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Adam Davis, year five

June 19, 2012 First Person, Follow Up, Los Angeles

Adam Davis wrote one of the original First Person posts for the site back in 2007, when he [first moved to Los Angeles](http://johnaugust.com/2007/starting-out-in-hollywood) from Des Moines. In 2009, we checked in with him again, and found him [working as PA](http://johnaugust.com/2009/adam-davis-year-two).

At a reader’s request, I asked Adam to tell us what he’s up to now.

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first personWhen I first moved out here to pursue the writing/directing dream, I was driving on the 10, a mile from my exit in Culver City and I kept looking for the Hollywood sign in the hills. I wanted to see that piece of iconography so badly, I risked taking my eyes off the road.

That’s when I rear-ended the car in front of me.

adam davisSix years later, I see the sign every day when I drive home taking Gower. I’ve learned not to stare. Since I last checked in with you good folks, I’ve seen some great gains in my day job and my writing. The day job is a bit more tangible to brag about to my parents because it’s tough to explain that holy crap my dialogue finally doesn’t suck!

So my days have been filled with working on promotions and licensing for the newly-minted [third-top-grossing film](http://boxofficemojo.com/alltime/world/) of all time. My set PA experience has paid off handsomely as I’ve helped produce two great partner spots, one featuring the littlest Earth’s Mightiest Heroes for Target, and the other featuring a massive film set rebuild for Red Baron. I’ve been creatively working on all the toys (Hulk Hands make their triumphant return!) and am most proud of the Hot Toys line that’s coming out.

I also worked on the line of kids and young adult books that came out with the movie, using my writing skills to great effect.

But enough of that detour. Highland gets backed up around Sunset anyway.

It was after a few failed short film and music video projects that I decided to focus entirely on writing and let the directing wait. It’s much cheaper and I felt I needed to get great at one thing before moving on to another trade. I subsequently entered my “content production” phase (still ongoing). I’ve banged out four features, three original TV pilots and one children’s book — some with my writing partner, others by myself — that are ready to hit the marketplace. We’ve also outlined a few features of various budgetary levels and are planning to pen a second episode of one of our series to hopefully make it easier to sell.

It’s been a consistent workflow: finish a draft, work on a new property’s outline, go back and do a second draft…some of these things happening simultaneously. That’s one of the benefits of a writing partner. For example, I’m doing the first draft of a new feature as my writing partner fixes and polishes the last draft of our other feature’s outline. When I’m done, he’ll take the second draft and I may start work on the first draft off the outline. Or he’ll take the first stab as I cook up a new idea. This is what we’ve been doing for the past three years.

And during all this writing, I’ve been hustling as much as I can. Talking to people about the projects, getting some reads, getting great notes, revising drafts as necessary.

I’ve had some “meetings,” but not like the “Come on into Screen Gems, here’s a parking validation” type — the more casual lunch or drinks ones. The ones where I don’t have to slightly-dress-up, but I still do. What’s important is whom these meetings are with: Not the people *of* power, but the people who *will have* power.

I remember John saying something along the lines of “the group of people who are your age will rise up together, and they’ll be the ones to help you.” His version of, “Be nice to the assistant, because they’ll be running the studio one day.” Completely true. I’ve seen many of my interns go on to production companies or lit agencies, and now I’m asking them to read my stuff in the hopes they can help me. Don’t be a dick, don’t burn bridges, and be grateful for people even reading your stuff.

But the one thing I’ve learned above all is to be patient. People can take a very long time to read. We all have lives, and they’re doing a favor. I’m not owed anything, and it’s been a hard climb back up the hill after deluding myself into believing I’d be directing a feature at 23.

I sometimes curse Robert Rodriguez’s [Rebel Without a Crew](http://www.amazon.com/dp/0452271878/?tag=johnaugustcom-20) for cooking up wild dreams that I thought would be a reality. But the book did me more good than bad: It showed me a work ethic that I still strive to reach and maintain.

