be spending your time doing, and if this isn’t it, that’s fine, that’s good. Go searching for what the thing is that you actually do really love.

David: This is probably a bigger conversation for a whole other episode of this show, but I’ve spent a lot of time lately wrestling with what is the point of this. Not that I think it is without a point, but as I am in a position to– I’m releasing something out into the world, which is very scary. I think about when I first moved to Los Angeles, when I first wanted to work in film and television, and I had this idea in my head that I wanted to manifest of sitting in a movie theater and seeing my name up there. That does not feel like what the goal is now, though I can’t necessarily pinpoint what it is.

I do like writing. I do like making things. It is also a thing that terrifies me. I think it is a really tricky thing for me, for all of us, people who’ve been doing this for decades, to make sense of why we’re doing it. If you are on the fence in your first years, that also might be a good sign that it– Also, just know that we are also wrestling with what the point is, because it’s complicated.

John: A question here from Carlos.

Drew: “A few weeks back, I partook in a pitching workshop with a former executive from a big production company. One thing this former executive said really rubbed me the wrong way. He told us to stop writing pilots. He said that today, a lot of executives will turn down series pitches if they have a pilot attached because they want to be involved in the development stage from the beginning. We should stop writing pilots and focus on just the story development, which broke me since writing pilots is what I enjoy most from series development. Is this something that’s actually happening? I know the situation is probably different over here in Mexico than on the other side of the border, but I still wanted to get your take on this.”

David: Really makes sense why this is a former executive.

Susanna: David and I both, we produce a lot of other writers. We try to really support a lot of pitches that are not just our own pitches. As a director, I take a lot of pitches out that I’m not the writer on. Really, every project is different. We’ve sold things that have a pilot. We’ve sold things that have a pitch. We’ve been dissuaded from having a pilot for one specific type of project that I just think it’s dangerous to get mired in any one dogmatic idea about how to do anything.

If you’re enjoying writing pilots and you’re writing things that you feel really represent your passions and that you’re good at, the worst thing that can happen is you get some producer that wants to take your show out and they say, “Okay, let’s send the pilot later. Let’s develop the story.” They’re not mutually exclusive. It’s such a tactical decision that shouldn’t be your problem. It should be the problem of the person who’s doing the selling and that should be your partner and not a person who’s trying to tell you that you’re doing it wrong. That’s my opinion.

David: I also think how can you tell someone, you as a beginner writer, you are a good writer and you are worth backing and gambling on if no one is able to read what you are executing. I think that, yes, perhaps for a very experienced writer who has a long track record, sure, you can pitch. I also think pitching is a scam, but it’s a scam that we all participate in because you are sitting in a room saying, “This is what this is going to be,” but you don’t–

I think I talked about this many, many episodes ago when we were last on Scriptnotes, is that I have taken out pitches that I just also needed to write the script first just so I knew what the characters sound like and I knew what the jokes were because I don’t really know any other way to do it. You’re just saying, “Trust me, this is what it’s going to be.” If you’re a writer, you should write.

Susanna: Also, if you are a newer writer and there isn’t something produced that people can look at as a sample of how you write and you’re just like, “I have all these ideas for the story,” they’re going to ask to see a writing sample. It’s such bad advice.

John: We don’t know where Carlos is at in his career, but the good thing about writing a pilot is that you wrote a script that can be a writing sample. Maybe this series, it’s not the best way to sell this series, but it’s something someone else can read and David and Susanna can staff you on their show. It’s a thing people can read.

Susanna: They’re going to ask to read something before they pay you to write something based on an outline of ideas of a show that doesn’t have a writing sample. I think it’s bad advice no matter where you are in your career, Carlos. That person should not have a career, and they don’t.

John: Let’s do one last question from Alex here. A common note I receive from coverage services is that I need to differentiate my character voices because they often sound the same. Do you have any tips for how to subtly differentiate character voices without falling into caricature-ish dialogue?

Susanna: Oh, we talk about this a lot.

John: What conclusions do you reach as you talk about it?

Susanna: Honestly, sometimes I think about my first writing class I took when I moved out to LA at 21 at Second City, sketch comedy writing class. We talked about the game of a character. It was for comedic writing, but we talk about it all the time. Each character has to have, in your mind, what is the laugh with and what is the laugh at about that person. My description of how I am is going to be different from my friend’s secret gossip about what’s annoying about me. You have to know what someone would say behind that person’s back, I think, and then write that person–

There are ways in which we all lack self-awareness. If there’s a certain game of that person, that person says things a million different ways because they use too many words to talk, or that person is really passive-aggressive generally. If you just have an idea about a person’s flaw, it can just make their writing specific. We try to do that in our show a lot, where we don’t want anyone to show up in a scene, even a side character in The Office, and not have a specific personality or a tick or a quirk. I don’t know.

David: First of all, it’s also not the absolute worst thing in the world if you have a really strong, specific voice. Yes, sure, that might be your style. It’s okay, particularly when you’re starting out, because every character is a version of you. I think the first time I really thought about this idea was Noah Baumbach’s first movie, Kicking and Screaming, because a character in it tells the other characters, “You all talk the same.”

Actually, they don’t. All those characters are really specific, and I actually don’t think you could interchange jokes from one character to another, but I think it was probably him being a little bit self-aware and self-conscious that these are all characters who are in a very similar life stage, who have a very–

Susanna: The same education [unintelligible 00:50:28]

John: [unintelligible 00:50:29]

David: You can also just look at how it looks on the page. Some people are more verbose. Some people speak more simply, but yes, you should never be able to move a joke from one character to another and have it work the same way. Everyone should have their own voice and meaning, and that was what I was talking about earlier, that I have this ethereal belief of writing that everything exists behind a wall and you have to find it, and I think that is truly characters. That is most vivid with characters. If you start writing their dialogue and you start seeing them, you start hearing them, then you are really going to get a sense of who they are and what their specificity is.

Susanna: The caricature thing, it’s okay if the first draft, they feel a little pushed or a little broad. You’re either dialing something up or down. This is such a basic thing to say, but if it seems like how people would actually talk, or you could imagine a person in your life who would talk or act the way a character is talking or acting, sometimes we do things that are a little over the top as people in life. Just as a director reading scripts that other people write and thinking about directing them, there’s a first script problem that David and I talk about sometimes where just the main character feels like the avatar for the writer.

It’s usually a person who’s more passively observing the world’s hypocrisies and they’re witty and funny and everyone around them is an idiot. I’m speaking in broad terms, but that character, to me, it’s not that interesting. I wouldn’t know how to tell an actor what they’re playing, really. I recently read a script where that was the problem and it was by a young writer. I just thought, “I bet this writer is in their 20s, and I bet this is what amount of life experience they’ve had, and I can feel that in the way it’s written.” In that case, it was a really funny script. There was just a glibness to the writing, and it felt like the writer was punching up their own best joke.

John: I absolutely hear you there.

Susanna: To me, usually those are the characters that, if it’s the main character leading you through the journey and that character is just a little bit of a cypher except for their elevated wit, it feels like a first script to me.

John: Specific advice for Alex here, I feel like maybe you’re having a hard time listening and hearing how people really are different. Assuming this is a fair note that you’re getting from multiple people, that your characters are all sounding the same, I think what you might try to do with your script is just cast it in your mind. Cast actual actors in all those places and imagine how those actors are actually saying those lines. Doing that may give you a sense of, “Oh, there’s actually so many more variables I could be dialing in here.”

If I cast this as Christopher Walken versus Woody Harrelson or– what different choices would make sense given who’s actually going to be doing these lines? That may give you a sense there because you might think, “Oh, no,” and I’m just impersonating someone else’s voice, but you’re not really. Words you’re writing in a script is not going to sound like that specific actor.

Susanna: Whoever plays the part is going to be–

John: They’re going to bring their own specificity, but if you write it for one specific actor, another actor can play that part and it will feel unique and different and it won’t sound like all the other characters. That may be a first good exercise for Alex to try.

Susanna: Real people too. If you have an uncle who is-

John: Oh, totally.

Susanna: -always drunk, I don’t know, whatever, a drunk uncle, whatever you have. You can just– basing it on someone, whether it’s your imagination of an actor or some person in your life that if you were asked in a private booth to talk about that person, you would be able to describe them, good and bad.

David: I think the other way that a lot of newer writers get into the trap of just making characters feel similar, which is another way of saying generic, is that their supporting players, their one-line parts are extremely generic. I would try to avoid too many police officer number twos and just a bunch of people that you are trying to differentiate between the characters who are important and the characters who aren’t. If everyone feels like they have interiority and if everyone feels like they have some sort of vividness, then it does sort of come through everywhere in your script.

I think there’s a lot of– Cameron Crowe does this really well. The Coen brothers do this really well. I would look at movies and just really focus on the people who are in it for one scene and are really popping as a great way to just specify everybody in your script.

John: It may also be helpful to look at some movies that you really enjoy and love, and watch them while you’re reading the script, and really get a sense of like, “Oh, it’s not just the actor’s performance. It really was the words on the page that got to that performance.” That may also remind you like, “Oh, yes, dialogue, it does start here, and characters are really found in these words I’m choosing to have them say.”

Susanna: I think also with the TV show, we were asked the other day what [unintelligible 00:55:20] about story engines for a show going forward. One thing about our show which circles back to your original question about tone, John, was that we have a married couple on the show and we sort of tried to make their marriage really specific even though they’re not the leads of the show and it’s not a show about a marriage. They’re just people in the office, but we ended up wanting more and more and more of them.

If every character has something in a dynamic or in their voice that feels like, “Oh, I want to watch that person in a million different situations,” then it tells a buyer or whoever, if it’s in a TV format, “I want to watch more episodes of those people,”-

John: Totally.

Susanna: -and it just encourages them to see more of a long life or whatever it is you’re pitching.

John: You look at The Office and-

Susanna: Yes, exactly.

John: -just how deep, and how full that room was of very specific voices, that you felt like, “Oh, you could follow any one of these people, and it would be incredibly entertaining.”

Susanna: I think comedies are a good way to study it too. I was going to recommend Jury Duty, which is so largely-

John: Love it.

Susanna: -improvised, but each person-

John: Yes, it’s so well done.

Susanna: -is so specific. You couldn’t swap anyone’s lines with anyone else’s lines.

John: No.

Susanna: That’s on the broader side. I don’t know what tone you’re writing, but yes, it’s useful to try to do that with everybody.

John: All right. It’s time for our one cool thing. My one cool thing is an article by Adam Mastroianni. I’ve linked to him a zillion times. I feel like I should be paid a referral fee here. This blog post you did was so useful for the start of a new year, called So You Want to De-bog Yourself. De-bogging, basically, you’re stuck in a rut. You’re facing a problem, a real-life problem, not a story problem, a real-life problem. What I think Adam is so good at doing is shining a spotlight on certain aspects of a situation and giving it a name so you can actually identify, “Oh, that’s what I’m doing.”

Two examples here. First off is stroking the problem, which is like, “I’ve got a big problem. Man, I have this big problem. I have this thing and this thing and this thing.” You’re not actually trying to solve it. You’re just stroking it. You’re basically just acknowledging there’s a problem here and you’re telling everybody about this problem, but you’re not actually trying to solve it. Stroking the problem is a thing I’m going to probably start using a lot when people express their issues to me. The second thing he calls out is the try harder fallacy, which is basically like, “Oh, man, that didn’t really work at all. You really need to try harder next time.” Almost never do you actually need to try harder.

[laughter]

John: You probably were trying as hard as you possibly could. You have no shortage of effort you put into it. You gave it everything. There’s no secret reserve of energy that you could have– It just didn’t work. You’re going to need to try a different way to do it because trying harder is not going to get there. It’s two of many examples in this really good post about getting out of the muck that you find yourself stuck in.

It’s for real life, but I guess it’s our characters too, because our characters are often trapped in situations. If we as writers are telling them to try harder or to pull themselves up by their bootstraps, that’s probably not going to actually really work. A good post and I’ll put a link in the show notes. David, what do you have for us?

