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Mistakes development executives make

Episode - 46

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July 17, 2012 Challenge, Film Industry, QandA, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

Craig and John skip Comic-Con so they can discuss annoying and unproductive habits of development executives, along with advice for working with screenwriters.

The back half of the podcast is devoted to the first-ever three page challenge, in which we critique listeners’ samples and offer suggestions. If you have a chance to **read the samples** before listening to the podcast — they’re in the links below — you’ll get more out of it, but we try to summarize things so that it’s useful even without the text.

Let us know what you thought of this experiment (on Twitter [@johnaugust](https://twitter.com/johnaugust) and [@clmazin](https://twitter.com/clmazin)) so we’ll know whether to do a round two. We received more than 200 entries for the challenge — more than enough, so please don’t send any more. If we do another pass, we’ll pull from what we have.

Our thanks to everyone who wrote in, and especially to Ajay, J. Nicholas and Bryan for letting us talk about their stuff online.

Also discussed this week: standing desks, music theory, laptop speakers and inflated podcast numbers.

LINKS:

* Anthro Cart [Adjusta desk](http://www.anthro.com/computer-furniture.aspx?desk=fit-adjusta)
* Three pages by [Ajay Bhai](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/ajay_bhai_3pages.pdf)
* Three pages by [J. Nicholas Smith](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/jn_smith_3pages.pdf)
* Three pages by [Bryan DeGuire](http://johnaugust.com/Assets/deguire_3pages.pdf)
* [Hooktheory](http://itunes.apple.com/us/book/hooktheory/id533715898?mt=11&ign-mpt=uo%3D4) for iBooks
* [Hooktheory](http://www.hooktheory.com/) site
* [Audio Essentials](http://www.srslabs.com/store/store/comersus_viewItem.asp?idProduct=51)
* INTRO: [Quincy, M.E.](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PXf4tV_aeDc) opening titles
* OUTRO: [Forrest Gump](http://itunes.apple.com/us/album/forrest-gump/id541953504?i=541953615) by Frank Ocean

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_46.m4a).

**UPDATE** 7-19-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-46-mistakes-development-executives-make-transcript).

Getting less for your 10%

July 12, 2012 Film Industry

Gavin Palone looks at why why so many more writers (and directors and actors) in Hollywood are paying the [extra money for a manager](http://www.vulture.com/2012/07/polone-why-everyone-pays-more-for-a-manager.html):

> The reason for this change can be found in the news reports written about talent agencies these days, most of which involve a cycle of mergers between agencies and the subsequent firings of suddenly superfluous agents.

The big agencies have gotten bigger — but also smaller, because every time they merge, they lay off a lot of agents. Now cut loose, these agents often become managers, performing many of the same functions for many of the same clients.

That helps the bottom line of the agencies (they still get their 10%), but it means screenwriters are paying out another big chunk of their income.

> As the owner of a restaurant, I would love to save money by firing the dishwasher and dumping all of the equipment necessary to keep plates and utensils clean; then the unemployed dishwashers could stand outside the restaurant and rent clean plates to customers for a separate fee. I could then still charge the same prices and increase my net profit, while the dishwashers would probably make more than the minimum wage they are getting now. Unfortunately, there is too much competition and customers would just go elsewhere for meals where the plates are provided for free.

> The talent agents are lucky in that they have rolled up so many of the agencies into two giants [CAA, WME] and two medium-size companies [UTA, ICM] that there isn’t real competition and they can get away with their machinations with little or no blowback.

It would be interesting to see the agent/client ratio of the agencies, and how it’s changed over time.

In the 15 years I’ve been working, technology has made some aspects of an agent’s job much faster and easier. Emails let you avoid phone tag. PDFs don’t need messengers. Information about jobs can be centralized.

But maintaining relationships with clients simply takes time. The more clients a single agent is trying to service, the less likely each individual client is going to feel satisfied. Thus, managers.

For the record, I’ve never had a manager, nor felt I’ve needed one. But I came into the industry at a different time. Last year, Justin Marks laid out his reasons why [most screenwriters should have managers](http://johnaugust.com/2011/get-a-manager), and I can’t argue with his logic, other than (pointlessly) wishing that things were more like they used to be.

Standing up for ticket-takers

July 9, 2012 Film Industry

Employees are suing AMC Theaters, arguing that they should be [allowed to sit down](http://www.hollywoodreporter.com/thr-esq/amc-theaters-ticket-takers-sue-345605?utm_source=feedburner&utm_medium=feed&utm_campaign=Feed%3A+thr%2Ffilm+%28The+Hollywood+Reporter+-+Movies%29):

> McInerney is representing Andrew Allen and all other AMC employees similarly situated, claiming they are being forced to endure long hours on their feet when taking money and checking tickets. The proposed class action alleges a violation of California Labor Code Section 1198 and Wage Order 7-2001, Section 14, which says that “all working employees shall be provided with suitable seats when the nature of the work reasonably permits the use of seats.”

Two things. First, my full love and support to theater employees, who perform all the customer service aspects of the motion picture business for low wages and little appreciation. Sure, some theater employees are terrible, but to the good ones: You’re doing the Lord’s work. Thank you.

Second, sitting is [pretty terrible for you](http://www.nytimes.com/2011/04/17/magazine/mag-17sitting-t.html?_r=3&src=me&ref=homepage), too. (And yes, I’m typing this at a standing desk.)

My hunch is that most Americans would be healthier working at a theater, with all its standing and activity, than at a conventional job behind a desk.

Amazon Studios and the free option

June 1, 2012 Film Industry, Follow Up

The new-and-improved Amazon Studios liked Chip Street’s screenplay Faeries enough that they wanted to feature it on their “consider list.”

But that good news [came with a catch](http://chipstreet.com/2012/06/01/amazon-studios-new-old-deal-for-screenplay-options/):

> To make it happen, all we need to do is click a button, and MAKE OUR SCRIPT A PUBLIC SUBMISSION – starting that 45 day option clock ticking.

> Now, we could choose to make the script public and displayed on the consider list, and set the collaboration feature to ‘closed’. So nobody can write new version for Amazon to own rights to. But remember, the ‘closed’ setting only applies to written versions. Filmmakers COULD still make video content based on our script. And Amazon would own the rights to those videos. FOREVER. And they can distribute those videos as they please – on YouTube, or on their subscription based VOD platform, and collect ad revenue from associated ad content. Forever. For free. Did we say free? Free. Did we say forever? Forever.

> What this amounts to is that while they didn’t want to pay for an option, they did want us to give them a free option for 45 days. And all that that implies. Exactly what we were trying to avoid by going with a private submission in the first place.

As Craig and I have discussed on the podcast, the new rules at Amazon Studios certainly seem like a step in the right direction. But if I were in Chip’s shoes, I’d have the same hesitation.

If you’re interested in the vagaries of the new Amazon Studios, [his post](http://chipstreet.com/2012/06/01/amazon-studios-new-old-deal-for-screenplay-options/) is a must-read, with lots of good links and insights.

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