I’ve learned that I’ll be just like all those other hard working people that struggled for 10 years to reach their dreams, or at least the beginnings of them. But those are now the stories I’m interested in. Not about the hotshot kid who really hasn’t had enough life experience, but the Eastwoods, the Scotts, the Abrams.

And in dark moments I do occasionally entertain the doubts that I’ll never sell a script or direct. But it doesn’t stop me from trying.

Because I need the writing. Three years of consistent content production has left me unable to go without it. I get cranky when I haven’t had my fix. Me typing this is a nice bump that will get me to that next scene tomorrow after work. I’ll keep writing what I want as more genre-mashing Pirate Gladiators vs. Sunkist Sodas are bought.

I know it seems stupid in this climate, but I still believe in good, original ideas. I need to hold onto some of that naïveté I had when I was staring off into the hills, looking for that beacon of hope that fuels all out-of-town newbies. But the plastic bumper of reality that is years spent working and learning is so much more rewarding, even if it’s painful.

I’ll let you know when the next collision happens.

Getting to page one

Episode - 41

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June 12, 2012 Follow Up, Screenwriting Software, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

On the 41st Scriptnotes, John and Craig discuss screenwriting software, knowing when to start, and the Game of Thrones finale. But before moving on to new business, they update us on two topics of podcasts past.

Last we heard about Disney and Amazon Studios, there was a [vacancy atop the former](http://johnaugust.com/2012/the-disney-dilemma), and the latter had [decided to become a WGA signatory](http://johnaugust.com/2012/amazons-new-deal-for-writers). Now, Disney has hired Alan Horn as chief, and Amazon has announced its first project — but with no mention of the writer.

After they weigh in on these new developments, John tells us about the pros and cons of writing his most recent script in Scrivener, which opens up into a larger discussion about where screenwriting software seems to be heading.

Craig and John then adress a common frustration of beginning screenwriters: How do you know when you’re ready to move from the planning phase onto page 1? Diving into a script too quickly is a recipe for second-act problems, but overplanning can be just as dangerous. Where’s the sweet spot? What must you know about your story before you start, and how much familiarity is overkill?

They then move onto a listener-requested discussion of the Game of Thrones season finale, plus this week’s two One Cool Things.

Rawson Marshall Thurber, enjoy this Google alert made specially for you, courtesy of episode 41 of Scriptnotes.

LINKS:

* [Scrivener](http://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener.php)
* [Fountain](http://fountain.io/) and [Highland](http://quoteunquoteapps.com/highland/)
* [Fade In](http://www.fadeinpro.com/)
* [Final Draft iPad Writer](http://www.finaldraft.com/products/mobile/writer/)
* [Bronson Watermarker](http://quoteunquoteapps.com/bronson/)
* [Stencyl](http://www.stencyl.com/)
* [Flight](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xnVNNR6CEOE) trailer
* [Craig’s Wordplay post](http://www.wordplayer.com/pros/pr14.Mazin.Craig.html) on building marketing hooks into your screenplay
* INTRO: [Silver Spoons](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71RyZuJHpj0) opening
* OUTRO: [Garden of Your Mind](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OFzXaFbxDcM&feature=youtu.be) by Mister Rogers (remix)

You can download the episode here: [AAC](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/scriptnotes_ep_41.m4a).

**UPDATE** 6-14-12: The transcript of this episode can be found [here](http://johnaugust.com/2012/scriptnotes-ep-41-getting-to-page-one-transcript).

Amazon Studios and the free option

June 1, 2012 Film Industry, Follow Up

The new-and-improved Amazon Studios liked Chip Street’s screenplay Faeries enough that they wanted to feature it on their “consider list.”

But that good news [came with a catch](http://chipstreet.com/2012/06/01/amazon-studios-new-old-deal-for-screenplay-options/):

> To make it happen, all we need to do is click a button, and MAKE OUR SCRIPT A PUBLIC SUBMISSION – starting that 45 day option clock ticking.