David: I have a few connected cool things. My first artistic passion was drawing and painting and cartooning and illustration. My origin story as a writer at all is because I wanted to draw comic strips and political cartoons. Anything artistic, if you don’t use those muscles, they atrophy. I’ve been drawing with my children. I realize I’m not as good as I used to be. I’m a really big New Year’s resolution person. My New Year’s resolution is trying to draw or paint or something every day, either with a pencil and paper, pen and ink or my iPad. The essential iPad drawing program is Procreate.

There are a few companies that make brushes and color systems and fake paper to really emulate some beautiful mid-century comic book style or illustration style. Retro Supply and True Grit are two companies that do that. Retro Supply also has a lot of great videos on how to draw heads and color theory. That’s really great.

Then the other thing that is keeping me honest with my New Year’s resolution is the International Society of Character Artists, of which I am a paying member, does something called caricature resolution in January. Caricature artists all over the world, from beginners to masters, draw the same celebrity every day of the month-

John: Oh, that’s great.

David: -of January. You can find this by searching for the #caricatureresolution2026 on Instagram or on Facebook. They also have an Instagram page. It’s just a really fun way to just see what different character artists are doing, and also if it’s something you want to try whenever this airs, you can catch up.

John: What was today’s celebrity?

David: Today was Bette Midler.

John: Oh, great. She feels like a natural person. [crosstalk]

David: She’s got a lot of hair, a lot of big features.

John: That’s really great. The other things you recommended, those are plugins or things you put into Procreate?

David: Yes. You can download the brush packs and the fake paper and the color systems.

John: Great. I love it. Susanna, what do you have for us?

Susanna: I saw an incredible independent film-

John: Please.

Susanna: -that I wanted to talk about. It’s this movie called The Plague. It’s about 12-year-old boys at a water polo camp in the early aughts. I watched it because I’m on the jury of the DGA first-time feature committee. This time of year, I always get a packet of movies that either are just coming out, haven’t come out yet, or I just wouldn’t have necessarily heard of because they don’t necessarily have the marketing push. I so relate to that that I feel really strongly about seeing all these movies and getting excited about them and plugging them.

This one was really incredible. Just the writing and directing was really impressive and singular and specific, but also just having known kids that age at that time, just the zeitgeist is so perfectly captured.

John: That’s great.

Susanna: The music is perfect. The performances, which are almost all 12-year-olds. Joel Edgerton plays the coach. It’s about hazing and boys at that age. It’s really exceptional, so I recommend that movie highly.

John: That’s great. That is our show for this week. Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt, edited by Matthew Chilelli. Matthew did our outro this week. If you have an outro, you can send us a link to ask@johnaugust.com. We are low in the folder on listener outros, in part because, Drew, people are sending through outros that don’t have the boom, boom, boom, boom, boom. Yes, very important. Basically, that is one of our only rules.

Susanna: That is it. That is what you need to do.

David: Can you just clip John just saying that and use that as an outro?

John: Boom, boom, boom, boom, boom.

John: We definitely will. We definitely will. Send us through your outros. We’d love to have more of those, ask@johnaugust.com is also the place where you can send questions like the ones we answered today. You’ll find transcripts at johnaugust.com, along with a sign-up for our weekly newsletter called Interesting, which has lots of links to things about writing. The Scriptnotes book is out and available wherever you get books. Get your Scriptnotes book.

David: I bought it for a bunch of young writers, and they probably really enjoyed it.

John: Hooray. Fantastic. We just got the British copies here, which are slightly narrower than the US copies, which is lovely.

David: They write a little narrower.

Susanna: It’s so pretentious.

John: It’s so pretentious. You can find clips and other helpful video on our YouTube. Just search for Scriptnotes and give us a follow. You can find us on Instagram @scriptnotespodcast. We have T-shirts and hoodies and drinkware. You’ll find those at Cotton Bureau. You can find the show notes with the links to all the things we talked about today in the email you get each week as a premium subscriber. Thank you to all our premium subscribers. You make it possible for us to do this each and every week. You can sign up to become one at scriptnotes.net, where you get all those back episodes and bonus segments like the one we’re about to record on taste. Susanna, David, it’s so nice to have you back here.

Susanna: Thank you. This was really fun. Thanks so much.

[Bonus Segment]

David: Boom, boom, boom, boom, boom.

John: Okay.

Susanna: Thank you.

John: Thank you, David. Thank you for bringing us back in here. Drew asked this question. [unintelligible 01:03:38] wrote in about Taste.

Drew Marquardt: I argue often with my friends about old movies, and I get accused of having bad taste, and I was wondering if there’s a method to acquiring good taste. Also, is there a definition to good taste?

John: All right, taste. Let’s talk about taste. My initial instinct when I thought about taste is I often refer back to Ira Glass has this piece about taste where it describes how you develop taste before you develop talent. There’s this conflict between the two of them, and it goes through things. I brought this up, and then I realized, oh, Susanna, you know Ira.

Susanna: I married him, and that is how I acquired good taste.

David: That’s your good taste?
[laughter]

John: That’s how you get good taste, is marry Ira Glass.

Susanna: Yes, I’m goal-oriented. I always strive to have good taste-

John: Absolutely.

Susanna: -and I just went right to the top.

John: I knew I liked you for that. Let’s talk about taste because [unintelligible 01:04:27] concern here is that they have bad taste. It’s like, “Well, no, you have your own taste. You have your own specific–”

Susanna: Who’s saying this person has bad taste? What’s their taste?

John: That’s crazy. Developing your taste and understanding your taste is, I think, a crucial stage of development. It’s basically figuring out what do I like, and then more importantly, why do I like it? What is it about this genre, about this movie, about these things that spark for me that I really enjoy? What is it about these things that I don’t enjoy that are elements of that? It’s worth some time to think about what are those things, and what is a unique fingerprint for you that defines what is good to you?

David: I think that you go through this journey in your life where when you were young, there’s definitely things you don’t like. You look back at this movie I loved when I was seven, and it is garbage, but it definitely fell within what you enjoyed then. Maybe that is something that as you get older, because I think the next step, once you start getting a little– if you’re listening to this podcast, maybe you’re a little bit pretentious, that you feel like there is some sort of value in dismissing other people’s tastes. Looking at other people and thinking, “I like smart things, and you like dumb things,” and that is how you place it.

Then you go through this other journey where you’re like, “Oh, well, actually, some things that are just a mass appeal I really enjoy,” or, “I like this little niche,” whatever. You feel less embarrassed about your taste. You feel about your taste as not something that you want to place against other people. It’s something that’s yours. You embrace. You want to see what you like. It’s this journey that you go through to finally just feel like you can reconcile it. I think what [unintelligible 01:06:10] is probably experiencing is perhaps– I don’t know how old [unintelligible 01:06:14] is, but maybe it’s his friends being a little bit pretentious as they start to learn about their own taste.

I think it’s just really important to just try to take in as much as possible. I think it’s a boring thing about me that I really, really love The Beatles, but I really, really love The Beatles. When you explore what makes them great, they’re very good at their instruments. They’re very good at singing. They’re very good at the technical ability, but they’re not the best at all of that. They took in everything. Bob Dylan too, just took in everything that was available when they were learning and coming up and almost had this encyclopedic knowledge of all of the music that came around it and synthesized it into their own stuff.

Then it was this ability to say, “This is what is good for us,” and give each other shit to say, “Not that line, Paul, not that line, John.” Then that is basically what made The Beatles great, was their very, very refined taste. That taste doesn’t happen without really, really taking in as much as you can and taking in things that you would never think you should take in. Every little piece of it is part of what you build and build and build to what you like.

John: Taste is a crucial factor when I’m looking to work with a person or to collaborate with a person. For a project that we were working on with the company, I needed a designer. The first criteria was just taste. I knew I would find people who were very talented who could build the thing, but also taste is a crucial thing because I can’t give you taste. I have my own taste, but I couldn’t explain why this thing needs to be over there. I needed somebody with that form of taste. Susanna, you, as directing movies, you’re working with collaborators, and their taste is so crucial. They need to be able to have an eye for what it is that they respond to and ability to communicate back to you why they’re making these choices, right?

Susanna: Yes, I think judging other people’s taste is a trendy thing to do. Words like basic, that person is so basic. It just means that they have a taste for certain things that are popular and a certain aesthetic that is popular in certain parts of the country and certain class. It’s all about– there are so many things that are coded in that too, that comment. I think, ultimately, my taste is just what I’m naturally drawn to and interested in and what’s pleasing to my eyes and ears and senses. Sometimes that’s just entertainment that isn’t necessarily elevated.

I would consider myself someone who has “good taste,” at least the taste that makes sense to me. I know when things are entertainment but not nutritious entertainment and when they’re not, but I guess that I would still consider that part of my taste. It’s not a secret that’s in a closet and my taste is only the things I admit that I watched.

John: No.

Susanna: It’s hard to even say what we mean when we say taste. I think it’s mostly coded with trying to say I’m smart, I have good taste, I have an eye.

John: It’s so weird that we use the word taste, because as a sense, it’s the only one that has a sense of revulsion. It’s like, “Oh, that’s delicious,” or, “That’s revolting.” You can imagine a thing. It’s weird that we’re describing a tongue experience for what art is supposed to be.

Susanna: There’s a value judgment, right?

John: Yes.

Susanna: It’s like asking someone what’s their taste and you can answer that question free of judgment, but then people also talk about, “Oh, that person has good taste,” as though we can all agree that there’s a bad taste. I think that’s what you’re saying. It’s like– I think for me, the experience of hiring people is I want to feel aligned with what they—obviously, when you’re hiring a cinematographer, you look at their lookbooks and their decks and they show you what you want the visuals to be. For me, it’s important to talk to them and make sure that the dynamic between the two of us doesn’t make me question my own judgment.

John: Absolutely. You might find a collaborator who, what they like is completely valid, but it’s just not the thing. If you don’t want to be fighting over lens selections with your cinematographer on the set, that’s not going to do anybody any good. Neither are you going to be happy with the choices. They have to be aligned on a fundamental quality. Come back to your show, the tone is a very specific taste. If you guys weren’t aligned on that, or if you’re trying to bring in somebody who didn’t get that, it’d be a mess.

David: I think if we talk about the word taste and just the idea of– I think what we experience making the show is that when something, and I think it’s also what is such a value of a writer being on set and me being on set when Susanna’s on set or whatever, is that I know immediately when this isn’t our show, in the same way that I would know immediately if the milk has turned. You see something, you’re like, “No,” and I don’t have to explain that.

John: It’s a gut reaction. You just know it.

David: I will have to explain it often if I will have to tell a collaborator or have a conversation with an actor or get a light changed or something, but basically something is– and it is also understanding this is not an objective truth.

John: No.

David: I understand that someone else would sit and do their version of a thing and they would want the line delivered that way or they would want this shirt on or whatever, but for me, I know that it tastes wrong.

John: Yes.

Susanna: Yes.

John: The reason why we’re using this tongue sense is because it is like an inherent thing.

Susanna: It’s visceral.

John: It’s visceral. It is. It’s a feeling like, “Oh, that’s wrong.” The Henson Company, we always talk about something is muppety or it’s not muppety, and something can fit in that world or it can’t.

Susanna: It’s an essential thing about it. It’s interesting too, casting comes into play all the time, or I guess just I’m casting something right now. There’s a very specific part, and thinking about different actors playing that part, it’s like they just either essentially are that part or they’re not, no matter how good they are. I don’t know. I guess that diverges a little bit from just a conversation that’s strictly about taste, but it’s just me matching something to a specific image of it in my head, it either works or doesn’t work, and how much can an actor interpret a part and get to where I need them to get to or are they limited by something in their innate self that isn’t quite–

John: I look at some executives who’ve gone on to careers, like an executive who went to a big streamer, and his job is in a very specific division at that streamer, and it’s like, it’s not his taste. I know it’s not his taste. This is not what he’s called to do, but this is what he’s doing, and that just seems like a prison to me.

