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Scriptnotes, Episode 600: McQuarrie Returns, Transcript

June 20, 2023 Scriptnotes Transcript

The original post for this episode can be found [here](https://johnaugust.com/2023/600-mcquarrie-returns).

**John August:** Hey, this is John. Heads up that today’s episode has just a little bit of swearing in it.

Hello and welcome. My name is John August.

**Craig Mazin:** My name is Craig Mazin.

**John:** This is Episode 600 of Scriptnotes, a podcast about screenwriting and things that are interesting to screenwriters.

Truffles, cloves, saffron in cooking. There are some ingredients that are so flavorful that they must be portioned carefully, deliberately, lest they overwhelm the senses. So too it is podcast visitors. A guest who appears too frequently loses their impact, their novelty. One cannot be shook if one is already shaking.

One such guest is writer/producer/director Christopher McQuarrie, who’s appeared just twice on Scriptnotes, and only on centennial episodes. After deliberation, Craig and I have decided to invite him back here today to mark our 600th episode. Joining us from London, I believe, Chris McQuarrie.

**Chris McQuarrie:** Yes, London, and congratulations on Episode 600.

**Craig:** I don’t know, is it congratulations or some sort of pity to be called for here?

**Chris:** Condolences. Condolences.

**Craig:** This is just… Good lord. Here we are. Nothing ever changes. We’re back with McQuarrie. With McQuarrie.

**Chris:** So sorry.

**John:** So sorry.

**Chris:** So sorry.

**John:** We recently put up a best of episode where we talked through, Chris, your two previous appearances. Just in case someone has no idea who you are, you are the writer and director of the Mission Impossible movies, Usual Suspects, Valkyrie, Jack Reacher. Your credits are long and wonderful. You’re also a good foil for Craig Mazin, which is why I’m so delighted to see you here on this podcast.

**Chris:** That’s what I’m here for. It’s to spar with Craig and stay sharp.

**Craig:** McQuarrie and I have been in the same fake fight for, I don’t know, 20 years. I don’t know how long it’s been. You will not find two men who love each other more and agree on less.

**Chris:** That’s an interesting take on our relationship.

**Craig:** Thank you. See, he’s about to disagree with me, and that’s fine.

**Chris:** Perspective is a funny thing.

**Craig:** All I can say is that it is an honor to know him. It is a pleasure and a joy. He is, I think you’ve nailed it, John, one of those flavors that you really need to be careful with. You said truffles, cloves, saffron. I would’ve gone with more of one of those fermented fish sauces.

**John:** Thai fish sauce, sure.

**Craig:** Something like a very dense-

**Chris:** Curry.

**Craig:** A durian, for instance, a fruit that many people think is delicious and others think smells like puke. That’s okay. Those are all okay analogies for the great Chris McQuarrie.

**Chris:** I can’t understand why anybody thinks we have a beef, Craig.

**Craig:** I love this man so much.

**Chris:** We hide it so well.

**John:** It’s going to be very hard to keep the conversation on the guardrails. I thought we might try to talk about teams and groups, because Chris, a lot of your movies have a central protagonist, but they also have a big group of people who are working together to do a thing. I’d love to talk about group dynamics within feature films and stories with multiple hero characters. I’d love to tackle this provocative quote about knockoffs and the way that Hollywood just makes cheap imitations of things that were good. Then in our bonus segment for Premium members, let’s talk movie theaters, because Chris, you care a lot about the movie theater experience.

**Chris:** Very much.

**John:** I’d love to know where in 2023 we’re at. If you had your dream of a way to see a big opening weekend movie, what kind of screen are you looking for, what kind of sound system are you looking for? There are so many things being thrown at me with this is better than that. What should we actually be looking for? I feel like you’re a person who can tell us.

**Chris:** Oh, good. That’s all good stuff to talk about.

**John:** Hooray. Let’s start with this provocative quote. I did this interview for Vox about AI and the WGA’s AI proposals. In the article that Alissa Wilkinson wrote up, she had a quote that I thought was actually really smart. She says, “I don’t expect the tools to ever turn out something as good as what a real human writer can achieve. I don’t think AI’s going to be able to write Everything Everywhere All at Once or Tar or Succession. At best, it will be an okay imitation of things that humans have already written. Here’s the thing. Cheap imitations of good things are what power the entertainment industry.” Craig, I see some nodding. How do you respond to that quote?

**Craig:** I think there’s every reason to think that’s true, because first of all, history proves that it’s true. People don’t mind it. I think sometimes we think that what we’re seeing here is that people are stupid and suckers. They’re not stupid and suckers. They just sometimes like comforting things, and they like things that are repeated. If you have to wait five years for the next installment of something that kicked something off and made it wonderful, and in between there are acceptable substitutes, people will go for that.

The other area that I think we need to keep an eye on is programming for children, because programming for children is literally intentionally built around repetition. It’s how children learn. There are plenty of shows. On YouTube there are these videos that mostly come out of China. They’re just these super crappy animations that seem as if they’re currently being done by AI, by early AI. I can’t imagine people did them. Those things can be churned out ad nauseam. Yes, I think the concern is less that AI is going to innovate something beautiful and more that AI will replace a little bit of the secondary industry of imitation.

**John:** Chris, we’ve talked to you on a program before. You talked about your career and how you came out of the gate hot. Then there was a time where you’d find yourself doing projects that you realize these were not the things I should be doing and deliberately pivoted to, what are the actual movies that make me excited to go into work and to dedicate my life to making these films. How do you feel about this idea that the industry relies on a lot of not amazing things to fill up the space, and writers are going to be doing those jobs, and yet you individually might make the decision not to participate in that system?

**Chris:** The first part of the question, just generating content. We live in an era in which everything is just about generating the largest amount of content. If streamers are all racing to build libraries and develop subscriber bases, you’re also seeing that very same industry realizing that they can’t rely on that the way that they wanted to. We’re right now at a moment where you feel all the studios are pivoting back to an idea, that they’re suddenly starting to realize they actually need movie stars and haven’t been cultivating them. On the one hand, it’s terrifying, because we’re looking at AI.

The industry can always be counted on to convince themselves that there is a new way to game the system, and that new way invariably implodes. The number of times we as a group have lived through somebody thinking they could do it faster, cheaper, better, they figured out the thing that’s going to change the industry, going all the way back to 3D and how everything was going to be 3D. When digital cameras became the thing, digital cameras were going to replace film. There was a moment where film was really on the verge of extinction, and everybody said that digital was going to make it cheaper, and it didn’t. It didn’t democratize anything. Now you just hire more people to operate digital cameras.

Ultimately, what I have faith in is that there will always be room for, for lack of a better word, handmade, quality storytelling, for the people that are motivated to do it and the people that demand to do it. That’s never going to be the studio. I do not mean to say this in a derogating way. Their whole thing is about risk mitigation, on time, on budget, trying to make things profitable, and so they’re always going to gravitate towards what appears on paper to be the saner, more fiscally responsible thing. We all know from our individual experience, that’s actually not how movies turn out. That’s not how they get made. It’s never how the process goes. It isn’t a predictable process. It’s not a quantifiable process.

You’ll see there’s going to be a push toward that, towards using AI to get rid of the one thing they’ve been trying to get rid of forever, other than the movie star, has been the writer. They would love it if they could do it without us. They would absolutely love it.

I’m always amazed when people who would rather not have me there can’t just do what I do. We as writers, for us it’s second nature to sit down and actually write something in script form. It’s astonishing to watch someone who does not do that for a living have a very clear idea of what they want and actually be paralyzed when they sit down to do it. They actually couldn’t write a single sentence. It’s like some sort of mental block. I think there are people looking at it now and saying AI is going to liberate them of that mental block.

The thing that AI is never going to deliver is empathy and taste. It can imitate it, but it’s not going to deliver empathy, and it’s not going to deliver taste. If you don’t have empathy through your audience, if you can’t be the audience, and some part of you can’t step outside of yourself and be the person in the theater or at home in front of the TV receiving what it is you’re communicating, you’re not going to tell a story that’s going to affect somebody emotionally, at least in the short term with what I understand about AI. I’ll probably be eating my words in six months when AI begins teaching itself.

**Craig:** By the end of this week.

**Chris:** If you look at all the years and years and years of all these different screenwriting seminars, all the humans that have been trying to teach this craft to other humans, you can teach people about rules and techniques, you can show them movies that have worked, you can express to someone how you create, you can’t teach them empathy. The one essential ingredient to being an effective storyteller, I’ve never seen anybody even bring it up as a critical element of telling story, let alone how do you teach somebody that in a series of afternoon lectures?

**Craig:** There are unteachables. I think we’ve always agreed on that, that there are things that you can instruct, but then there’s whatever, however talent is defined. I think one of the cornerstones of talent, you’re right, is empathy. It is possible that what we may be looking at at best, and it’s hard to say because we don’t know, but let’s just say at best, for the foreseeable future, AI can’t do any better than being a very mediocre screenwriter. There are a lot of very mediocre screenwriters working. In fact, there are very few that aren’t very mediocre.

**Chris:** There’s the rub.

**Craig:** There is the rub. In a legitimate way, what we’re talking about is saying, hey, if there’s a choice between hiring a mediocre human and a mediocre computer, I really think we should be hiring the human. That is what we’re trying to get at.

**Chris:** I’m going to be the business side. I’ll play the devil’s advocate. If I’m going to hire a mediocre human or if I’m going to hire a mediocre machine, I’m going to hire the machine, because it’s going to get it done faster.

**Craig:** Of course. Of course.

**Chris:** It’s going to deliver it. What we all know is that first and foremost they need a document. What I like to say all the time is a script is as good or bad as it needs to be on the day you hand it in. If they need that script, and they have a start date, and the start date is Monday, and you get it to them on Friday, you’re going to get the greatest review of a screenplay you’ve ever handed anybody. We love it. It’s fantastic. You’ve solved it. We have some notes, but we’ll figure them out as we go. If there’s no actor attached and no director attached and you wrote Casablanca, it would go into development hell, simply because-

**Craig:** There’s time.

**Chris:** There’s time. AI will feed very nicely into that. Then it will generate a 120-page document with dialog and formatting and locations and they can budget that.

**Craig:** Yeah, but I have to say I still… Yes, absolutely. There are times where they want scripts to budget, and then you say it’s not ready, and they say, “Literally our job is to hand somebody a budget tomorrow. Please give me a thing that I can budget,” which is fine.

It does strike me that even with the consolidation and the conglomeration of these companies that the media business and being a corporation that creates television shows and movies is not the best way to make a gazillion dollars. Jeff Bezos didn’t become a billionaire because of Amazon studios. Apple didn’t become larger than most nations because of Apple Plus. These companies are far bigger than that. If you want to make a lot of money as an individual, man, these hedge funds apparently do quite well.

I still feel like the management in Hollywood, even at the highest levels, on some basic level still also love good stuff. They’re proud of it. They like winning awards. They like being part of culture. They like changing things. They love that. I think on some level they know that involves the human touch, but-

**Chris:** They like one thing more.

**Craig:** Money I assume.

**Chris:** Control.

**Craig:** Here’s the thing about control.

**Chris:** It’s all about priorities.

**Craig:** I will disagree with you on this. There are places that… I work at a place where control is not a priority for them at all. It’s not. What’s a priority for them is that the work is good. That is a priority for them. I salute HBO for that. Obviously, there are lots of places that differ in that.

What I think this quote is getting to is that there is this large chunk of the business, we used to call them programmers, and I wrote on a lot of them, where it was like, the point of this isn’t to be good or special. The point of this is we need this kind of movie doing these following things, hitting this kind of tone for this audience. Go. The fact of the matter is, I believe I have written things that probably AI could have done, will be able to do decently.

**John:** Let’s make a case for the mediocre writer versus the mediocre AI, because in both cases they’ve been trained on a corpus of text, which is all the stuff that came before them. It’s the film student who watched all of the other movies and is just trying to replicate the thing it saw, because the AI’s literally fed all of that popular culture. The best it can do, the best it can reasonably be expected to do, is about middle grade. It can actually make the choice. It can make decisions about what is better and what’s worse.

That may be the saving grace of the mediocre writer is that the mediocre writer still has, to get back to Chris’s thing, still has empathy and taste, still actually understands what is good and what is not good, and may still be aiming for better, even if it doesn’t actually know how to achieve that. It actually has empathy. It knows what it’s like. Going back to a Big Fish or something, knows what it’s like to lose a parent. You actually can have that experience, which an AI can never have. It knows what it’s like to physically be in a body. The AI might be able to come up with a bunch of words that approximate that experience, but it has no real understanding.

Finally, that AI is a chat bot maybe, but you can’t really talk back to it. So much of our job as screenwriters is not just doing what they tell us, but intuiting the note behind the note, intuiting what actually you need to do to get it beyond this next step, how to get it through this development executive to their boss, how to get that director on board. That’s not a thing that an AI is going to understand how to do. It’s not going to be able to think that many levels ahead. I think there’s still a job for a human being there.

I think my concern is that, whereas it used to be us pushing words around, that made us a screenwriter, it might be the person who is writing those prompts and having to deal with all the people that is doing the job of screenwriter. That’s where I think we might get replaced is that it’s we’re the person pushing the buttons but we’re not the real writer, we’re not the person stringing the words together.

**Chris:** Writers have had to, I think, disillusion themselves of certain beliefs, which I think AI is going to push them to have to accept even sooner. There is a lot of dogma around being a screenwriter and what a screenwriter’s role is and also what screenwriters want to do. We talked about this the last time that we all spoke. Actually, you and I spoke. Craig wasn’t there, because he was busy doing other things.

I think the future belongs to the writer-producer. You need to be somebody who not only writes the material but then can be there to help to execute and supervise and deliver that material. You’ve got to get out of the mindset of, I write a screenplay and hand it to other people, and they make the movie the way I think that movies should be made. You have to get away from that. That future has never been a rich one. I really believe that that future is doomed. Now you’re having to compete with a machine.

Whether you write the script or the machinery writes it for the studio executive who cannot write and does not want to hire another writer or doesn’t have the time, it’ll all evolve from, yeah, I would like to hire a writer, but it’ll take me three weeks to make that person’s deal. Then that person will go off, and they have a contractual number of weeks before they have to deliver a draft, etc, etc, etc. I have to deliver this in such and such, in 48 hours, because we have this window and this person is available only for these times. There will be a series of honest compromises that lead to this becoming a necessity and a necessary evil. That’s how I see it.

The writer who’s standing on the other side of it, the person who’s going to be making a living, is the person who’s there’s to fix what the AI broke and then be able to actually carry and deliver it and execute it. You’re always going to need a human being to put the stuff together, the same way AI right now, whatever it’s doing, it needs people. It needs to manipulate, maneuver human beings in the real world to actually pull levers and push buttons.

I don’t know if you read this article about how this AI learned how to lie. In order to bypass a captcha code, it went to some website. I can’t remember the name of it.

**John:** Mechanical Turk or something like that, where it hired, or Fiver.

**Chris:** Yes, it hired a person to get past the captcha for them. That’s the world we’re headed towards.

**Craig:** I think you’re probably underestimating the probability that AI will begin to instruct other AI. You may also be underestimating the probability that we are AI. That’s a topic for-

**Chris:** We don’t know that this conversation is real. None of us are sitting in the same room.

**Craig:** Also define real. I think that in a weird way with all of the cloud around this and how much confusion and possibility there is, it seems to me that it is incumbent upon the labor movement in Hollywood to come to an incredibly simple term, which is only humans write stuff. Man, they’re going to scream about it, but I don’t know how else you get around this.

**Chris:** I know how to get around it. They’ll make up a human. There’ll be somebody out there. There’ll be a well-known writer who you’ll find out 10 years later-

**Craig:** Was fronting for AI?

**John:** [Crosstalk 00:20:41].

**Chris:** Yeah, a front. It’ll be a front. By the way, I promise you-

**Craig:** That’s okay.

**Chris:** … there are writers out there who would take 10% of the salary to be the front, to represent an AI and say, “Yeah, that’s who I am.”

**Craig:** How is that already not a show on the air? Let’s go. Let’s go, McQuarrie. The front.

**Chris:** The front.

**Craig:** The front.

**John:** Going all the way back to The Blacklist, where there’s someone up there who’s pretending to be the writer of records. I want to stipulate that the conversation we’re having right now is about the kinds of film and television that we’re making and seeing right now, and so the stuff that we’re writing, that we’re creating, we’re producing. It’s entirely possible that AI could come up with some other kind of entertainment that’s generating itself, that is unique and different and compelling, might replace or displace what it is that we’re doing. That’s a threat not just to us as writers but to the entire film and television industry as we know it right now. That’s not a thing I think we’re qualified to get in the way of. That feels like a bigger governmental action.

I want us to circle back to this notion of Hollywood is built on mediocre stuff. What I like about it is that it’s a recognition that many of us aspire to make the one-of-a-kind, great, unique things. The bulk of what’s on television, the bulk of what is in our theaters every week isn’t even trying to be this great piece of art. It is programmers. There’s nothing wrong with that.

**Craig:** We learn that way. I don’t know anyone who hasn’t written something like that. I know there are some people. By and large, folks like us who have been around for a long time and have worked across the media and have rewritten and written and done originals and all the rest of it, all of us have worked on some of those things for sure. There is no shame in it whatsoever.

Also, again, like I said, it’s how we learn. If the AI is learning, so are we. If you take away the opportunity for humans to be mediocre, they will never get to be great. Even though theoretically McQuarrie was great out the door, what’s been going on is he’s been Benjamin Buttoning talent-wise.

**Chris:** Craig Mazin, everybody. Craig Mazin, dear, dear, dear, sweet friend, Craig Mazin. There is an expression Tom and I talk about all the time, which is educated into stupidity. We learn a lot of very bad habits. We spend a lot of our formative years writing to get past certain people in that chain. You have to write things that feel like a movie to them, even though they don’t actually understand what a shootable document is versus a readable document. We develop a lot of bad habits out of a sheer need for survival.

That is a big part of what feeds into the mediocrity machine is a lot of writers are educated to be mediocre by servicing low-level executives, producers who have had one big credit and now suddenly have all of this authority. You have to get by them. They’re just gatekeepers. Politically they might know how to get a script made, but they don’t really understand the nuts and bolts of telling you what to write so that it’s actually a shootable movie.

When that’s the objective, when the objective is a go movie versus a good movie, you’re always going to get that. Quality is not a standard option. It’s a factory add-on. It’s like, do I want the Blaupunkt stereo or do I want the standard AM/FM radio that they have in the car. Someone in the chain has to demand that this thing be good.

When you’re talking about an assembly line that is about we need it now and we need it at this budget, it’s not that they don’t want quality. Quality is simply not the number one priority. It can’t be, because quality is a nuisance. It’s an absolute burden. It’s a pain in the ass. It’s exhausting. The number of times that you want to just get to what I remember Ed Zwick referred to as the great fuck it. When it’s good enough and you don’t want to do it anymore, you have to have the power and the will, the resources, the credibility, to confront the narrative over and over and over again until it’s good.

When you reach a certain level… When Craig sent me Chernobyl, and I read Chernobyl, and I read the first two episodes and I called him and I said, “This is the most shootable hundred-and-some pages I have ever read.” I can’t understand how Craig Mazin wrote it.

**Craig:** Neither can I.

**Chris:** I said, “What is it?” I asked you in all seriousness. I said, “Where did this come from?” You said, “I finally figured out what I was doing.” You’d been at it for 20 years. I’ve been at it for close to 30 years before I was working on Top Gun: Maverick and saying, “Oh, I actually know what the priorities are now. I actually understand how to structure these things in a way that is instinctive rather than mandated.” You can accelerate that process. You can get through that a lot faster. That involved unlearning 30 years of really shitty habits that have been imposed upon me.

That’s the disadvantage of the writers who are starting out now is they’re swimming upstream against a much stronger current, having to learn the nuts and bolts and the ins and outs of the craft and to get to a place where the complexity becomes simplicity. The headwind that they’re going into now is, “I don’t need you to write the garbage. I don’t need you to do your apprenticeship. I’ve got a machine that can do your apprenticeship.”

I really believe that there needs to be a deconstruction and an education for the writers who are coming, about understanding what’s the priority, what’s the priority of story, how do these things really work, and get people past what I perceive as the absurdity of everybody young starts out thinking they want to make Apocalypse Now in 2001. They want to make all of their heroes’ movies without ever stopping to realize that all of their heroes started out making elevated genre fare and actually knew how to make and had apprenticeships where they just made movies. That’s the key to survival I think is learning how to make nuts and bolts entertainment and arrive at the place where you can then decide, okay, now I’m going to do one for me, where it used to be-

**Craig:** What was Jim Cameron’s first movie? Piranha?

**Chris:** Piranha 2.

**John:** Piranha 2, wasn’t it?

**Craig:** Yeah, Piranha 2.

**Chris:** Piranha 2.

**Craig:** Didn’t even get to write Piranha 1.

**Chris:** Look, it’s the three guys I’ll use all the time. One made a gangster movie, one made a monster movie, one made a space monster movie. Coppola made The Godfather, Spielberg made Jaws, and Ridley Scott made Alien. They all made elevated genre movies. No one can see my air quotes. They were all artists. They were all auteurs. These are absurd terms that I think create an air of conceit. They were all great filmmakers in their own right, who had to make genre movies if they wanted their shot. If you wanted to make Apocalypse Now, you had to make The Godfather. Some part of Coppola really believed he was slumming when he made-

**Craig:** The Godfather was a pulp novel. It was kind of a trashy novel. When the book came out, it wasn’t like people were like, “Oh my god, this is the equivalent of Lord Jim.”

**Chris:** Killers of the Flower Moon.

**Craig:** It was a sexy book where people were shooting each other.

**Chris:** Jaws is a summer beach novel. Alien was a script by Dan O’Bannon, as pulpy as pulpy science fiction gets. Yet when you look at those films, they’re some of their most powerful and enduring movies. They’re also great cinema by just about anybody’s estimation. They’re movies you can go to and watch again and again and again and again. Machines couldn’t make them.

What’s happened is that a wedge has been driven. It was countersunk and pounded through the industry in the ’70s, in the beginning of the ’70s new wave and the idea of the auteur filmmaker that separated art and entertainment. You either make art or you make entertainment. You are an auteur or you are a shooter or you are a journeyman. I’m still trying to understand what that word means. As opposed to looking at it to say the real art for me, the real craft, what is cinema to me, are the movies that strive to walk the center line between art and entertainment.

You’re trying to pull art closer to entertainment and entertainment closer to art. You’re trying to make a film that engages and enriches the audience. That’s the really fine line. That’s the zone that it’s going to take AI a long, long time to get to.

It’s the zone that writers nowadays are almost engineered to avoid, in pursuit of one of two things. You’re either making mass entertainment for an audience, not the audience, you’re making mass entertainment for the Marvels of the world, the DCs of world, the Disneys of the world, which is all great, or you’re making art for the Academy, for a couple of thousand people, most of whom vote without actually watching every single movie that they’re voting for.

Filmmakers are essentially asked early in their career to make a decision. Are you going to be an artist, are you going to make movies for the Academy, or are you going to be an entertainer? Are you going to be a sellout and go make mass entertainment for those guys? I look at it and say why can’t the objective be Jaws, Aliens, shit, Avatar.

Look at Cameron. He is in a class utterly by himself. He’s the only guy out there understanding if I want to make movies on this big canvas, I need to make movies that everybody’s going to come see. He makes mass entertainment. He’s not ashamed of it. Occasionally, his mass entertainment gets nominated for awards. You don’t see James Cameron courting awards. You see James Cameron like, “I’m out to make mass entertainment. I’m out to reach the widest audience possible.”

It just so happens that his big mass entertainment movies like Avatar have a huge environmental message to them. They’re actually not just junk content. They actually contain big environmental messages about awareness of the world around you. I don’t see what’s wrong with that. I don’t see what there is to be allergic about. That’s where I feel like the future of the industry needs to be leaning when we talk about cinema and movies for the big screen.

What Marvel’s doing and what Marvel is I think experiencing right now, they’ve reached a saturation. They’ve isolated their audience. They’ve created a massive, massive, massive audience, but it’s also self-contained. It’s a bubble. They’re not making movies for everybody. They’re making movies for fans of the ever more internal Marvel universe. That’s finite, whereas Cameron can call it like Babe Ruth and say, “My movie’s going to make two and a half billion dollars.” He doesn’t have a massive Marvel universe behind it to do it. There’s huge opportunity there. People have to get over themselves and actually strive for that.

**John:** Chris, what I hear you saying is that in features we have certain filmmakers can prioritize quality over everything else. There’s that classic pick two. You can choose good, fast, or cheap. They’re able to choose good, because they actually have the track record that they can do that. They have started in having to balance those things better when they were making cheaper genre pictures. Now Cameron can spend a billion dollars making a movie, and he has that. On the TV side, we still have brands like HBO, for which quality is their delimiter. HBO has a brand value that is great. You know that a show on HBO is going to have a certain quality. You may like it, or you may not like it.

**Chris:** Quality is their brand.

**John:** Quality is their brand. Do we have on the feature side, quality is our brand? A24 to some degree. They’re always innovative movie. I don’t know they’re always the highest quality. They have a certain point of view. I don’t know. I wonder if we could have basically a film studio that quality is our brand.

**Chris:** Pixar understood. You look at first tier of movies that came out, and that’s what they were dedicated to. Is it sustainable? Is it all good things must end, and there was a very specific group of people shepherding it, it was the objective that everybody wanted? How long can you maintain that, and how finite that group of people is that come with all that education, and are they able to educate other people up into those ranks and to keep that stuff going?

Yes, A24, Working Title, there are certain brands when you look at it and go, “Oh, those, they make those good movies.” There’s a bigger thing at play. I’m looking at Craig right now sitting with the Hollywood Hills behind him. Somewhere behind Craig is the Cinerama dome, which is sitting empty and boarded up. What’s not happening with the A24s of the world and the Working Titles of the world is they’re not making movies that pack cinemas and feed into the health of my other definition of cinema, which is a place you go to watch movies with other people and have a shared experience, which is not only what I think is a really important human thing to do, also it enriches the experience of watching a movie. A horror movie is never as good at home as it is, or certain horror movies, never as good as watching with a crowd of people. Comedies are never as good as watching with a crowd of people and feeding into that.

