Thanks for offering to read it!

Below is a link to the pdf. Please do not share either the link or the story.

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When you’re done reading it, please come back to this page and share your thoughts in the comments.

What I’d like to know about the story…

A. Did you like it?

B. Did you find any typos or errors?

C. Which title do you prefer: “The Variant” or “The Egyptian Variant” ?

D. Any other thoughts or suggestions?

About distribution…

I’m trying to figure out if there’s an interesting way to distribute this for roughly the same as a single on iTunes.

E. Do you have a Kindle? If so, would you have bought this for 99 cents? How about $1.99?

F. Do you have an iPhone and/or iPod Touch? If so, would you have bought this (as an e-book application) for 99 cents through the App Store? How about $1.99?

G. A lot of e-books offer a sample chapter (or chapters) as a .pdf to let people try before they buy. If I were to do this, where would be a good place to cut off?

H. Any other thoughts/suggestions/essays are of course welcome.

Sometimes comments get stuck in moderation. Don’t worry; I’ll approve them when I see them.

Thank you again for reading it. It’s a giant help.

— John