Susanna: I have so many meetings with people like that. They’re like, “Well, right now I’m working in–” eye roll, whatever.

John: It’s like, well, I don’t know how to help you here because clearly, how can you be giving good notes on these projects when it’s not a thing you like or enjoy? How am I supposed to take your notes seriously when it’s like, “Yes, you can tell me what the algorithm or what you think your bosses want, but you would never watch this movie.” I think I’ve tried to be more honest in my career over time. There’ve been projects I’ve pursued because, “Well, of course I should pursue that,” but then I was like, “It’s not really my taste. It’s not really a thing that I enjoy.”

David: It’s what’s complicated about criticism, and we can all agree that there are just some things that are just bad.

John: There are things that are bad because they’re bad executions of a bad idea.

David: Yes, I think we can agree, except for a few maybe weird tax dodge reasons. No one sets out to make something bad, but yes, there are some things that are– but then other things are just like, “That’s just not for me.” I think it’s a very internet-brained thing. I think it’s thinking that not for me means it is not for existence, and I think as I’ve gotten further away from the part of me that just wants to dismiss people who don’t have my taste, like the 20-year-old version of me, I love that things exist in the world that are not for me.

On your and other people’s recommendation, I watched the first episode of Heated Rivalry, and I was like, “I respect that show. I don’t think I’m going to keep watching that, but I think what a well-made version of a thing that is not a thing for me, and that’s fine.”

Susanna: I think that I really applaud any well-executed version of whatever the person set out to make. I’m a big fan of that, and I do appreciate it even in genres I wouldn’t gravitate towards.

John: Totally. Yes, like slasher horror is not my thing, but I can recognize like, “Oh, that’s a well-executed version of that thing.” We talked on the show some time ago about the syllabus, what movies and genres should you probably see just so you actually have an understanding of what they are? Because there may be things you just don’t know that you love because you’ve never seen them, and so I think you do need to have– part of acquiring a taste, and going back to the question here, it’s like, “You’re talking about old movies because you’re having bad taste.” Well, it’s great that you’re watching old movies, for starters, because-

Susanna: What’s this person watching?

John: -you’re getting a sense of how we got to this place right now in cinema. If there’s things you love, great. If there’s things you don’t love, also great, but try to figure out what it is about those things. We’re saying it’s a visceral reaction, a gut reaction, but there may also be some details there that would be helpful for you to understand, like why don’t I like this? That’s good.

David: This is related to it, but it is part of my moviegoing experience in the last several years, is rewatching movies I’ve loved and feel like I have enough distance from them that I’m now watching them as a new person. I had this experience with The Graduate, which was always one of my favorite movies, and it remains one of my favorite movies in the rewatch, but I connected to it in a completely different way.

As an adolescent, I related to Benjamin Braddock, and that was the prism I saw it through, and now I watch it, and I find him insufferable and think the movie is great, and the movie is commenting on that, and understanding that if, for whatever reason, at any different point in my life, I watched The Graduate and didn’t like it, that it is also just much more of a reflection of me than it is of the piece. I think we as individuals, not we in this room, because we’re all perfect, but other people have a really hard time differentiating something that just does not connect with the version of who they are at this moment and think that it is a flaw of the piece of art.

Susanna: Somebody was saying, I can’t remember who said this, but I agree, that when you watch Reality Bites as a teenage girl, which I did. Everybody loves Ethan Hawke, and then when you get older, you’re like, “That guy–“ If your friend is dating that guy, you’re like, “Don’t date that guy.” Ben Stiller has a good job. He has health insurance. That’s who you want to be with.

John: Oh, so good. Thank you for this discussion of taste.

David: Of course. Our pleasure.

Links:

  • PONIES Trailer | On Peacock January 15th
  • Susanna Fogel and David Iserson
  • The last time Susanna and David were on the show (Episode 361)
  • The Work of Art by Adam Moss
  • So You Want to De-Bog Yourself by Adam Mastroianni
  • Procreate emulators True Grit and Retro Supply Co.
  • International Society of Character Artists’ character resolution 2026
  • The Plague (2025)
  • The Taste Gap by Ira Glass
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Scriptnotes, Episode 719: When Good Enough Isn’t Enough, Transcript

January 22, 2026 Scriptnotes Transcript

The original post for this episode can be found here.

John August: Hello, and welcome. My name is John August.

Craig Mazin: My name is Craig Mazin.

John: You’re listening to Episode 719 of Scriptnotes. It’s a podcast about screenwriting and things that are interesting to screenwriters.

Today on the show, when is good enough, not enough? We’ll discuss how you decide whether a particular occasion calls for your very best work or whether you’re wasting your time. We’ll also answer listener questions on packaging, bleeping, and when you know you’ve got it, or you don’t. In our bonus segment for premium members, every year, I come into a new long list of things to do. We’ll talk through what I did last year and why, and my list for this new year.

Craig: So organized.

John: So organized. I try to be.

Craig: Yes. No, that’s you. I don’t remember the last time I made a New Year’s resolution.

John: We’ve talked about it. I used to have not resolutions but areas of interest. Archery would be my area of interest. I would do archery for a bit. I would do Austrian white wines. The thing we do now is, Mike and I make a list of 25 or 26 things that together we’re going to do over the course of the year. We do those because we’re efficient people who knock things off lists.

Craig: It’s terrifying.

John: I strongly recommend it for people. In the bonus segment, I want to talk through what those are because the key is achievable, doable things. Not like, “Do this thing more.” It’s like, “Do this thing twice.”

Craig: Right. Something that you feel like you can actually manage.

John: Yes.

Craig: That’s good. Modest expectations.

John: We’ll also talk through a– I did a year-end wrap-up of the stuff I did, including the fact that I played, I think, 42 sessions of D&D.

Craig: Not enough.

John: Not enough.

Craig: No.

John: Never enough.

Craig: No.

John: No. Let’s get you some follow-up. Drew, help us out.

Drew: Tyler writes, “I believe the origin of bumping this is from older web forums, where threads that have most recently been replied to will appear on the front page, and threads without a reply will fall down and eventually be relegated to page two.”

John: I think Tyler is exactly right. That’s where it comes from.

Craig: I think that sounds right.

John: Yes. Basically, because only the top 10 posts are listed. You go into a thread, you bump it, and then it shows up as a new thing.

Craig: Yes. Once you reply to it, it gets bumped up.

John: Yes.

Craig: That makes sense.

John: Thanks, Tyler.

Craig: Good job.

John: Nick wrote about back issues.

Drew: Yes. We were talking about Craig’s back issues in episode 716. Nick says, “I’m curious if your recent back problem listener is okay on their feet for more than 15 minutes and could possibly use a standing desk. Has Craig experimented with a standing desk at all?”

John: I don’t think I’ve ever seen you with a standing desk.

Craig: I tried.

John: You tried?

Craig: Yes. It made it worse.

John: Oh, I’m sorry.

Craig: Well, because my problem is standing.

John: Oh.

Craig: I recently received a little bit of treatment, feeling better. The thing about back issues is that it’s one of those things where everybody has advice.

John: Oh, for sure.

Craig: Everybody. Everybody’s back is different. Everybody’s problem is different. It’s just part of growing up. You know what part of growing up is? Part of growing up is getting back problems, giving back problem advice, realizing it doesn’t matter or work, and continuing to have back problems. You have to get to the other side of the advice stage. That’s when you know you’re really getting old.

John: Yes. I use a standing desk. I like it. I try to move between sitting and standing over the course of the day. I will do unimportant stuff like emails and all that kind of stuff. I’ll just do all that standing up, which is just great. Then what’s nice is psychologically, then if I’m lowering the table and sitting down to actually do real writing work, it feels like a change of state.

Craig: [crosstalk] Like you’re locking in. My version of that is to walk. Walking makes my back feel better always. I’ll take a long walk. Walking is also good because that’s where I could figure out what it is that I exactly want to write. There’s something about the movement that is– My thing is shower, walk, something that gets me out of my brain and therefore into my brain, if that makes sense. Standing is uncomfortable.

There’s a lot of people in our production office that the standing desk is now considered a chair. It’s too easy. Now there are people with the treadmill desk. There are people with the bouncy ball, keep yourself balanced desk. I just want to slap everyone.

John: I think the bouncy ball thing largely went away. You don’t see that as much. Are you still seeing it in your offices?

Craig: As I walk down the hall towards the elevators, there’s one room that has a full Pilates reformer in it.

John: Incredible.

Craig: Yes. Now that may be some sort of punishment.

John: Yes. It does look like a rack. [crosstalk]

Craig: I don’t meet out punishment on my production, but I know that somebody surely does. That may be where the bad people go.

John: Aline Brosh McKenna famously had a walking desk for a while. She had the treadmill on her desk. I think that got incorporated into Crazy Ex-Girlfriend. I think literally, they may have taken her standing desk and just moved it over to one of the chairs there.

Craig: It is both admirable and frightening. There is something too efficient.

John: There is. We have a treadmill in the gym. I will set it at a low speed and just do very unimportant, email-y work on my iPad. We have a little keyboard that’s sitting up there. I will do some stuff like that, but I don’t have it on my main desk.

Big follow-up here, so this would be more of a topic. On episode 716, we had Mike Makowsky on. One of the things he talked about was how much he wanted text blocks and screenplays to be exactly even on the left-hand and right margins.

Craig: Yes, which is startling because that’s a neurosis even I don’t have.

John: Several readers wrote in to say that they felt seen. I think we have a little more of a conversation about things we said in that episode.

Drew: Jordan in Australia writes, “I just wanted to say to Mike that he’s not alone. I have an almost overwhelming compulsion to make the lines look neat on the page. Like Mike, though, I don’t consider it a problem because it makes me focus on the exact function of each word and line rather than accepting something as good or close enough that I can leave it. If push comes to shove and I think the result is worse or that something really just can’t be changed, I’ll put up with widows and orphans. Otherwise, I like that this compulsion helps with focus and attention, especially given my ADHD.”

Craig: It strikes me that when it comes to mental behaviors, people feel a need to justify all of it as if it mattered. It’s like saying, “I have red hair.” Let me give you the reasons why I think it’s actually okay. You don’t need to because it’s there. It’s not changing. That’s what you are. You’re a redhead. This is how your brain works. Don’t even bother justifying it. Let’s say it’s not helpful. Let’s say it’s actually harmful. So what? That’s how your brain works. We’re not perfect.

John: Yes. The last word of this response was ADHD. I want to talk about the medicalization of behavior, which I think is an aspect of what we’re going to be talking about here today, too.

Craig: Yes.

John: Go for it. Chris in Germany.

Drew: “I was blown away by the part where Mike had to explain his writing OCD. I have the exact same experience when I write. To me, these even blocks of text provide some sense of comfort through stability and order. It’s more important to me that the single lines in a block are the same relative to each other. Blocks on a page can differ. I would rather incorporate an intentional mistake than have the consecutive lines at different lengths. This sometimes blocks me, and it surely always slows me down. Best practice is not to look at the screen while writing. I really wanted to let Mike know that he’s not alone here.”

John: Again, I want to be supportive and say, what works for you works for you. Also, when you say, “I would rather incorporate an intentional mistake,” that’s making me wonder whether it is actually really working for him. That’s the balance I’m trying to find here.

Craig: I don’t know why I didn’t mention this to Mike, but I wonder if, for Mike, Joran, and Chris, just going into alignment and setting it to the justified thing, where it automatically makes it all the same length.

John: Yes. I wonder if that might be– It’s not typical screenwriting, but it also–

Craig: No, but neither is this.

John: Neither is this.

Craig: You wouldn’t have to think about it so much. It would just do it automatically. I’m sure that is a setting, justified.

John: Justified, yes.