There are movies that I consider deposits and withdrawals. If you’re making a movie with the intention of drawing the largest possible audience to the cinema, and not an audience, but the audience, you’re making a deposit. You’re actually feeding into that system, and you’re helping that system thrive. If you’re making a movie because how you want critics to feel about you or your film or the awards that you hope to get, and you can convince yourself all you want that the awards that I’m getting are actually good, they’re advertising the film, etc, etc, you’re just admitting that it’s all about money anyway. If you’re making movies for awards and things like that, you’re making a withdrawal.

If you’re not making it to drive the most number of people into the cinema, you’re benefiting from it more than the system is benefiting from it. That’s okay. That’s totally okay to do that. Know that that’s what you’re doing. When you’re making a movie for a streamer, and you’re releasing it in theaters for the requisite number of weeks so that it is eligible for an award, you’re not really paying back into the system. You’re not really here in the name of cinema. You’re there for how the cinema benefits you and not how you benefit the cinema. I don’t look at it that way. My partner doesn’t look at it that way. We look at it like that’s a whole hungry mechanism that desperately needs to be fed, and we make movies for that machine so that machine is there.

**John:** Top Gun: Maverick I think is indicative of that. Top Gun: Maverick was a film that critics loved, audiences loved, theaters loved, that the industry wanted that movie to succeed and was so happy it succeeded, because it was a good movie to see on a big screen with a big audience, and it did great too. The movie could’ve made the exact same amount of money and not had the impact if it hadn’t felt like it was the right moment.

**Chris:** Very early on we said this can’t be a cash grab and that no one will come if it is. When I came on board, the script that I was handed was a lot of fan service, a lot of rehashing of scenes from the original movie. We definitely hit those beats, but we hit those beats in a way that they were echoes of the past and not, oh, let’s just recreate that scene. Do you remember when they made the sequel to Airplane and they just regurgitated the scenes from the original so you got to see them again?

**John:** Yeah.

**Chris:** That worked in the day when you actually didn’t have home video and you had to wait three years to see that film.

**Craig:** Just to defend them, the sequel was not made my Zucker, Abrahams, Zucker.

**Chris:** Of course. Of course.

**Craig:** They get very upset if anyone thinks that they made that movie.

**Chris:** I’m not talking about whoever made it. I’m just talking about the end result. We knew very, very early on there was an expectation around it that it’s Tom and it’s Top Gun, they’re going to come. Tom was the first guy to say, “No, they’re not. They are not going to come. They are looking at this with suspicion. They’re looking at this as though this is a cash grab, and we have to do everything we can to convince them that this is actually an event that they have to come and see.”

The money that Top Gun made, a surprising amount of it was from repeat viewing, multiple viewings of people coming back to see it over and over and over again. That’s a metric that you don’t see charted a lot is how many of these movies that are making a billion dollars are making a billion dollars because people are going to see them the way we went to see ET and the way we went to see Star Wars over and over and over again in the cinema. What Top Gun is is proof that you can do that. It’s proof that if you make a movie that is that much of an emotional experience…

I read some critique of the movie that said, “Oh, it just feels like every moment in the movie is engineered for the maximum emotional effect.” Yeah. That’s the point. What are you talking about? Isn’t that what you do? Yes, I want you to be completely emotionally engaged in it the entire time. We would sit there and watch it and step back from it and look at it objectively and say, “Now I’m in the audience. How do I feel about this? Why is this not working for me? Why am I watching somebody have an experience rather than having an experience with that protagonist?” People are starved for it. Top Gun demonstrated that they were starved for it. They demonstrated that they don’t reject sincerity and earnestness and optimism. They actually came. They showed up for it, and they enjoyed it.

Top Gun changed the way I will approach every movie I make after Mission Impossible. I had started making Mission before Top Gun came out. Now looking at the experience of Top Gun, the first thing I would start with… With Mission you start with what are the big set pieces and what are the big stunts, what’s going to make this different from all the other Mission Impossibles.

Every movie I start with now is, what do I want the audience to feel when they’re walking out of the theater. What’s the feeling I want them to carry away from it. If the feeling is anything other than I feel great about myself and I want to see that again, why are you making it? You’re making it for yourself and not for-

**Craig:** Hold on. I agree with you completely that the… Certainly how I approach things is what is this… The question I ask is, why should this exist, which is a little different than your question, but it’s related. Why should this exist? The related question to that is, and if it ought to exist, clearly that involves the audience. They need to feel something.

**Chris:** Anything can exist. I want to be very, very clear.

**Craig:** No, why should this exist?

**Chris:** It’s who are you making it for? Ultimately, who is your audience?

**Craig:** I’m simply saying I don’t think feeling good about ourselves is the only feeling that is a valid one to chase with an audience. Sometimes you can get pretty far with people feel sad. I think feeling sad is a strong feeling. I think mourning, I think coming to grips with mortality. There are difficult things we can feel walking out that are very valid. I think where I agree with you is I want them to feel them.

**Chris:** You can feel rewarded and satisfied with those feelings, or you can feel punished and worn out and exhausted and demoralized, which is a lot.

**Craig:** Or provoked. Or provoked.

**Chris:** Or provoked, which a lot of filmmakers seem to embrace as something admirable, that the audience is an obstacle. The audience is a thing that is to be tolerated.

**Craig:** I don’t see it as an either or. I see it as simply, yes, getting an audience to feel something and putting their feelings first is… I completely agree with you. I generally speaking do enjoy movies that make me feel good at the end. Sometimes I like those, and sometimes I like movies that don’t.

**Chris:** I want to be very clear. If you’re going to make a movie that cost $30 million, those concerns are not as big. If you want to make a movie that costs $150, $170, $200 million, my advice to you is everybody should leave the theater feeling really great. It’s all proportionate to who the audience is for that film. If a movie’s got to make that formula of, say, three times what it costs to break even, James Cameron understood there was a certain point at which he realized I’m all in, and everybody on the planet has to love this movie.

**Craig:** Sure. Then there’s The Dark Knight. Then there’s where it’s a massive hit.

**Chris:** How much did The Dark Knight cost versus how much did The Dark Knight make? Chris Nolan is a very, very smart, frugal filmmaker. He understands marketing and how to target his movies. He understood who his audience was. He didn’t indulge in that movie. He didn’t go over budget. He didn’t make a movie [crosstalk 00:43:22].

**Craig:** I’m not suggesting that he did any of those things. I’m simply saying that there are very high-budget, popular hit films that carry through in pop culture and are beloved by people where you don’t walk out feeling warm and fuzzy. That’s all I’m saying.

**Chris:** Yes, I understand.

**Craig:** Usual Suspects was a fantastic film written by this kid from New Jersey, that made me feel terrible at the end but also satisfied.

**John:** Satisfied is a thing.

**Chris:** Satisfied is the word.

**John:** Terrible, great, satisfied is the word.

**Chris:** I’m not talking about warm and fuzzy. I’m not talking about warm and fuzzy. I am saying that if you’re going to make a movie past a certain budget, that’s the way.

**Craig:** I think people should always be satisfied.

**Chris:** Satisfied, absolutely.

**John:** There’s a different metric here. We’re talking about $30 million versus $300 million for a budget. Also, what are you asking of the audience to go and experience your movie? If it’s something that they were going to flip channels to… There’s movies that I’ll watch on a plane, but I’m not going to actually go to the theater to watch. If you’re trying to make a movie that you need to get people to go from their home to a theater, to buy a ticket, to sit in that seat, you’re making a big ask. I think it’s fair that they should have big expectations for what they’re going to get out of that and how they’re going to feel at the end of that. You want to make sure that they are feeling a big feeling from the end of that, which may not need to be the same situation on a made-for-streaming that they’re watching at home. I think there are different expectations there.

**Chris:** In that instance, a streaming movie, plain and simple, it doesn’t have to face an opening weekend. It doesn’t have to compete with anything. Actually, the metric by which a viewing is even measured is not the same. Somebody watches it for a few minutes, turns it off, or turns it on and turns off their TV and goes to bed, and it’s still running in the background and counts as a view. That’s very different than people coming out of their homes and paying money to go and sit and watch that movie. It doesn’t have to confront the same-

**Craig:** Agreed.

**Chris:** … obstacles to whatever a definition of success is, which is great. We talked about this the last time. I am hopeful that the streaming world becomes the test bed, becomes the place where filmmakers can cut their teeth, in an environment where their risk is lower. Their career risk is lower. Their tolerance for failure is much higher. Their budgets are a little more constrained.

It’s the farm system that gets people to the place where they can make bigger movies in cinemas, because that’s the thing that I don’t see. There’s not a mechanism that develops people to the level that most directors are working at now on those big, giant movies. It’s one thing to demand quality and to say I want it to be this thing in the middle. It’s the other thing to actually know how to do that and to prepare and to understand that part of what you have to build into that is, I’m not going to hit a bullet with a bullet straight out of the gate. I’m going to be re-shooting. I’m going to be. I have to build that into it. It’s a very complicated process by which you arrive.

Cameron, look how long it took him to make that movie, in order to make it the box office success that it was, to justify the budget that went into making that movie. Every day he was out there and the movie was getting bigger, the movie had to be that much better. It’s an absolutely terrifying way to work.

**John:** I promised that we would talk about group dynamics. Let’s put that aside for a moment because I actually want to circle back to something you said quite early on in the conversation, which is that Hollywood has decided not to have movie stars. We’ve let our movie star system fall apart. Is this a solvable problem? Why is it a problem? Chris McQuarrie, can you make your case for movie stars?

**Chris:** There are two things that having movie stars would require. One, the studios have to want movie stars. Two, stars have to want to be stars. There are a lot of actors who have the capacity to be giant stars. They are defined by their choices. They’re not leaning into the kind of material that, and the kind of filmmaking that would make them stars. Being a star is a level of commitment. It’s a level of awareness. You have to really control your destiny. You have to really understand filmmaking. You can’t just entrust that to other people. Stars have to want to be stars.

The system, again, the award-driven system that tells you you either win Oscars or wear a cape, there’s not a thing in the middle that’s leaning towards encouraging people to be more traditional movie stars. There’s not an incentive to be Clark Gable. There’s not an incentive to be Marilyn Monroe, and yet the business needs those. People want those icons.

You see people time and again arrive in a place where you’re thinking this person’s really going to pop, this person’s really going to take off, this person’s going to be a big star, and then you watch their subsequent choices. It’s not that there was something in the water in the ‘40s that isn’t there now. There was a different system that cultivated those people and that groomed them to be stars, and then the stars themselves understood this is what I need to do to protect my brand and to put myself forward. Humphrey Bogart was a very, very smart filmmaker. Clark Gable was a very smart filmmaker. Burt Lancaster, Kirk Douglas were giant movie stars. They were also very, very, very smart about how to make themselves stars and to keep themselves stars.

**John:** Craig, how do we get there? How do we get movie stars back, or do we get movie stars back?

**Craig:** Movie stars are enormously helpful to center our culture, because the culture that we create is about human beings. It’s about the human condition, whether it’s a comedy or a drama. We identify with certain humans because of a kind of magic they have.

Tom Hanks is a human being that hundreds of millions of human beings connect to, even though he doesn’t know them. There is something in his eyes. There is something about the way his mind works and connects to his face and his eyes and his voice.

The problem that we have is that we have cheapened fame. The fame is useless now. Everyone’s famous. Fame doesn’t mean a goddamn thing. Fifteen minutes? Everyone’s famous for the rest of their lives. That’s my turn on Warhol. Everyone is now famous forever, because everybody is everywhere, seeing each other. It’s harder and harder to find the signal amidst the noise. It really is. Hollywood tries really hard. There are examples where they try to make people stars. They work on it. Sometimes it works. Sometimes it doesn’t.

**Chris:** Choices.

**Craig:** There are people who still emerge from all of this mess. The person that comes to mind is Zendaya. Zendaya’s a star. Zendaya’s going to be a star for the rest of my life. She will be a star for the rest of my children’s lives. That’s how that’s going to be. You can just see it. She’s a star. It’s still possible. When we find people like that, it’s important. Timothee Chalamet is a star. That’s just the way it is. We used to grow a lot more of them. It’s just hard now. It’s hard to figure out who is a star and who just has a whole lot of followers.

**John:** For sure. Let’s go to our One Cool Things. Chris, I see you with an object in your hands. What is this One Cool Thing you want to share with us?

**Chris:** It’s called the Anker 3-in-1 Cube. This is my favorite new little gadget. It’s a great travel gadget. It’s a great desktop gadget. It charges an iPhone. It charges your earbuds. It’s got this little pop-out thing that charges your Apple Watch with the fast charging standard.

**John:** Nice.

**Chris:** It’s all three in one, all in this nice little cube that actually folds up with one little click, goes in your bag, or just sits nicely on your desk and takes up very little space. It’s my favorite gadget. I love it.

**Craig:** That’s A-N-K-E-R I’m presuming.

**Chris:** A-N-K-E-R, Anker [AYN-kr] or Anker [AHN-kr]. When you go on Amazon, they’re an electronics powerhouse.

**Craig:** They make a lot of USB hubs and things.

**Chris:** Yes, hubs and batteries and things like that. I have to say I’m always suspicious of those brands that exist only on the internet. I have to say I have a lot of their products. They’re actually very good. This is my very favorite one of them.

**Craig:** Look at this free ad for Anker. Unbelievable.

**Chris:** Free ad for Anker. You noticed I’m wearing the Anker T-shirt and baseball cap, and my car has an Anker skin on it.

**Craig:** I love it.

**John:** Craig, what is your free ad for?

**Craig:** My free ad is for something that I honestly think is magic. I don’t understand how this works. Are you familiar with goodrx.com?

**Chris:** No.

**John:** I don’t understand it, but I think I know what it does.

**Craig:** Here’s this insanity. If you are getting a prescription medication and for some reason your insurance doesn’t cover it, either because the med isn’t covered by your insurance or let’s say in the case of where I ran into this, I had a prescription that I was getting locally at the Rite Aid, but then my doctor was like, “Okay, let’s actually go through Express Meds,” which is our long-term medication thing through the WGA.

While I’m waiting for them to ship it, there’s a week where I need to get it refilled, but Rite Aid was like, “Sorry, they’ve already done it that way. We can’t do it this way on your insurance. However, why don’t you just go to goodrx.com?” I was like, “I don’t want to buy it from another company.” They’re like, “No, just go to goodrx.com, type in the drug you want.” Then it says, okay, where would you like to get this medicine from? One of the things is Rite Aid. They have CVS. They have Walgreens. They have everybody. I click on Rite Aid, and this little coupon comes up. I show it to them. They type the number in. They’re like, “Okay, so instead of being $5,973, it’s $12, also without insurance.” Without insurance.

Now, how is this working? I do not know, and I also am on the verge of not caring, because it does. It’s startling. If you have a prescription and it’s not covered by your insurance, goodrx.com apparently figures it out anyway.

**John:** They’re giving you some sort of a coupon, rebate code thing. It’s putting it in some group plan. It’s doing behind-the-scenes shenanigans.

**Craig:** Shenanigans.

**John:** Great. Shenanigans. Our whole health system is shenanigans. Chris McQuarrie’s laughing there because he’s in the UK.

**Chris:** It’s the way you went, “Shenanigans.”

**Craig:** It is shenanigans.

**Chris:** The answer is shenanigans.

**Craig:** Shenanigans. You know what? I love it. Great. Whatever it is.

**Chris:** It’s a scientific explanation.

**Craig:** If I open the door of the goodrx.com company and the inside is filled with nothing but leprechauns, I’m just going to close the door, back away, and drive away. That’s fine. I don’t care how it’s working. All I know is, what the hell is that? Wow.

**John:** Wow.

**Craig:** There’s my free ad.

**John:** My free ad is for Signal, which people are listening to this saying, “You’re just now discovering Signal?” Signal is the messaging app. It’s known as being encrypted, which is great. Love it. It’s actually much better for… We had these group email threads that were getting endless and long and terrible. It’s all people who need to talk about one thing. It was these emails that were going back and forth. It was a disaster. We wisely moved over to Signal. There’s just a channel on Signal, which we’re all in this group chat. It’s so much better of an experience. If you are stuck in a group email or a group text situation, try Signal for it, because it honestly has been so much better of an experience going through this. It’s simpler than setting up a new Slack instance. It’s free. It’s been just a great experience. Signal I would recommend if you are in a group conversation situation.

**Chris:** I got rid of WhatsApp and only use Signal. It’s actually great. Signal’s the best one, most secure too.

**John:** That is our show for this week. Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt. It’s edited by Matthew Chilelli. Our outro this week is by Nico Mansy. If you have an outro, send us a link to ask@johnaugust.com. That’s also a place where you can send questions. You can find the show notes for this episode and all episodes at johnaugust.com. That’s also where you’ll find the transcripts and sign up for our weeklyish newsletter called Inneresting, which has lots of links to things about writing. We have T-shirts and hoodies, and they’re great. You can find them at Cotton Bureau. We’re coming up with this Episode 600 T-shirt, so stay tuned for that. You can sign up to become a Premium member at scriptnotes.net, where you get all of the back-episodes and bonus segments, like the one we’re about to record on the movie theater experience. Chris McQuarrie, thank you so much for coming back on our program.

**Craig:** Thank you, Chris.

**Chris:** My pleasure. We’ll do team dynamics in a hundred episodes.

**John:** Love it. Perfect.

[Bonus Segment]

**John:** Chris McQuarrie, let’s say you’re making some giant movie that’s coming out, perhaps in a summer at some point. If I have my choice of theaters and theater experiences to go to, what do you think is the best, current in the United States at least, that I could go see a film like the one you might want to make?

**Chris:** It’s a very tricky question. The great leveler for me is Dolby Atmos and Dolby Vision. Sound is a huge component for me. I consider sound and music to be a full third of the experience. I think your sound design and your score are actually more important than any dialog in the movie. Dolby Atmos is the way to do it. Dolby Vision is truly amazing.

**John:** What is Dolby Vision?

**Chris:** Dolby Vision is the Dolby projection system, these laser projectors that are super high-definition laser projectors, which are one of the things you’ll experience when you go to a lot of your movie theaters. There’s foot-lamberts, I believe it is, the brightness in the bulb. Most projectors that you’re seeing, the bulbs are either not replaced frequently enough, they’re not properly maintained. A lot of times, when you’re going to the movie theater, you’re watching what should be, I think it’s at 11 foot-lamberts, you’re watching it at 9 or 8 or even less than that. Dolby Vision, its standard is 14, I think. I should not be giving you all the technical on it, only that it is extremely bright, clear image. The blacks are very, very black and very defined.

A great demonstration I saw of it, you sit in this theater and you watch them project black onto the screen. The black is actually very, very, very dark gray, because how can you get black if you’re projecting onto the screen? Dolby Vision can project proper black onto the screen. When you see it, the difference is quite startling. You get an incredibly rich image, and you get incredibly immersive sound. It’s to me in an all around. Dolby Vision, it can be in different sized auditoriums. For me, if I was going to build a theater in my home and had all the money in the world, I’d build a Dolby Vision.

**Craig:** You got close. I don’t know what you’re waiting for. I agree completely.

**Chris:** You’d be tragically surprised.

**Craig:** Is someone spending money in your house or something? I don’t know.

**Chris:** When you spend five years making a movie instead of two and a half-

**Craig:** Oh, yeah, there is that. I agree with Chris McQuarrie. Take that to the bank, my friends.

**Chris:** What?

**Craig:** Take that to the bank.

**Craig:** Wow.

**Craig:** Yes, that is absolutely correct. The future of projection is lasers, without a doubt. This problem of dim bulbs, as I’ve been saying for a long time, is brutal. Even without Dolby Surround and all that stuff, sound when we were kids was still pretty impressive because of the number of speakers and the size of speakers in a large auditorium situation. Sound has obviously gotten really, really good. Even at home, we can get really, really good sound. The projection on a large screen is difficult for people to have at home. I’m putting aside the communal experience watching a movie. The visual aspect, if it is a Dolby visual, it is a dramatic improvement.

Also, let us take a moment. If you do watch things at home and you’re making your own theater, let us take a moment to talk about something that is near and dear to both my heart and Mr. McQuarrie’s heart and any rational human being’s heart, which is to turn off your fucking motion smoothing. Get your remote out and turn that shit off. Go into the settings. It’s in advanced settings. Anything that’s called smoothing, motion, anything with the word smooth or motion, turn off. Turn it off. It’s crap.

**Chris:** Turn it off.

**Craig:** Crap.

**Chris:** It’s video interpolation.

**Craig:** It’s awful. Awful.

**Chris:** It’s terrible. It’s terrible. Whole generations of audiences are being conditioned to watch-

**Craig:** Crap.

**Chris:** … what Rian Johnson described as liquid diarrhea.

**Craig:** I saw a trailer. I think I was showing somebody the trailer for Chernobyl before it had come out. I was in his house. I just Apple TV’ed it over to his television to watch it. I turned it off within three seconds. I’m like, “Nope. You’ve got motion smoothing on.”

**Chris:** Can’t watch it that way.

**Craig:** It made me feel horrible. It made me feel like I had screwed up so terribly by creating Days of Our Lives – Chernobyl. It just looked so awful. Turn that shit off. That aside, theater-wise, Dolby. Dolby visual.

**John:** Chris, I remember when THX came out. It was an accreditation system, basically making sure that the theater itself actually met certain standards. I remember a THX guy came to one of our classes at USC and said, “If you have a choice of where to sit in a theater, you should sit about two thirds of the way back and in the center, because that’s basically where the filmmaker probably was situated as they were mixing the film.” Is that still an accurate way of thinking about, given your druthers, where a person might want to choose to sit?

**Chris:** I can tell you that when I go to test movies, I end up in the back of the theater most often. It’s the only time I sit in the back of the theater. It’s truly horrible back there, no matter how good the auditorium is, because you’re in the surrounds. You’re not in the center five one. You’re not in that center channel. They’re fairly well balanced. If you’re in the center, anywhere between the front and the middle of the auditorium generally, I don’t sit that far back.

When I’m mixing the movie and our mixing stage, the thing we’re constantly reminding ourselves of is that you will never see the movie or hear the movie as good as the filmmakers do on their state-of-the-art mixing stage. We actually have settings whereby, because we know that there are going to be projectors with a shitty bulb, if you have a scene that’s dark, we’ll deliberately dim it, to look at it and say, is there going to be any detail when you’re watching this in a shitty theater that hasn’t been updated in 12 years, because they don’t make enough money? We’ll deaden the sound. We’ll do stuff like that.

That’s why those things are really important. That’s why when you see Dolby Atmos, you know you are getting a quality, standardized, and probably fairly recently updated system. If you do that, Dolby Atmos is pretty immersive, regardless of where you’re sitting in the theater. It’s different from theater to theater. It’s hard to say definitively.

**John:** My final question for you, Chris, is, Nicole Kidman in the AMC ad talks about sound you can feel. As you are mixing sound, are you only thinking about the actual sound that you’re able to project, or is there something about… Some of these theaters now actually have special extra vibrational things. Is that something you now consider with the kind of movies you’re making?

**Chris:** You will hear more and more a term, PLF, premium large format. Premium large format, there is IMAX, there’s Dolby Vision, there’s 4DX, which is what you’re talking about where it has the shaky seats, and there’s one called ScreenX, which is now they have screens on the side of the theater.

**John:** Our Koreatown theater has that, which is really cool.

**Chris:** When I first heard about it, I thought, what? Then I saw. Like 3D, it’s something where it can be done right, or the movie suits it or the movie doesn’t. Sometimes the transfer really works, and sometimes it doesn’t. It depends on how much time and work and effort they put into it. Yes, sound you could feel, absolutely. Even if I’m doing something that’s not 4DX or ScreenX, the mixes I like are mixes that you can feel. There are elements in Dead Reckoning, for instance, that you primarily feel. You’ll never experience them on home video the way that you will in a theater. You’ll hear it in home video, but in a theater you’ll actually physically feel it. It’s actually something we’ve done with a malevolent force. In our movie, we created a sound element that is as much physical as it is audible.

**John:** Awesome. Chris McQuarrie, thank you so much.

**Craig:** Thank you, Chris.

**Chris:** Thank you.

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Scriptnotes, Episode 599: Group Dynamics, Transcript

June 20, 2023 Scriptnotes Transcript

The original post for this episode can be found [here](https://johnaugust.com/2023/group-dynamics).

**John August:** Hello and welcome. My name is John August.

**Craig Mazin:** Okay, my name is Craig Mazin.

**John:** This is Episode 599 of Scriptnotes, a podcast about screenwriting and things that are interesting to screenwriters. We often talk about story in terms of the journey of a single protagonist, but some movies center on a group of characters that serve as the hero. Today on the show, we’ll look at these group dynamics and how to think about them both on the scene level and story-wide. We’ll also talk about pitch decks and translations of public domain works. We have some follow-up on binging episodes versus putting them out one week at a time. We got a real grab bag of stuff here today, Craig.

**Craig:** I love a grab bag. It keeps us spontaneous and fresh.

**John:** That’s the goal. In our bonus segment for Premium members, I’d love to talk about how you start playing an RPG video game, because I’m looking at two new ones, Diablo and the new Zelda. You may find the same experience. I want to start playing them, but I also don’t want to make dumb mistakes that have me burning like 10 hours. We’ll talk about strategies for how you start playing one of these games.

**Craig:** What a great topic. So much anxiety. So much early game anxiety. Oh my god, what skill tree will I pick? We will dig into that. You know what? If you don’t play video games but you are a Premium member, stick around for that bonus segment anyway, because there are life lessons, my friends. Life lessons.

**John:** I’m excited to hear them. Let’s start off with this new report that I saw, uh, today. So Deadline had a link to it. Well, Deadline actually did not have a link to it, which was so frustrating. They had a zillion links in their article, but none of them actually linked to the actual study. I had to Google a quote from there to find an actual better article about it. We’ll link to something from The Streamable.

It’s a study on which is more successful for streamers, to put all the episodes of a season out at once or do them week by week? This is a thing we’ve talked about often on the show, and our opinions on this, which I think you and I both are in the opinion that you build more momentum and more love for a show week by week than putting them all out to binge. Here are some numbers that study that.

This is from a company that monitors actual TV. They’re not getting their data from the streamers themselves. They’re getting it from viewers and who’s watching a show, who’s finishing a show. What they were able to see is that if you put out all the episodes at once, more people will finish the whole series, but the actual growth of the show is limited. It doesn’t sustain for as long. To me, I think what we’ve always talked about is that if you are a streamer, your goal is to keep people subscribed to your service, and therefore it makes sense to just keep people hooked as long as possible.