> Now, we could choose to make the script public and displayed on the consider list, and set the collaboration feature to ‘closed’. So nobody can write new version for Amazon to own rights to. But remember, the ‘closed’ setting only applies to written versions. Filmmakers COULD still make video content based on our script. And Amazon would own the rights to those videos. FOREVER. And they can distribute those videos as they please – on YouTube, or on their subscription based VOD platform, and collect ad revenue from associated ad content. Forever. For free. Did we say free? Free. Did we say forever? Forever.

> What this amounts to is that while they didn’t want to pay for an option, they did want us to give them a free option for 45 days. And all that that implies. Exactly what we were trying to avoid by going with a private submission in the first place.

As Craig and I have discussed on the podcast, the new rules at Amazon Studios certainly seem like a step in the right direction. But if I were in Chip’s shoes, I’d have the same hesitation.

If you’re interested in the vagaries of the new Amazon Studios, [his post](http://chipstreet.com/2012/06/01/amazon-studios-new-old-deal-for-screenplay-options/) is a must-read, with lots of good links and insights.

Highland updates

May 30, 2012 Apps, Follow Up

Since the launch of the [Highland public beta](http://johnaugust.com/2012/highland-for-all) last week, we’ve gotten great feedback. Thank you to our second-wave testers.

I’m particularly happy with how our report card system is working. By gathering the information in one place, we’ve been able to see some clear patterns.

Not everyone is using Lion.
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We built and tested Highland on Mac OS X Lion (10.7), but a lot of Mac users are still on Snow Leopard (10.6). They’re getting crashes and odd behavior. That’s not okay.

We have two choices:

1. Go back and figure out support for Snow Leopard, or
2. Draw the line at Lion and get ready for Mountain Lion (10.8).

There are a few unannounced features we have planned for Highland that make sticking with Lion very appealing, but we haven’t decided yet.

One thing we know for certain: since we’re planning on selling the app through the Mac App Store, 10.6 is the earliest OS we can support.

Honest question: Why aren’t people upgrading to Lion? Are you holding on to some piece of software that will otherwise break?

People actually use Celtx.
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Several users filed report cards noting that PDFs created by Celtx weren’t importing properly, with wordsrunningtogetherlikethis. We should be able to take care of this issue. I’m just noting it because I have no real sense what percentage of the screenwriting software market Celtx (or the other apps) actually have.

Windows users want theirs.
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Many screenwriters use Windows. Unfortunately, the work we’ve done for the Mac version doesn’t translate very well to the PC. I don’t think you’ll ever see a PC version of Highland.

[Fountain](http://fountain.io), however, is open-source and platform-agnostic. My hope is that we’ll see many screenwriting utilities for Windows, Linux and other operating systems.

Preview is working better than Export.
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Many users are finding that Highland’s Preview shows what they expect, but the .fdx or .pdf has issues. We’ll make that a focus on upcoming releases.

Good news is useful, too.
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We obviously need to hear when things go wrong, but it’s nice to know when things go right:

> Just about perfect. Not all the title page elements imported under the correct key identifier and centered text didn’t import as centered, but everything else was spot on.

Mixed news is also helpful:

> Looks great overall. Conversion from PDF is great. Unfortunately, a few of the “–Day” and “– Night”s got sent to the next line as action and not scene headings. A few parentheticals also stayed in dialog when it was after a few words and not directly after a character name.

It’s also reassuring when users seem to grok the underlying potential:

> I’m not sure exactly why I’m so excited about Highland, but I am. It most likely stems from the fact I dislike most screenwriting apps and have grown fond of writing in the Fountain format.

My hope is that Highland will help close the loop for screenwriters who want to work in Fountain, letting any text editor do just enough.

We hope to get new Highland betas out frequently. They won’t all be wonderful. Things will break as they get better. But with ongoing feedback, I think we’ll end up with something terrific.

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