Craig: Justified. It’s interesting because we get a lot of acronyms for these things. People, again, they want to assign a problem to this. It’s ADHD, it’s OCD. I’m not saying that Joran doesn’t have ADHD or that Chris maybe doesn’t have OCD, but that’s not relevant. It’s not necessary to pathologize it, nor is it necessary to celebrate it. It just is.

John: Yes. You can acknowledge it without pathologizing it.

Craig: If you get to a place where you think, “I wish I weren’t doing this,” now we’ve got a thing. Now think about how to stop. If you’re not in that place and if you don’t know how to do this otherwise, I think I’ve mentioned on this show before, if I lost my hands, I probably would have to quit writing because I think through typing.

John: You think with your fingers.

Craig: That’s how I write, through typing. I can understand this limitation that people feel.

John: I want to just acknowledge the synchronicity, the rhyming between justify and justify. These writers want to justify their margin, but they also want to justify their actions.

Craig: That’s a theme.

John: That’s a theme.

Craig: That’s a theme.

John: Let’s wrap up with Olivia here.

Drew: “I sincerely enjoyed Episode 716. However, I did want to flag something that kept coming up. Being OCD was said at several points during the podcast when referring to the look of a screenplay page. As a writer with OCD, I feel an obligation to speak on this. OCD is a deeply debilitating mental illness without treatment. For someone with OCD, the idea of needing a script page to look a certain way would feel like a life and death decision, not just an aesthetic choice or process preference.

Also, there is so little accurate OCD representation in the media that I feel it is incredibly important for writers listening to be aware of how something like I’m so OCD or you’re so OCD can come off. Not trying to censor anyone, but I think it’s a conversation worth having.”

John: I want to first acknowledge where Olivia is right, is that per the DSM, OCD can be a debilitating, pervasive life or death situation. It can feel like it is a life-or-death situation. That’s not quite what Mike was describing there in the experience. I don’t want to diminish or trivialize a person who has a diagnosis of OCD, and that was never our intention behind this.

Craig: No, but nor would any reasonable person think so. I say this as somebody who has a kid with actual diagnosed OCD, medicated, and so on and so forth. OCD is a pretty broad diagnosis. For a lot of people, it’s the O that is far more common than the C. We think of compulsive behavior as a hallmark of OCD, but obsessive thinking, cycling thoughts, is just as prominent, if not more so. There are people that have very severe cases and people who have very mild cases.

It is a useful term to describe behaviors that we feel we are not necessarily in control over, or thoughts that are pervasive and unwanted, or cycling. There is no value. I say this as somebody who is deeply invested in promoting both the destigmatization of mental health issues and support for mentally ill people. I say this as a parent who’s gone through this. This doesn’t help. This whole thing of, “You’re not allowed to call yourself or your problem this, you have to be as sick as I am to call yourself that,” does not help.

There are people who have mild schizophrenia. It doesn’t help to tell them you’re not, or to even say, “Stop saying schizophrenic when you really mean splt–.” It doesn’t help.

John: It’s a whole different podcast to go into when it comes to the DSM and things that are in there. Whenever you talk about there being a spectrum of something that always creates an issue where resources are being directed towards people who have very mild occurrences of a thing versus severe occurrences of a thing, that’s way beyond the scope of this podcast. We are a podcast about words and language. I want to talk about the words and the language here because, really, what I think we’re getting into is that there’s a DSM definition of OCD, but there’s been semantic drift.

The meaning has changed and broadened, which is a very natural thing that happens in language. The word nostalgia used to mean PTSD. It used to mean–

Craig: The pain, algia, is pain.

John: Yes. That changed over time. Nostalgia doesn’t mean that same thing anymore. It’s understandable why the term OCD, which had a stricter clinical definition, has broadened to mean picky, fastidious, that kind of thing. It’s in that same space as that original idea, but it’s not that same original idea.

Craig: Exactly. I don’t think it would be helpful for somebody with clinical depression to hear someone go, “Oh my God, I woke up today, the weather was so bad. I was so depressed when I saw the weather outside.” It would be unhelpful for them to scold that person and say, “You’re not depressed. This is what depression is.” We all know. We actually know. We know the difference. The thought, I guess, is that somehow your validity as somebody suffering is being diminished or stolen, like stolen valor. It is not.

Nobody is diminishing anything by this. That’s why, by the way, you see what I just did? I used the phrase clinical depression. We figured out a way in language to discriminate and get it back. Clinical OCD might be a nice way to describe what you have if you have diagnosed, serious obsessive compulsive disorder, per the DSM, per your psychiatrist, maybe you’re on meds, as opposed to somebody who’s like, “I just get very OCD when I see a pillow out of place on the bed.”

Olivia, I hope you don’t think I’m being too hard on you here. This is important because I actually want people to feel free to share their understanding of their mental health without feeling like they have to hit some target that someone else is setting. I don’t think you would want somebody with even more severe OCD than you telling you, “You’re not really OCD.” That’s the problem. Anyway, I’m going to suggest the use of the word clinical.

John: Clinical is very helpful here. As we’re having this conversation, I’m realizing that over the course of these 15 years of doing this podcast, there have been terms in which we’ve been such sticklers on trying to defend, like begs the question, where we feel like, “Okay, we’re losing the actual meaning of begs the question by–”

Craig: I will never, ever, ever quit.

John: I hear that there is something inconsistent in our approach to certain terms that we’re trying to do that.

Craig: That’s just fun.

John: That’s just fun.

Craig: That’s just fun. Did you see BJ Novak? I don’t know who it was that he corrected. Maybe it was Andy Cohen. He was on a New Year’s Eve broadcast or something, and I think it was Andy Cohen, said something about there are going to be less rats in New York and [crosstalk].

John: He said fewer rats.

Craig: It’s just gorgeous.

John: It’s gorgeous.

Craig: Way to go, BJ.

John: Another term which occurred to me was that narcissist used to have an actual definition.

Craig: Oh, yes.

John: If we can’t say narcissist– you could say clinical narcissist. Someone who has a definition of narcissist, so helpful for distinguishing between just behavior we find [unintelligible 00:15:02].

Craig: Now that I’m thinking about it, we do this with every single mental illness diagnosis. We call people schizophrenic when they’re not, depressed when they’re not, anxious when they’re not. PTSD is now thrown around wildly, wildly. “I went to a restaurant. Oh my God, I saw PTSD from that waiter. He brought me the wrong thing.” It is analogizing. It’s instantly analogizing, because it’s talking about extreme forms of everyday mental processing. Yes, narcissistic, histrionic, dramatic. I’m now struggling to think of one that we don’t use.

Drew: Hysterical.

John: Hysterical.

Craig: Hysterical. You’re really not supposed to use that one. All of it. Every single word.

John: We’ll put a link in the show notes, too. There’s a sociologist, Nick Haslam, who coined concept creep, which is basically how you have a concept that just the edges of it bleed out into ways that– Trauma is one of the things he talks about there, which had a definition, which now we understand it’s broadened.

Craig: [laughs] Every time someone says trauma, I now think of the Jamie Lee Curtis supercut of her saying trauma. Have you seen this?

John: I know. It’s incredible.

Craig: It’s incredible.

John: It’s from Halloween? Where was it from?

Craig: It was from Halloween. When she was doing the press tour for Halloween, she was talking about how her character had to deal with–

John: Such a choice to tip to you and the trauma.

Craig: Yes. She went, “Trauma,” and then it’s just her saying the word trauma in 80 different– It was the Madame Morrible Wicked Witch of its time. Do you know what that is?

John: No, I don’t know Madame Morrible Wicked Witch.

Craig: Oh my God, you know what this is.

John: Oh, yes. I’m sorry. Just incredible. Love it so much. Let’s get to our marquee topic here. We can turn away from formatting on the page to the actual words themselves because so often on our show, we’re talking about getting things just right and making sure everything’s perfect. We do the three-page challenges where we’re really obsessing about the word choices, how we’re seeing the world through the words you’re choosing to put on the page.

Craig, last week, you were talking about there’s times where you will hold off delivering something because something’s just not right. You know it’s not right, and you don’t want it out there in the world when it’s not right until it meets your goals and expectation. I think the expectation there could be that in a perfect world, everything you write would be flawless. You would give them a flawless version of everything. That goes from the senior shooting this afternoon to that email to your landlord, but it’s not a perfect world. There’s not a limited time.

In many cases, it just doesn’t matter whether it’s the perfect version or not. I want to just try to find a rubric for figuring out when is it worth perfecting a thing, to finalize a thing, to polish a thing, and when is good enough, and making those choices.

Craig: I’m going to use a word now for mental health.

John: Which is?

Craig: Triggered.

John: Oh, sure. Yes.

Craig: Which I am not. Extending the use of that word, I have perfectionist issues.

John: I think you do.

Craig: I struggle with this all the time. I do know the difference between there’s something fundamentally wrong with this, and this is in a place where it’s on the putting green. It’s going to get into the hole, but I actually want people now to look at this, to gather opinions and thoughts, because it’s generally what it’s going to be. I do know the difference between that, but I will struggle writing emails, texts. I can’t leave the broken word in there. It’s a problem for me.

John: I hear you. I want to go to your process here because you talked about how Jack, who works with you, she’s your accountability buddy. Basically, you’re sending her pages. My expectation is, you have a relationship where you can send her things knowing it’s not quite perfect, because it’s part of the process is her looking at it to make a thing better.

Craig: Absolutely.

John: Same with Drew for me. It’s like, I will send stuff to Drew so he can take a look.

Craig: I won’t read the editorial commentary, but a few typos. Page six, you write in here twice in one sentence. Page nine, bottom. “Aileen about putting the bandage.” That doesn’t make any sense. Aileen. Bottom. She with two Es. Bottom, “Tracking the sound as rises up the–” That’s horrible.

John: Yes. She’s a safe person for you to share it with.

Craig: I don’t proofread for typos. It’s actually not bad for– It was about 16 pages.

John: Sure.

Craig: Actually, a typo here and there does not flip me out. For scripts, it’s more about a quality thing.

John: Yes. Example from my own life. My daughter’s in college, and so she’ll sometimes send me a link to an essay she’s written for her class. I’ll read through it, and it’ll be good. It’s solid. She’s gotten to be a really good writer. It’s fascinating to watch how much better a writer she is year after year after year. It’s a huge improvement. I’ll notice that, “Okay, you missed this argument, or that point didn’t really land, or that conclusion’s not entirely supported.” She’s like, “Uh-huh, uh-huh.” and I was like, “But does it actually matter? Because one person is going to be reading this essay.”

Her instructor’s going to be reading this essay, and no one’s ever going to read the essay again. At some point, you have to make a decision. Is it worth the extra hour of time to improve this essay on a thing you don’t care about that no one will ever actually see again, or should she be doing her work on the other nine assignments she has? Those are choices a person makes in their real life, and a person who was so perfectionist and obsessed about making every last little thing as perfect as it could be would drop other balls because they’re spending too much time on one thing.

Craig: That’s the real problem. There’s a livable, supportable, quasi-perfectionism because there is no perfectible you, as Dennis Palumbo says, where you value doing your best. I would put it under that category. Yes, if I can take another 30 minutes, and I have 30 minutes to make this better, I should. That’s a good value to have. If you find yourself incapable of letting something go to the detriment of other things, well, then you really aren’t involved in modest perfectionism. You’re just doing poorly because a bunch of things aren’t going to get done or aren’t going to get done well.

What is very hard for me, I will tell you what makes me panic the most, and I have explained this many times to the people I work with, and it is particularly an issue when I’m directing. If I feel like I don’t have a sufficient amount of time to do my best work, I then start to feel like I’m dying because the gap between what I can do and what I’m allowed to do is too big, and I feel sick. If I have the time I need, and it’s not an unlimited amount of time, hit my satisfaction thing, and I can’t explain why that is. Probably has to do with some trauma [chuckles].