**Craig:** Obviously, I’m a big believer in the weekly method. This makes total sense to me, because it is true that if you have all the episodes available, you do fall into a kind of inertia, the inertia of motion. When an object is in motion, it wants to stay in motion. An object watching a show wants to keep watching a show. Watch the next episode. Watch the next episode. Watch the next episode. Sure, you’ll finish it. In finishing it, it’s eaten so quickly, digested so quickly, that it’s forgotten quickly.

There is no ability to share a communal discussion, whereas for both of the television shows I’ve made, the week-to-week model wasn’t part of its success, it was almost all of its success. It’s not like The Last of Us premiered to small numbers. It premiered to fantastic numbers. It just grew from there. It just grew, and it became a global discussion, because it was week to week.

The week-to-week model also creates this cottage industry of summary recaps, tons of podcasts. There was probably, I don’t know, 15 or 20 podcasts that would just do a, “Okay, we just watched this episode of The Last of Us. Here’s what we think.” I think everybody should be doing it. Now, that said, this article is making an argument that certain cases, binging may be better.

**John:** The two marquee shows they talk about from 2022 are Netflix’s Wednesday and HBO’s House of the Dragon. Wednesday was a binge all the episodes at once. House of the Dragon was the classic weekly model.

Wednesday did great. It was a giant hit. It did do big numbers for them. It had a lot of rewatching too, which is understandable that you’d get through the whole thing, then just go back and rewatch the whole thing. If you think about Wednesday, it had some breakout cultural moments. Wednesday’s dance got to be a big thing. It did burn really bright, but it didn’t continue out over the number of weeks. I don’t think it has the cultural conversation that House of the Dragon did, for its classic weekly structure.

Netflix can’t be upset with Wednesday, and HBO can’t be upset with House of the Dragon. They both were very successful for what they were trying to do.

**Craig:** Yes, and they will both come back, and they will both make more. Look, it’s a little bit of a question too of the tone of a show. Wednesday does feel like it goes down a little bit easier. House of the Dragon’s pretty heavy. It’s violent. It’s upsetting. It’s hard to watch that show one after another, after another. Wednesday’s much lighter fare. It’s more of a young adult show. It’s got comedy elements.

If I were Netflix, and I’m not, if I were, I’d run it week by week. I would, because I just look at how there is this world of discussion, analysis, debate, group watching. If everybody was watching that dance scene at the same time, it would’ve been even bigger.

**John:** Yeah, very possible.

**Craig:** It just feels like they’re missing out. This is part of the Netflix fire hose. There’s something that’s slightly cheapening about the fact that you can see everything all at once, all the time, no matter what it is.

**John:** Looking at Disney, with Disney Plus, so two of their Marvel shows, Loki 2 will be weekly, like the way it was always. That makes sense, because there’s going to be a lot of speculation in between episodes about what happens. Echo, which is the spin-off of Hawkeye, is going to be all at once. Maybe that makes sense. They can at least see how it does. Echo is a younger show. It is probably more on the order of a Wednesday, so maybe it’ll make more sense for that show to be all at once.

**Craig:** It might. I did see some commentary on the internet that framed it in terms of this is how Disney values these shows, with the understanding that putting it out there all at once was a devaluing move.

Now, I’m not sure what the benefit is of putting it all out at once versus week by week, unless the idea is we don’t think… I think this is what people were implying by the devaluing. If the company thinks, “We actually don’t think this thing is going to build. We got to get them real fast,” this one is going to be like, we got you, you watched it all, hooray, but no one’s going to be coming back week after week to watch this. That’s an interesting concept.

Netflix hasn’t had the ability to discriminate like that. It is interesting that Disney has started to discriminate like that, whereas HBO only does things week by week. We’ll see what happens. I’ve just always been puzzled by this whole, here it is all at once.

**John:** All at once. With Stranger Things, this most recent season is split up into two chunks. You could say it was for story reasons, but it was really I think to hold people across another month so that they would have to stay and subscribe to Netflix. I think that was good for the show, because it built up speculation about what happens in the second half of the season. I wouldn’t be surprised if they do more experiments where they are trying something more weekly down the road.

**Craig:** I’m curious. We should have the Duffer Brothers on the show for sure, not only because they’ve made this just culturally important televised institution, but I want to hear their opinion on this. Stranger Things seems to me like the poster child for a show that ought to be week to week, because it’s a mystery. It has cliffhangers at the end of every episode.

**John:** Definitely.

**Craig:** It has these “holy crap” moments that you want to share with everybody communally.

**John:** It is intense. It’s intense, and the episodes are long. It feels like once per week would actually serve that show really well.

**Craig:** Yes. I wonder if they’ve ever asked. I know that Ted Sarandos is on record as saying the whole binge method is part of the DNA of Netflix, but maybe not.

**John:** Yeah, but other DNA has changed too. Netflix was shooting their first pilots as we went into the strike. They had never done pilots. Now they’re doing pilots. They didn’t have ads. Now they have ads. A lot is changing. I do wonder if the binge model will also change.

**Craig:** Honestly, I have never understood it. It always occupied that same space in my brain that MoviePass did, which is, wait, what am I missing? In the case of MoviePass, nothing. I missed nothing. I was correct. You were correct. Anybody with half a brain was correct. In this case, I just wonder. It feels like I’m missing something. I just don’t know what it is.

**John:** I think here’s maybe what you’re missing is what metric they’re going for, because this article would say that you look at Wednesday, and overall people finished the show more. They may have some metric that says people finishing a show is better in the long run for our retention. Maybe they have some reason why they believe that. I think they’re missing out.

The bigger point we’re making in terms of when you don’t release a show week by week, you lose out on the whole ecosystem that can build up around it. That feels like a giant loss. There’s just no way to get around that.

**Craig:** There is something that feels like a lack of vote of confidence. Queen’s Gambit that Scott Frank made, that ought to have been a week-to-week show. I haven’t asked Scott about it, but it just seems like that would’ve been way better than putting it all out there, because it was fantastic. My whole thing is, if it’s crack, don’t give them all the crack at once. The whole point of crack is-

**John:** Also, people want to say, oh, teenagers will want to watch it all at once. They can also watch it all at once when it’s all done, and so they can join in the conversation.

**Craig:** Also, isn’t part of life telling teenagers no? By the way, I have no idea how crack works. I don’t know why I was just saying, “Isn’t the point of crack,” and then I trailed off, because I don’t know the point. I actually don’t know.

**John:** You could put something on the table and say, “That’s crack.” I’m like, “Okay.” I can recognize the paraphernalia around it, but if you were to say, “This is a rock of crack. This is a portion of crack. This is the appropriate amount of crack for a person to use,” it’s probably zero, but I wouldn’t know what it is.

**Craig:** I think if you put a piece of crack, and I don’t even know if the term piece… A rock. A rock of crack.

**John:** I’m assuming rock, yeah.

**Craig:** You put a rock of crack down next to a rock of a little bit of drywall, I’m not sure I would be able to tell the difference or pick out the one that’s drywall versus the crack.

**John:** If it was something that I got out from the tread of my shoes, that kind of thing, I wouldn’t know the difference.

**Craig:** I’ve noticed that Drew’s been real quiet about this.

**Drew Marquardt:** I have secrets.

**Craig:** I’m guessing that he’s like, “Oh, guys. Guys. Guys.”

**Drew:** We need to have a meeting.

**John:** Back in Scotland. Back in Scotland.

**Craig:** We need to have another side podcast that’s just about crack.

**Drew:** Just me talking about the different sizes of crack rocks.

**Craig:** Just you talking really fast and wildly about crack. We solved that problem.

**John:** We solved that problem. Let’s do some more follow-up here. Drew, we have something about tone meetings.

**Drew:** David Michael Maurer, ACE, wrote in. He said, “Loved listening to Episode 598 with Vince Gilligan. Wanted to share that in my experience as an editor, being part of the tone meetings is incredibly helpful. It allows me to hear firsthand what the showrunner and writers intended and listen for any creative pivots that the director may discuss. I can also ask questions earlier in the process about things like VFX or complicated sequences that may impact post-production and set time to sidebar with the director if needed so that they’re supported.

“Usually, this helps my editor’s cut get closer to what everyone intended tonally earlier. This also makes the director’s cut easier and stronger, and the showrunner’s first editorial pass becomes a much more enjoyable experience.”

**Craig:** Oh, yes. Oh, David Michael Maurer, I would like to kiss you for that. We certainly have our editors sitting in on our tone meetings. It’s essential. Look, editors do need a sense of freedom to approach the footage without feeling like they’re shackled.

On the other hand, you know, in talking about this very topic with Tim Goode, who’s one of our editors on The Last of Us, he does look back at the script a lot, and understanding what the lines are between the lines or why things were said or why things were put where they were, which does come out in a tone meeting, helps flesh that out.

We call it the clue book, because sometimes editors are like… I watch a scene and I’m like, “Huh.” They’re like, “I just didn’t quite know what to do here given the footage.” I’m like, “Let’s look at the clue book.” Then they’re like, “Oh. Oh. Oh, okay. Oh, okay, okay.” Getting a jump start on the clue book is a fantastic thing. If you are a showrunner, please, for the love of god, include your editors on tone meetings, for sure.

**John:** Craig, just a little sidebar here. Thinking back to The Last of Us, or Chernobyl as well, the editor may have been involved in these initial tone meetings. They have a sense of what that is. When they look at the footage from a scene, I assume they’re looking at what is the closest to a master shot that there would be.

In a lot of these shows, can you even fairly say that there’s a master shot for the scene? Are you ever just filming something wide enough that you can get the whole sense of what the scene’s supposed to be?

**Craig:** We certainly do. We’re not television. We’re HBO. Look, Chernobyl and The Last of Us certainly had the budgets and the creative ambition to be as cinematic as we could. We definitely shoot lots wide wides, wide wide wide wides and weird wides. It is a little different than some smaller shows. Obviously, every show is different.

The other challenge for our editors is we shoot a lot. For instance, our shooting schedule on average for an episode is 20 days. Now I say that around most people that make television and they just are weeping, because they get five days, maybe 12.

**John:** It’s crazy. So many one-hour procedurals, maybe they had eight days, now they’ve been cut down to seven and a half or they have to cross-board two shows to get 15 days.

**Craig:** At that point, your ability to shoot anything other than the bare necessities is really reduced. We do have that. They have a lot more footage to work with, which creates a lot more possibility, which is certainly part of what we do. If you look at Chernobyl or The Last of Us and count the big wides, you’ll count a lot of them. We’re big on those.

**John:** How often, as you were setting every day, did you do wides first versus a more specific shot? Are you almost always wides first?

**Craig:** Almost always. If we’re exterior, I always want to start wide, because it helps me start to choreograph the motion of the scene. It’s kind of free blocking. We’ve obviously blocked. Because it’s big and wide, you get a little bit of a sense of where positions are. It helps you. You can move things around a little bit. It starts to give you a little bit also of a sense of tone. It afford you an opportunity to create a visual transition, if you need, from what was prior, or you plan ahead to make your visual transition something super duper close. You just know when you’re getting close, you gotta grab that. Generally speaking, I follow the traditional wide and then march in.

**John:** It also gives you a chance to really look at the performances and see what it is that you may want to, little moments you may want to pick up as you get closer in or change or give yourself some options, because-

**Craig:** The actors are also using those big wides as rehearsals, because they know the moments that are crucial aren’t going to be playing in this huge wide, but it gets everybody’s juices flowing.

**John:** Some more follow-up.

**Drew:** Patrick writes, “That Disney TV movie from Episode 597 was in mono because there wasn’t stereo television in most places. That wasn’t until later in the ’80s with shows proudly displaying ‘in stereo’ at the beginning. For The Ewok Adventure in 1984, George Lucas being George Lucas, he wanted people to have the chance to watch it in stereo. They got radio stations in major markets to simulcast the audio in stereo. There were even ads explaining how to set up your home stereo.”

**John:** I do not remember The Ewok Adventure. I do remember the first time I would see the little bugs in the corner of the screen, like, “in stereo,” because it was a big deal when stuff was in stereo.

**Craig:** I gotta say, there’s gotta be some word for this, a memory that was simply not there and now is there. Just by Patrick saying, “Proudly displaying ‘in stereo,'” suddenly I’m like, oh yes, of course. I remember seeing “in stereo” for sure, but it was just gone out of my brain. It didn’t exist until Patrick reminded me. What is that about?

**John:** Let’s go on to our marquee topic. This is full disclosure. Our guest on next week’s episode, we already recorded that episode, and we were going to talk about this topic, and we ran out of town. I’m pulling it backwards or forwards in time to talk about it here on this episode.

**Craig:** Great.

**John:** I want to talk about groups. So often on the podcast we’re talking about classic dramatic theory, where you have a protagonist who begins a story. They have one set of beliefs and conditions. They undertake this journey that transforms them, finds them arriving at a different set of beliefs and circumstances. We talk about our protagonist. We talk about an antagonist, who’s the person who’s forcing them to change. There’s other characters, of course, who are very important. The central protagonist storyline is key to many movies, probably most movies. Craig, would you agree?

**Craig:** Yes, I think so. I think so, for sure.

**John:** There are movies that don’t have that one single, central protagonist. They’ve grouped the characters who share that spotlight. I thought we might spend some time talking about those kinds of movies and what a writer needs to be thinking about when you’re tackling a story that doesn’t have the one constant protagonist, but rather has a group that is doing that hero’s work.

Some examples of the classic thing would be like an Erin Brockovich, a Michael Clayton, an Elvis, Amadeus, Tár. They often have the character’s name as the title of the movie. That is one kind. Then there’s Charlie’s Angels or Reservoir Dogs, ensemble comedies like Best in Show or The Hangover, A Fish Called Wanda. There’s a lot of movies that do have groups of characters. Ocean’s Eleven has groups of characters that do things. Let’s spend some time thinking about the difference and how you make sure that there still is a narrative story drive even with disparate characters carrying the football through it.

**Craig:** One of the things that teamwork, and I like to think of them as teamwork movies and stories, do is they reinforce a natural pro-social desire we have to see functioning relationships where individuals get to shine because of their diverse abilities.

Pretty much the entire Marvel universe is like this. Yes, they definitely did Captain America. That’s Captain America. Iron Man is Iron Man. It wasn’t until they hit the Avengers where things went kaboom, because we love watching The Dirty Dozen, we love watching Seven Samurai, we love watching Ocean’s Eleven, where a team is assembled. Being on a winning team feels good. It takes away the burden of being the only one.

A lot of single-protagonist stories talk about the one somebody has chosen to win. In this case we’re all working together. Each one of us is different and has a moment to shine. The story is about the relationships. Now, typically, the relationships are narrowed down to one central relationship inside of the group, because we can’t really handle more than that.

Everybody gets a chance to win, and everybody gets a chance to lose. Watching the team struggle, fall apart, and then come back together actualized and all doing their individual parts is so satisfying. It’s just satisfying on a deep, deep level.

**John:** We hadn’t planned for which movies you wanted to tackle. Even thinking about the first Star Wars, A New Hope, it is Luke Skywalker’s story. He does protagonate in a very classic way, and yet the ensemble around him is very, very important. We see the team dynamics form and splinter and the tensions within relationships that are not even specifically about Luke.

You have smaller groups within that larger group. Of course you have C-3PO and R2-D2 and then their relationship. You have Luke and Leia and their relationship, but also Leia and Han Solo, their relationship. Within that bigger dynamic, you have smaller individual pairings or triads there, and you want to see how those are developing within the bigger context of things.

In those relationships, you have to be able to track those independently of the plot. It’s not plot stuff. It’s really about the growth of characters as we’re following them through the story.

**Craig:** If you note, each one of those characters will have some sort of failure and then some sort of success. The failure and success is within the context of the team. R2-D2 and C-3PO are basically failures. C-3PO is a failure all the time, but then R2-D2 is the one that ultimately saves them all from dying in the trash compactor. Eventually, C-3PO has his moments where he gets to win. That is exciting to watch. It’s exciting to see Han Solo be both swashbuckling and cool and then also selfish and then cool again. Everybody doing their part is just, again, it’s like watching all these pieces click together that feel so good.

In The Hangover, Alan, Zach Galifianakis’s character, is an absolute disaster of a human being and so much fun to write, because he’s just chaos. He’s completely unhinged. He has the strangest worldview and an enormous amount of confidence and certainty, even though he deserves no confidence and certainty. When the chips are down, literally, he just engages this bizarre gear he has and wins all this money at blackjack, because he’s special. We love watching that. We love watching the underdog who’s good at nothing suddenly shine and crush it.

**John:** Now, thinking about The Hangover movies, we talk about this on the macro scale, but let’s think about it on a scene level. You have several of the characters together in a scene. Classically, you would want to have your protagonist be driving that scene, and yet you don’t have one clear central protagonist. How do you approach a scene and who should be in charge of the scene, or are mostly people vying for control of the scene?

**Craig:** The Hangover, that trio of characters follows a pretty classic dramatic method of imagining one person that is split into three parts. You have the id, the ego, and the superego.

Ed Helms, his character is very much the superego. He is responsible. He is anxious. He’s concerned about logic and rules. Then Bradley Cooper’s character is very much about, understood, but force of action, getting things done. This is essential. If we have to break the rules, so be it, but it’s all in service of doing the right thing.

Then you have Zach’s character, who is chaos. Chaos, appetite, urges. Watching those three guys negotiate with each other is a little bit like watching a single person struggling to figure out what to do. Just like in real life, sometimes it’s our id that we need to release to win the day, and sometimes not.

**John:** Thinking back to the Charlie’s Angels movies, those were some of the most difficult things I ever had to write, because you had three central characters who fundamentally had no conflict with each other. They had some sisterly conflict, but their primary source of friction was not with each other. They each needed their own backstory, each needed their own love interest and thing that they were going out that was separate from the main A plot. It was really challenging.

Yet I could think of them as being, like you said, a single force. It generally wasn’t hard to figure out how to drive a scene, because one or several of them could drive the action in that scene. You felt anchored as long as one of those people was there.

**Craig:** There has to be a clear distinction between them. You don’t want repetition. That’s really important. You want to feel like everybody is specifically required. Ocean’s Eleven is a really good example. It has a very classic group dynamic model of we’re going to bring a team together.

Interestingly, there’s not a ton of difference between Rusty and Danny, Brad Pitt’s character and George Clooney’s. They’re both super cool, super calm masterminds who trust each other completely. They function actually more as their own little mini team. It’s like they’re partners, parents. They actually work like parents. Mother-father, father-father, it doesn’t matter. Then everybody else under them has a very specific role to do a very specific thing. Watching how those pieces come together is fascinating.

**John:** Can you imagine an Ocean’s Eleven where that central couple had real tensions or real fights? It would be a very different movie. I don’t know if you’d feel comfortable within the movie. You don’t want mom and dad fighting.

**Craig:** You don’t. One of the things that Ted Griffin did so beautifully in Ocean’s Eleven is place the central relationship tension between Danny Ocean and Tess, Julia Roberts’s character. They were exes. He’s trying to win her back. That’s what the movie’s really about. The whole thing is, how do I steal your heart back? That makes sense. If there’s any tension between Danny and Rusty, it’s, is this about the money or is this about her? You get the sense that Rusty always knows that it’ll work out. He’s just that cool.

That’s a good way of thinking about things. The tension inside of a group is important, but the central tension inside of a group really does need to be limited ultimately to two people.

There’s what I call fake tension. Again, let’s go back to Ocean’s Eleven, since it’s such a good example. You have Casey Affleck and you have Scott Caan. The two of them are basically, I think they’re the vehicle guys. They fight each other constantly.

**John:** They bicker.

**Craig:** They’re constantly bickering, hitting each other. It’s fake conflict. It’s hysterical. You don’t worry. You’re not emotionally invested in that conflict. That conflict doesn’t matter. It’s there for fun.

**John:** We also recognize that dynamic of conflict. They’re doing the thing that they would do. It’s not fake in the sense that it was artificial on the part of Ted Griffin. It was the kind of shit that two buddies do.

**Craig:** Then there was this interesting, I’ll call it a sub-protagonist, with Matt Damon, because Matt Damon’s character was the one guy who was really trying to prove himself. He was the new guy who was getting hazed and who felt like he didn’t belong and was constantly undermined and screwed with, because he’s the rookie. Then he achieves, and he feels like he earns his place in the group. It’s not quite at the level of, okay, Danny Ocean wins Tess back. It was still a satisfying journey for him, because his relationship was actually with the entire group, like, how do I fit into this whole group?

**John:** What we’re describing here is that each of these characters in these group dynamics has to have a clearly identifiable want and need that the audience can pick up on. As a writer, you need to find enough time to service that and service that progress and progression, which is really challenging given all the other story you’re trying to do. It’s one of the reasons why writing movies with a bunch of characters can be so challenging, because you’re just trying to service so many different things at once.

A scene in Charlie’s Angels had to service three different storylines at all times. That’s really tough. It also meant that if one of the scenes didn’t work or got cut out, you’re screwed, because a bunch of stuff was falling away with that scene getting cut out. Everything has to click and work in ways that are less flexible than in the classic protagonist story, where you might say, oh, we can skip over that beat, because we get it. If a bunch of other things are hinging on that moment, that’s a challenge. Ideally, one character’s growth or change is coming in relation to another character’s growth or change. You’re seeing those dynamics shift because they’re both progressing. They’re both moving to a new space.

**Craig:** Always important. To view everything through the lens of a relationship is important. The group is this large relationship. Inside of that group there are little mini relationships. Perhaps there is a relationship between one person and the entire group.

As you go through these things, you need to look out for characters that you start to look at as homework, like, “That’s right, this person hasn’t said anything in nine scenes.” Those characters you do need to think about, do we need them, what are they doing.

That said, there is also value to characters that are very quiet, disappear until the moment they are needed. When they are called upon to do one single thing, you go, “Wow.” Grease man in Ocean’s Eleven. He’s the acrobat who doesn’t speak English. I think that’s what the term is, grease man. It’s the guy that can wriggle into places. He has one thing to do, and he does it, and it’s awesome. That’s totally legal.

In The Hangover, there were a lot of scenes where Zach barely said anything, but he would say one little thing at the end, and it would make it awesome. That’s okay too. You just make sure that you don’t have a character that feels like they should be talking a lot, but they have nothing to say. That’s problematic.

**John:** Then you run into the Patton Oswalt problem, where he’s standing in the scene and-

**Craig:** Oh my god. I wish we had talked about that when Patton was on the-

**John:** We did. We talked about it.

**Craig:** We did. Okay, good.

**John:** We did, yeah.

**Craig:** I’m glad, because that is one of the… If people haven’t seen it, I guess we must’ve referenced it then with a link, so that’s good. That’s a great example of, there’s just no reason for that person to be there.

**John:** Even in stories where you do have more of a classic protagonist arc, something too like Top Gun: Maverick, it is Tom Cruise’s story fundamentally, and yet the group plays an incredibly important role. Do we get to spend a lot of time individually with some of those pilots? No, not really. There’s the one guy who’s quiet and has glasses, but we still love him, because we get what his role is within that group, and we’re rooting for him.

Those were all very crucial choices made early on in the process and during shooting to figure out how do we understand all these characters and what their deal is, even though we’re not going to have a tremendous amount of screen time to support those. They make really smart choices. It was so rewarding to see them succeed down the road or really felt it when they would have a setback. That’s crucial. Even though the central relationship is really Tom Cruise and Miles Teller, the other people, we understood their dynamics. They weren’t just glorified background players.

**Craig:** Exactly. If you are thinking about writing a movie or a television show that is based around a group dynamic, I urge you to watch some of the better sports films, because movies about actual teams are the purest example, I think. Heist movies come pretty close, because it’s also a team. Watching movies about teams teaches you so much about how to make that work. Have you ever seen Slap Shot, John?

**John:** I’ve never seen Slap Shot. I assume it’s a hockey movie.

**Craig:** Nailed it. Fantastic film. A great movie. Just wonderful. Paul Newman holds down the center of it. Anyone who’s seen Slap Shot is familiar with the Hanson Brothers. The Hanson Brothers are a fantastic example of just employing the characters with a specific skill that makes you go, “Oh, awesome.” Go ahead and we’ll throw a link on to the Hanson Brothers.

**John:** Fantastic. Let’s move on to some listener questions. Drew, what do you have for us?

**Drew:** Leanne from Burbank writes, “I’m currently writing a script completely free of any WGA signatories, where two characters rehearse a scene from Ibsen’s A Doll’s House. I would like to use a 1961 translation from an Oxford University Press compendium of Ibsen plays. Of course, A Doll’s House itself is in the public domain, but the Project Gutenberg translation isn’t quite as sharp as the Oxford one. Do I need permission to use a published translation of a public domain play in my script? If so, do I reach out to the publisher, and are they likely to give me the green light without a price tag?”

**John:** Great. The answer is yes, you would have to have permission to use that in your produced thing. Could you include that stuff in your script without that? Yes, but that could be a problem down the road.

Leanne, I worry that you’re creating problems for yourself that you don’t need to create. I think you’re using a public domain play. There’s existing translations. How much of this play are you actually including in your film? I think you could write your own version of those scenes, and we’re not going to know the difference. I think you’d make a better choice than to open yourself to any problems of using something that is not free and clear. Craig, what’s your thinking?

**Craig:** Certainly, translations are copyrightable. You do need permission for those. I think since it’s just a scene, you could reach out to the translator. It’s not the publisher. It’s the translator that has the copyright. You could reach out to the translator and say, “Hey, would you be willing to just license this to me for five bucks, just because I really, really like it? We would give you credit in the credits.” They may say, “Yeah. It’s just a scene. Sure.” They may be flattered, because they probably agree that their translation is better than the Project Gutenberg one.

If they say no, good news, you’ve got a public domain translation that you can lean on, and then you can tweak it as you wish, because you can adapt public domain works as much and as significantly as you like. I would reach out to the translator, not the publisher.

**John:** I agree. The translator is the way to go there. I think it’s a smart choice. I do ultimately though wonder, Leanne, is that… You’re using that scene for a specific reason. It’s going to have some resonance to what the other characters are doing in the moment. Your version of that scene may be more appropriate than the official Oxfordy kind of translation.

