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Should a screenwriter pay for notes?

June 30, 2010 Education, Producers, QandA

questionmarkWhat weight do you give professional reading services? You know, the dudes that read your script, mark it up, make suggestions, tweak it, and send it back? Do you recommend anyone or company in particular?

— Chance

Other than my assistants, I’ve never paid anyone to read my scripts. All the notes I’ve gotten have come from friends and colleagues, many of them producers or screenwriters.

Reciprocity is a big part of relationship-building. When I was starting out, I would give hours of notes to friends, working through several drafts with them. In turn, they would read my scripts. I got my first agent through one such screenwriter friend who was interning for a producer at Columbia.

I was fortunate in that essentially all of my LA friends were from film school, and many of them were really smart. But you actually only need one or two smart people. One set of brilliant notes is more helpful than a dozen mediocre ones.

If you can’t find that one great note-giver amid your circle, it’s possible that you’d benefit from paying someone. I don’t have any names to recommend, but if I were in your place, I’d look for a few things:

1. A sample set of notes. I wouldn’t pay anyone who didn’t write clearly and logically.

2. A face-to-face meeting. Good feedback ends up being a conversation. In addition to written notes, I’d want an hour to talk through the issues and options.

3. No producers/managers. I want insightful feedback, not connections. Some producers and managers can give great notes, but I shouldn’t be paying them upfront to do it.

4. Someone who can say ‘not for me.’ Every person has genres that simply don’t click. Before taking my money, a reader should ask what my script is about, and respectfully decline if it’s outside of her domain.

I’m certain there are good paid readers out there. A few will probably leave comments. So let me stress, *I’m not recommending or endorsing any of them.* Caveat scriptor.

Notes from Sundance

June 22, 2009 Sundance

I’m up at Sundance for the Filmmakers Lab, where I serve as an advisor.

I’ve written about [previous sessions](http://johnaugust.com/archives/2007/summer-sundance), and the overall experience is remarkably consistent year-to-year. The projects change, but the work is largely the same — helping writers (mostly writer/directors) get their scripts into their best shape before shooting.

I learn a lot from the fellows and their projects — many of them are international, and focus on stories and situations I would never otherwise encounter. But I pick up a lot from the other advisors as well. I quoted one of them [on Twitter](https://twitter.com/johnaugust/status/2273804191) yesterday:

“Writing is betraying the people you love to impress people you’ll never meet.”

That was [Chris McQuarrie](http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0003160/), re-quoting an advisor from several years ago.

When writers give notes, they can often articulate issues in ways that feel more like poetry than problems. [Etgar Keret](http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0449316/) felt one script had a bunch of sticks very cleverly holding up the roof, but what it really needed was a central pillar to support the weight. [Susannah Grant](http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0335666/) wanted to help that same writer find a taproot to drink from. Both clever ways of expressing an idea that you wouldn’t get from a producer.

To the degree there’s a formula to the labs, it’s that sense of literary philanthropy. Not only are the notes you get here more thoughtful than a producer’s, they’re also genuinely disinterested and agenda-free.

The Variant (Second pass notes)

Thanks for offering to read it!

Below is a link to the pdf. Please do not share either the link or the story.

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When you’re done reading it, please come back to this page and share your thoughts in the comments.

What I’d like to know about the story…

A. Did you like it?

B. Did you find any typos or errors?

C. Which title do you prefer: “The Variant” or “The Egyptian Variant” ?

D. Any other thoughts or suggestions?

About distribution…

I’m trying to figure out if there’s an interesting way to distribute this for roughly the same as a single on iTunes.

E. Do you have a Kindle? If so, would you have bought this for 99 cents? How about $1.99?

F. Do you have an iPhone and/or iPod Touch? If so, would you have bought this (as an e-book application) for 99 cents through the App Store? How about $1.99?

G. A lot of e-books offer a sample chapter (or chapters) as a .pdf to let people try before they buy. If I were to do this, where would be a good place to cut off?

H. Any other thoughts/suggestions/essays are of course welcome.

Sometimes comments get stuck in moderation. Don’t worry; I’ll approve them when I see them.

Thank you again for reading it. It’s a giant help.

— John

The Egyptian Variant (first pass notes)

Thanks for offering to read it!

Below is a link to the pdf. Please do not share either the link or the story.

cover NOTE: CURRENTLY DISABLED.

When you’re done reading it, please come back to this page and share your thoughts in the comments.

What I’d like to know…

  1. Did you like it?
  2. Did you find any typos or errors?
  3. Would you rather see this in a normal printed magazine and/or anthology, or distributed through some online means?
  4. Do you have a Kindle?

  5. An iPhone?

  6. Any other thoughts/suggestions/essays are of course welcome.

Thank you again for reading it.

— John

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