John: Yes, but you also have 30 years of experience of knowing yourself, knowing your habits, knowing how your work gets done. That’s reasonable. I get that, and I feel that too. There’s times where I’m not panicking because I know I can actually do this in the time, and if the time suddenly becomes too short, then I do start to worry.

Craig: It is also interesting how if you know going into something, before you even start contemplating what you want to do, that there’s only this much time. That’s great.

John: Weekly assignments. We’ve definitely done that, where it’s like, “I know I can’t fix everything. I can move this from this to that.”

Craig: Then it’s just, “Hey, let’s do– Everything’s getting better. We’re just making it better as we go,” and everyone will be shocked by how much you can get done anyway. I don’t panic over those situations, but this is a hard thing to figure out. I wonder whether it’s, “Okay, is good enough good enough,” or is it really about learning how to manage and prioritize the time you have to deliver the quality you can?

John: Yes, that’s fair. Let’s talk through some– I call it a rubric, but basically some decision points you’re going to have about whether you’re giving everything you have to this thing or you don’t need to be doing that. Audience, public versus private. We just went through this with Jack because it’s a private audience. You’re not embarrassed by typos in anything you’re sending to Jack because that’s the relationship you have. She’s meant to be looking at that.

Craig: Exactly.

John: If you’re sharing it with one close friend, you may be a little more concerned about those typos, but you’re not going to obsess about them. If something is public, it really does represent you out there in the world. We’ve often talked about how this is the manifestation of you out there in that space, and you want to make sure that it’s the best version of that. That’s why we encourage people to put their work out there so people can read it and do stuff. At a certain point, if you have older stuff of yours that isn’t really you now, pull it away.

Craig: Yes, if you can, and if you want to. We’ve talked about the illusion of intentionality before, the presumption that everything we see on screen is there because it’s exactly what we wanted to be there, when in fact, half the time, it’s what we got. That can haunt you because if you do put something out and you just didn’t have enough time and it wasn’t quite what you wanted, no one will know or give a damn. They will assume that’s exactly what you wanted, and you will be judged by it, and it will last until the end of written history. [laughs]

John: One of the actors, when he had a rivalry with Connor Storrie, there’s videos that came up. He became famous very quickly.

Craig: I saw this video.

John: He was a kid. It was this young little kid who’s like, “I’m an actor boy, da, da, da. I’m going to be famous and all that stuff.” What I appreciate about him is that he’s like, “Yes, I could have taken him down, but I’ve learned to love that kid.”

Craig: That’s the most healthy thing of all. By the way, that video was adorable. Of all the videos that you could make as a– he seemed like what? Maybe he was 14 or something.

John: Yes, or even younger, maybe.

Craig: Yes, 12. Of all the videos you could make of yourself at 12 or 13, that was the least objectionable, most wholesome, cute, and correct prediction of what you might be when you grow up. Oh my God, I’ll tell you, that hockey show, now my wife is obsessed with the hockey show.

John: Of course.

Craig: Jessica is obsessed with the hockey show.

John: My one cool thing that’s a spoiler, let’s just say there’s a woman who goes through and does– She’s a cinematographer who does breakdowns of it, and it’s phenomenal.

Craig: This hockey show is–

John: It’s great.

Craig: I’m putting it on my list.

John: We talked about audience, public versus private. Next, I would say–

Craig: I’m just thinking about them listening to this, going, “Hockey show?”

John: Hockey show.

Craig: “Hockey show, Craig? There’s a name for it. It’s a phenomenon.”

John: The hockey show.

Craig: “Dude, we didn’t call your show Mushroom Show.” Sorry. What’s it called again? He did Rivalry.

John: Yes, exactly. It’s a hard thing to say.

Craig: Rivalry is a tough word.

John: It’s a hard word.

Craig: Rivalry.

John: English doesn’t do that a lot.

Craig: L to R is tough.

John: We talked about audience, public versus private. Next, I would say, what stage is it? Is it a proof of concept versus a final? One of the things I admire so much about Mike Birbiglia, and this is true of a lot of stand-up comics, is they will just test and try material all the time. He’s going out, and he’s doing a stand-up, he’s trying new jokes, he’s seeing how they work, he’s recording the show, and he’s hearing, “What did I do? What was the reaction?” That is so important.

He’s not afraid to try a joke that’s not really formed, so he can figure it out. Even today, we have video cameras up here because we are testing a proof of concept to see how we’re going to do this show on video, if we ever decided to do it on video. No one’s ever going to see this. This is just a proof of concept.

Craig: Great.

John: I love that.

Craig: I didn’t put my face on this morning.

John: You didn’t have hair and makeup this morning.

Craig: My grandmother used to say that. “I have put my face on.”

John: There’s a product we’re launching next month or two.

Craig: Cosmetic?

John: Exactly, a cosmetic product. This is for you.

Craig: It’s a concealer.

John: It’s a software thing we’re launching. In trying to figure out how to do this, we were really clear about what is the scope of the minimum viable product. What is the simplest version of this that is useful, that we can see, that we can test, because we know that there’s things we’re not going to understand until we actually have a thing that we can try.

Craig: It interacts with the people on the other end of the relationship.

John: Third criteria here is context. What is the expectation of the person getting the message, or on the other side of this thing? I would stack this up from lowest expectation to highest expectation. A text message, your expectations of perfection in a text message are not as high.

Craig: They’re incredibly high.

John: For you, they are. For an email, incredibly high.

Craig: Incredibly high.

John: A tweet or a social blog post.

Craig: I don’t do those anymore.

John: A script, much higher.

Craig: The highest.

John: I would say for a book, even higher, higher, higher, because the number of times we had maybe six different proofreaders of the book and different editors going through it, we still missed the Star Trek deck versus bridge, but we got rid of so many typos. People who have the galley copies, even after we went through a bunch of those things, we still found typos in those.

Craig: Those will be worth more.

John: Absolutely, collector’s items.

Craig: Yes.

John: I think as you go up this chain, unless you’re Craig, the expectations of perfection increase.

Craig: Don’t be like me.

John: Don’t be like you.

Craig: Don’t be like me. I do think about this sometimes, how it is a waste of time, but also it makes me feel good.

John: Yes, I get that. After we get through the criteria, I want to go through the pros and cons of maybe you should obsess a little bit. I don’t know. Obsess is a loaded word, but maybe you should focus in on a little–

Craig: No. We can use these words. I’m giving us permission.

John: Focus in on these things. What we’re reading off of the Workflowy has a very low expectation of polish. There’s just typos all over it, which is fine.

Craig: It’s pretty darn good, though. I have to say the Workflowy generally is really good.

John: Some of those words missing. No one’s going to read it other than we’re going to look at it.

Craig: Right. I never look at this and think, “Oh, John doesn’t care. It’s sloppy. Drew doesn’t know how to spell.” It does exactly what it’s supposed to do. It’s an outline.

John: It’s an outline.

Craig: It’s fine. I think this is a perfectly good way of doing things.

John: You just said, “Is it worth it?” That, I would say, is the cost-benefit analysis. If you were to refine and optimize this thing, is the value you would get out of that time and effort really worth it for doing the work? The flip of that is you might satisfy this. You might compromise if the expected outcome is lower than what you would have put into it. It’s basically like you’re spending mental money to do a thing or time to do a thing, and is it really worth it to try it?

Craig: One of the interesting things about our brains is that we apply values to these things that are actually disconnected from reality.

John: Yes, we do.

Craig: I think, “Okay, I look at an email, it’s a mess, it must be correct to a point that I decide, ‘Ah, this is good.'” Somebody else out there would look at it and say, “Oh, no, there’s 12 more layers of good that need to occur. To that person, my value system is broken, and also, I just don’t care enough. When I got to the point where I thought it was correct, I believe that I indeed had exhausted everything. I’d done everything I could to make it great, and neither I, nor the person who wrote the shabby email, nor the person who wrote the hyper-perfect email are correct.

It is all disconnected from any metaphysical value. It is just perception. It’s just what makes our minds go click happy. There are people whose minds never go click happy when they correct a typo, ever. Most people commenting on YouTube videos don’t seem to care.

John: Absolutely. Mashing keyboard, yes.

Craig: Yes. What’s the famous one? How is Babby Made? Do you know that one?

John: Yes, absolutely.

Craig: How is Babby Made? Here’s how babbies are made. I try to just keep it in the realm of either I feel good, or I don’t feel good. I don’t really understand why my feel-good is set where it is. I assume it’s some combination of just innate mannerisms and trauma. I’d love that.

John: There are times where I realize I have spent half an hour on this email that a person will spend 10 seconds reading.

Craig: Oh, yes. I don’t care because that time feels good. It feels good. Yes, there’s just something about it, but that’s why we’re writers.

John: That’s why we’re writers.

Craig: Honestly.

John: We shouldn’t put everything down in the trivial email category. On this show, I think we’re constantly talking about how important it is actually to perfect and polish the scripts that you’re doing to deliver. That’s why we obsess of the three-page challenges. Yet there are still things, even in the course of a 120-page script, that are probably not worth obsessing over and perfecting to a degree that there may not be any benefit to that tertiary character who appears in one scene.

Is that exactly the right name for them? Is it a name that we’re not even going to actually hear a person say aloud? We could spend another hour figuring out the better name for it, but is it going to improve the final product?

Craig: Things like that come down to, “All right, this is the tiniest pebble in my shoe. Do I need to unlace my shoe, take my shoe off, get it back on?” No, unless I’m about to walk a long time, in which case it’s going to make me insane. Sometimes a name is like a pebble. Then I’m on page 30, and that person comes back, and I’m like, “Oh my God, I can’t believe I’m typing this stupid name again. I can’t. This name is not right. That’s not who they are.”

We can only do what we can do because what we do, as writers, creative artists who are building stuff out of nothing but words, is a mental exercise that is deformed and then beautifully reformed. It’s a mess in there. It’s a mess. If the biggest problem we have is justifying the margins, dwelling a little bit too long, I guess what I’m saying is, if it’s bothering you that it’s not good enough, fix it. If it’s not, don’t. I think that’s really what it comes down to.

John: I’m going to put an asterisk there because if a trivial thing is bothering you so much that you’re not getting work done, that you’re actually not going to be able to be a screenwriter, then there’s something to change there.

Craig: Then you need therapy. It’s not going to happen because you go, “I shouldn’t be bothered by this.” Yes, you shouldn’t be.

John: John’s the wrong name for this character.

Craig: Yes, but you are. What are you going to do?

John: Last criteria, I would say, which is closely related to cost-benefit, but stakes. How much does it actually matter? If it’s the best version, the worst version, does it matter at all? What is the upside of success? What is the cost of failure? For a lot of things, it’s incredibly low, and yet some emails actually are very high stakes. You understand why you’re putting all your effort into it. A text to my brother, it’s just like the stakes aren’t that high.

Craig: The stakes are not that high. I think sometimes of Steve Jobs introducing the iPhone, which is worth rewatching. It’s one of the greatest pieces of video that exists, as far as I’m concerned, because it is a living document of a moment that changed the world. It’s a presentation. Basically, it’s just a big PowerPoint, is really what it is. It’s a fancy PowerPoint, and it’s spot on. When he needs something to pop up, it pops up. It has been timed out. He has planned it out. He has his stuff memorized.

It is thought through down to the tiniest bit, and it works great. Then, if you would, after you watch that, watch the video of Elon Musk introducing the Cybertruck in which he insists that the glass is shatterproof and bulletproof, and has a guy throw a heavy weight at it, and it absolutely shatters the glass.

John: That is incredible.

Craig: Did they not try that first? It is so sloppy. When the stakes are high, perfect it.

John: Let’s talk in that general sense of over-optimization or over-satisficing. Satisficing, I’m using this being like, “It’s good enough.”

Craig: What is satisficing?

John: Satisficing, you never ever heard that term?

Craig: No.

John: Satisficing is basically choosing the first acceptable alternative.

Craig: Oh, it’s a blend of satisfy and suffice.

John: Oh, you hadn’t heard of satisficing?

Craig: No.