**Craig:** All true.

**John:** What else you got for us?

**Drew:** Jess in the North of England writes, “I’m finding the process of jazzing up pitch documents or accompanying slides for pitch presentations is becoming increasingly elaborate. Is it just me, or is the job of a writer now also to be a skilled graphic designer? I’m genuinely considering taking a design course so I don’t have to rely on a graphic designer every time I pitch. Even if there’s someone in house at the production company who is a competent designer, it’s still such a specific skill to collaborate and get the aesthetic right. Even just the image sourcing is a huge undertaking.

“My question is, how much of this is the job of a writer? On one hand, I think I might be going to too much trouble. Shouldn’t it just be all about the words? On the other hand, maybe this is the work. Maybe I just learn Adobe InDesign and stop being a baby.”

**John:** This is a thing that’s changed in the time that we’ve done this podcast is that pitch documents, pitch decks, art boards going into things were not nearly as crucial or as fundamental of a thing you did for writers 10 years ago when we started this podcast. Now they’re really common. If I’m pitching on Zoom, I’ll definitely have a deck, and I’ll have negotiations with the rights-holders about what can be in that deck sometimes.

For this series I’m doing, there’s been just a whole long process, which we’ve brought an outside designer to do this essentially glorified pdf that is presenting this piece of IP. It’s a big thing. I hear you, Jess. We’re all encountering this as a new thing.

**Craig:** This is one of those questions where I’m hesitant to give a hard opinion, because like John, I came up in a time where this simply just didn’t occur. The pitching was entirely a verbal exercise, and nobody expected anything but.

May very well be that taking a design course is helpful to you. If you’re paying money to people, I get nervous, because we shouldn’t be paying money to pitch things on spec. A design course may not be necessary, but it’s possible that perhaps there’s a good ole design for dummies book that you can pick up, because the elaboration of the graphics themselves isn’t really I think what ultimately adds value as much as the thought and concepts that you put into things.

I’m hesitant to tell people, “You don’t need to do that,” because maybe you do now. Maybe the people who hear pitches are like, “Wait. What? Where’s your-”

**John:** “Where’s this?” Yeah.

**Craig:** “You’re just talking to me? Get out.” I don’t know.

**John:** The last couple projects I’ve had to go out and pitch on, I put together a deck. Actually, in putting together the deck, I really did figure out the story much better, because I had to think what would I actually show here, what is the thing I’m trying to communicate here, what is the tone of this, what things can I pull from other interesting films and movies that are useful here, that can really show this.

It’s been a useful process for me, and yet I am still conflicted, because after going through this whole campaign of No Writing Left Behind, here I’m doing all this stuff that’s not quite writing, but it’s like writing. I’m telling the story with visuals here. It’s just a lot more work going into these things.

It’s setting an arms race for what is expected going into one of these sessions, and yet I just know for a fact that it is easier to have a conversation with a creative person, an executive, when you have something to show them.

Going in to pitch Aladdin at Disney, I just brought in these art boards that showed this is how I see a live-action Aladdin looking, and this is how I see Jasmine. This is how I see a very different version of the genie. I could talk through my story, but I could also point to boards, and the executives can flip back to that board and really dig in on a thing. It was incredibly helpful. I probably will never pitch without visuals again. That’s just the reality of the world we’re in right now.

**Craig:** So interesting, because in reflecting on this, it seems to me that I really ought to have done this to pitch Chernobyl or to pitch The Last of Us. The Last of Us in particular, I had an entire video game that I could’ve just taken stuff from, and I just talked. I talked for both of those. It worked.

**John:** It worked.

**Craig:** Look, I think part of it may also come down to two factors. One, Jess, is how comfortable are you talking? I love talking. I’m a big talker. I like to talk. I like to engage people with my talking. That’s probably why I default to that. The other factor is who are you pitching to, because if they’re younger, they may indeed expect these things, where if they’re older, they may have quite a few years of just hearing verbal pitches and may not need it.

The biggest factor, I think, and my guess is you like having those things, because you’ve been using them, and you must be finding them useful. You’re just trying to figure out how to mitigate the cost and the effort.

I would say the only advice I could give you is don’t spend too much money on a course. Maybe buy a book. Don’t worry too much about the beauty. The content I think is more important, the intention.

**John:** It’s crucial. I’m sure this has been a previous One Cool Thing, but I’ll put another plug in for ShotDeck, which is shotdeck.com. It’s a really good website that takes pretty much any movie you’ve ever loved and pulls stills from them that you can actually search for the terms that are in there.

As I’ve been putting together decks for things, it’s so, so helpful to say, “I need medieval castle,” and here are 30 really good stills from other movies of medieval castle, because you can find other images on the web that’ll sort of get you kind of there, but they won’t look like a really high quality movie or TV show. ShotDeck can be a really good choice for you for there.

**Craig:** Love it.

**John:** Love it.

**Craig:** Love it.

**John:** I think that is it for our questions. Let’s do some One Cool Things. Craig, what do you got?

**Craig:** My One Cool Thing today, Children’s Hospital Los Angeles, but very specifically the Center for Trans Youth Health and Development. Los Angeles Children’s Hospital, or I guess, sorry, they do go by Children’s Hospital Los Angeles. I wish it were the other way around, because then you could call it LACH as opposed to CHLA.

Regardless, they I believe are maybe the second most advanced and respected center for gender-affirming care for young people in the world. I believe the preeminent facility is in Amsterdam. If you are here in the United States, or if you’re lucky enough to be here in Los Angeles, you’ve got this incredible place here. Now, they are both pediatric, but also I believe they also take in young adults all the way to 26.

Right now, in our country, there is an effort, an ongoing effort in the states you would think it would be happening in to literally criminalize gender-affirming care for children, adolescents, young adults. The existence of a program like this is so important and profound. It also just makes me proud of my adopted city here in Los Angeles that we’re so out in the forefront.

If you are somebody who is looking for this kind of care, if you have a family member who is looking for this kind of care, just know that they not only take care of the patients, but they also talk with the families. They have every kind of care there is, emotional, mental, physical. Definitely take a look at the Center for Trans Youth Health and Development, if for no other reason than to be defiant on behalf of those who deserve it.

**John:** It’s such a frustrating moment we’re living in as we’re recording this in 2023 because things that should be just so fundamentally obvious, like that trans kids exist and that you need to protect them, are being questioned. I’m hoping that this will pass and we’ll just move on to the next thing that certain people will be outraged about. It is such a dangerous time to be messing with these kids who need help and support.

I also get so frustrated that if you talk to a person who is upset about trans kids, that they will say, “Oh, all these structures should be put in place.” Then you’ll tell them those are exactly the structures that are in place to make sure that everyone’s making smart choices.

**Craig:** The Center for Trans Youth Health and Development is not a place where you walk in and go, “Hi, I’m 10. Can you please remove my penis?” No. This is not how it functions at all. I think people have all sorts of crazy notions about how gender-affirming care functions.

I do think that this will pass. I agree with you, but it’s going to take time. I don’t know what the next panic will be. I remind myself that when you and I were young, John, people were literally suing heavy metal bands because they were Satanists who were causing suicide. There was a Satanic panic going on, not to mention just the general normal, I don’t know, criminalization and rejection of just good old-fashioned homosexuality.

We will get through this, and we will all be better for it, but until that day, it is good to know that while… People listen to us from all over the world. They may think that America is defined by its worst, which is in deranged and unfettered gun culture and hatred of people who are not straight or cisgender. America is kind of two Americas. That’s what’s happened. Used to be one, sort of, kind of. We did have Civil War.

**John:** There was that.

**Craig:** We might’ve just been whistling past the graveyard for a long time. Really, there’s two Americas, and they’re wildly different. I am very proud to live in an America that has something like Children’s Hospital Los Angeles. You can donate to them, which is important. Obviously, they are a nonprofit organization. When you donate, you might want to make one of the conditions be that they just reverse that name so that it is Los Angeles Children’s Hospital.

**John:** My One Cool Thing is so trivial by comparison that I… Maybe I should just celebrate that.

**Craig:** Did I shame you?

**John:** You did shame me. Mine is a silly game that is a Breakout-y game that’s on all the platforms. I’ve played it on iOS, on my iPhone, called Holedown, which you can giggle. It’s a silly name. It’s like Breakout, where you’re trying to smash a bunch of blocks, except that you’re moving from the top down to the bottom. It’s just a very well done, very sticky kind of dynamic there. It’s just very satisfying to smash things in it. I just really loved it. During some of the long, boring waits during the negotiations, I can pull this out and just spend a happy five minutes smashing some blocks in Holedown.

**Craig:** Wait a sec. Is that why we’re on strike, because you’ve been playing Holedown?

**John:** That’s what it’s been. It’s really pretty much all my fault. If I just focused a little bit more, I’m sure I could’ve come up with the one persuasive argument that would’ve changed the entire course of negotiations, but no, I was playing this.

**Craig:** But no, Holedown. What a brilliant idea to just go, “Let’s reverse the flow of Breakout.” I’ll check it out. That sounds like a fun game.

**John:** It’s a good game. Holedown.com so you can see all the different versions that are out there for the game. That is our show for this week. Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt. It’s edited by Matthew Chilelli.

**Craig:** If you say.

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**Craig:** Great.

**John:** Craig, thanks for a fun show.

**Craig:** Thank you, John.

[Bonus Segment]

**John:** Craig, so my Instagram stories have been dominated by people who are playing the new Zelda on the Switch. Have you started Zelda?

**Craig:** No. I must admit that even though I’m a big gamer and have sunk god knows how much time to games like GTA or Elder Scrolls or Fallout, Breath of the Wild, I just… I, by the way, loved old Zelda. Ocarina of Time, great, and Twilight Princess. I just didn’t love Breath of the Wild. I didn’t connect with it.

**John:** I have a Switch too. I played it a little bit. It never bowled me over. People love it. That’s fantastic. I do remember Ocarina of Time. It wasn’t pre-internet, but I just lost my way in it and didn’t really finish it or follow it that closely.

**Craig:** The Zelda games are very comforting in one sense, that there are certain things that are always there no matter what, and if you enjoy them, you enjoy them. I do. I enjoy going into a temple and figuring out the puzzles. I enjoy opening up the chests. I enjoy the (singing). I love fighting the bosses. I also like going to the different groups of people. There are the fish people. There are the rock people. I love that.

Breath of the Wild was so big. It’s a little thing. It’s a little, tiny thing. I understand it is continued in this new one. That is that your weapons would break. I just couldn’t handle it. It just was making me nuts. It was making me nuts. In Fallout, your weapons do wear down, and you can patch them up. It’s just a much better crafting system. I was like, “Oh my god, I got a sword, and the sword broke? I can’t. I can’t.”

**Drew:** That feels like it defeats the point of Zelda, which is going around and cutting grass for hours at a time.

**Craig:** I know, exactly, or just like, I’m going to wander through this field of easy guys and just chop chop chop. It’s just so satisfying. Then like, oh, no, or like, I’m going to climb up this cliff, and then there’s a guy up there that immediately, bop, and my sword breaks instantly, and I’m screwed. What am I going to do, punch him, spit at him? I don’t know.

Look, people love Zelda. My oldest kid played all the way through Breath of the Wild, loved it. I don’t mean to take anything away from people. People love that game. It’s just really I did not connect with it, so I probably will not take on this new one.

**John:** I’ve played Dragon Age and finished Dragon Age. I’ve done Elder Scrolls, and I love that very much. I’m looking at the new Diablo 4 coming out. In all those games, you create a character, and then you have to make some decisions pretty early on that determine your class or your tree, which skill tree you’re on. I just don’t want to screw up, Craig. I ended up having to look online and see what people are loving or not loving. These games should be pretty well balanced so that you could do things multiple ways, but if you try to follow two trees, death, doom.

**Craig:** Here’s what I would say. This is where the life lessons come into play.

**John:** Please.

**Craig:** There is an anxiety about making the wrong choices that are going to set your character on a path that is less than optimal. In Dungeons and Dragons, which we both play, there is a concept called min-maxing, where you try and throw all of your ability points into the thing you know you’re going to be using, and you don’t put any points into the thing you think you won’t be using at all. You don’t have to worry about being really smart if you’re going to be a barbarian. You just have to put everything in strength, all of it, strength.

Min-maxed characters, while efficient and successful in combat, are not always the most interesting characters. There is something interesting about a flawed character who is sort of good at a couple of things but not great at anything.

One of the things that I found with these games is that all of my anxiety early on ultimately didn’t matter, because I would start to play in a way that made me happy. That was the thing. I was like, “Oh, you know what? I actually way prefer shooting arrows than swinging a sword. It’s okay. You know what? I wasted a bunch of time. I wasted 10 levels of throwing stuff into swordplay. I don’t care. Fine. Whatever.”

Life is not efficient. We waste time in our lives trying all sorts of stuff. People go to school, and then they give up on it. People pick up a guitar, and they never learn how to play. That’s our lives. It’s okay. It’s okay. You will find what you really love, and then you start investing in that. By the time you level all the way up into the big boy zones-

**John:** You’ll be fine.

**Craig:** … doesn’t even matter. It doesn’t matter that you wasted a few points early. You’ll max out your archery thing anyway. The game that really blew my mind on that one was Elden Ring.

**John:** Yeah, Elden Ring. We talked about Elden Ring and how maddening that was. The other thing, lesson you could take from this is that, in real life you don’t get to set the difficulty level, or the difficulty level is set for you, based on circumstances in which you’re born. In these games, you could choose that difficulty level. I would say just maybe don’t be so ambitious if you just want to have a good time and have some fun. Maybe leave it at normal rather than going to hard or extreme difficulty. You don’t have to prove it to other people.

**Craig:** That’s right.

**John:** Maybe when you go back and play it again, then you can choose the hard setting.

**Craig:** Absolutely. What do you get out of these games? Where is your enjoyment? Is your enjoyment is mastering combat, then yeah, boost it up. If your enjoyment is in discovering the world and working your way through the narratives, you can go all the way down to story mode, where it’s really hard to die, and you’re really there to just enjoy time. Now, the aforementioned Elden Ring does not give you a choice whatsoever. There is one difficulty, and it is, oh my god, hard.

**John:** Insane.

**Craig:** They provide you with a choice of archetypes in the beginning that you don’t know what they do. They don’t tell you anything, which is horrifying but also exciting.

When I start one of these games, I really try and avoid looking for optimizations. I don’t mind getting some clarity on things like, how the hell does my inventory work, which in Elden Ring was so confusing, or what does this letter mean, like, “Oh, I’ve got a sword, and it’s an S. What does that mean? It’s a B.” I don’t know what these things mean, so I can look that stuff up. In terms of like, here’s how you make the best Elden Ring character, meh.

**John:** Meh.

**Craig:** Meh.

**John:** I will look up online just to get a sense of what the basic play styles are, because I know what I tend to enjoy and what I don’t tend to enjoy. I’ve been going back through and playing some Diablo 3, I guess. There was a witch doctor character class that I’d never really understood before. I was like, “I’ll give it a shot.” Now I actually understand how you do that and how you survive in that. It’s more fun.

**Craig:** One of the things that’s nice about Elder Scrolls is there are multiple storylines that require different skills. You can become a battle champion. You can also become a master thief. You can also become a master magician. You can also become a master assassin, or if you’re like me, all of them. Becoming all of them requires you to balance yourself out in fun ways, where you start to shift how you play and where you put your resources and your points.

I’m talking with my kids about this. When you start these games, you’re so scared. You don’t know what you’re doing. You stink. You have very little health. The world’s incredibly scary and foreign. You don’t know where you are or how to get back to anything. Eventually, you are the master of that world. You are the most powerful, knowledgeable person in that entire world. You just have to remember that you gotta go through some scary, confusing, bewildering, and disorienting times to get to a place where you are the boss.

**John:** Agreed. If I could also make one more plea to the people who are designing these video games, is I know you have crafted these very clever ways of getting people up to speed and how to do things and how combat works and how to build up inventory and stuff like that. You have these introductory things that take your hand and lead you through that. Once we’ve done that once or twice, I don’t want to do that again.

Elder Scrolls, if you want to start a new character, Jesus, you’re looking at just a very long slog of like, okay, now the dragon’s going to attack, and now I have to run through this whole falling down castle. Give me a thing that just lets me pop out and be at the end of that.

**Craig:** One of the things about FromSoftware that makes Elden Ring is they don’t give a sweet damn what you want. In fact, if you want something, they’re not giving it to you. It is a sadism factory. I salute them. The game is beautiful. Such a beautiful game and so frustrating.

**John:** You’re talking Elden Ring. I’m talking Elder Scrolls.

**Craig:** Oh, Elder Scrolls. In Elder Scrolls, yes, there are some very-

**John:** You’re the prisoner and then you’re there. It’s just a long slog. It’s great the first time you’re going through it. It makes you very reluctant to start a new character.

**Craig:** If you could possibly hold down the triangle button to skip all that, that would be great.

**John:** Love it. That’s our advice. More triangle buttons in life and in video games.

**Craig:** Exactly.

**John:** Thanks, Craig.

**Craig:** Thank you, John.

Links:

* [Study: Both Binge, Episodic Release Models Have Their Benefits, but Have to Be Deployed Strategically](https://thestreamable.com/news/study-both-binge-episodic-release-models-have-their-benefits-but-have-to-be-deployed-strategically) by Matt Tamanini
* [Patton Oswalt stands still for an entire scene](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NA90rOwmkJ4)
* [The Hanson Brothers in Slap Shot](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IUbn5ss8j9c)
* [The Center for Transyouth Health and Development](https://www.chla.org/the-center-transyouth-health-and-development)
* [Holedown](https://holedown.com/)
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Scriptnotes, Episode 587: Toldja! The Nikki Finke Movie, Transcript

March 16, 2023 Scriptnotes Transcript

The original post for this episode can be found [here](https://johnaugust.com/2023/toldja-the-nikki-finke-movie).

**John August:** Hello and welcome. My name is John August.

**Craig Mazin:** My name is Craig Mazin.

**John:** This is Episode 587 of Scriptnotes, a podcast about screenwriting and things that are interesting to screenwriters.

Often on this program, we’re answering questions, but today we’re going to be asking perhaps the most fundamental question of them all. How Would This Be a Movie? That’s right, we’ll be looking at stories in the news and trying to fit them into a three-act structure, or more likely, an eight-part limited series structure. We’ve got doppelgangers, Craig, family drama, romance, and more.

**Craig:** My goodness.

**John:** Craig, you sounded sad in your hello. Do you want to explain to listeners why you’re sad?

**Craig:** Yeah. I’m in a new office, and everything’s wrong. Nothing’s in the right place. All my wires are messed up. My seat feels weird. The room is weird. My monitor’s funny, and it’s not in the right spot. I don’t do well with change. I really do not do well with change. I struggle.

**John:** Therefore you’ve chosen an industry in which day by day, week by week, you’re going to be doing new things. Maybe fundamentally, 50 years ago, you made some choices that brought you here. The first thing is acknowledging that you’re uncomfortable and then being able to move past that, learning to live with some of the discomfort, and rather than raging against the dying of the light, just accept that this is where you’re at.

**Craig:** I want to throw a tantrum.

**John:** Tantrums are great.

**Craig:** I don’t throw tantrums like angry tantrums. In Hollywood when you hear about people throwing tantrums, you immediately think of Scott Rudin stapling his assistant’s forehead to a desk or something.

**John:** Throwing a phone.

**Craig:** Or throwing a phone at someone’s mouth. All I want to do is just cry. I just want to get on the floor and cry.

**John:** Craig’s over-tired.

**Craig:** I kind of am. Honestly, it’s been a lot. We do this podcast. Then I also do a podcast for the show. Then I’m on other people’s podcasts. I feel like every day I’m podcasting.

**John:** That’s what the 2020s are is podcasting.

**Craig:** You know what? That’s all right, because this is the OG podcast.

**John:** Indeed it is.

**Craig:** You guys are my happy place.

**Megana Rao:** Aw.

**John:** Aw.

**Craig:** Thank you, Megana. See, John had no emotional response to that whatsoever, and you were immediately like, “Aw.” That’s why we love Megana.

**Megana:** Aw.

**John:** [inaudible 00:02:27]. We’ll talk through all these things on our podcast, but also, in our Bonus Segment for Premium Members, I want to discuss the frustrations surrounding and solutions for overpowered characters, both the characters we write but also obviously the DND characters that we’re playing, because I now have a 15th level warlock who has an 8th level spell. It’s so powerful, and yet limited in a certain way. With that power doesn’t come just great responsibility, comes really great challenges. We’ll talk about overpowered characters.

**Craig:** Which Level 8 spell have you chosen?

**John:** I chose Feeblemind. I’m questioning my decision.

**Craig:** That’s a great one.

**John:** It’s a great one. It’s a great one for a DM to pick against players, but I’m not sure it’s such a good spell for a player to pick against a DM.

**Craig:** That’s an interesting-

**John:** I’m dependent on you.

**Craig:** You are. We have only seen Feeblemind in action once, and it was you guys that got Feebleminded, weirdly enough.

**John:** It is brutal.

**Craig:** One of you did. When it works, oof. That’s all I have to say about that. Oof.

**John:** Let’s do some follow-up. Back in Episode 579, we had Rian Johnson facing off against ChatGPT. Megana, Bobby wrote in with a question.

**Megana:** Bobby wrote, “At this current moment, can a studio use a bot like ChatGPT to create stories, a basic outline, and then hire a WGA writer to write the teleplay? That is, instead of hiring writers to pitch on a story, they do that internally, they figure out the story they want to tell, and then they hire a writer to write it. They’re not paying a human being for the story by credit, the outline phase, or the pitch. Not like they were paying for pitches anyway. Am I right, folks?”

**Craig:** First of all, you don’t want them paying for pitches.

**John:** You really don’t.

**Craig:** I’m just going to keep saying this over and over. They don’t pay for things the way that we think that they pay for things. What they’re doing is buying things. Never say pay for pitches. Always say buy pitches. If they buy your pitch, they own it. They don’t do anything if they don’t own it. Please, for the love of god, no paying for pitches.

**John:** That actually speaks to one of the issues surrounding this. They don’t want to pay for things that they don’t own. They want to own things. It’s really unclear at this point whether something they generated through ChatGPT, a work of literary material they’ve created through ChatGPT, whether that’s even copyrightable. That’s still unsettled law at this point. That’s going to be one of the first things.

Backing up a little bit, I would say, Bobby, you have to keep in mind that a studio executive producer, anybody could say, “Hey, I want to do a movie about a guy who loves paperclips.” They could write up a thing and then give you the thing. If they’re writing up something that’s big enough, long enough themselves, they are a writer. They are creating literary material, in theory. The ChatGPT is a new wrinkle in this, but studio executives always could make up some stuff themselves if they wanted to.

**Craig:** I think that there’s probably some copyright law that’s going to need to be written. Many people don’t know this, that it’s enshrined in our Constitution itself. The founders, I think it’s fair to say, did not foresee artificial intelligence or guns that could shoot rapidly, side note. I think we’re going to need to write some law to make it clear that copyright is something that is afforded to humans and not AI.

Here’s what I think. I think that if a studio does this, then a lot of writers may be less inclined to actually come in and work on it. Even if they were, they would still have to rewrite the story no matter what. A story would have to be assigned to them. No, I don’t think this would work this way.

**John:** A thing to also keep in mind is that the MBA, the basic agreement that the WGA has for all writing work being done for the studios, already does have language in there that says a writer is a person, that the writer shall not be deemed to be any corporate or impersonal purveyor of literary material or the rights therein. There’s a lot of stuff in it that already says we’re talking about human beings there.

Is there space for clarification about how and when these tools can be used? Absolutely. I think it’s an open question about how we best do that. I don’t think at this moment as we’re recording this in 2023 it’s an imminent crisis. I do know that there are some projects out there where there’s folks who are saying, “We’re having a computer write this script. It’s going to be written by a computer.” Okay, but I don’t think that is the crisis next coming down the pike.

**Craig:** Agreed.

**John:** Another bit of follow-up, Yusef was writing about other people’s voices, Megana.

**Megana:** Yusef writes, “This is mainly for Craig. I recently got Apple Plus, and I’ve been catching up with Mythic Quest. I noticed you wrote a couple episodes for the series.”

**Craig:** One episode.

**Megana:** “In Scriptnotes podcast 585, you said you can’t imagine writing in other people’s voices.”

**Craig:** Correct.

**Megana:** Since Mythic Quest isn’t a show that you’re running, in typical TV fashion, the writers would write in the showrunner’s voice or the showrunner would rewrite the episode themselves. I’m curious if Ganz, Day, and McElhenney allowed you to do all the writing yourself, or did they still give you an outline and you wrote it in your own voice? Did they ever rewrite your episodes themselves?”

**Craig:** Okay, episode. Just want to be really clear. One, Yusef. I wrote the episode called Backstory! I have been in some episodes as an actor, but I’ve only written one episode of Mythic Quest. It was the episode called Backstory. It was in Season 2. Mythic Quest each season does a standalone episode. That was that season’s standalone episode.

I still continued to not write in the showrunner’s voice, because Backstory! did not take place in the same timeline as Mythic Quest. It took place decades earlier, in the ‘70s. There was one character in it that was from the main cast of Mythic Quest. We are portraying that character at a much younger age. It was consistent with that character’s voice but in a much different way. It’s a difference between a man who’s 80 and a man who’s 25.

The way that worked is I was in a room. I’ve never done this before. There are a lot of writers at Mythic Quest. You can break off into a little smaller group of writers. I’m going to apologize if I forget anybody who was on Team Idiot. That’s what we called ourselves. Team Idiot was myself, Katie McElhenney, Ashly Burch, Humphrey Ker. I think that may have been it. I apologize again if I’m missing anyone.

We just talked through how the story could function. We had the basic idea of it. We talked through what it could be. We outlined it on the wipey board. Then we brought in everybody, Rob and Megan and David and everyone, and we just pitched it out, told the story. They were all happy. They made some suggestions. We incorporated some of those suggestions into the story on the board.

Then I went away and wrote it by myself, because that’s how I write, like a weirdo alone in a small, dark room with the windows closed. I wrote a draft, and I sent it in, and they shot it. That was it. That’s how that worked. It wasn’t the normal way of doing things, I must admit.

For instance, I think Katie McElhenney, who did Dark Quiet Death in Season 1, which was that standalone episode, and stand-above, I’m pretty sure she did that Mazin style, in a dark room by herself, with the windows closed.

