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H.P. Lovecraft’s Commonplace Book

July 5, 2011 Genres, Writing Process

Bruce Sterling publishes a list of Lovecraft’s [undeveloped story ideas](http://www.wired.com/beyond_the_beyond/2011/07/h-p-lovecrafts-commonplace-book/):

> **96** Unknown fires seen across the hills at night.

> **97** Blind fear of a certain woodland hollow where streams writhe among crooked roots, and where on a buried altar terrible sacrifices have occur’d — Phosphorescence of dead trees. Ground bubbles.

> **98** Hideous old house on steep city hillside—Bowen St.—beckons in the night—black windows—horror unnam’d—cold touch and voice—the welcome of the dead.

Sterling doesn’t discuss the origin of the list, but all 221 entries seem distinctly Lovecraftian. Most of them don’t suggest plots per se, but rather focus on strange words or images. That makes sense for Lovecraft, who was never known for his characters, but rather his mood-making.

There’s not a single line of dialogue to be found. If future historians dug through my notebooks, that’s mostly what they’d find: bits of speech with very little context. Some of those lines are particular to what I’m writing at the moment, but many float untethered to any specific project.

I find myself scribbling down random ideas less now than I used to. Some of that is because of Evernote, which I use as my all-purpose in-box. My [Twitter feed](http://twitter.com/johnaugust) also soaks up a lot of these thoughts, at least the ones that can be rewritten to fit in 140 characters.

Get better flashlights

June 29, 2011 Genres

The Lazy Self-Indulgent Book Reviewer has a few words for [futuristic television characters](http://lazybookreviews.tumblr.com/post/6993696856/get-better-flashlights-futuristic-television):

> Why are, like, graduates of Starfleet Academy lugging around physical cylinders that emit light from one end? Why don’t they all have chip implants in their palms that glow when activated?

> I mean, my iPhone has a better flashlight app than I’ve seen used by an actual Time Lord, and the iPhone’s flashlight app sucks.

Glowing palms are an ergonomic disaster. Try it.

But her point is well-taken. Characters generally want to light an area, not simply a narrow cone. The wizards in the Potterverse seem to have a good solution: use your wand like a torch, or fling the sphere of light where you want to see. (But they’re magic, yo. So they could also probably cast a spell to make it less dark, or give themselves ultravision.)

For sci-fi, a good choice would be hovering drones that light the area. As a bonus, keeping the light physically separated from the characters makes them less of a target.

And the best iPhone flashlight app is my friend Troy’s [InfinitLight](http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/infinitlight/id399277601?mt=8).

Outlines aren’t essential

June 10, 2011 QandA, Writing Process

questionmarkI looked at your outline for Big Fish and noticed you had it broken up into acts and what happens in each act. How exactly did you know what was suppose to happen? How do you start to figure it out?

For me, I might know some of the events pretty clearly but I might not know what happens in-between. Or I might know the middle and end, but not the beginning. I find it hard to break down my story the way you do.

Sometimes when I have a scene in my head, I’ll just start writing particular scenes and then go back to figure out more of an outline. Is that wrong?

— Ian Topple
Syosset, NY

answer iconIt’s not wrong. The correct way to write your screenplay is whatever gets it written.

My [original one-page outline](http://johnaugust.com/library) for Big Fish is really an anomaly. I rarely go into that level of detail.

Most scripts begin more the way you describe, with a few key moments and characters that gradually chain themselves together. I’ll always have a sense of where the story is going — I can write a third-act scene before I’ve written the end of the first act — but I won’t necessarily know how I’m going to get there.

The [sequence outline](http://johnaugust.com/library) in the Library came after the first draft, and charted what was actually happening in the script I wrote. It was a way of seeing how the movie was dividing its time between the real world and Edward Bloom’s stories.

Don’t beat yourself up over outlines. Save the self-flagellation for the scenework.

FDX Reader 1.0.2

June 7, 2011 FDX Reader

fdx reader iconApple just approved an update for [FDX Reader](http://fdxreader.com). If you’ve installed the app, it should show up in your App Store updates soon.

Version 1.0.2 addresses two issues:

* A4-sized paper.
* Final Draft’s “Dual Dialogue” option.

Our trouble handling A4 paper reveals our provincialism; all of our beta testers were North American. A4 paper is common everywhere else in the world, and should be celebrated by geeks for its [mathematical purity](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paper_size).

For this build, we focused on making sure A4 paper wouldn’t cause the formatting to go completely bonkers. We’re not yet paginating for the extra lines on A4, so page counts will be off for longer scripts.

(My A4 story: While in London prepping for Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, I had a minor battle with the Warner Bros. script department in Burbank. They reformatted our A4 script to 8.5×11, and claimed it was 10 pages too long. Ultimately, we threw their script in the trash — which we called the bin, being British and all.)

Final Draft’s dual dialogue option displays two characters’ dialogue side-by-side. While it’s often and easily abused, it is useful in the right situations.

Because we allow the user to increase the font size, trying to keep the dialogue side-by-side proved ungainly. So we’re unwrapping it, displaying the right-side character after the left-side character.

We have some ideas for indicating this dialogue is simultaneous, but your suggestions are of course invited.

Each time we update the app, our user reviews disappear from the [main screen](http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/fdx-reader/id437362569?mt=8). If you’ve left a comment about a previous version and want to leave another, by all means do. They help users see how the app is evolving.

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