John: I think satisficing is a really good word. You do it all the time without realizing it. It’s like, “Which chips do you want?” “The first one that works, do.” I’m often doing that on a menu at a restaurant.

Craig: You’re satisficing.

John: I’m like, “That’s good enough. I’m going to be happy with it.” I might be happier because I didn’t spend a bunch of time worrying about the choice.

Craig: Got it. Satisficing, I like that.

John: I think there’s a danger to satisficing when you shouldn’t. Let’s talk about over-optimization first. This thing’s all what I’m thinking, but you can add to it. We said you might miss opportunities because you’re so busy futzing with something. Basically, you’re not doing other work. You’re missing out on other chances.

Craig: If you are in a spot where, think of the time you have, think of the goals, think of the stakes, plan it, you know you need a certain amount of time to do this, and this is really important, don’t eat into that time.

John: No.

Craig: If you have extra time and you want to sit there and–

John: Love it.

Craig: Great, go for it, but you got to know your time.

John: You may simply never finish it. Time may just extend out forever. You can also burn out on a project because I feel like you have a certain amount of time in which your brain is willing to commit itself to a project, and if you’re just stuck in the middle of it for too long, you can just burn out.

Craig: It’s true. I don’t know if I’ve ever mentioned this on the show. Alec Berg and I were talking once. He was cleaning out his place when they were moving, and he found this box of these old scripts that were printed out from when he had just started in the business, so 1991. It was like he didn’t remember any of it. He was reading another him.

John: That’s great.

Craig: He read it, and his thought was, “This is not anywhere near as good as I am now. There’s a freedom to it. It is unburdened by the curse of knowledge, self-expectation, perfectionism, the echoes of failure.” Until you get burned, you don’t know what burned is.

John: There’s a self-defense you can write into your things because you know all the things that are coming, so you’re anticipatory doing stuff.

Craig: Yes, and because you know what it feels like to write something that wasn’t good enough, so you can’t let yourself do that. If you go too far down that road, then you can paralyze.

John: I think one of the real issues with over-optimization is you can get locked in on a bad idea. You might have written a scene so beautiful and so perfect that you can’t touch it again when a note comes that you actually do have to address. You wrote this thing for a location that you no longer have. It can be so tough because you’ve spent so much time and energy on it. You’re so invested in this one version of it.

Craig: Yes. I get caught in loops sometimes. Recently, I got stuck in a loop on something and wrote and then realized, “Okay, this doesn’t belong here. I’m moving it to a different place,” for an episode, in fact. I was lost in that loop for a while. There is a slight panic that kicks in of, “Uh-oh.”

It’s like driving across country. You have plenty of time. Let’s say I’m going to give you a week to drive across the country. On any given day, you can either drive all day or you can not.

Along the way, you have to sometimes experience those days where you pull over, and you don’t drive much. Then you just know on some other days, “Here we go, wake up, don’t stop.” That’s part of the sweet misery of what we do.

John: This last point with over-optimization, I’d say it’s really perfectionism in general. You may be trying to control things that are out of your control. I definitely see that with screenwriters. They will make something so flawless and perfect because they actually want this movie that’s in their head to exist in the world. You have to recognize that that’s not within the scope of your power. You’re doing everything you can to communicate what this vision is you have for the movie, but you cannot will it into existence just through the words you’re typing and through all the refining you’re doing there.

Craig: It’s absolutely true. There’s two mes. There’s the me that writes the script, who is fastidious and a perfectionist. Then, when I’m directing, at some point, I’ll go, “Why don’t we do this?” and then the script supervisor will say, “Just in the script.” Then I’ll say, “Oh, yes. Oh, yes. Actually, that would be better because I’d already–” but the me there, it’s like I didn’t write it. It’s a disconnection.

John: Director Craig is constantly compromising. There’s always shots that are on your shot list you’re never going to get to.

Craig: That’s so true. It’s so true.

John: I would say give writer Craig a little of that grace.

Craig: No, writer Craig is better than director Craig because writer Craig thought it all through. Director Craig needs to pay more attention, just like all directors do, to the script. That’s really what happens is that I end up thinking to myself, I’m doing the thing that would make me angry that directors would do, where they would focus on everything in front of them and forget about the bigger picture or all the details on the page.

John: Except that director Craig is dealing with not just what writer Craig delivered, but also the realities of what’s in front of the camera and behind the camera.

Craig: That is all true. That is all true. You know what? Maybe Craig should just give himself a break.

John: I think that’s what we’re coming down to.

Craig: All right.[00:39:38]

John: Let’s talk about the dangers of oversatisfying, because, in the initial example, I was talking about how–

Craig: Oversatisfying.

John: Sometimes it’s like, “That’s good enough.” I was talking about how an essay you’re writing for a class that you don’t care about, that you’re never going to read again, maybe it’s actually not worth perfecting. If you were to do that too much, that’s just laziness, basically. You might lose your sense of taste. You’re not used to seeing your best writing, so you might not always be able to hit your best writing. You might forget what your best writing even looks like.

Craig: You may also find yourself getting passed by people that are not faster than you. It’s just that you’re not running as fast as you can, and this will become an uncomfortable feeling. When I say passed, I don’t necessarily mean, oh, they’re going to make more money or something, but they’re suddenly achieving things that you wanted to achieve that you’re not because there is value in pursuing the best you can do. You won’t get there. Pursuing it as a value is a positive thing. If you have the time to make the essay better, even if it doesn’t matter, take the time to make it better. It will make you better.

John: I think that was one of the good things about blogging when I was doing it more often, is that I was basically refining and perfecting those arguments, and it’s learning how to think and how to express those ideas. Writing is exercise, and you’re building mental muscle strength to do that. We’ve also talked about how you might say like, “Oh, it’s private,” or “No one’s ever going to read this,” but you don’t really know that. Things will be out there in the world, and it’s still going to be potentially seen by somebody. I think you’ve stressed this in terms of your collaborations is you are setting an example for everyone else you’re working with. If they see that you’re delivering 75%, why should they give you 100%?

Craig: Oh, boy, is that a thing. I talk to people on the crew about this because they are always working on something. I work on a show. They work on shows. Some of them do say there is a thing where you are on a show, and you can just tell that the people who made it sort of care, then it’s a 70% vibe that they’re like, “It’s a job. Got to do it. I’m supposed to do it. Nobody really cares about the show, but we’re working.” Then you don’t necessarily– why beat yourself up? Why lay it all out there? It’s part of the culture of anything is, “How serious are we taking this?”

John: Now, let’s wrap this up with a conversation about vomit drafts because neither you or I are vomit draft people, but many of our listeners and also friends or colleagues of ours really believe in just like you’ve got to get something on the page first, and then we’ll have whatever you do to get something out, and then you can edit and refine it. I want to talk through the pros and cons and arguments for that, and why people may want to consider it, but also what our concerns were that– the pro arguments for the vomit draft were you just get the thing out as quickly as you possibly can. You don’t censor yourself. You don’t edit yourself. By suspending that internal critic, you’re actually just able to explore, to find out about stuff.

Some people really cannot see the movie until they can have a thing on the page that they can see. They make discoveries along the way. You can’t edit what doesn’t exist. A natural part of the editing process, sometimes that’s writing the whole thing. Kevin Williamson famously vomited-drafted Scream and just wrote it all in a fugue state.

Craig: Awesome.

John: It’s awesome. It’s great. The con arguments I would say is that I watch these videos where, if you’ve seen bricklayer videos or when you’re building something up from the base, if that first foundation isn’t strong and you’re trying to build something up, it gets wonky and crazy, and so it’s going to collapse and fall over. It can compound the fundamental flaws of something is that if you start writing without a plan, without trying to make sure every scene actually really works, it could just go 19 different ways haywire.

Craig: It’s hard for me to criticize people who do this because they must do it for a reason. It’s not how my mind works. I can certainly see the pluses and minuses of the not vomit draft. We’ve talked about a lot of the minuses. It is meticulous. It takes longer. You can find yourself mentally strangulated as you go. You can feel trapped. Sometimes you don’t finish.

John: No.

Craig: On the plus side, though, there is an enormous amount of intention and thought and cohesion. The thing about the vomit draft that scares me is what I would imagine to be just a general lack of cohesion. I’m not sure how you can vomit page 70 in a way that is reflected and made somehow inevitable and yet surprising based on what happened on page 20. It feels like it would be very much and then, and then, and then, and then, and very dialoguey or very actiony. There are dangers there that I can imagine, but I’m only imagining them because I’ve never done it, and I don’t know how to do it, and I’m never going to do it.

John: I’ll say, over the course of the podcast, we’ve talked with alternative strategies that I think are trying to do some of the things that a vomit draft does. When I don’t want to write a scene, I will write a different scene in the movie, but I’ll write a really good version of that, of a different scene in the movie, because I know what the scenes are in the movie.

Craig: Sure.

John: Katie Silverman, she’ll do basically a vomit draft, but with things that are not in the movie, she’ll just have the characters start talking so she can fully understand the characters and what the world feels like. That’s great. Maybe a thing people want to try independent of a vomit draft-

Craig: It’s a good exercise.

John: -is basically just getting stuff, words down on paper. I would say the other thing I noticed about vomit drafts is it’s so easy to fall in love with that first draft. The emotional attachment to the thing you did, and you have a sunk cost fallacy, but also you can fall in love with the temp music. You’ve all run into this, which is just like it’s working and it’s feeling good, and so you don’t want to change anything up.

Craig: Yes. What you do is you attach the feeling of success that you had as you were barfing to the barf, but other people just see barf. They don’t see or experience your feeling of purging and relief. That is important. That’s one positive thing that comes out of the meticulous plan draft is you don’t have that. You don’t get overattached to things. Everything is interrogated, examined, questioned, acid-tested, and so on.

John: I guess my final advice here is with vomit drafts and the good enough, not good enough, is if you’re struggling to get started, if you’re struggling with blank page anxiety, getting words on the page is probably a good first step for you, whether that becomes a full vomit draft or just like the roughest sketches of a scene. Alina often describes it as like walking into the ocean and letting the water get up to your ankles. It’s like, oh, suddenly you’re swimming.

Maybe vomit draft if you are often abandoning projects before you complete them, because I think sometimes we talk about burnout and that perfectionism burnout, like you just– the joy of completing a thing may be useful for you, and so the vomit draft may be the way to get there.

Craig: It’s worth trying, right? If one method isn’t working, try it. What’s the worst that can happen? You stop. It doesn’t work. You don’t get past page 3. I don’t know, but try things.

John: If you’ve tried vomit drafts and you’re not happy with them, I think the reason may be because you’re done with– the vomit draft, you can feel like, “Well, I’m done. I want to go on to the next thing.” You may have green pasture envy where it’s like, “Oh, I want to do this other thing instead.” You never actually go back and edit and finish that thing. That may be a reason why you actually need to scene by scene really do the best version of each of these scenes and really perfect a thing because then you’ll actually have the experience of what it feels like to have a really good script that you’re proud of.

Craig: Maybe people need to try both.

John: Yes. I’m surprised we got you there, Craig.

Craig: Yes. Give yourself a chance to see if– the whole concept of vomit draft is vomit. You’re not being held. It is vomit. Everybody knows this isn’t what we’re shooting. If you are maybe somebody that tends toward that too much, try the other method. Try meticulous planning.

John: I want to acknowledge that this is exactly counter to the advice that Scott Frank gave. It’s like, “Don’t move until you see it.”

Craig: That’s for me.

John: That’s for you.

Craig: That’s how I think. Don’t move until you see it. I know that that’s what works for me. Scott, God bless him. Scott’s way is the way that everybody must do it. I love that about Scott, but I am more interested, I suppose, in results because I know that great writers write differently. I’m pretty sure that– I know Scott and I don’t write the same way because he writes these very, very long drafts that he expects will be cut down.

John: There’s really not vomit drafts, but they’re more expansive than the form will actually allow.