**John:** Circling back to Yusef’s assumptions is that if you were writing a traditional episode that had a bunch of the standing characters, you were on the normal sets, it was a normal episode, the expectation might be that you would need to match a little bit more of the style of how the scripts are normally working, just because stuff could be changing around, and everywhere else is doing the same. If you, Craig, had a really strange style on the page, it would be weird for everyone to have to grapple with a script that felt so different. That was not the case here.

**Craig:** This one was designed to be different. I don’t think I would ever dare to write a standard episode of Mythic Quest, because I think I would blow it, for this very reason. I think I can do one that’s carved out and has its own thing, with an ending, by the way, a real, solid kachunk ending.

I am amazed by the things that those guys can do in that style and also their ability to work with each other so well. It’s pretty great. A ton of credit to the showrunners there and everybody, honestly. They do a great job.

**John:** Last bit of follow-up, I just want to point out that on our podcast, we’ve had four of the Celebrity Jeopardy contestants on. We’ve talked to Ike Barinholtz and Joel Kim Booster at our live show. We knew they were both on it. Also, B.J. Novak and Matt Rogers.

**Craig:** Wow.

**John:** Out of 20-some people, 4 of them are Scriptnotes guests.

**Craig:** Maybe the rest of them should show the hell up.

**John:** I think so.

**Craig:** How have we not had Patton Oswalt on this show?

**John:** That I think is the greatest oversight of all.

**Craig:** Can I just say… Maybe this will help get Patton Oswalt on the show. Maybe he’s reluctant. Maybe he doesn’t like coming on podcasts. I don’t know. I will say this. He’s my favorite stand-up comedian. I think I’ve listened to everything he’s done, all of it. I think he’s brilliant, absolutely brilliant, just special. Maybe that’s why he hasn’t come on the show. Maybe he knows that and he doesn’t want to listen to me talk about it.

**John:** I think it would also be fascinating if the folks who were putting together the next round of Celebrity Jeopardy, if they are just going through our Scriptnotes guest list and figuring out-

**Craig:** Probably.

**John:** … “Who are we going to get on the show? They clearly will do very well and be incredibly popular on our program.”

**Craig:** I bet you that’s true.

**John:** The Venn diagram overlap is so exciting.

**Craig:** Venn.

**John:** How excited is Venn that, whoever Venn was or is, that their name is just always going to be there?

**Craig:** I think Venn is dead. I gotta be honest with you. There’s no way Venn’s alive. Megana, can you do a quick Google search for us to see if Senor Venn is still alive?

**Megana:** “Popularized by John Venn in the 1880s.”

**Craig:** There we go. I’m going to go out on a limb here and say we’ve heard enough.

**John:** I think Venn and Overton of Overtown window, they’re just up there in Heaven looking down at what they’ve created. It’s pretty great.

**Craig:** Yes, indeed.

**John:** Let’s get on to the question of the day. How Would This Be a Movie? We got a couple really good ones here from our listeners. I added one late to the podcast here, Craig, and I apologize. Just moments before you signed on, I added this here.

I want to talk you through this first one. It’s pretty straightforward. It’s simple but juicy and compelling. This is from NBC News, Andy Eckardt and Aina Khan writing this up. It happens in Germany. This 23-year-old woman, with the help of a friend, killed a stranger to stage her death and, quote, “start a new life due to family problems,” police and prosecutors in Germany said.

Basically, what happened in this story is you have this 23-year-old woman who starts setting up dummy accounts on Instagram, looking for another one who looks a lot like her, with the plan that she and her friend are going to track down this person, lure them under false pretenses, kill them, and make it seem that she’s the one who’s died, basically faking her own death by killing a stranger.

**Craig:** What a bummer. All you ever did was nothing. You just happened to look like an asshole. That asshole finds you and kills you. Oh, man.

**John:** Man. A couple of ranges of thoughts here. First off, I could picture the A-level movie version of this, like sort of Gone Girl, that kind of thing, where it’s actually more from the perspective of these people trying to commit this murder. It’s almost like Hitchcock’s Rope, where you’re there with the killers and you’re trying to do this thing or cover up this thing. That’s a total possibility for the A-list version of it. Also, this feels like this could be the A-plot of any given CBS procedural. It’s shocking, but it’s a way to do it, or a Law and Order.

**Craig:** In the old days there would be a movie, I think. These movies don’t get made as much anymore. There was a time where we were getting some really good neo noir films, Body Heat. I think you could make an interesting neo noir out of this. I’d love to see what Scott Frank would do with this. Do you want to know what my twist twist is?

**John:** Tell me, tell me.

**Craig:** Imagine this story. You’ve got a woman, and she’s murdered, and you’re trying to figure out why. Then you realize, oh, wait, the woman that we thought was murdered isn’t even the woman. It’s somebody else who looks like the woman, who’s gone missing. Somehow, if there could be triplets or twins… If there’s twins and they both are like, “One of you needs to die or seem to die. Let’s find somebody that looks like the two of us.” I don’t know, there’s gotta be some sort of twin thing that we could do.

**John:** Another thing that we’re discussing goes back to the actual, real people in Germany. Interestingly, the story that we are basing this off of, the names are all suppressed, because Germany has these very strict privacy laws. We don’t even know the names of the people who are involved here, which is just wild. For our purposes, I don’t think we’d need to know the names. I think we’re just taking this as a premise and applying it to something completely different.

**Craig:** I think so.

**John:** We’re saying this could be a movie. It can really scale. It can go all the way from A-plot of a given episode of a procedural to an actual, full movie.

**Craig:** I think it’s more likely that just by you bringing this onto the show, we will be seeing this on a procedural within a year.

**John:** I agree, because the ChatGPTs will have looked through the transcripts, found it, and therefore [inaudible 00:16:22]. That’s a possibility.

**Craig:** The ChatGPTs. I like that there’s an army of them now. I like it.

**John:** There’s a whole army.

**Craig:** I love it.

**John:** Let’s get to our next story. The headline for this is The Godfather, Saudi-Style. It’s Anuj Chopra writing for The Guardian. Craig, you did have a chance to read through this. This is a long one. I’m sorry for the long read there. I thought it was really compelling. Do you want to talk us through what you remember of it/

**Craig:** Sure. This is the story of Mohammed bin Salman, who we tend to refer to as MBS, came to power. I did not know any of this.

**John:** Nor did I.

**Craig:** He was not supposed to be the guy. There’s this interesting thing going on in Saudi Arabia that I was also not aware of, where the same family, which I guess they’re the Sauds, the House of Saud, has been running Saudi Arabia as a monarchy for quite some time. The way they’ve done it is by alternating I think between cousins or uncles.

**John:** It says in the family, but never direct, same family line. It always goes laterally, which honestly, I have to say, feels really smart.

**Craig:** The point of it was to avoid what just happened. The point is, no one little family line is the only one. This way, the family as a large entity doesn’t fall prey to what a lot of palace intrigue ends up with. It’s just families breaking apart and then one person just dominating the others. Yet that is what’s happened here.

**John:** Yeah, it is. There was a plan in place for who would be the next in line. You can think of this as Succession to some degree. It’s who is the next person who’s supposed to be there, who’s Nayef, who’s the king’s nephew.

**Craig:** Nayef, the king’s nephew.

**John:** Basically, he gets tipped off that there’s potential problems. It’s clear that he’s going to be… Basically, him and his guards get pulled out [inaudible 00:18:22] sign these documents saying that they are not seeing a succession and that MBS should be the next real person that should be doing this. It’s a palace coup. It’s not violent. This isn’t guns and such. Basically, by locking somebody down and not letting them leave the country, you’re forcing them to sign over their succession.

**Craig:** It was as close to violent as you can get without being violent. In fact, it did turn violent. Initially, it was just we’re going to lock you in a room and tell you that you’re going to resign and you’re going to pledge allegiance to MBS. If you do not, as the article states, your female family members will be raped. That’s an interesting way to just immediately go to 100 as part of your patriarchal monarchy. Just fascinating.

It also mentions in the article, I’m sorry to laugh, but I find this darkly amusing that they said, “First, your female family members will be raped. Second, we are going to withhold your medication for hypertension.” I think I’m stuck on number one. I gotta be honest with you. I gotta be honest. Number one is worse than me not having my hypertension meds, but fine.

I think at some point he was in fact re-detained, so he was, “Okay, you can just live here for a while.” Then at some point, as is often the case with these situations, the paranoid dictator does what paranoid dictators do and decide, “You know what? Actually, I think you are still a huge problem. I think what I’m going to do is lock you in a room and beat you.” There’s an implication that that also occurred.

While this is all going on, we also note that they had killed Khashoggi, the Washington Post journalist. These guys are terrible. The extent that our country continues to do business with them, it’s just startling. Just startling.

**John:** The other main character involved here is a man named Saad Al Jabri, who is Nayef’s advisor and intelligence chief. He’s the man who was trying to give advice to him and help sort through the situation. He was out of the country as this all happened and was able to get most of his family out, except for two family members who were still there. Those two family members were not allowed to leave. MBS is basically saying, “No, no, come back, come back, and everything will be fine.” When Al Jabri doesn’t come back, MBS starts to trump up charges about corruption and other things, and so Al Jabri has to flee first to Canada and then to other places and ultimately is now in the process of filing a lawsuit against MBS.

**Craig:** Now that a lawsuit has been filed, I’m sure everything will be fine.

**John:** It’s a question of at what point do you speak up, because in keeping your silence, you might be trying to keep your imprisoned family members alive, but at a certain point, you have to speak up.

**Craig:** From the point of view of what we are doing, there are a lot of elements here that would suggest that this could be a movie. There are main characters. Al Jabri is a potentially great protagonist, because he’s very smart. He’s very capable. We love watching movies where protagonists are smart and capable and are attempting to out-maneuver very powerful people with entire states behind them. Al Jabri has done it. He could smell that trouble was coming and just went, “I think I’m going to go to Turkey real fast.” I think days later, it was clear that he had made a very smart decision. The challenge in bringing this story to film is that I don’t know if it’s over yet.

**John:** It’s not.

**Craig:** That’s the biggest issue for me.

**John:** You’re right in the middle of it. I feel like with some time, with some closure, you can really tell the whole story, but right now it just feels like a dot dot dot. There’s not a way out of this. I think there’s useful things you could take from this in terms of the dynamics and apply them to another story, but I don’t think you can directly take what’s happening in the House of Saud right now as the meat of either a movie or an eight-part limited series. There’s exciting moments that are happening, but it doesn’t feel like there’s a resolution here.

**Craig:** I do think this is also tricky territory given that access to information is difficult here. Also, to be fair to writers, the Saudis apparently have no problem committing violence against innocent people who do nothing other than report the truth. You have to be aware if you’re going to be digging deep into the situation that you’re going to be drawing some unwanted attention.

**John:** Scrutiny that’s not only applied to you but applied to the production, applied to anybody who’s involved with the production. That makes it much less likely that you’re going to see something, this exact story being told. That’s just the reality.

**Craig:** Until there is a resolution, yeah, I agree with you.

**John:** Let’s talk about Nikki Finke.

**Craig:** I swore I never would, but okay.

**John:** You never would, but here we are.

**Craig:** Here we are.

**John:** This is actual context for it.

**Craig:** It’s a great, great piece that was written here.

**John:** It really is a great piece. This is Jacob Bernstein writing for the New York Times. For folks who are outside the industry and don’t know who Nikki Finke was, Nikki Finke created Deadline Hollywood, Hollywood Daily if you want to call it that. It was a website, a blog that rivaled Variety and Hollywood Reporter, ended up supplanting them and becoming more important in the daily workings of the town. It was always about breaking the news in a very bombastic way, a lot of opinion mixed with facts, a lot of bullying on behalf of Nikki Finke, who was this larger-than-life character. She was feared and loathed, but also sometimes admired.

What I like about this piece is that I think it was fair in the sense of talking about she was not a good journalist in any sort of good journalist sense, but she was just a smasher and destroyer of things in sometimes ways that needed to happen.

**Craig:** I don’t know if she was good enough to quality as a double-edged sword. She certainly broke stuff around her. It reminds me of, you’ve seen Glass Onion, the wonderful speech that Rian Johnson wrote about what disrupting is. It’s mostly just breaking shit. She broke a lot of shit.

She was journalistically irresponsible. I don’t think that that’s any kind of slanderous thing to anyone. This is a woman who would report things. They were wrong. People would tell her they were wrong. She would then edit the article to change them but would not indicate that any correction had been made, which is fundamental standard of journalism. She was a bully. She did scream at people. She was mean. She would threaten.

The only thing that was really fascinating about me to Nikki Finke was that she was not doing it for the reason everybody else does stuff for in Hollywood, which is money. She didn’t seem particularly concerned about money. She lived alone in an apartment. She was angry. You could just tell that she was really angry at Hollywood. She liked to put on the mantle on angry companies on behalf of the working people. I don’t think that’s true either, because she was super buddy-buddy with a lot of these people that ran Hollywood. I think she just liked breaking stuff. I really do.

**John:** I think you’re right. I think you could say inadvertently she had maybe shined a spotlight on some real problems in entertainment journalism in the sense that because of advertising and other things, they are so uniquely linked and tied. They’re never objectively reporting about the things that are happening in the town. Because she wasn’t beholden to those things, she could report on things that no one else would report on and say things other people weren’t saying in print, but they weren’t always accurate or truthful. That’s why she developed this terrifying reputation.

What was interesting about this stuff that was brand new that I’d never seen before was really her relationship with Jay Penske, who was the very rich person who bought out Deadline and Hollywood Daily and ultimately I think Variety as well, plus a lot of other magazines and journalism places. Her relationship with him was really fascinating, the ups and the downs and how she hated him and yet how he was the one who actually showed up in her last days in Florida.

**Craig:** You get the feeling that Nikki, for people who knew her, because we sure didn’t. I only had one brief exchange with Nikki Finke, and it was terrible. I think that was true for a lot of people. For the people who knew her, you can get this thread of care-taking, that they were worried about her a lot. The article talks about what appears to be, if not a suicide attempt, a legitimate threat to do self-harm. She was sick. She was physically sick. She had diabetes. This sums it up. I’ll read from the article.

“One year, Miss Finke lamented to Mr. Penske that she wasn’t looking forward to Thanksgiving. She didn’t cook and planned to spend the holiday alone in her apartment on a day when restaurants were closed.” That’s rather sad. “Mr. Penske stopped in at the Beverly Hills Hotel, ordered a three-course meal, and took it to her building,” himself, by the way. He’s a billionaire. “Soon after leaving it with the doorman, he heard from her by phone. The meal included a sweet dessert, which enraged the diabetic Miss Finke.” Quote, “’She said I was trying to kill her,’ Mr. Penske recalled.”

Now we can laugh about this, but I have to say, so much of what I read in this article implies that Nikki Finke was struggling with mental illness. Her mood swings, which apparently were quite extreme, her, what would you call it, shut-in-ness?

**John:** Reclusivity or agoraphobia.

**Craig:** Yeah, her life as a recluse. Also, you could tell from her work there was something compulsive about it. She would be there, sometimes reporting things within seconds of them happening. Then a lot of times, if her reporting was late or somebody else got the scoop, she would make these bizarre excuses, which I guess goes way back to when she was working for other people. She would just constantly be calling in with strange and bizarre excuses for why she was late. That’s why she got fired from everywhere. She just would not make her deadlines, amusingly enough, for a woman that created a site called Deadline.

It seems like there was a lot of mental illness going on here. To the extent that she was suffering, I feel bad for her. To the extent that her suffering led her to inflict that pain on other people, I am not sorry for her. She was a fascinating person. I think you could make a very interesting story about her. It would need to be rather small, because I think this is about as inside baseball as it gets.

**John:** I was looking for comps and thinking about what kind of movie this is. Can You Ever Forgive Me might be one, in that you have a character who is abrasive and really off-putting, and yet ultimately because the lens is on her, you can actually understand why she feels she needs to do the things she needs to do is an option.

**Craig:** It is, but that story I think is better because it’s not about Hollywood.

**John:** Agreed.

**Craig:** That’s the part about this that… Remember The Late Shift, the movie, the Betty Thomas film about the late-night wars?

**John:** The late-night wars.

**Craig:** That was well done, but it’s a confection, because ultimately, the stakes are as low as they can be. Who will get to host The Tonight Show? It’s not that important. It was well done. I think you could do something like that. It would need to be in its own way funny. I don’t think you can do a super heavy version of this. I just think it would be too much.

**John:** I do remember that too. I think it’s also a question of where you start and where you stop. Do you start the story when she’s dismissed by the trades or basically unable to get the job that she wants and creates this site for herself, which is inspiring rise, and then the crash and the sale and all that? Maybe. It’s a question of is that the course of a movie or are you doing that as a limited series. I don’t know that there’s probably enough stuff to make it more than two hours worth of entertainment.

**Craig:** I think that there is the potential for a camp classic. You’re talking about this emotionally wild human being who is a shut-in in her apartment and yelling at people on the phone. This could be Mommy Dearest. If it is, I’m there.

**John:** I think it’s a good point. I think to take this as a jumping off place to get to something bigger and funnier, great. Movies about Hollywood sometimes get awards, but they’re not generally huge hits is the other thing to be thinking about.

**Craig:** They are not generally huge hits. Generally speaking, I don’t like them. There is something inherently narcissistic about movies about movies, which is why I’m still so impressed by The Fabelmans, because I just loved it so much. It was about Hollywood. Generally speaking, I just don’t like movies about Hollywood.

**John:** We have two more here. The first one comes from a listener, Josie. She writes about the nun and the monk who fell in love and married. This tells the story of Sister Mary Elizabeth and Robert, who’s a Carmelite monk. They’re both in their 50s when they meet. What struck me so much as so interesting about this is they barely spoke. It was like he touched her elbow or something, and that was the spark that sat the whole thing up and going.

**Craig:** So hot.

**John:** Craig, you’re saying so hot. Do you think there’s a story here to be told?

**Craig:** No. It’s adorable. I think it’s very sweet. It shows you that love can flourish, even in the strangest ways. It was such a sweet thing to read the way that the two of them were like, “Wait, what did we just do?” and then all the things they have to go through, and then somehow yet on the other end of it, there they are in love with each other and it’s working is beautiful.

I think there’s been another article at some point before about arranged marriages. This isn’t an arranged marriage but it almost is, in the sense that if all you know of each other is that one time, my elbow hit your elbow, you arranged your own marriage. The fact that it lasted… There’s something fascinating about this. I wonder what’s going to happen.

We’ve gone so far down the road. Megana, you knew I was going to turn to you at this point. We’ve gone so far down the road of, everybody just pick who you want and it’s entirely up to you and choose what you want. Everyone’s just drowning in choice to the extent that people really are struggling to make choices.

Here’s my proposal. You do a Tinder, except instead of hookup culture or even just dating, it’s like, we’re going to give you a choice of 20 people. You can meet five of them and you’re going to marry one of them. Now you’re married. Do you think that app catches on in the future?

**Megana:** I think what’s so fascinating about this story is that it was an accident, and she only met him once after, what, 24 years in this convent?

**Craig:** Yeah.

**Megana:** How do we simulate that?

**Craig:** Basically, then what you’re saying is you can use this app, but when you register for it, you are sworn to celibacy for 24 years. At that point, I have to say everyone’s going to start looking real good. Great point. Not sure we have a way to monetize this. Concerned about the business plan. I don’t know. I thought there was something very inherently encouraging about this, but I don’t know how I would make it a movie. Can you figure this out?

**John:** We should say that the article we’re reading about is from Aleem Maqbool for the BBC, and there’s probably other versions of this that may go into more depth on certain things. I wouldn’t be surprised if they write their own book at some point.

Here’s the thing that sparked for me, is that we always think about this love at first sight happening to teenagers, because that’s when this should happen, but the fact that these two characters who should not have been looking for love at all, suddenly it happens, it’s just overwhelming when it happens, is nice and is inspiring.

I wondered if it was a play, and then I decided, no, it couldn’t be a play, because I think I need those close-ups. I need those moments. I need to see those elbows touching that make that happen. I don’t think it’s a play. I think it’s an Emma Thompson and some other British actor in it. Maybe it’s great and it wins a bunch of awards.

**Craig:** Isn’t that Howards End anyway?

**John:** It is Howards End to some degree.

**Craig:** I think when it comes to restrained romances, Age of Innocence comes to mind, with the little touch of the hand, or even in a very sick way, Silence of the Lambs, is the moment where their fingers touch, and it’s like that’s the extent of our weird romance. There is room for that. I just don’t know if this is the story that’s going to get you there.

**John:** I’ll say unlike Silence of the Lambs, I think there’s a gold circle movie to be made here. You know what I’m talking about, which is that classy British but also very cheery, or a working title.

**Craig:** A working title sounds like a better fit.

**John:** You can see how this whole package came together and why Universal is releasing this now. I think there’s something that can be charming about this. Also the fact that everyone else around them should be like, “You’re not supposed to be falling in love.” It’s just like, but why? They know it’s love. That could be inspiring.

**Craig:** Don’t you want to write this scene though? I’m quoting from the woman here, Lisa, who was Sister Mary Elizabeth, when she told her prioress how she was feeling. “The prioress was a little bit snappy with me, so I put my pants and a toothbrush in a bag and I walked out, and I never went back to Sister Mary Elizabeth.” I’m like, wait, okay, toothbrush I get, sure, but then also “my pants?” Socks, shirt, underwear?

**John:** Nope, don’t need none of those, just pants.

**Craig:** Deodorant, scissors, hairbrush? Just toothbrush and pants. I guess when you’re a nun, that’s what you got.

**John:** Got what you got.

**Craig:** You got what you got.

**John:** We also have a history of… Looking back to The Sound of Music, the decision to leave the nunnery is a big, momentous decision. Any movie that we make about this is going to echo back to that, just because that’s one of our favorite references, which is great too.

Our takeaway from the story of the nun and the monk, I think there’s maybe a movie here. This is a case where you might actually want to use their life rights, so you could say it’s based on a true story. You would have to get their official version.

**Craig:** My feeling is, as we often conclude with these stories, that this may be good fodder for side characters in a movie. If you’re doing a romantic comedy and your neighbors are a former nun and former monk who fell in love and married, that might be a very interesting side amusement. I don’t know if I would want to watch a whole story just about the two of them.

**John:** Let’s wrap up on a story that Rosario sent in. This is about 13 stranded strangers who go on a road trip. We’ll link to a version by Francesca Street for CNN. Essentially, it’s a bunch of folks. Their flight landed in Orlando, but they needed to get to Nashville. There was no way for them to get to Nashville because of plans getting canceled. A bunch of them had to get to Nashville by a certain time. They decided let’s just rent a van all together and drive from Orlando to Nashville, Tennessee. Craig, what do you think of this as a premise?

**Craig:** It’s a fine premise. There’s a wonderful musical called Come From Away, which is very similar in its own way. It’s about a plane that was diverted on 9/11. The only place it could land was I think in Newfoundland. It’s about this tiny, tiny little town with all these folks who are there stranded, because the airspace is shut down, and people coming together and meeting each other and all that. Yes. It’s just it’s very small is my concern.

**John:** It’s really small.

**Craig:** It’s just people in a van.

**John:** It’s people in a van. It’s a road trip story. You’ve made some road trip stories. They’re not easy, because you don’t have a place to come back to. It’s not quite clear. You have a destination, I guess, but you just have a physical destination. You don’t have an emotional destination for where you’re trying to get these characters to. The fact they start out strangers can help to a degree, but you’d probably want to build some relationships already within those characters so you can really see what it is that’s happening, so you can see progress and growth. Think Little Miss Sunshine. It’s not about the journey. It’s about the people in the van that are important.

**Craig:** I think part of the problem is there are too many people in the van. Planes, Trains, and Automobiles basically is this. That’s what happens. Their flight is canceled, and there’s only one car to share, and so these two strangers have to share a car and drive. It’s been done. I think if you can concentrate on two people or three, that’s fine too, but 13, eh.

**John:** That’s going to be too many people. I think Breakfast Club rules kick in at a certain point. You would have five. More than that, it’s too much.

**Craig:** Have you ever seen Spike Lee’s Get On the Bus?

**John:** Never have.

**Craig:** It’s fascinating. If you haven’t seen it, it’s a very simple plot. It was back when they did the Million Man March. Spike basically gets more than 13. It was probably 20 guys on this bus. The entire thing is the trip. It’s just the bus ride, with little breaks here and there. While there are a few moments of some small, what I would call plot action, mostly it’s these men talking and arguing and laughing and fighting. It’s really interesting as an experiment, because you are stuck on the bus with so many people.

What holds it together is the fact that it’s about a social issue, clearly. The point is they’re going to the Million Man March, and they are debating their own lives and their own history and their own future. There’s something to discuss. I don’t know what they talk about on this.

**John:** You’re not going to be obsessed with Nashville. Getting to Nashville is important to the individual characters, but it’s not important for the movie.

**Craig:** Exactly. There isn’t anything that connects them other than the fact that they were all supposed to be flying to the same place. It wasn’t like they were joined together by social issues or anything like that. I don’t think this is a movie.

**John:** I don’t think it’s a movie either. Let us talk through now our candidates here and see which ones are going to be movies and which ones are not going to be movies. Doppelganger murder?

**Craig:** Television show episode. Episode of a TV show.

**John:** The Godfather, Saudi-Style?

**Craig:** One day. Not today.

**John:** One day. Not today. Last days of Nikki Finke?

**Craig:** No.

**John:** The nun and the monk who fell in love and married?

**Craig:** Side characters.

**John:** Side characters. Thirteen strangers we think is probably not it. I’m going to say doppelganger murder is probably most likely to be the movie. I think it might be a Sundancey movie that could potentially break out.

**Craig:** That’s our best bet.

**John:** Thank you to everybody who sent in these suggestions. Sometimes they come in to ask@johnaugust.com. A lot of times, people are just tweeting them at me or stuff, and they’re good. We love it when you find those and send them in our direction. I propose we answer one listener question, seems timely, from Embarrassed. Megana, can you help us out?

**Megana:** Embarrassed asks, “What do you do when the movie you wrote gets terrible reviews and you agree with them? I had a movie get made at a big level, and I’m so grateful that it got made, but I don’t love what the director did with the script. I don’t want to seem bitter or burn bridges with anyone or seem ungrateful. How would you recommend handling this in meetings and even just with your own family? How do you talk about a project that didn’t turn out like you dreamed it would?”

