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That’ll teach her

May 18, 2011 Genres

Tad Friend examines female characters in comedies and finds an [unsettling pattern](http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2011/04/11/110411fa_fact_friend):

> Funny women in movies must not only be gorgeous; they must fall down and then sob, knowing it’s all their fault.

Nerve has a super-cut to demonstrate:

Friend’s article — a lengthy piece on Anna Faris — looks at a lot of the issues surrounding female roles in comedy. It’s easy to point fingers at screenwriters (“Write better parts!”) or studios (“Make better movies!”), but the real obstacle is of course the audience, voting with dollars.

The more money female-driven comedies make, the more female-driven comedies will get made. In the short term, the success of Bridesmaids should make studios less gun-shy about spending money to produce and market these movies.

But will they be any good? I worry we’ll learn the wrong lessons and just make more comedies about women in wedding dresses.

Okay to use bold for scene headers?

May 16, 2011 Formatting, QandA

questionmarkSounds trivial, but I’ve been seeing a lot of scripts recently with sluglines (or scene headers) in bold formatting. Is this a trend? I kind of like it, but is it appropriate to use bold sluglines in a spec as a first-time writer?

— Shane

It’s simply a matter of personal preference. As long as you’re consistent through the script, either bold or normal weight is fine.

KYLE’S DAD

Half-done is half-assed, Kyle.

KYLE

So you want full ass, you’re saying.

KYLE’S DAD

I want less lip and more hustle. Now.

CUT TO:

EXT. HOUSE – DAY

Kyle drags the giant spider’s carcass from the garage to the curb. It’s too big to fit in the garbage can -- he couldn’t lift it anyway -- so he tucks the legs underneath the body.

or…

INT. BENNIGAN’S – NIGHT

Aspiring mixologist JIMMY WAKE (24) strains his latest creation into a chilled martini glass. The liquid has an unsettling yellow-green hue with streaks of blood. He garnishes it with a pickled crow’s foot.

Either is fine.

Animation scripts aren’t always short

May 13, 2011 Follow Up

Dan Gerson writes in with a follow-up on my post about [short scripts](http://johnaugust.com/2011/can-my-script-be-as-short-as-somewhere):

>You had a footnote about the length of feature animation screenplays. You described them as often shorter than live action screenplays, and obviously, that was your experience on Corpse Bride.

>Just wanted to offer a different perspective. Having worked on a whole bunch myself, for Pixar and other studios, I’ve found that more often than not, page counts are a little higher than live action. Often, it’s because of the level of description.

Dan offers some examples:

Toy Story – 80 minute running time, 143 page script
Finding Nemo – 100 minute running time, 141 page script
Incredibles – 115 minute running time, 125 page script
Toy Story 2 – 92 minute running time, 117 page script

> I’ve chosen these at random. It could be that this isn’t a great sampling. Whatever the case, I thought my experience might help those writers out there who are concerned their feature animation scripts are running long.

Self-taught and self-doubting

May 12, 2011 First Person

Earl Newton worked as a freelance (and self-taught) writer, director and editor for almost ten years up and down the East Coast before making the move to Los Angeles. He lives in constant fear that a film school student will one day explain that “F-stop” doesn’t really mean what he thinks it means.

His username on Twitter is [@strangerthings](http://twitter.com/strangerthings).

——-

first personLast week, I spent my thirtieth birthday as a director on a professional set in Los Angeles.  Any concerns I had over turning thirty die off as I type that sentence.

Yet for the first 29 years of my life, I did literally everything I could to avoid LA and a career as a professional filmmaker.  And I’m here to tell you why that hesitation — that waiting, born of reluctance — was the best thing that could have happened to me.

Young, dumb, and full of stay
—

earl newtonBy the time I entered college in my tiny Florida town, I’d already decided I wouldn’t be moving to Los Angeles.  While my friends shared fantasies of $2000 two-bedroom apartments and lives made of ramen noodles, I’d been infected by the Rodriguez disease, and I felt a furious, indignant independence.  I wanted to make my own path, outside of Los Angeles.

Also, it seemed expensive, and I knew I still had a lot to learn.  Having been home-schooled, I was already comfortable with self-education, and struggling to survive in a major city just to learn the basics seemed like going to Harvard to take English 101.

Also, I’d been rejected from film school three times and I was terrified I’d move to Los Angeles and fail immediately.

Such is youth.

I had a bit of money to invest in my education, partially from an inheritance and partially from a loan co-signed by my parents.  With it, I bought my first camera (a Sony DCR-TRV 510) and a Dell computer for editing (MotoDV Firewire card sold separately).  For just about $3,100, I had the equivalent filmmaking power of an iPhone.

When you are poor and poorly connected, you exploit the only teaching resources you have available: books and practical experience. There are three books I recommend to any filmmaker: [Backwards and Forwards](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0809311100/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&tag=johnaugustcom-20&linkCode=as2&camp=217145&creative=399349&creativeASIN=0809311100) by David Ball, [On Directing Film](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0140127224/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&tag=johnaugustcom-20&linkCode=as2&camp=217145&creative=399349&creativeASIN=0140127224) by David Mamet, and [In the Blink of an Eye](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1879505622/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&tag=johnaugustcom-20&linkCode=as2&camp=217145&creative=399349&creativeASIN=1879505622) by Walter Murch.  I haven’t found any that speak as concisely on storytelling as those.  They are all quite thin as well, which led me to theorize that the size of the film book is inversely proportionate to its usefulness.

So I read and shot everything I could afford.  Much of what I shot was useless.  I could feel something worthwhile buried in it, but it still felt awkward, and I couldn’t put my finger on why.  Watching hours of this kind of footage made me grateful I didn’t have to undergo these growing pains while juggling P.A. jobs.  Looking back at these first works, I’m still grateful.

Being without a real mentor, I went looking for one in cinema history, and I found him, in the thick of Communist Russia: Sergei Eisenstein (creator of “Battleship Potemkin”).  

Long before Robert Rodriguez, here was the original writer/director/editor.  Here was a man, similar to myself, far from Hollywood, figuring out movies without a film school (in his case, none existed yet).  With no teachers available, he reached out to other disciplines and looked for ways to apply them to cinema.  As an example: one story suggests he developed his concepts of film montage after he learned how Japanese kanji expresses meaning.  (In kanji, two unrelated symbols are juxtaposed to create a third idea.  The symbol for “dog” combines with the symbol for “mouth” to represent “bark,” etc)

Taking a page from Eisenstein’s book, I studied as many different crafts as drew my interest.  At my local community college (and later, at a nearby university) I took classes in acting, improv, theatre directing, and scene design.  I took computer science and sign language.  Anything and everything seemed to hold some insight into movie storytelling.  I also took care to study the roles of other departments to greater or lesser degree: sound recording, visual effects, photography, etc.

To directors: starting out, you’re going be encouraged to familiarize yourself with the jobs of other departments.  I highly and humbly recommend this. 

You’ll be told it’s because it makes communicating your vision easier, and that’s true.  But there are two more important reasons.  First, if you know how to be a sound man, you know how to make the sound man’s job easier. This has the potential to make you very popular with sound men (or editors, or cinematographers, etc), something you’ll need when your only currency is good will.  Second, when you begin producing your own work, this renaissance approach to filmmaking will allow you to start before anyone else signs on.  Knowing you can finish in a pinch, if you have to, will lend you a confident relentlessness that makes others want to get involved.

This went on for a number of years.  I took regular jobs, but could never stay settled for long.  Two years was my maximum.  [Read more…] about Self-taught and self-doubting

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