Craig: They are unfettered by the restraints of the medium-

John: Yes, they are.

Craig: -which is awesome because it means that everybody can go through and say, “Okay, story, characters. This moment, this moment, this moment. Now, this is too big. We asked you to build a 12-seat plane. This is an incredible jumbo jet. How can we get all the best parts of the jumbo jet into the 12-seater?” and then he does. Point being, we all have our ways there. Find your way there. If your way there currently is not working, try a different way there.

John: Let’s answer some of your questions. We have one here from Alan.

Drew: ”Back in 2019, there was a huge fight between the WGA and the talent agencies over packaging. After everyone fired their agents, the agencies eventually signed an agreement that went into effect in June of 2022. Now, two and a half years later, has there been any real on-the-ground change, or have agencies found ways to work around the agreement and still offer packages to studios?”

John: Craig, I’m curious what you think about what has happened in two and a half years.

Craig: I don’t think that the agencies have found significant ways to work around the agreement. Here’s what happened. It definitely accelerated the shrinking of the number of agencies available to us, so conglomeration occurred.

John: Do you think that would have been different without the agency deal?

Craig: Yes.

John: Do you think there would have been more small agencies or what would–

Craig: Oh, I think ICM would still be there because what happens, once you took away a big part of what their income was, they were now exposed and vulnerable. We lost some diversity of agencies. CAA and WME arguably got more powerful. It’s almost like we were in a fight over what a beach should look like, and then a tsunami came, so it’s hard to tell.

John: There’s no counterfactual. We can’t know what the world would have been like if the agency campaign hadn’t happened. If agencies could still package the way they were packaging before, which we see, for newer listeners, we don’t understand, packaging is when you put together a writer with their script and a director and maybe some stars and sell that to a TV production company, sometimes a movie studio, but really it’s a TV thing. Agencies would do that, and then they would take a fee, and rather than charging their clients commission, they would take a percentage of the budget on every episode of a thing.

Craig: Which meant that they were essentially incentivized by the companies, not their own clients, and that was part of the problem.

John: Packaging still happens, but now they only get the commissions on their clients rather than a fee.

Craig: What we were hoping would happen might have happened, but shortly after that, the streaming wars accelerated dramatically. The massive television bubble began to burst, and huge tectonic changes occurred in our industry to the extent that I don’t know what this did because, like I said, it’s been tsunamied over by–

John: It wasn’t the biggest change in the industry by far.

Craig: No.

John: Much bigger things affected stuff, and so we can’t know quite what’s there. Also, the agencies themselves, we talk about CIA and WME, they entered into a lot of different spaces, and they were already starting to move into different things, representing sports, music, and other things, but just stuff that seems to have nothing to do with us. I think one of our concerns going into the campaign was that they weren’t prioritizing the actual needs of their clients, and the way they make their money isn’t off of us. That’s the big agency that is still kind of true. The money they’re making in the entertainment industry is off of us.

Craig: Yes.

John: That’s good.

Craig: That’s why they fight over clients tooth and nail. They would certainly argue that we are valuable to them.

John: I would say that as we started in the industry, the fighting over clients was a much bigger part of the story and drama of Hollywood, and it really isn’t a big deal now.

Craig: Well, because people don’t go anywhere because there’s fewer places to go.

John: There are fewer big places to go. It’s true.

Craig: When we started, there were CAA, UTA, ICM, William Morris, and there was Endeavor, and there was Gersh, which still is in Paradigm, and– what’s the artists and whatever? Anyway, and now it’s like there’s WME, CIA, UTA, then there’s a tier below, and then there’s nothing, and you don’t get moved around a lot because you don’t move– Even the agents don’t move around a lot anymore.

John: The other thing which changed, which had started before this, but certainly accelerated during it, is writers and directors and actors who just have managers who don’t have agents at all anymore, or who are also British people who have their UK agent who’s really up-prepping them in the US as well. I’ve seen that change happen.

Craig: Yes, the management thing is a big one, and management is worse. We were fighting the agencies over packaging. That’s all managers do. That is literally what they do. They exist to be producers on projects, which you can’t be as an agent, to not charge their clients commission, instead get all their money from the production. I don’t understand why–

John: As you’ve talked about, coming out of this, I signed a manager for the first time, and what’s been helpful as a highway manager is to have a person who can talk to anybody, who can call anybody because there’s no vested interest in their own agency. They have relationships that are different, which has been really, really helpful.

Craig: Yes, it really just comes down to who do they work for in the end.

John: Then they’ve been working for me.

Craig: That’s good.

John: The other thing which did change in the agency campaign, which is worth acknowledging, is that agencies now have to send every writer’s contract through to the guild, and so the guild has so much more information about every writer’s deal. To know how many weeks was this writer employed in this room, how many one-step writers have deals, that’s actually been helpful, even though, theoretically, all writers were supposed to send in–

Craig: We were supposed to per– yes. My question is, what are we able to do with all that data, exactly, other than look at it?

John: We can make choices in the negotiating cycle about what we’re going to do for things. The other thing we’ve done is WJA enforcement, contract enforcement, which is something I don’t know you like. We now know this writer had a guaranteed step and was not paid for this step. What happened here? We can actually proactively investigate these things.

Craig: I’d love to ask their lawyer, first and foremost, “Hey, why didn’t you do your job?”

John: Exactly.

Craig: That’s kind of crazy.

John: Yes.

Craig: I guess the long answer, short, Alan, for me is hard to tell what impact this has had. I think there have been positives and negatives. I do know that quite a few people were upset because, once this ended, and you could go back to your agent, their agent said, “No, we’re good. We don’t want you back.” I think a lot of those people were not being well-served by that agent to begin with, at that point, then.

John: Absolutely.

Craig: I think they were just hearing from their long-distance girlfriend that it was over and that it was better because now they needed to find a representative that actually cared about them.

John: I think the overall goal of aligning incentives on a purely logical level happened, but what impact did that have on individual writers’ careers? Harder to say.

Craig: You know what? It just occurred to me that, maybe, the real value that we got out of that was that, regardless of what the companies thought of what we did, it appeared that we were committed to doing stuff, and that there was a unity there, and there was some sense of aggression. Now, did that ultimately matter? No, because then they said, “Fine, go on strike anyway,” and then we did. Maybe it was just even for our own internal sake that we thought, oh, we could do a thing and not fall apart, [unintelligible 00:58:19]

John: Then after that, we did the strike, and we did not fall apart.

Craig: We did not fall apart, yes.

John: Let’s answer one more question on bleeping. Moose has a question about bleeping.

Drew: Moose writes, “I’m an audio professional. I noticed that in episodes where someone drops a naughty word, you have the disclaimer at the beginning, and I’m wondering why you just don’t bleep out the offending words.”

John: How the sausage is made here, Craig and I don’t swear on the show if we can help it. We won’t–

Craig: I did today once.

John: Sometimes, if it’s a very easy lift, Matthew just snips it out, and you never notice it was there. Especially when we have guests on, and they swear, it’s just hard to take that stuff out. We want it to be authentic to what the experience was to have it in person.

Craig: We’re adults.

John: We’re adults. We’re making this podcast for adults, but also, your kids can be in the car, and so we’re just mindful of that. That’s why we put the little warning on, if there’s going to be some bad words.

Craig: Just culturally, it is so much different now than it used to be. When we were kids, saying the F-word was like, “Oh my God.” You would get sent to the principal. No one seems to give an F anymore. It’s like we have friends with younger kids.

It’s like language is not– because of the internet, I think, it’s just become less taboo. Context. There are words that we used to throw around that you wouldn’t get sent to the principal for, that now you do get sent to the principal for.

Also, context, if you’re using words in a sexual manner or something like that. Bleeping sounds stupid, mostly, is the answer.

John: I always notice bleeping. It’s not actually a big tradition of bleeping in podcasts. It’s not really a thing.

Craig: No, because we’re not on the air at CBS.

John: No, no.

Craig: It just doesn’t make much sense.

John: No. I agree. Let’s do our one cool thing. My one cool thing I mentioned earlier on, it’s a cinematographer. Her name is Valentina Vee. She is an L.A. or New York-based cinematographer and director. The thing she’s been doing recently is going through a show, in this case, Heated Rivalry, and talking about the specific choices that the director and cinematographer are making as they’re composing scenes. Things from blocking to locations to camera placement. Going through this, this is the sense I had while I was watching the show, but it’s really clear.

They have no coverage. There’s basically not a shot that they shot that’s not in the show, and so often, they’re basically just staying on one side. The camera’s never coming around to the other side, which is because they had an incredibly limited budget, and they had to maximize the value that they got out of that. These are directing choices, lighting choices, but fundamentally, they’re also writing choices.

That’s why I really encourage people to watch these videos that she does because, again, you’re seeing that the scenes are written in a way that they can be shot from one side, that it’s really about one character’s perspective. Therefore, it’s not important that we see the other people who are talking off the screen because it’s really about this one character’s reaction to what is being said.

Craig: One of my favorite things to do. I try very hard to cover things. I like options. I love an option, but as I talk about with my editors all the time, just because we have it doesn’t mean we have to use it. We don’t have to use any of it. We can just use one shot if we want, if it feels great, and we just want to stay there. Staying with somebody is terrific. Editing too much just because you have it, it just turns into ping pong, tucking head theater, and there’s no pace to it.

The question is, who do I want to be with right now, in this moment? Who do I want to be with? Who do I want to be looking at? If you know that you have limited time and limited coverage, get one shot right, and then just nab something fast just to give yourself some little hinge bit.

John: My suspicion is they didn’t even have time for [unintelligible 01:02:08]. In some cases, they’ve really boxed themselves in where they had no choice other than the master that they had, and it works really well.

Craig: When we’re shooting things in tight situations, there’s a shot that she does here where she has the two of them. They’re sitting in profile, sort of a mini master kind of thing, so we can see both of them. They’re looking at each other, and they are sitting against a mirror, which creates depth that isn’t there. If you put them against the wall, it’s a dead shot, but that creates depth. The problem is the mirror will also see the camera. Well, that’s an easy one for us. As long as they are not moving in front of the camera, you can paint it out, especially if the background sort of drops away.

If you have money in post to get rid of these things, getting the camera– I will tell you that because we’re a handheld show, the amount of times we have had to paint out one little bit of camera as it bobbed in because we really liked this shot, it’s just that as they were moving, A camera saw B, and then B goes, “Oh, shit,” and gets out of the way, but that’s okay.

John: It’s fine.

Craig: That’s okay. We do split screens. We do paint outs. We do blow-ups. There’s a billion ways to handle it. It’s more important to get the work in than it is to– and this is actually good enough, “Okay, do we have an eraser to erase this thing later? Then don’t worry about this. Just get this,” right?

John: Because the priority is, are you getting the performance or getting the shot overall? You can fix the other stuff.

Craig: Performance, shot, feeling. If I love it, if I feel something, if it’s making me cry, I don’t care if I can see the reflection of a crew person over there, I’ll get rid of it. One way or the other, I’ll get rid of it. It is so worth it. That is what people connect to. Obviously, people are connecting to Heated Rivalry, AKA the hockey show, in a profound way, and that means they did a great job with the time and resources they had.

John: What I like about this, she was not the GP on this show. She’s just breaking down shots she’s seeing from it, so she’s able to scribble on the screen and show where a camera was and stuff that was happening. It’s such a good example of a thing you can do in video that we just can’t do as well in audio because you were just describing a thing, but in a video, to actually draw and show is just so much more helpful. I just like that people are out there using the medium in ways that we don’t know how to use yet.

Craig: Yes. I think people are interested in the silly tricks. I think there’s probably a good video that I should do. After this season, I think what I’ll do is take a little time with one of my editors, Tim Good, and we’re going to put together a video called All the Tricks We Use because the tricks that you can use in editing are incredible and so helpful, and very helpful to know when you’re shooting because there are times where I will watch a take and think, with trick number seven, I can get rid of the flaw in this take because the rest of it was great.