**John:** Craig and I, we’ve both been there.

**Craig:** I don’t know what you’re talking about.

**John:** First off, Embarrassed, it’s amazing that you had a movie get made at a big level. That’s fantastic. You’re better for having gone through the experience of it all. I’ve been there. What I will say in meetings is like, “Oh wow, yeah, thank you. It was a real challenge. It wasn’t quite the movie I wanted it to be, but I’m glad it worked. I’m glad it had success.” You can say things like, “It was weird to agree with the critics on it.” I would say you don’t need to volunteer about the bad experiences you had unless you think they’re relevant for the discussion you’re about to have, like why you never want to work for that director again.

**Craig:** There’s really no great advice here, Embarrassed. When it doesn’t come out the way you want, the only thing you can say is, if someone mentions it, you can say, “Ultimately, it was not the movie I wrote. The director took it in a different direction.” That’s I think fair to say. That’s all you need to say. I think everybody will get it.

**John:** There may also be a way to put it in a positive direction, say, “It’s a really interesting situation, because here’s a story that I actually wrote,” and basically talk about what the plan was. Then you don’t have to get into… They saw the movie. They know what the result was. They can see, oh, you’re that kind of writer. You’re the kind of writer who wrote that script that would’ve been a different movie. That can be useful.

**Craig:** There’s another thing, Embarrassed, that I think is worth mentioning. That is that these days, everybody is absorbing and soaking in review culture. When John and I were starting out, there weren’t even that many reviewers. Reviewers worked for newspapers. There are only so many newspapers. There’s four billion outlets right now online that write reviews. Everyone writes reviews. The old joke “everyone’s a critic” is now a fact. Everyone is a critic. There are so many reviews. They all get slurried into the Rotten Tomatoes score or a Metacritic score, and so now there’s metrics attached to reviews. Then on top of that, even people that aren’t writing reviews professionally are writing reviews on Twitter. Everyone’s reviewing everything constantly. It’s just what people do.

You may therefore feel a little worse about this than perhaps you should, because in the old days, you’d get your ass kicked in a bunch of newspapers. You’d feel bad. Very few people are even reading those things. Most people are just like, “Oh cool, you got a movie made. That’s awesome.” That’s it. Nobody would really dig any deeper. It just wouldn’t matter.

Just keep that perspective in mind that you may be feeling this intensely just because you’re swimming in the waters of reviews. It might be worth taking a break and turning some of that stuff off, because here’s what has happened. You got a movie made, and that this the beginning, my friend. Somewhere down the line, something great is going to happen for you. You will be happy. You will feel terrific. People will come up to you and tell you it’s wonderful. You don’t get there until you do the first thing.

The other thing is let time do its job, because 20 years from now, people are going to have a very different opinion of that movie. I don’t care what it is. They just do. That’s how it works.

**John:** I think we can also offer some very specific advice for Embarrassed, because we’re not going to say this on the air, but Megana has a note in the Workflowy about what the actual movie was that came out.

**Craig:** (singing) Megana has a note.

**John:** I’m looking at the title. I know that’s a movie. I know it’s a movie that came out. I have no idea what the critical reception was. I didn’t see it. I don’t know what people are saying about it. I would say that was a big movie. That’s what a lot of people are going to know about that movie. It’s a movie that came out, and that’s awesome. I honestly think that credit is not going to hurt you. Your feeling that it’s not a great movie is not important. It’s not going to weigh on anything.

**Craig:** You’re in the business. You’re writing movies that get made. In features, directors get all the credit. We know that. They also get all the blame. Your job is to write a movie that people agree to make. You didn’t cast it. You didn’t shoot it. You didn’t edit it. You probably weren’t on set. If you were, you were visiting, because that’s how features work, unfortunately. You did your job.

Of course you’re going to want it to turn out better. Of course you’re going to want the director to have done better and all of that. I completely get it. This is a great beginning for you. Don’t apologize for this. You can just say, “That really wasn’t the movie I wrote, but the movie I wrote got everybody to agree to make a movie,” and that’s of value.

**John:** Absolutely. It’s time for our One Cool Things. My One Cool Thing is Nothing Forever on Twitch. Craig and Megana, if you’re not seeing it, Nothing Forever is an animated, pixelly animation of a Seinfeld episode.

**Craig:** I’ve seen it. It’s cool.

**John:** It’s the Larry stand-up bits, which are Jerry Seinfeld’s monologue things. Then you’re in this apartment. These characters are moving around in really awkward ways and sitting on couches and on their heads. It’s all crazy and goofy. It’s all generated basically by AI and algorithms and a bunch of prebuilt assets that are just doing this thing. Basically, it’s constantly creating a new episode of a Seinfeld-like show in real time. It’s really unusual and unnerving to watch. It’s not good, but it’s fascinating.

I think the degree to which we talk about AI coming for our jobs, I don’t think they’re going to be writing the kind of stuff that we’re writing. I think they’re going to be making stuff like this that’s actually compelling and strange, that no human would ever actually try to do. I think that’s in many ways the real danger, like what is it that I’m watching, and why can’t I stop watching it? I think it’s really interesting.

If you’re clicking through the links right now, you may find it’s not available, because just this morning as we’re recording this, the account was suspended for transphobic content because of things that the algorithms itself had generated. It had characters saying bad things that the creators had not intended, and so the creators are apologizing and trying to fix it, which is again another exciting challenge to this kind of thing. Nobody wrote it, but it created a thing that actually got itself banned.

**Craig:** It’s canceled. We have canceled AI. Listen, it’s important for artificial intelligence to learn. These are learning machines. Maybe it needs to learn from what it’s done and do better.

**John:** Indeed. It’s taking some time to listen and really reach out and reflect.

**Craig:** I’m looking at what it was suspended for. It’s very strange. In a weird way, it’s almost anti-bad. There’s actually a weirdly subtle thing of it’s making a comment on the thing that’s not good, but still. Let’s put it this way. There is a line in the thing where it’s suspended, where the AI comedian, the Seinfeld literally says, “No one is laughing, so I’m going to stop.” I think that’s incredible. Wow.

**John:** Craig, did you have something for us?

**Craig:** I do. I purchased an item called the Manta Sleep Mask. This is available wherever you shop online, I’m sure. It is not expensive, like the last thing that I thought was not expensive but turned out to be expensive. This one’s $35.

**John:** Great.

**Craig:** You may say, “$35 for an eye mask?” Here’s why I love this one. I don’t wear eye masks normally at night, but if I’m on a plane and I need to sleep, I absolutely wear one. One of the things that we have been learning over time about light and sleep is how important it is to keep it out of your eyes. We talk a lot about some of the fancier, newfangled things, like not as much blue light. You probably have the night shift thing set on your tablets and so forth. I certainly do. That’s nice, but it seems like blue light, not blue light, the most important thing for sleeping is no light.

The thing with eye masks is they’re super annoying. I hate them. They come off my face. They squeeze my head. They pinch my eyes. I don’t like the way they feel. This thing is great, because they’ve designed it so that there are these eye cups. It floats away from your face, but it really does a good job of sealing out the light. It doesn’t mush around to the left or the right when you turn your head and sleep on your side. The eye cups themselves are Velcroed to the straps. You can move them to fit, because the distance between our eyes is different for everybody. For me, I’ve found this to be an excellent travel solution. Big recommend for the Manta. What a nice name for it too, the Manta Sleep Mask.

**John:** I think I’ve recommended sleep masks before, because I’ve slept with a mask for 10 years or so. I sleep every night with a mask on.

**Craig:** Really? In your own bed at home?

**John:** At my own house, absolutely.

**Craig:** Wow.

**John:** I want absolute darkness. I think they’re great. Yes, they take a little getting used to. So often, I think people’s only experience with masks are when they’re on a plane and they’re using those cheap ones that come in little kits.

**Craig:** Those are bad.

**John:** Those are really bad. That’s not what we’re talking about. These are going to need to be soft. Definitely they don’t touch your eyeballs, which is crucial. You should be able to open your eyes with a mask on, without your eyelashes touching. That’s what this will allow you to do.

**Craig:** Exactly.

**John:** It’s great. I really recommend, if you’ve not tried sleeping with a mask, get one of these, because it really is just a better night of sleep, and you’re out.

**Craig:** Love it.

**John:** Cool. That is our show for this week. Scriptnotes is produced by Megana Rao.

**Craig:** Pachoo.

**John:** It is edited by Matthew Chilelli.

**Craig:** Chow.

**John:** Our outro this week is by Timothy Lenko. If you have an outro, you can send us a link to ask@johnaugust.com. That’s also the place where you can send questions. For short questions, I’m sometimes around on Twitter @johnaugust, but not consistently, so send it in to ask@johnaugust.com.

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**Craig:** Thank you.

**Megana:** Thank you.

[Bonus Segment]

**John:** Craig, so this past week at DnD, we leveled up. We went down a level in the dungeon. We went up a level of our characters. I got to pick a new spell for my warlock named Klaus. Here are the choices I had. I had Demiplane, which was not going to be situationally very useful, Dominate Monster.

**Craig:** In the Dungeon of the Mad Mage, no. Dominate Monster, excellent spell.

**John:** Excellent spell. It basically lets you not just charm but really control a creature.

**Craig:** Control a creature.

**John:** Feeblemind, which was done against us shortly before, which basically just knocks somebody down to a Level 1 intelligence. They can’t do anything meaningful.

**Craig:** And charisma.

**John:** And charisma, yes. It really keeps them from casting spells and things. Glibness, which is a skill I don’t have, which is the ability to speak extemporaneously and [inaudible 00:54:13] charisma checks. Maddening Darkness, which is a powerful darkness that does damage on the people who are inside it, and Power Word Stun, which stuns people.

I picked Feeblemind because there’s a recency bias. It had just been done against us, and it felt great. It also felt like a good way to knock out a spell-caster, except I’m also thinking a lot of spell-casters could counter-spell that, and then I’ve just burned an incredibly expensive spell on them.

**Craig:** Hard to counter-spell that one though. It is a higher level spell. As they go up, trickier to counter. I think Mind Blank probably-

**John:** Protects against that?

**Craig:** … protects against Feeblemind. Yeah, it does. Mind Blank is a pretty awesome spell. It’s is also an 8th level spell. That’s 8th level wizard spell, pretty sure. Oh, and bards apparently can do it as well. Feeblemind is a great spell against casters for sure. You don’t want to cast it against a dum-dum monster, because it’ll just still punch you. Really good spell against anybody that’s using charisma in particular, so warlocks. If you’re going up against another big warlock, Feeblemind would be a really good one.

**John:** This got me thinking about overpowered characters, because now Klaus is at a level where he can do some really impressive things. I can lock somebody in a force cage and basically take them out of a fight, which is great.

It got me thinking about overpowered characters in DnD but also overpowered characters as they relate to the stories we’re trying to tell. I think we talked about the challenge of Superman on previous episodes, where you have a character who can do so much, who’s so powerful, that you end up having to look for his small weakness. You have to find the kryptonite so you have some ability to stop him. It makes it very hard to fit him in with other groups of characters, because he’s just so overpowered.

**Craig:** Overpowering leads to power inflation. The more powerful a hero is, the more powerful the villain has to be, so that we care. What ends up happening is this blunting of ability, where you get very excited that somebody is such a badass. Then you’re like, oh no, a mega badass has appeared. At some point, isn’t it just all the same then? If Superman is trading punches with-

**John:** Darkseid?

**Craig:** Yeah, Darkseid. He’s going up against Darkseid. Now it’s just these gods punching each other in the face, which is fun, but it does turn into the whole Thor is fighting with Hela, and you’re like, they’re the same.

**John:** They’re gods.

**Craig:** Now it’s just fistfight again. You get that weird inflation of power, all the way to Thanos can wipe out half of the universe and that we can do these things. For me, as a DM, the challenge of running a campaign with… There are seven of you guys, who are all Level 16. You’re a Level 15 warlock, but you’re also a Level 1… What’d you dip into?

**John:** Artificer.

**Craig:** Artificer. Seven Level 16 characters are demigods. The danger now is that every encounter will either be trivial or you’ll all die. The ability to craft close battles is becoming much, much harder because you guys can beat almost anyone. It’s tricky.

**John:** What you’re describing in terms of the DM’s challenge is really the screenwriter’s challenge or the TV writer’s challenge in terms of figuring out ways, when you have characters who can do all these things, how do you create scenarios in which they are challenged, and yet it still feels like they are recognizably human, it still feels like they’re relating to things at a normal human level. That becomes just really, really tricky thinking about the Superman problem, like Doctor Strange and Wanda Maximoff, which again, super incredibly, incredibly powerful characters.

In the case of Wanda, you’re looking for what is she really trying to do, how do we set up the things that she’s actually focusing on, which is basically to get back to her sons. How can that be a driving factor? Yet we as an audience have very little ability to understand what are the limits to her power, what is it that she cannot do. You end up having to have other characters describe someone that’s putting other guardrails around where the edges of her power is. It’s really tough. I think we sometimes under-appreciate how tough it is to write incredibly powerful characters versus people with more normal levels of ability.

**Craig:** You begin to get stupid. I don’t know how else to put it. There was a video game I played years ago called Turok, the Dinosaur Hunter. It’s a cool game. You were running around. I think you were on another planet. You must’ve been on another planet where there were a lot of dinosaurs but also bad guys. As you go, no surprise, the monsters get tougher, bad guys get harder.

Like a lot of first-person shooters back then, it was about weapon fetishization. You start with a gun, but then you get a shotgun, but then you get a big shotgun, but then you get a rocket launcher. Where it ended up was you have a gun that fires small nukes. That’s where you ended up. You were literally firing nuclear weapons out of your gun, which of course should theoretically kill you as well. It just got stupid. That is stupid. It was fun. Oh my god was it fun, but it was stupid fun.

The one time in Predator, way way back when, in the end, spoiler for the movie from the ‘80s, the Predator explodes himself and it’s a nuclear explosion, which Arnold Schwarzenegger runs from, jumps, does the whole something behind me is exploding jump, lands and takes cover behind a log or something, and he’s fine.

**John:** He’s fine.

**Craig:** He was at Ground Zero of a nuclear blast. He’s all right. They don’t show his character going through intensive cancer treatments years later. That was hysterical but also stupid. I know I’m going to get angry fan mail about that. That’s part of the fun of overpower is like, oh my god, what a badass, but then what it costs you is…

Another case of overpower, Highlander. There can be only one. He’s the one. Now let’s make more Highlanders. They’re overpowered. They’re eternal. They can kill everybody with their swords. This guy killed all those people with his sword.

**John:** I want to point out though, going back to your Predator example, because the most recent Predator I thought was a really, really good version of Predator. I loved it.

**Craig:** Grounded.

**John:** Grounded. I think one of the reasons it was grounded is that the Predator character could seem overpowered and yet it has put limits on what it’s willing to do, in terms of it could fly off in its ship. It’s not going to fly off in its ship. It’s going to do some stuff. Therefore you can use the overpowered character’s abilities against itself. That’s ultimately how they are defeated, which is true to the Predator ethos. An overpowered villain is not nearly as much of a problem for the screenwriter as an overpowered hero is.

**Craig:** Yes, although the overpowered hero will lead to overpowered villains. I see in the notes here you reference The Matrix. That’s what happened in The Matrix. What a great movie.

**John:** Great.

**Craig:** I love The Matrix. It is just gorgeous from beginning to end. It has a wonderful end. Then the demands of sequel made it so like, okay, he’s definitely God in The Matrix, so what do we do? Let’s bring back the bad guy, but let’s bring back a thousand of him.

There are so many interesting things that are happening in The Matrix sequels that I really enjoy, that are fascinating. That was the part that was the least interesting to me, because you could feel it getting silly. You were losing a sense of reality to anybody getting really hurt or really dying. It was getting so mythological as to disconnect me from a relationship with it. That’s one of the costs of overpower.

**John:** I’ve been thinking recently about why there are not more movies being made about the Greek gods. I think it really does come down to that. It’s very hard to have any sort of grounded things happening to them, because they are just literally gods. Their powers are so vast, it’s hard to find a challenge for them.

**Craig:** The great Greek dramas were about humans that were being toyed with by the gods or encouraged by the gods. The stories of the gods in their internecine warfare feels more like reading bible stories, where you’re like, “I don’t really think that that happened like that. I don’t believe that Jesus is fighting Satan in Hell.” I don’t really believe that, I don’t know, Chronos ate his children. I don’t know where any of this stuff comes from. It’s all rather silly. What is interesting is Persius.

**John:** Exactly.

**Craig:** He’s interesting. That story is fun. Jonah and the Whale, Jonah is interesting. People are interesting. One of the problems with the proliferation of the superhero genre is that we’re just disconnecting with people. The more superheros are like people to me, the more interested I generally am in them. I love Spider-Man. I love Batman, because Batman’s a person. Spider-Man’s a kid. I love that.

**John:** Craig, Megana, thank you for a fun show.

**Megana:** Thank you.

**Craig:** Thank you!

Links:

* [‘Doppelganger murder’: Woman accused of killing Instagram lookalike in plot to fake her own death](https://www.nbcnews.com/news/world/doppelganger-murder-woman-killed-instagram-lookalike-fake-death-rcna68318?cid=sm_npd_nn_tw_ma) By Andy Eckardt and Aina J. Khan for NBC
* [The Godfather, Saudi-Style](https://www.theguardian.com/world/2022/nov/29/mbs-v-mbn-the-bitter-power-struggle-between-rival-saudi-princes) by Anuj Chopra for the Guardian
* [The Last Days of Nikki Finke](https://www.nytimes.com/2023/01/21/style/nikki-finke-hollywood-journalist.html) by Jacob Bernstein for the NYT
* [The Nun and the Monk who fell in Love and Married](https://www.bbc.com/news/uk-64125531) by Aleem Maqbool for BBC
* [13 stranded strangers went on a road trip. Here’s what happened](https://www.cnn.com/travel/article/chance-encounters-canceled-flight-van-road-trip-13-strangers/index.html) by Francesca Street for CNN
* [‘Nothing, Forever’ Is An Endless ‘Seinfeld’ Episode Generated by AI](https://www.vice.com/en/article/qjkyxp/whats-the-deal-with-nothing-forever-a-21st-century-seinfeld-that-is-ai-generated) by Chloe Xiang for Vice
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Scriptnotes, Episode 580: Finding a Way In, and Out, Transcript

February 13, 2023 Scriptnotes Transcript

The original post for this episode can be found [here](https://johnaugust.com/2022/telling-real-world-stories).

**John August:** Hello and welcome. My name is John August.

**Craig Mazin:** No, my name is Craig Mazin.

**John:** This is Episode 580 of Scriptnotes. It’s a podcast about screenwriting and things that are interesting to screenwriters. Today on the show, it’s a How Would This Be a Movie case study. I’ll be talking with screenwriter William Nicholson about his script for Thirteen Lives, following the attempted rescue of a Thai soccer team trapped in a cave. We’ll get into issues of life rights, competing projects, narrative point of view, cultural sensitivity, and what happens when you and the director don’t agree about what kind of movie you’re trying to make. Craig, it’s a really good conversation. I was sorry to not have you there, but sometimes the one-on-one things are better when it’s just one on one.

**Craig:** What I’m hearing is that it was a really good conversation because I wasn’t there.

**John:** It was a good conversation. Also, I saw the movie. I think I was vaguely aware of the actual real-life rescue. You remember that one when it was happening, right?

**Craig:** Of course. I remember when it was happening. I remember Elon Musk doing what he seems to do on a daily basis now, which is say something incredibly stupid, so there was that.

**John:** There was that.

**Craig:** They got the kids out, which was great.

**John:** Yeah, which is great. I knew that the kids got out. We did talk a little bit about knowing the ending of the movie. Before we sit down and watch it, you know the kids get out. The specifics were actually a lot different than I realized or than I heard reported in the moment. It was really a question of point of view. Do you talk about it from the family’s point of view, from the kids inside the cave’s point of view? At what point do you reveal the kids inside the cave are alive? How do you reflect the balance of worldwide attention versus the actual very small, local story on the ground? It was a good conversation about the choices he made but the other choices that could’ve been made.

**Craig:** Nice.

**John:** Nice. Also, in our Bonus Segment for Premium Members, I want to talk about our non-work goals and aspirations for 2023. We are canonically not a resolution show. We’re not going to promise to do a thing. I always like to think about stuff we’d like to do more of or less of.

**Craig:** Great.

**John:** Let’s be thinking about that for a Bonus. We’re going to ask Megana too.

**Craig:** As long as we’re asking Megana, then we’ll be fine.

**Megana Rao:** I have to think of something.

**Craig:** Get going, Megana.

**John:** Some follow-up from last week. We had Rian Johnson on the show. We were answering a question about variable frame rates. I said that I was going to watch Avatar right after we record it, and I would be able to tell you what I thought of the variable frame rates. They mostly worked for me. The times that you go into really high frame rate stuff, it tends to be underwater. There’s a lot of underwater. The underwater stuff is amazing and beautiful in the movie. There are other moments where I did notice things were shifting, but it’s also hard to tell, because it’s a 3D movie, so everything’s a little bit weird anyway. I don’t know, if I was watching a 2D movie, I might not have had the same experience with the high frame rate stuff.

**Craig:** How are the glasses these days? Feeling good?

**John:** So much better.

**Craig:** Good.

**John:** The glasses are pretty lightweight. This is my first time wearing them with a mask as well. A little trick for people is that if your glasses start to fog up, just pull your glasses a little bit further away, further down the bridge of your nose, and they won’t fog up so much.

**Craig:** That’s a good tip, or get Lasik.

**John:** I’m talking about the 3D glasses.

**Craig:** Oh, the 3D glasses. You have to wear the 3D glasses. I guess that makes sense. It would fog up. Maybe in a movie like Avatar, the fog might add a little something.

**John:** No, the fog will not add. James Cameron does not want you to have fog on your glasses.

**Craig:** Interesting.

**John:** He will come by and he will wipe off the fog on your glasses.

**Craig:** He does seem like somebody that would more likely just smack the mask off your face.

**John:** Interestingly, he was supposed to come to the Q and A after this, and all the chairs were filled and-

**Craig:** He got COVID.

**John:** He got COVID. He got COVID 20 minutes before. [inaudible 00:03:33] positive test 20 minutes before.

**Craig:** That’s very convenient COVID to get, by the way. There have been times where I’m like, “Come on, COVID.”

**John:** Craig is scratching a little line with a little thin Sharpie there like, “Oh, sorry, can’t go.”

**Craig:** Yeah, “I don’t want to do this thing. Oh, dammit.”

**John:** I really enjoyed the story in Avatar 2. It didn’t feel like three hours. I think what impressed me most is it’d been a long time since I’d seen a 3D movie, because I just didn’t really care about 3D. This was the first 3D movie I’ve seen that didn’t make me go blind at a certain point. There’s something that happens to me in 3D movies where my brain just stops being able to process what I’m seeing. In this, it didn’t happen. I felt like I could see everything [inaudible 00:04:14].

**Craig:** That’s good. There is a diminishing return. Watching 2D stuff, you begin to forget pretty quickly that it’s just a flat thing on a screen. Your mind turns it into 3D basically. Similarly, your mind turns 3D into whatever the 2D version of 3D is. It all just in my mind turns into the same experience, unless they’re doing the tricks, like something flying at your face. Otherwise, meh.

**John:** I think Cameron obviously couldn’t do whatever he wants to do, because it’s all virtually filmed and stuff, so that he could build shots after the fact to work properly to brain in 3D, which is helpful, because so much of the 3D we see these days was really shot to be 2D and then they do it in post.

**Craig:** They do a conversion.

**John:** It’s not the same. Let’s talk to smaller screens. The big news this past couple weeks has been how many shows got chopped off of HBO Max, and things that were already shot, things that were already on the system.

**Craig:** Gulp.

**John:** Old things, they’re gone.

**Craig:** My show’s still there. Yes!

**John:** Craig, are you checking Chernobyl every moment to see whether-

**Craig:** I am not checking Chernobyl every moment, but listen, who knows? I don’t understand it. I legitimately don’t understand it. We’ve talked about this before. It seems like there was some sort of tax benefit to merging companies and then offloading some assets or something like that.

**John:** That one was an example of that, where you could take a big write-off on it and just bury it. It doesn’t seem like they’re necessarily going to bury all these things. Patrick Somerville, who came on to talk about Station Eleven, he said he doesn’t know what’s going to happen. He keeps checking to see if Station Eleven is there. He promises that he will project it on a rock in the Mojave Desert if he has to. These other shows, they’re off HBO Max for right now, but it looks like they’re going to try to put them on some sort of ad-supported system that’s maybe not HBO Max. That could be someplace else. I want to talk a little bit about that, because that’s something we haven’t really gotten into a lot on the show. Megana, I think there’s a question we could frame this with.

**Megana:** Andy from Seattle asked, “Once a show gets sold from HBO Max to a free, ad-supported streaming television service, will writers and actors start getting residuals as the property starts making active money?”

**Craig:** They sure will.

**John:** They will. They’ll get some residuals. It’ll just be a different system for it.

**Craig:** Yes, but it will be a better system. We will make more money this way.

**John:** We’ll make more money depending on how it’s set up, because I can imagine two scenarios, which we’ll just set up. First off, HBO could sell it to a place like Pluto or one of the other existing services, in which case there’d be a license fee. That might be good.

**Craig:** There’s always that. That’s the only way we make money off of residuals. HBO made Chernobyl. Let’s say they put Chernobyl on CBS. The only money HBO gets is the licensing money. The ad money goes to CBS. We don’t get any of that. We just get the licensing money that goes to HBO. That’s the gross. Then the producer’s gross is 20% of that, because we lost many, many years ago. Then we get a percentage of the 20%.

What’s interesting is right now if you make something for a streamer, there is no licensing fee ancillary market. The residuals we get are these weird, imputed things that are not necessarily connected to anything real. You and I are old enough where we wrote movies, and then those movies ended up on TBS with ads in them. We would get pretty decent residual checks from the licensing of those movies to TBS. For writers and directors and actors, this could revitalize the dwindling residuals stream. Creatively, as we’ve discussed, it’s a little disconcerting that you can make a show and it just disappears from something like that. I think it’s gotten everybody a little wigged out, and for good reason. I’m curious. Is Station Eleven available on DVD?