John: Exactly.

Craig: Knowing what you can do is a big part of it.

John: It’s not all just VFX. An example that she points out is that there’s moments in the show where they just go to silhouette and where you’re not seeing actors’ faces, but it’s not important for the scene because it’s a physical comedy, but you don’t actually need to see the faces for it to work. By going to silhouette, there’s no crowd. The amount of extras they have is incredibly limited. They’re making shots so you wouldn’t see those people out there.

Craig: Yes. When you look at sports movies, always look in the stands, look in boxing, who’s out there. Boxing, in particular, it’s a ring that’s overlit and then a crowd that is underlit in total shadow because there’s no one there.

John: If the audio is creating the crowd.

Craig: When you watch actual boxing, the entire place is lit up like a Kmart. No one knows what a Kmart is. Walmart. It’s lit up like a Walmart. In movies about football and baseball, you’ll get a couple of select shots where they’ve either licensed the footage or they’ve done some CG people. Then it’s just 18 people at a time and in close-up.

John: The mastermarks are still good.

Craig: Yes. Everything. It’s all the product of many meetings.

John: We love it. Craig, what’s your one cool thing?

Craig: My one cool thing this week is a game, as it often is. This is for– well, I played it on iOS on my iPad. I’m a big fan of the Rusty Lake games. One of the things about those games that I love is how freaking weird they are, sometimes deeply disturbing.

John: They’re specifically weird, yes.

Craig: Yes, they’re very strange, surreal. I came across a game– there are a lot of knockoffs. I thought for a moment, “Oh, I think maybe this is going to be a Rusty Lake knockoff. I’ll play a Rusty Lake knockoff. I don’t care.” It was not a knockoff. The game is called Birth! It is made by an independent game designer named Madison Karrh. That’s K-A-R-R-H, which already I love. That’s because the spelling is gorgeous. What she’s done is made a fairly satisfying puzzle game. The puzzles are sometimes too easy, sometimes they’re tricky, but they’re beautiful-looking and so deeply weird. The entire thing is so deeply weird. When you get to the end of it, it’s also so sweet and satisfying. It’s art. It’s art. It’s a lovely game and also fun.

I run into a lot of these things. I’m just going to whisper about this because I don’t want the people that make these games to hear it, John.

John: All right.

Craig: There are like 5,000 games that you can get for your iPad that are about grief. They’re not really games. They’re just somebody talking about– it’s just a very obvious metaphor for grief. They’re games, and they’re not fun.

John: Same way that there are joke aways. There are things that have the structure of a joke, but they’re not actually funny because they’re like– you know.

Craig: Yes, they’re really just trading on sadness or whatever. This is a game.

John: Good.

Craig: It’s fun to play. She did a great job. Excellent work, Madison Karrh. Birth! Well worth playing.

John: Very nice. That is our show for this week. The description is produced by Drew Marquardt, edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Craig: I don’t think so.

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Craig, thanks for a perfect discussion of perfectionism and when good enough is good enough.

Craig: Thank you.

[Bonus Segment]

John: Craig, in the outline here, I have a blog post I did called What I Did in 2025. I thought we might just review that first because I recognize that I’m not a person who remembers things. I don’t remember when things happened. Mike knows all that stuff. He can remember exactly what happened when and how things worked. I’ve been better at journaling this year, but I took a day and actually just went through what did I actually do in 2025? It was a lot.

This was the year I went to Egypt, Jordan, Dubai, and Mexico. We had the Big Fish 29-hour reading in New York City. We released Highland Pro. I got third place in Rachel Bloom’s Spelling Bee.

Craig: Pretty good.

John: It’s pretty good.

Craig: That’s a big deal.

John: We had two No Kings [unintelligible 01:10:43] tests, I did a half-marathon, went to Australia. I would say, overall, 2025 was a very shitty year for the world, but I had some good, fun things happen locally and personally, which was nice.

Craig: You say I never do this.

John: It’s the first time I’ve ever done this.

Craig: I just don’t look back. I mostly have feelings. I think about the feelings and moments and things, and there are these moments that stick out. I don’t really look back much. I’m all about right now and tomorrow.

John: I’m not generally a looking-back person, but I’m also a forward thinker. The second part of this conversation is, the last couple of years, Mike and I would do a 24 for 24, 25 for 25, 26 for 26, where we would basically share note and–

Craig: You know this is going to get tough. You see where this is going. This is going to be hard for you guys.

John: Oh, yes.

Craig: The older you get, the more crap you have to do.

John: Yes. It’s a lot of stuff. This year, we had to find one extra thing, but it’s going to be a creep every year. It’s a fun thing. Basically, we have shared notes in Apple Notes. It’s like a checklist of things we mean to do over the course of the year.

Craig: I like that.

John: What’s different about this than a New Year’s resolution is they are specific things you want to do, and they’re not all laborious chores. We’ll go through some examples here. One of the things we need to do this year is sort and rationalize what we’re going to do with all our CDs and DVDs that we’ve not looked through in years. Do you still have all your DVDs and CDs?

Craig: No.

John: What did you do? You just got rid of them?

Craig: I have no idea where they are. It doesn’t matter. They’re gone. It’s gone. It’s over. They may exist somewhere, but I don’t know where.

John: Drew, do you have physical discs?

Drew: I have DVDs and Blu-rays. I have some CDs, but they’re just left over from when we bought CDs. I don’t even think I have the ability to listen to it, actually.

Craig: You can listen to it through your DVD player.

Drew: Probably.

Craig: I think so.

Drew: For a minute, my DVD player was broken, and I had a, “Do I just get rid of everything?”

Craig: I have a DVD player. I never use it.

John: For a while, we were playing Blu-rays through our old PlayStation, but then that gave up the ghost. Stewart gave our daughter some Blu-ray DVDs. She wanted to watch them. We didn’t have one, so we had to get a little cheap Blu-ray player, and then she didn’t remember to watch them.

Craig: Children.

John: Basically, we divided things into three categories; stuff around the home, stuff around L.A., and stuff that’s out of town [unintelligible 01:13:13] anywhere. We were revamping the room that we’re currently in, which is going to be our reserve recording studio. We already did the soundproofing. The wall behind you, Craig, looks crappy on camera because it’s just too blank and bare, so we’re going to introduce different stuff to that.

Craig: What are you going to do?

John: I’m not sure. We’re going to bring in somebody to help us figure that out.

Craig: You know I’m not going to be here, right?

John: No. When do you come back from–

Craig: Okay. My heart stopped for a second. I’m like, “Wait.”

John: While you’re gone, some of the time, there’ll be famous people who’ll come in. We’ll record some of that stuff.

Craig: Love famous people.

John: While you’re gone.

Craig: They’re famous for a reason, you know.

John: We’ll do three game nights. We love having people over for game nights.

Craig: Amazing.

John: You love game nights.

Craig: We love game nights.

John: We’ll do some pool parties. Around town, three restaurants in unfamiliar neighborhoods. Often, our food-related thing was three new cuisines, like ethnic cuisines, but we basically run out of ethnic cuisines. We got to Bangladeshi, and it’s like, “I think we’re good here.”

Craig: Near the end.

John: “We’re near the end.” Two escape rooms. I need to make it back to Catalina.

Craig: Sorry, you said two?

John: Two.

Craig: No, no, no, no, no.

John: Got to do more than two.

Craig: Got to do more than two.

John: We only did one escape room this entire year. We did the new one as– the downtown.

Craig: Here’s an extra one cool thing for you. Melissa and I did this with our friends Cle and Mia. There’s an escape room up in Santa Clarita.

John: I’ve heard. They have a–

Craig: It’s called Appleseed Avenue. Fantastic. Must do. Must.

John: Drew went with us to the one we did this last month. What was it called?

Drew: It was The Lost Cat?

John: It’s downtown. What I liked about it, the general concept is this old woman has lost her cat, and you find her cat.

Craig: Did it.

John: Did it. Good and solid.

Craig: It was cute.

John: Cute. Good time.

Craig: It was cute when the stuff fell down. That’s fun.

John: Love it. Then some out-of-town stuff. We’ll do another half-marathon. We’re going to visit one new country and then see some concerts and some shows. What I’m stressing here is that some stuff is work. We’re basically dealing with our CDs, DVDs, repainting the kitchen chairs, tuning the piano. Most of it is just like– inertia will just keep you on the couch and not doing a thing. Their challenge is for yourself to actually just get out and do your thing. It doesn’t feel like work. It scratches that check-off span of the list to actually like, “Okay, we’ve got to see a concert. What concert are we going to go see?”

Craig: I love doing nothing.

John: You love doing nothing.

Craig: Oh, my God.

John: You love playing a game. You love playing a little rest-your-leg game.

Craig: Doing puzzles, playing games. It’s just joy. That’s the thing. Follow your heart. I’ve never been a checklist person. I’ve never been somebody who’s like, “I should do blank.” If I hear the word should in front of something, I’m like, “Do I want to?”

John: You’ve got to recontextualize. “I want to do this thing. I want to remember that I want to do this thing.”

Craig: That’s the thing. Do I actually want to do this thing? I’ve really gotten it down to, I just do the things I want to do, and I don’t do the things I don’t want to do.

John: You prioritize D&D, which is nice.

Craig: Because I want to. That’s the beautiful part.

John: Looking at the blog post here, I misspoke in the main episode. We actually played 39 sessions of D&D because I did miss a few.

Craig: 39. Solid.

John: It’s a lot. Craig, you are going to be off shooting a new season of the show.

Craig: Yes.

John: What other, I don’t want to say goals, but what else do you envision for your 2026? What do you think would, at the end of 2026, just like, “Yes, that was a good year.”? What are some things that would have happened?

Craig: If I am alive at the end of 2026, I will feel great. This is going to be a difficult production because of the size of it and the things we have to do. It’s going to be tough, and the length of it. My goal is alive. I want to try and make sure that my blood sugar stays– my big task is keeping my blood sugar at a healthy number, which I’ve been able to do. I keep my eye on that, and I continue to reflect on some of my mental health pluses and minuses.

John: Sure.

Craig: I’m looking forward to working with the people that I have worked with before that I love, and some new people that I know I’m going to love that I’ve met, and I’m very excited about. Then there’s just the adventure aspect of it. It’s an adventure. That’s the thing. This list of doing stuff, I’m going to hike, stay up all night, see a forest fire, do this. There’s going to be 200 things that I’m going to do because of the show that’s like, “That’s my living.” When I say see a forest fire, we don’t actually have fire. I don’t know why I said that. We’re not lighting a forest on fire, don’t worry, but we are going to do some crazy stuff. That’s where all the living comes in.

That’s my big goal, and to keep playing D&D throughout it all because–

John: Absolutely. You’re starting a whole new campaign for it, so I’m excited.

Craig: Starting a whole new campaign. It keeps me sane. It’s my thing. It’s what I’m allowed to do for me. Everybody knows it. You got to carve out some stuff.

John: You’ve got to carve out some time.

Craig: You’ve got to carve out time.

John: Basically, be yourself. One of my nervous breakdown during my TV show is basically I existed only for the show, and I was stuck in this impossible place.

Craig: I exist almost entirely for the show, and then I carve out a little bit.

John: Nice. Craig, felicitations on this past year.

Craig: Likewise.

John: I hope it’s a great upcoming year.

Craig: I think it’s going to be a fine year for the two of us.

John: I hope so, too.

Craig: Drew, Happy New Year.

Drew: Happy New Year. I thought you were going to say, “Maybe not for you.”

Craig: What a horrible way to start 2026.

Drew: Good luck.

Craig: For Drew–

John: You’re fired.

Craig: Yes, you’re fired.

[laughter]

Drew: I knew it was coming. Thanks.

Craig: Thanks, guys.

Links:

  • Jamie Lee Curtis says “Trauma”
  • Concept Creep: Psychology’s Expanding Concepts of Harm and Pathology by Nick Haslam
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