**John:** Station Eleven does not have DVDs right now.

**Craig:** How does he have it?

**John:** I think he’s talking about whatever cut he has off of the non-linear editor. His actual tweet was, “If Station Eleven ever disappears, I promise to purchase one acre of land somewhere in the Mojave Desert and just play it on a loop projected on a rock forever.”

**Craig:** We’re going to have to download some of these things.

**John:** I’ll check into it. It’s entirely possible that DVDs were cut for that show. So many of these HBO Max shows have no DVDs. There’s no other physical way to see it. That creative fear is huge. Circling back to the issue of residuals, Chernobyl that’s on HBO Max, you’re still getting residuals, but those residuals right now are based on a declining fee per every year that it’s on the service and based on a certain fixed price. It doesn’t have anything to do with the actual success of the show. It’s just basically from the time it was made it just declines in value after that time. Chernobyl could in theory make more money being licensed someplace else and therefore create more residuals for you.

**Craig:** It would. It would. I don’t want people to watch it with ads in it, but yeah, it would. It’s really interesting, because what’s happening, this is again financially not necessarily bad news for artists, creatively potentially bad news, is that streamers are suddenly asking the question that all of the rest of us have been asking for a long time, which is, so wait, how do you make money? I know you sell a subscription, but okay, if they’re subscribing, why do you need to make anything more, or do you need to make this much more, or how much stuff do you need to have there, because where does money come from, because in the old days, if you could convert stuff to ad-supported or home video of any format, there was your reason to make more stuff. There’d be additional revenue streams. If all it is is streaming, that’s it. You’ve basically curtailed your own revenue stream as far as I can tell.

**John:** Your revenue stream is based on the monthly subscribers and the idea that having these vast libraries was going to keep them returning as monthly subscribers.

**Craig:** Sure, but that is the only revenue stream you’ll ever have, whereas in the old days studios would have ticket sales, airplane rentals, home video, and then eventually pay TV, licensing it to HBO and Showtime, and then eventually ad-supported television on TBS. Let’s just presume everything goes to TBS if it still exists.

**John:** A thing I’m always confused about when these announcements are first coming out is… Free ad-supported streaming television, or FAST is the abbreviation you’re going to see for that, it’s the same thing as AVOD, so advertising-based video on demand. The difference is that we usually talk about AVOD for things like The Office. If The Office was showing on NBC, and so you’re watching it there, but then a few weeks later it was showing on nbc.com, that was AVOD, and so where studios would show their own things on their own websites.

What’s different now is of course there are streamers that are doing that [inaudible 00:11:18] TV. There’s existing things like Pluto. There’s probably going to be new things presumably coming out of Warner’s that are going to be a service like that. I think figuring out what the appropriate licensing fee is for HBO Max to be selling it to their own service will be an issue.

**Craig:** That kind of self-dealing has been litigated many, many times before and will continue to be litigated now that it seems to be coming back. Making sweetheart deals with yourself is tricky. You need to sell it for what would be a legally supportable market price. You can’t completely jam people. It will be interesting. I feel like the wheel is turning back in time. We’re heading backwards in time. It’s funny.

Silicon Valley was so behind the explosion of streaming, if you consider Netflix. I consider Netflix to be Silicon Valley-esque. I guess the idea of just the new way of doing things, new media we called it. Meanwhile, what were those companies in Silicon Valley doing? Selling ads on everything. Google is an advertising company. YouTube, which Google owns, is an advertising company. Facebook is an advertising company and so on and so forth. Currently, the aforementioned Elon Musk is flipping out, trying to get more people to advertise on Twitter, because it’s an advertising company. They’ve always been ad-supported, and then somehow we got hoodwinked over here into being like, “No ads. No, we don’t need that. That’s old-school stuff.” I guess if you want to make money, ads.

**John:** Ads.

**Craig:** Ads.

**John:** The answer to the question is, what’s going to happen, hopefully this will be more residuals for the writers involved, but of course, those things actually have to be distributed someplace. I think it’s potentially good news assuming that they actually are putting those things someplace and not just burying them in a hole, which is I think the worry we had originally.

**Craig:** I could be wrong, but it seems like the things that are getting buried in holes are things that had very low viewership numbers. They’re pulling Westworld off of HBO Max. That’s going to land somewhere. That is be on another platform.

**John:** That was the marquee property of HBO two or three years ago.

**Craig:** There’s no question about that. It will be figured out one way or another. I think some of the things that got completely removed were probably… They had said in some article some of the… They mentioned one show. I can’t remember what it was. I think it was animated. Something like only 400 people watched it in a year or something. It was like, okay, I guess-

**John:** There were back-episodes. They had the whole catalog of Sesame Street. There were some episodes of that show that just no one had watched in-

**Craig:** No one had watched.

**John:** Yeah, because who wants to watch a 20-year-old random episode?

**Craig:** It makes me feel good sometimes to watch Sesame Street.

**John:** Nice. Let’s get to our main centerpiece of this episode, which is the conversation I had with Bill Nicholson. This is part of a Writers Guild Foundation event. We’ve done a lot of events for the Writers Guild Foundation over the years. There’s going to be a link in the show notes to the video of this whole Zoom interview we did. William Nicholson, Bill Nicholson, is great. I’ve never had a chance to talk to him before. Credits include Everest, Unbroken, Mandela, Les Mis, Elizabeth, Gladiator, going back many, many, many years, starting out as a playwright. We really got to talk about the whole process of figuring out from someone coming to him with like, “Hey, would you want to do a movie about this cave rescue?” to all the changes and drama along the way, shooting this during the pandemic, and then shooting it for Amazon, which couldn’t release it the way they wanted to release it. A really good conversation and just a really great writer. Enjoy this. Craig and I will be back afterwards for our One Cool Things.

It is my absolute pleasure to be talking to you today, Bill, about Thirteen Lives but also I’d love to talk about screenwriting in general and your career and many other things. Where are we talking to you today from? I see it’s dark there.

**Bill Nicholson:** I’m in South England, in Sussex, in the converted garage where I do all my work in the lovely English countryside.

**John:** Fantastic. Let’s start with Thirteen Lives, because I just watched it last night. I’m really curious how you came into the project, because I remember the story as it was happening in real time. It felt like, okay, obviously there’s going to be a movie coming out of this, but what was your entrance into this as a movie?

**Bill:** Like you, I remember it from when it actually happened. I wouldn’t say I followed every deet, but obviously, I did follow it. It was very moving, and then I forgot about it. Sometime later, as is the way of these things, a producer got in touch with me and said would I be interested in writing the screenplay. I was initially a little reluctant, because I thought maybe it was an oversimple story. Guys go down in a cave, get stuck. It’s all terrible. Then they get out and it’s okay. Of course, they sent me some research. They’d had a lot of research done on it. That amazed me and I realized what a rich tale it was. It moved me in a whole different way actually. I really like writing very emotionally valid and powerful pieces, so I said yes. The simple answer is I got asked.

**John:** That’s great to be asked. I’m not surprised you were asked. If you look at your credits and look at the movies you’ve written and going back to Gladiator and Shadowlands and those things, but more recently, Everest, Unbroken, other true stories, and finding the ways to tell these historical true stories in ways that are compelling. You seem like a very great fit for it. I guess my question is, when they came to approach you to write this, how much did they have? Off and on Scriptnotes podcasts, we get these questions about like, “Oh, what rights do I need to do to tell a true story?” People will see producers jockeying for rights, locking up this person’s life rights or this person’s life rights. As they came to you, what were they coming to you with? They had some original research, but what else?

**Bill:** You’re completely right. It was a writer’s nightmare. Lots of other projects were in the mix. There was another team that had the rights to the Australian doctor, Harry Harris. We did not have the rights to the Thai kids at all. The Thai government controlled that. The key rights, which are the British divers, those were the ones that my producer had obtained. That was the core of the project. The rest we had to… You know the process. We had to use material that was in the public domain. It’s worrying when you’re [inaudible 00:18:06]. It’s worrying on all sorts of levels. It’s worrying also because I’m dealing with real people’s real lives who are still there, especially the Thai people. I think we had a superb level of research, which fed me absolutely as much as possible. I just did my best to give a fair crack to all of those individuals.

**John:** You say you had research. How much of that was coming to you in written form versus your ability to talk to these divers? What was your ability to reach out and ask specific questions, or did you have to go through levels to get there? What was your connection to these characters?

**Bill:** With the two main divers, I went and visited them and talked to them and subsequently made very good relations with them, was able to check a lot of things with them as I went along. All the rest was [inaudible 00:18:58]. This was in COVID times. A superb researcher had amassed an enormous amount of material, mostly remotely, particularly on all the Thai details. I was supplied with that when I began, because the producer had also produced the documentary, which is called The Rescue. They’d done all the research for that. I was given all of that, and I was able to ask the researcher to ask the researcher to follow up whenever I wanted. I was very well supported.

**John:** One of the fundamental decisions you have to make as a writer is how you’re going to tell the story and when you’re going to start the story and what details are going to be at what point. How early in the process of the conversations with the producers about coming on to do this did you have an approach? Did you have a take for how you were going to tell the story?

**Bill:** Not immediately, but you’re completely right. People think if you have a true story, because you take down what happened. Of course, you sort of do, because you have an obligation to the truth. My job is finding the emotional through line and also the mini emotional stories within the overall one, because nobody is going to watch just to hear another fact. They watch because of what you make them feel about the characters, what the characters want, what the characters fear, and what then happens to them. It really is a kind of crafting of real events to create emotional drama. Of course, there is emotional drama once you’ve got kids threatening with death.

You’ve really got to do a lot more than that. I looked to the material. I drew up a timeline of my own, the peaks and the troughs. I looked at that very early on, because obviously, the producers, when they asked me to do it, they didn’t just say, “Go ahead and do it.” They say, “Tell us what you will do before any contract gets signed.” That’s fair enough.

I give them I suppose my pitch really. I said very early on the obvious thing which anybody tackling this story would say, which is, “We cannot afford to make this be a white savior story, so how are we going to deal with that? We’re going to look at all of the Thai stories. We’re going to look at what they did and the complexities of that and how much we can weave that in.”

I made the decision very early on that this was in a way not the story of the boys. This was partly because I did not have their rights, but it was also partly because they’re stuck. They’re in a cave. You have a choice. Are you going to keep cutting back to them inside the cave getting hungrier and hungrier or not? I said, “My way of doing this is we’re going to see them go in, and then we’re not going to see them again until they’re found.”

**John:** It’s 45 minutes into the film before we see them again. We see, oh, they are actually alive. This is a real open question. Obviously, as an audience who has some knowledge coming into it, we know that they’re alive in there, but everyone on the outside doesn’t. You set up a good expectation that maybe they are going in to find bodies ultimately. They don’t know where they are, how far.

**Bill:** It’s very interesting the way you can tell a story by being able to know the ending and still make it tense. I think it’s because as people watch, they accept that they’re within that moment. One of the reasons that I took the project on actually was because one of the things that really struck me, after the divers found the bodies, there was this ecstasy throughout this enormous camp, real cheers. The boys are there. The boys are alive. That was simultaneously experienced with the divers knowing that the boys are going to die, that there is no way to come out.

I find that sort of crunch very powerful. When I saw that, I go, “Actually, we have got a story here.” Of course, if you can communicate to the viewers sufficiently, this really is an insoluble problem, and then you proceed to find a crazy solution, which against all the odds works, and you have a story.

**John:** Now, let’s talk about decisions of classic characters and themes going through stuff. You have actors we recognize who are doing certain things. Also, what I was really impressed by with the movie, and you talk about making sure that the Thai people in their efforts are centered in this, for a lot of the start of the film and really throughout the film, we’re seeing the rest of the efforts from the Thai perspective. These are competent people who are doing their very best. It feels very documentary in a good way. It feels very matter of fact. You don’t see a lot of speechify. You don’t see people stopping to explain something about Thai culture and history and stuff. It’s very much focused on the moment.

Did you know from the start that you were going to have so many characters and that we as an audience might not even really know their names? I’m thinking about the engineer on top of the mountain who’s trying to divert the water. We recognize him, but we know very little about him. Do you know that from the start, that you’d have this wide array of characters?

**Bill:** Yes, in the sense that I had to place my heroic British divers in this much bigger context. I think the first thing that I thought when I looked into all this story was an enormous number of people volunteered. There was this great mass, like 5,000 people just gave their time or their equipment for nothing. I love that. It runs counter to the kind of story that we’re being told all the time, which is that we live in a competitive world where people will only get off their bottoms for money. I’ve wanted to celebrate that very much, which meant locating as many of these stories as possible.

There are very many stories. You simply don’t have the space. In that sense, you color code the characters so that people recognize them visually rather than knowing their names. You also give them each a little kind of trick so that you can spot how they’re likely to… You can only do that to a very small degree, because you’re juggling so many characters. You talk about it being documentary. Yes, it’s documentary in the sense that it did happen. We’re not grandstanding with it. We’re not trying to make out some sort of opportunity for people to make their own speeches.

I actually think the grand sentiments come over much more powerfully if you throw them away, if they’re not asserted, you ask the audience to find that for themselves. That’s a conscious decision, particularly with the main divers who really led me into this by their own characters. I was picking up from what they told me about themselves, which is, “We don’t do this for money. We’re amateurs. We’re not interested in publicity.” They’ve got a rather delightful… There were so many that got cut out.

When they were first asked to come, Rick, the Viggo Mortensen one, said, “How are we getting there?” John says to him, “They’re giving us business class flights.” Business class, I’ll fly anywhere. I love that. It’s very British, very undercutting heroism and grandiosity. I was working from the characters.

I also think it means that you can feed your actors with a role where they have very few words but a lot of emotional moments. Those emotional moments, they are going to act on. They’re going to be on their face. If you’ve correctly structured the emotional trajectory, the audience knows what they’re thinking and feeling, looking at their face. They don’t need words. That is what screenwriters do. It drives me nuts when people say… Somebody said to me, “Oh, you didn’t have much to do for the first 20 minutes, did you?” I say, “I wrote the damn thing. Every feat is written.”

**John:** Absolutely. What is the camera pointing at, what are we seeing, what are we living.

**Bill:** Exactly. Not just that. Ron and I talked a lot about structuring the dives, because too many dives are boring. Each dive has to have its own character, its own emotional little story. I literally listed them all with the emotions that accompanied them.

**John:** Let’s talk about the emotional trajectory of the Viggo Mortensen character, because he’s the one who I think… I would say your characters don’t protagonate a lot. They’re not going through this classic giant character’s arc where they come in as one thing and leave fully transformed. It’s small and it’s subtle but it’s there. Viggo Mortensen’s character’s probably the easiest one to see that. He’s initially reluctant to necessarily go on this dive, to even join on his trip. Then when he’s there, he’s skeptical a lot along the way. What were the beats you mapped out for yourself? Were they literally in an outlined form? How much were you thinking about how his character progressed over the course of the story? How did you chart that for yourself?

**Bill:** That’s kind of fairly simple really, because he starts out not wanting to go, doesn’t like kids, as he says. He gets there. He’s pissed off, because we then have all the beats about the local Thai divers don’t rate them, which is fun to have that. They’re old guys [inaudible 00:28:12] which gives him something to resent. Eventually, they do get allowed to dive, and it goes wrong. They pull out the pumping guy, and it all goes wrong. Then they’re stuck, and he wants to go home. I got that beat.

All the time, you’ve got John beside him, acting as the antagonist, his protagonist in a way, saying, “Yeah, but we’ve got to stay.” John, who knows, and I like this, John knows that Rick really wants to save the boys even though Rick says he doesn’t. That helps me a lot. I can write those little moments.

Of course, the big beat with Rick is that they find the kids, and he’s depressed. He goes down instead of out. Then you’ve got the interesting question of… This I had to argue out with both John and Rick, who had the idea to use anesthetics. I got it wrong the first time round, because it worked in my structure to have John suggest it. The real Rick said to me, because we’d shown them the script. This is no secret to them, of course. I always do that, by the way.

When I’m dealing with real, live people, I will say, “You can see anything I’m writing at any time.” Of course. It’s their life. I said to them originally, “You’re going to find this really peculiar, because I’m going to invent two characters, Rick and John. I have to.” They were really good about that. They got it. Then lots of stuff I just made it. They said, “That’s fine.” He did say, “That was my idea.” I restructured that beat.

Then you bring in the next group of divers. In the cut version, they come very abruptly. I wrote several scenes that introduced them, but it’s a long movie. Something has to go. You have the relationship with the incoming divers, which again reflects on Rick, because Jason is the one who thinks Rick’s a little bit [inaudible 00:30:19]. You then realize Rick is the leader. He has gone along with this idea. The failure will be his failure. We’re now emotionally engaged on his behalf, not just the boys’. That then takes you through the various beats of finding semi-failure along the way, until the moment when they’re sitting in a group and they’re just laughing. You can feel the release of the nervous tension and at the moments when he’s resisted contact with the families. I had so many moments I could track. There he is hugging families or being hugged I should say, because he doesn’t know how to do it.

It’s a gift really to just track all this. I did give him a little speech, which is not in the film, right at the end when they’re in their minibus and they’re going back to the airport. He’s saying, “You know what? This is something that should not have worked. This is like a one in a thousand chance that it worked, but it did work. You know what [inaudible 00:31:18] make a movie out of it, and everybody else think it’s easy.” I rather like that, but no, it didn’t come to pass.

**John:** The movie probably wanted to be over before they would’ve had a chance for that moment. Let’s talk about the dialog that’s in the movie and the dialog that’s not in the movie, because they both help in form. Let’s talk about the dialog that’s not in the movie, because there’s not a lot of talking. We have our characters mostly doing the work that they’re there to do.

There’s this misconception obviously that the screenwriter just writes the dialog and the director does everything else, but it sounds like if I’m reading the script, I get a very good sense of what those characters are, what’s going through those characters’ heads, even as they are silently observing, moving their way through the cave, stopping to get abreast.
I’m thinking back to Colin Farrell’s character half freaking out because his kid has woken up. There’s all those moments. Those were all scripted. I think it’s crucial that we remind people that those moments are in the script from the start.

**Bill:** That’s right. You’re right. If you were to see one of the drafts towards the end, you’d get a lot more dialog. It’s not so much more dialog, because there are several scenes, basically dialog scenes. This always happens to me. I guess I overwrite. I’m always writing dialog scenes which I think really help to get us sympathetic with the characters. They’re too long, and in the end the whole thing goes. The people along the way read them. Your point is correct. That feeds into their understanding. The director reads them.

I have no complaints about what is cut out. In fact, throughout my career, I’ve had the embarrassing experience of writing scenes that seem to me to be vital, having them cut out, and realizing they weren’t necessary. Each time, I think, “When am I going to learn? When am I going to write the 90-page script that they shoot instead of the 120-page script?” I don’t know why I don’t learn, but that’s the process. I’ve worked with some actors.

A million years ago, I wrote a film called First Knight with Sean Connery and Richard Gere. Sean Connery sat me down in his hotel room in London with a scene, and he said, “Look, I want to go through the scene with you. I’ll do my lines. You do the other person’s lines.” I did the other person’s lines. I would do the line, and Sean went, “Ah.” Then I did the next line, “Mm.” Then I did the next line, “Mm.” He never spoke a word. It all made perfectly good sense. He said, “Would you mind if we just [inaudible 00:34:01].” Maybe you have to start with more and hone it down.

You are dependent on the actors, because once you start dispensing with the words, you’ve structured it so that the audience knows what the actor is likely to be feeling, but the actor has got to deliver that without the acting. In my opinion, acting has become so sophisticated now. Actors are so extraordinary, film actors. You can see what they’re thinking. I can think of moments like the little scene where Harry Harris is being asked to use his skills [inaudible 00:34:46]. He’s saying no, and the other two, Rick and John, are disagreeing on how to deal with him. There aren’t many words, but that little trio, you can see what each one is thinking right the way through. There’s a couple of shots at the end that are just faces saying nothing. That’s also very skilled directing, of course.

**John:** It is. There’s a moment in Worst Person in the World, a film from last year, where a woman makes a fundamental life decision, and we see it completely on her face. It was the screenwriting that got us from her leaving a party to standing at that place and being able to think. The natural instinct would be for her to say something to someone to make sure we understood that, and yet the power of a camera and a really talented face, we can see all that information. It’s a great lesson to learn.

Let’s circle back to you say you overwrite and you need to learn how to write the 90-page version of a thing. Also, it’s just recognizing that the process of making stories is always going to be too much. There’s going to be a process of discovery there, so giving yourself permission to overwrite there a bit and recognizing and hopefully having good collaborators who will see, “Yes, there may be too much here, but we need all this too-much-ness in order to find the movie that we’re also going to want to make.”

**Bill:** I would definitely agree with that, yeah.

**John:** Let’s talk about your relationship with Ron Howard. At what point did he come into the process? Was he there from the start or only after you had a draft? What was his involvement in the film?

**Bill:** He was not there from the start. It was pretty much completely written. What happened was the producer, PJ, hired me. At that point, he had an arrangement with another director, a very good director. I worked on it with that director. I did I guess speed drafts. We kind of ran into a problem of how we saw the movie between me and the director. I have huge respect for the directors that I work with. I tried very hard to deliver the kind of tone that he was looking for, but it ran counter to my instincts. I argued it very strongly with him, but he was very clear what he wanted. There came a point when I said to PJ, “I have to leave the project. You must get another writer who’s in sync with your director.” They had a big think about it. The director had a big think about it. To his enormous credit, he said, “Look,” because PJ and Gabi Tana, the other producer kind of liked my take.

He said, “Look, I’ll withdraw. It’s not a problem.” He withdrew. I then proceeded with my version, which was, to put it very, very simply, more emotional. He was much more action and repression, which is a great way to go. I’m a very warmhearted person. We proceeded in my version. I did several drafts until both the producers were thinking, “This is good. We will shop it.” They then took it to their agents in LA. That is when it went to an agent, and that’s when Ron picked it up. Ron then came in, and I then worked with Ron for several more drafts.

**John:** We both had the experience of an existing draft and a director comes on board. It’s both a conversation with the director about what movie they see versus the movie that you wrote and what they need. You’re trying to explain what your intentions were with things. They’re trying to explain what they think they actually need from a movie. What guidance can you give to a writer listening to those conversations with the director? How do you approach that in a way that both sides benefit?

**Bill:** The first thing is you have to not be defensive as a writer. We writers have a very tough time, because we are not in control. That is the reality. If you want to be in control, be a writer-director, which I have also done. You are not in control. The director is going to have to make this damn movie. It’s no good, you demanding the director executes your vision. He’s going to execute his or her vision. Don’t be defensive. What you do is when the director says, “I think they need more of this or less of this,” what you’ve got to think is, why is he saying that? What’s happening here? Is there a valid point here? If there is, how can I enact it in a way that fits my vision? I’ve had some bad ones, but mostly they’ve been good. My experience has been that it improves when you do this.

I always tell people, and this applies to development as well, if you get notes, don’t obey the note. If the note says, “We think the dog should jump over the cliff,” don’t say, “Okay, I will write it.” Say to yourself, “Why did they say that? Haven’t I got a better way of giving them what they want?” because you will have, because you’ll understand the whole thing. They’re probably looking just at that beat. That’s the problem you have with some directors. Some directors aren’t good at overall structure. I’m talking now about really emotional storytelling. They’re good at a scene. They know that they can make a scene work. They can make that scene work when the guy comes in and we don’t even know what he’s seeing and he’s incredibly scared.

[inaudible 00:40:23] how that impacts down the road. What you have to do is say, “Okay, they want an emotional high point, which I have not delivered. I’ve got to find a way to deliver it, and then they’ll be happy at that point.” If you have a problem, I have had this with some extremely famous directors who have said, “I think there should be a scene like this here.” I’ve said to the team, “That will make no sense. That will wreck the whole flow.” They’ve said, “The boss has asked for it. You’ve got to do it.” I then do it. In my experience, always those the projects that don’t get made, because the director hasn’t understood what the story is, but the director is too powerful. There are too many directors, unfortunately, who never get anybody telling them boo. It’s just extraordinary to me.

I’ve said to the team, “Just tell him it doesn’t work.” They said, “You don’t do that. He’s our boss, literally our boss in every way.” [inaudible 00:41:25]. Mostly, you should be able to collaborate with the director in such a way that the director feels really safe with you as a writer, that the director can say, “I want more here and less here,” and you go, “Yes, fantastic, let’s do this. We’ll find the way together.” That is really exciting.

I have to say, with Ron, he was extremely respectful. I think he had taken on a highly developed script. It had been through many processes. His attack, it was a combination. It was very process-driven. He really wanted to understand how he was going to film the process and what impact that would have. A lot of his changes related to that. Other changes were he wanted more of a particular element. For example, he wanted more of the guy called the water guy, Thanet, who is up on the mountain diverting the water. Let me think. What else was there?

We did talk quite a lot. We played around quite a lot with changing some of my structure. We talked, and I was willing to, but in the end, we stuck with it. He will say that the last time we were on a giant Zoom together to talk about this at this stage, he said that the thing about the screenplay he received was that the structure was there already. He didn’t have to really mess with that too much. He’s a very nice guy.

**John:** He’s a nice guy. I’ve worked with him on a couple projects. He’s lovely.

**Bill:** He’s just amazing. I just wanted him to be able to do what he needed to do. Then the other thing that happened was he started shooting it, and I was not present on the shoot. I was in Australia. He was on the phone to me or on the email to me quite a lot, saying basically for budget reasons, we can no longer do this scene or that scene, “Find a way to write the beat that happens there somewhere else in another way,” or, “Could you please add it in to the existing scene?” There was quite a lot of that, which I was of course completely willing to do. I think you need to be in that sense a kind of craftsman who is there. “We’re now sailing the ship and it’s leaking. Please could you plug that gap?”

**John:** Absolutely circling back to this, in the first time you’re talking with the director or really anyone else in the project, a friend always reminds me that as the screenwriter, you’re the only person who’s already seen the movie. You see the whole thing there. You have everything that’s on the page, but you also have a whole movie in your head. Sometimes those initial conversations are really just aligning what movies is the director seeing in their head and trying to find the overlaps there and fix the things that aren’t overlapping quite right.

In those conversations, it varies director to director for me, but sometimes you are spending three days talking about the color of the paint on the walls, but that’s really the process for just trying to align your visions for what things really look like and what’s important to them or what’s important to you. You never know what it’s going to be as you start the process.

**Bill:** I don’t get into those sorts of conversations. I’m happy for him to paint the walls whatever color he wants really. What I want to know… I say I want to know. I don’t have any power over this person. It doesn’t get me anywhere. I would like to know that the director sees the same movie as me, but to be honest, I never know until it’s done, until it’s actually being shot, because people do the oddest things.

**John:** bill, you’ve made your living as a playwright and as a film writer and director. Do you have any experience running television shows or doing any of the series where the writer would be more in control, the writer would be telling the director what to do? Have you had that experience?

**Bill:** Not in the modern form. I’m doing a Netflix TV series right now, writing it. You’re right, it is very, very different in power terms. Back in the day, when I was working with BBC, I did I think four TV movies. The interesting thing about the BBC and television then is my name was the name that was in the newspapers, to the rage of the directors. It was William Nicholson’s latest. I really of course liked that.

I really disliked the filmed by thing, where directors act as if they’re created the whole thing. I’ve softened over the years. I used to be quite militant about this. I’ve done two movies myself as a director/writer. That has taught me to respect directors very, very highly. I do realize I need them. I just wish that the world out there understood what screenwriters do. I don’t know why this hasn’t got through. We need a movement like Cahiers du Cinema, which elevated the directors. We need a movement.

Maybe you’re right. Actually, it’s happening. It’s happening in TV. The people who create the great TV series are the writers. Our day is coming. That’s fantastic. You get astonishing things like Succession, which I don’t know who’s the hero of that, whether it’s Jesse Armstrong, Lucy Prebble, or whoever, I don’t quite know what’s going on, but somebody is doing something completely brilliant there. They’re also superbly directed, I have to say. Again, let’s all try not to quarrel over who gets the credit and be grateful if we can together do something good, because most things don’t quite work.

**John:** Circling back to Thirteen Lives, so much of the film is in Thai. It’s in a very specific Northern Thai dialect. I’m guessing you don’t speak it. At what point in the process did you need to think about how much of the film was going to be in Thai versus how much was going to be in English and what the balance was going to be. Did you need to interact with any of those language experts or did that process come later down?

**Bill:** It came much later. I knew all along that a large part would be in Thai. That was all part of respect for the people we were filming and not turning it into an outsider attack. I write it all in English, and it goes on the page in bold italics, meaning translate this please. The team making it under Ron then bring in Thai translators, but not just Thai translators, Thai filmmakers who are also Thai, who tell me about the culture. Back comes the message. You have this scene where this Thai Navy Seal speaks to his boss, his captain, in a quite strong way. They would never do that. That does not happen. We have total respect for authority people. You’ve just [inaudible 00:48:20] I change it. I just simply rewrote. That happened quite a bit.

I had a whole lot to do with the governor here, who had actually a very interesting story. I originally made him a rather ironic, wry guy, who was constantly saying, “They’ve set me up for the fall here.” There’s a little bit of it in the movie, but I had quite a lot more. I was told he would not speak of his superiors in this way. Even though he thinks it, even though it’s true, he just wouldn’t, so out it went.

**John:** Probably both choices about how that character would respond but also what the movie wants to do. The movie is so focused on the question of will we be able to get the boys out, anything that feels like it’s not to that point is going to be on the chopping block. It’s hard for it to last in the film. You made choices about how much we’re seeing or are aware of these characters’ personal lives before they get involved. Basically, the moment anybody shows up Thailand, we’re never seeing their homelands again.

Basically, we’re only going to stay near the caves here in Thailand. Talk to us about decisions to show Colin Ferrell’s home life and what you were trying to do there, the few glimpses we had outside of Thailand. Were there more scenes? What were your decisions about showing their life before they get to Thailand?

**Bill:** No, there were not more scenes. I knew that I wanted to just tell you enough about them to give you some anchor for how they were going to make their emotional journey and then just show you enough at the end to remind you where they’re come from and what it means. They’re two different stories, obviously. With Rick, Viggo Mortensen, he lives alone in this chaotic, machine-filled space. You would kind of sense that the guy’s asocial just from the images of him. Also, there was quite a bit of dialog there when he’s talking on the phone to John.

With John, with Colin Ferrell, all I needed to do was show that he’s divorced and he’s got a kid. Obviously, he’s going to identify the kids in the cave with his cave. I don’t need to say that. You just plant that, and that’s there.

In the early versions, there was another thread. They had a kind of office, the British Cave Rescue Council. There was a woman there who fed information back all the time. We did think whether to have her in England, but I really decided no, this is one of those stories where you need to maintain the pressure cooker, get them into the pressure cooker and keep them there. That was a very conscious decision, which is why I didn’t want to go into the home life of any of any of the Thai characters once the pressure had begun. I think it’s sort of like Aristotelian unities. It’s a unity of time and place, and they’re up against the clock, and just hold it there. Don’t play games. Don’t do cutting around with time. Give us a sense of the passage of time.

**John:** [inaudible 00:51:29] your theater background, it did feel like once you created the space of the camp outside the cave, that was your main set. That’s where everything has to happen within the space and within this place and time, which I guess helps answer the question of your decisions about which of the Thai parents we were going to follow, which ones we were going to identify and have some ongoing relationship with. You pick one mother, one father who we come back to more often and we [inaudible 00:51:55] which kid is —

**Bill:** And a boy. The boy, I made him up. That didn’t happen [crosstalk 00:52:00].

**John:** The smallest boy, yeah.

**Bill:** The smallest boy did happen.

**John:** That’s right, the boy [crosstalk 00:52:05].

**Bill:** The one who doesn’t go into the cave and who was out there. I wanted one boy who represented [inaudible 00:52:11]. That didn’t actually happen. They all went into the cave. The smallest boy, that was a real thing, because I had that in the research. Obviously, the mother is a competent mother, the father is a competent father, etc. All their names are changed.

**John:** Let’s talk about structure overall, because you have a time structure, which is very natural for day one, day two, and seeing the progression. With each day, there’s a change that has happened. Sometimes it’s the weather. The way that the weather is a huge villain in the course of the stories is really interesting. You also have the decision to overlay the map and show where things were and how far deep we are into things. Was that a decision that was made on a script level or does that come later on in the filmmaking process, the literal, how deep we are into the cave system structure.

**Bill:** That was not me. That was in the cutting room, in the final stages. That was Ron and his team doing that in the final stages, looking at it and saying, “It is really important that people know how far in we are.” In the longer version of the script, I’d incorporated that information in the dialog and things like that. That didn’t survive. I thought it was really good.

**John:** I think it’s a really smart choice.

**Bill:** It was really smart. In a kind of clever way, there was more information you could take in, but it didn’t matter. You got a visual sense. That was not me.

**John:** I think it’s another thing taken probably from some of the great documentaries of the last 10 years in that sense of as you see somebody climbing a peak in Yellowstone or a peak in Yosemite, seeing how far up they are, and it was just the right choice to give us that sense of-

**Bill:** It’s a very interesting challenge. How much does the audience realize? How much have they picked up? How much do they know? What do they need turning? On the whole, you’ve got to be ahead of your audience. If they’re left saying, “We’re underwater. I have no clue where I am,” which of course is the case. How could they? What we did was, and this was in the script, I characterize stages along the journey. I said, “This will be the stalactite one. This will be Chamber 3. This will be the T-Junction.” The T-Junction was what they called it and Pattaya Beach was what they called it. I gave a description of each stage so that when they built the sets, they would look a little bit different and would give us a bit of a sense that we’re not just always in a bath. We did think about that ahead of time.

**John:** You said you’ve written the script. You’re heading into production. Obviously, casting has happened. Was there a table reading? Was there any chance for everyone to get around tables to read this together? It doesn’t seem like it would have been necessary for this, but was there some sort of [inaudible 00:55:01]?

**Bill:** I simply don’t know, because it all happened in Australia, and I wasn’t there. They all had to fly out and go into quarantine for two weeks, and then they were in their bubble. I would say about this table read, which I’ve had on every film, I absolutely hate them.

**John:** Tell me why.

**John:** There’s a couple of reasons. For some reason, the person who reads the directions is the third AD, and he can’t read. That sounds like an illiterate monotone, which is awful, and I’m dying. I learned after a bit to say, “Let me read the directions, and I’ll put some [inaudible 00:55:37].” The second reason is the actors find it very, very difficult to know whether they’re performing or not. On the whole, they don’t want to perform. They don’t want to perform, because why would they? It’s a weird set of circumstances. The confident ones don’t want to perform because, “Why should I?” The un-confident ones think that they’ll perform and be found wanting. People will say, “Why did you cast him?” The whole thing is awful for everybody. I’ve come out of every reading thinking it is a disaster.

I wasn’t present at the readthrough of Gladiator. I was involved in the project. It was such a disaster that they practically pulled the whole thing. That’s when I came on board. I think they’re terrible, these readings. They do have a function, because I almost think you should get a whole team of completely different people to do the reading. The tech people, they need to know a little bit what this thing feels like. The actors, it’s hard.

**John:** I will make a mild case for the opposing view. I’ve had table readings that have gone as badly as Gladiator’s table read, where it’s just like, wow. Everything you’re saying about an actor choosing not to perform, the risk of performing, definitely been there, seen it. My argument for them is that it makes it clear that all the actors that have at least read the whole script once, because so often, actors, they’re reading, they’re focused on their part. It’s a chance to say, “Oh, you know what? This scene actually pertains to the scene before this scene.” It’s the whole thing feeling together chronologically for once, because movies are going to be shot out of sequence and it’s going to be hard to tell what things are where. For one moment, everyone was together.

The other thing, if anyone’s listening and this is helpful, I will tend to do, if there is going to be a table reading, I will make a special version of the script that is just for the reading, that greatly cuts down the scene description so it’s just getting you right into the dialog there, and it’s all clear. If we’re going to summarize things, everyone’s looking at the same page. I hear you there.

**Bill:** That is very smart. I think you’re quite right. The table reading should be treated as a kind of performance in its own right and thought about and almost directed. Each of the actors could be told, “Don’t worry about it. Just do it clearly. That’s all. You don’t need to emote if you don’t want to.” I have been at readings. When Shadowlands was done as a reading, it was amazingly successful, and it made everybody feel this is going to work. I just wish that happened every time.

**John:** My movie Go had a great table reading, and some other ones haven’t. Of course, in theater, the idea of a reading is actually super common, and those are ways you get financing and get to the next level. Everyone understands that it is a form of a performance there, but with movies it’s a special thing. Really, you have to ask yourself, who should be in the room for that? Is it just for the filmmakers and the actors? Do producers need to be in there? Do financiers need to be in there?

**Bill:** I really like your idea of having a special text for the reading, because that’s great, because you want to maintain the pace. I’ve sat there while somebody reads through a whole page of directions in a [crosstalk 00:58:53] tone where it needs to be tightened, performed, and move on so that we can get the feeling of it. I hadn’t thought of that. If it ever happens to me again… It’s quite a lot of work though, isn’t it, doing your own-

**John:** For you or for me, maybe it’s two hours of time to take and cut it down. If it saves a lot of drama down the road, I’ll do it.

**Bill:** Do you read directions yourself?

**John:** No. We’ll find somebody who’s actually a talented actor who’s not in the production to do it.

**Bill:** Good. Good.

**John:** My friend Dan Ethridge is fantastic at that, so I will draft him whenever possible.

**Bill:** You’ve thought about this much more than me. You’re smart.

**John:** During production, obviously this is happen in Australia. At most, you’re having a phone call or Zoom with Ron, so you’re not super involved in that. At any point doing post, do you come back in? Do you take a look?

**Bill:** Yes.

**John:** Was there anything for you to do?

**Bill:** Yeah. This is entirely at Ron’s discretion. He’s a nice guy, and he’s also a smart guy. It was cut in London. He said would I please come in, see the first assembly, talk about it. We talked together. I came in and saw the shorter version, and we talked about that a lot. I wouldn’t say that I did anything tremendously significant, but I was certainly there watching it and talking about it with him.

**John:** Great.

**Bill:** I was incredibly grateful for that. A lot of directors are frightened of writers, because they know the writer knows more than them what’s supposed to be there. They don’t want the writer on set. They don’t want the writer in the cutting room. They didn’t want the writer getting too much credit. Ron is not like that.

**John:** That’s terrific. This movie came out theatrically limited but then also on streaming. Did you have a chance to see this with an audience?

**Bill:** Not really. As you know, MGM, who financed it, got bought by Amazon after we finished the movie. It didn’t get the screen life that we would’ve liked. I’m old-fashioned. I like cinemas. I like theaters. They did put on a… This was in London. There was a premier in LA, which I didn’t go to. I was obviously invited, but I chose not to make the journey. There was a good screening in London. We were in France. We got the train back for that evening, and the train was delayed three hours in the Channel Tunnel, to my fury, so I actually missed about half.

**John:** Oh, no.

**Bill:** We got into the theater. I haven’t seen it much with an audience. Now it’s seen as a streaming event, and people see it separately. I’ve got this odd feeling. I don’t really know how people have responded to it.

**John:** I watched it again. I watched it last night at home, streaming it. My instinct though is that there’s going to be some big cheers when the first kid is brought on the stretcher up through the pulley system. That was a really emotional moment for me is seeing that the kids are getting out but also that everyone is there pushing the sled out together. I feel like that’s the moment where you’re going to get some cheers in the audience. I’m frustrated that you didn’t get a chance to hear those cheers, because I feel like it’s going to be a great sound. Bill, can you talk to us about what’s next? Are there any things that you’re working on that we can discuss?

**Bill:** I’m always a little bit shy, for the simple reason that I never know they’re actually going to get made.

**John:** Same.

**Bill:** That’s the life we lead. I’m doing a cinema movie. It’s with a very good director right now. It seems to be going a bit slowly. I’m not quite sure what’s going on. I’m waiting for my next instructions on that. I mentioned I’m doing a TV series for Netflix, which is about the crypto scam. It was a podcast actually called The Missing Crypto Queen-

**John:** Great.

**Bill:** … about a Bulgarian woman who created a crypto coin. It’s a wonderful story.

**John:** I think we actually maybe discussed that on our podcast in terms of How Would This Be a Movie. I’m excited that you’re doing that, because she’s a really flamboyant character if I remember correctly.

**Bill:** Exactly. It’s wonderful. It’s all about why do people believe what they believe, which is central to our current experience everywhere, politics everywhere. I’m just doing the first two episodes of that. That doesn’t mean it’s guaranteed. I’m also doing a small British movie about a guy, which is a true story again. You see, these are all true stories. I don’t like adapting novels. I don’t do it, because somebody else has [inaudible 01:03:41] the characters and invented the story.

Real life is a complete mess, so it needs people like me to come in and turn it into craft, something out of that. That’s what I like doing. I’m doing a small movie about a person who goes mad. The fun of it is, it’s kind of implying that madness is a choice, which actually serves a purpose. He thinks he’s a secret agent saving the planet. He ends up being sent to hospital and given heavy drugs and so on. You realize that being a secret agent saving the planet beats his real life. You kind of get why a guy would do that. Essentially, it’s dealing with the fact that all of us are prone to picking up clues around us and creating a narrative of our life that enables us to feel good about ourselves.

**John:** Absolutely. You are the story you’re telling about yourself.

**Bill:** Yeah. I’m doing that. There’s a couple of other longer-term projects. Those are three that are actually on my desk right now.

**John:** That’s amazing. Bill, an absolute pleasure talking with you and meeting you here. Congratulations on the film. I’m really excited to see these next projects as well. A delight. Thank you so much.

**Bill:** It’s a great pleasure for me as well, talking to somebody who gets these things, a fellow. I love it. Thank you so much.

**John:** Thank you.

**Bill:** Bye-bye.

**John:** Have a great night. Bye.

**Bill:** Bye-bye.

**John:** Craig, we are back in this moment. It is time for our One Cool Things. I have two TV shows to recommend to you and to our listenership. First is Andor, which everyone says it’s by far the best Star Wars series. It’s just phenomenal. It’s just really, really good. Craig, I was thinking about you as I was watching it, because there was this scene, I think in the maybe second or third episode, where the Empire, or what will become the Empire, is having this board meeting, just planning meeting. It’s in this big white room. It’s just so smartly done. It’s everything you always talk about how you admire the Empire for its efficiency and for its organization. I thought of you. If I could find the clip snippet of it, I want to send it to you, because you will just love that when you get a chance to watch it.

**Craig:** Obviously, I always root for the Empire. I’m just so confused after all these movies. How do they keep losing? It just doesn’t make sense. Why is everyone so scared of them? All they do is lose.

**John:** I’ll say that the whole premise of Andor is basically how does the revolution start, how does the rebellion start. It’s really smartly done. It’s no surprise. It’s coming from Tony Gilroy, who’s a great writer and is running this show. Just so, so smart. Everyone tells you to watch Andor. I’m just the 19,000th person to tell you to watch Andor, because really, it’s worth it.

The other thing is Fleishman is in Trouble, which I don’t hear people talking as much about. So good. As I recognize the names going past, Susannah Grant, who is of course fantastic, but Taffy Brodesser-Akner wrote the book and she wrote almost all the episodes of the series. It’s so smartly done. The POV storytelling on it is really, really great. Fleishman is in Trouble, another great thing to watch. That is on Hulu in the United States.

**Craig:** Excellent. My One Cool Thing is an article. It is in Wired. I don’t know if you’re going to need a subscription or not. Maybe Wired does a couple of free articles a month. This one is called Welcome to Digital Nomadland by Susana Ferreira. It’s a really interesting story about this class of workers called digital nomads, who work entirely virtually, and so can work anywhere, but they’re alone. These are a lot of people who don’t have families, etc, so they’re stuck alone in their homes. They want to go places. They can go anywhere.

This Portuguese island basically on the southern coast of Madeira created what they call a digital nomad land. It’s basically like we built some homes and some work areas for you, communal work areas. You can come here, live here, and you’ll have a community, instead of being alone. Theoretically, this would also be great for the actual island itself and the people who live there, because it would help the economy. It doesn’t work exactly the way they were thinking, but it’s really interesting, because I never considered this is a new way of building a community. All of our legacy communities are built around decisions that were made god knows when, based on there’s a lake nearby or there’s a river or whatever.

**John:** Absolutely.

**Craig:** This is like, “Ah, it seems like a good spot to put a bunch of people with laptops,” so a new way of creating communities. Check out Welcome to Digital Nomadland by Susana Ferreira in Wired.

**John:** Fantastic. That is our show for this week and our show for this year. Scriptnotes is produced by Megana Rao.

**Craig:** Again.

**John:** It’s edited by Matthew Chilelli.

**Craig:** Still.

**John:** Our outro this week is by Michael Lane. If you have an outro, you can send us a link to ask@johnaugust.com. That’s also a place where you can send questions. You can find the show notes for this episode and all episodes at johnaugust.com. That’s also where you’ll find transcripts and sign up for our weeklyish newsletter called Inneresting, which has lots of links to things about writing. We have T-shirts and hoodies, and they’re great. You can find them at Cotton Bureau. You can sign up to become a Premium Member at scriptnotes.net, where you can get all the back-episodes and Bonus Segment. Reminder to use the promo code. What is the promo code, Craig?

**Craig:** Onion.

**John:** Promo code onion to save $10 on your annual subscription, but only through January 15th, so do that.

**Craig:** Onion. Onion. Onion.

**John:** Onion. Onion. Onion. Stick around after the credits, because we’ll be discussing our non-writing aspirations for 2023. Craig and Megana, thank you for a fun year.

**Megana:** Thank you.

**Craig:** Thanks, John.

[Bonus Segment]

**John:** Craig, I sprung this on you. We didn’t have time to prepare any sort of plans for 2023, but not work, because obviously you’re going to have a very busy work 2023. Maybe I’ll start with some of mine, and you can think of what some of yours are going to be for 2023. I’m excited to be DM’ing again. It looks like we’re going to finish up the campaign that you’ve been so generously hosting for the last three years.

**Craig:** It’s a long one.

**John:** It’s a long one.

**Megana:** Wow.

**John:** When you finish up, we’ve discussed in the group, I’m going to try to run a much, much shorter, not going to go three years, kind of campaign. I’m excited to get back into that and look at who our group is. We have a large group, but not everyone can come every time, so trying to plan for things that will work will if people are just gone, so their tokens aren’t just sitting there idly, that we can actually do things every week with the people that we have on hand.

**Craig:** Great.

**John:** That’s probably the thing I’m most excited about in 2023.

**Craig:** I’m excited about that. I can’t wait to just play again. I guess that’s not really an aspiration. It’s going to happen. It’s an inevitability.

**John:** It’s going to happen. We’re going to finish. We’re going to finish the Dungeon of the Mad Mage, and then we’ll do something new.

**Craig:** Yes, we will. When it comes to non-writing aspirations, I don’t really have specific ones, or at least none that are tied to a new year. I have an ongoing project, which is to catastrophize less, take deep breaths, put anxiety in its proper perspective, and remind myself… Am I allowed to curse in this Bonus Segment?

**John:** Sure.

**Craig:** Everything will be fucking okay. That’s great.

**John:** [crosstalk 01:11:27].

**Craig:** That’s what I’m working on. Megana, I feel like you and I are very similar in this regard.

**Megana:** Yeah, absolutely.

**Craig:** Tell me, what do you do, or first of all, is that part of your non-writing aspiration for 2023? If it is, how do you go about it?

**Megana:** I think it is. I am also trying to stretch more in 2023 because I’m getting older.

**Craig:** That’s nice. Yeah, you are.

**Megana:** I am. I think that getting myself to a place where it’s like, “Oh, I’m stressed out,” and moving my body in some way is always incredibly helpful. That is a new tactic I’m taking for 2023.

**Craig:** I like it, stretching.

**Megana:** Instead of just panicking alone in my room.

**Craig:** Right, and tightening up in a little stress ball.

**John:** Stretching also one of the things that you can do while you’re doing something else. You can stretch while you’re watching TV. Increasingly, I will just not sit on the couch. I will sit on the floor and try to stretch while watching Andor or Fleishman is in Trouble, because I can still fully enjoy the show, but I’m also hopefully getting my hamstrings a little less messed up.

**Megana:** I have a standing desk, but if we’re being honest, I don’t stand at it very often.

**Craig:** You mean your sitting desk? That’s your sitting desk, Megana.

**Megana:** Now it’s going to be my stretching desk. It’s going to be my stretching and less panic desk.

**Craig:** I like that.

**Megana:** Do you have a standing desk?

**Craig:** I do. Like you, it’s really… Look. Here’s the deal. I know what I can do. I know what I can’t do. I know what I might do. Part of everything is also just giving myself a break.

**Megana:** You deserve it.

**Craig:** I do a lot. You know what? I don’t want to use the standing desk. Screw it. I don’t want to.

**John:** If listeners are looking for things to help them think about their year and they want to try a book, a book that actually was genuinely useful for me was James Clear’s Atomic Habits, which really talks about how the best way to change your habits and get rid of some bad habits and start some good habits is just make them unavoidable. It’s literally like putting your running shoes by the door so you’re going to be tripping over them if you don’t do it. It’s making sure you’re setting yourself up for success. If people are looking for a book or something to read over the holidays, to make them think better about what they want to do in the new year, how to get that achieved, that’d be a good bet, Atomic Habits.

**Craig:** If your New Year’s resolutions or aspirations are to read less and sit more, I just want you to know I’m your patron saint.

**John:** We’re going to support that. Craig, a thing I’m going to try to not do in 2023 is recreate Twitter. I’m not going to try to, because obviously, Twitter is going to… It’s not dead, but it’s not going to be the same thing it was. If it’s around six months from now, six years from now, it’s still not going to be as useful to me as it used to be. I’m not going to try to find the new Twitter. I just don’t think that’s going to be a goal. I’m going to find other ways to encounter the ideas in people that I used to encounter and stumble across on Twitter. I’m not quite sure what that’s going to be. I can still miss the things that were great about it. I’m not going to try to look for the next version of it.

**Craig:** Which is totally fine. I think you probably won’t have to try too hard. I think that there are people right now salivating and rubbing their hands together, going, “We sense a vacuum.” That said, Twitter never really made money. I don’t know if anybody necessarily… They’re not going to want to recreate Twitter either, but they’re going to make something. Something’s coming. You remember the fantastic opening credit sequence for Silicon Valley?

**John:** Oh yeah. Great. The constantly churning, 3D, top-down view of all these companies building up and exploding.

**Craig:** Exactly. They would change it over the seasons to reflect other implosions and new risings. We don’t know what’s going to happen. We just know change is afoot. It just doesn’t stop. The churn doesn’t stop. Something new is going to come along that’s going to take over our lives soon enough.

**John:** What it has started doing more of as Twitter’s been declining is just going back to my RSS readers, the blogs I follow and stuff like that. That was actually really good technology. RSS is what’s actually powering podcasts like Scriptnotes to let new episodes come out there. People can use that for posts as well. I’m going to try to do a little bit more blogging on johnaugust.com. The thoughts that I used to try to cut down to 280 characters to fit on Twitter, I will expend a few minutes to make a longer blog post.

**Megana:** Nice.

**Craig:** Been a lot of that going on.

**John:** Craig, thank you for a very good 2022. I’m so excited to be doing more Scriptnotes with you in 2023.

**Craig:** Oh wait, we’re still doing this? Oh my god.

**Megana:** Wait, Craig, was that your answer for your resolution?

**John:** Catastrophize less?

**Megana:** Catastrophize less?

**Craig:** Yeah. What did you think it should be?

**Megana:** No, I think that that’s great. I also think that you deserve more vacation in 2023.

**Craig:** Aw, that’s very sweet. I don’t love vacations. I know I’m supposed to.

**John:** Maybe a different definition of vacation. It doesn’t have to be sitting on a beach someplace. It could just be like, Craig, for the next week you just get to play all of the video games.

**Craig:** I do love that.

**John:** I think we both wish a little more of that for you.

**Craig:** Thank you. You guys are very sweet. I wish you guys to have a wonderful and happy new year, no matter what it brings for us, which will be fascinating, no doubt.

**John:** It will be a fascinating year, I’m sure.

**Craig:** We will, as always, look back on this and go, “Aw, you guys didn’t know. You didn’t that the space weasels were coming.”

**John:** So naïve we were.

**Craig:** From the Planet Weasel. Yeah, they’re coming. We didn’t know. Until they do come, let’s have some fun.

**John:** Thanks, Craig. Thanks, Megana.

**Megana:** Thanks, John.

**Craig:** Thank you guys.

**John:** Bye.

**Craig:** Bye.

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