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  • Sidecast: NYC Picketing
    Episode – SC31 | Sep 8, 2023
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    Live from New York, John talks with writers and actors about the differences between LA and NYC pickets, anxiety, and how joy can be a form of protest. Featuring Christopher Kyle and Wilson Cruz. Big thanks to everyone who talked with us! Links: * [East & NY Strike Resources](https://www.wgaeast.org/negotiations/mba-2023/) * [Writers Guild of America East](https://www.wgaeast.org/) […]

  • Sidecast: Disability and Visibility on the Picket Line
    Episode – SC30 | Sep 5, 2023
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    Cory Reeder interviews writers and performers at the joint WGA/SAG-AFTRA disability picket at Disney. Big thanks to Cory and everyone he spoke with! Links: * [WGAw Disabled Writers Committee](https://www.wga.org/members/membership-information/committees/disabled-writers-committee) * [SAG-AFTRA Diversity Committees](https://www.sagaftra.org/get-involved/diversity-committees) * [SAG-AFTRA Empowering Performers with Disabilities on Set](https://www.sagaftra.org/empowering-performers-disabilities-set) * [Summary of Negotiations: WGA proposals and AMPTP responses](https://www.wgacontract2023.org/uploadedfiles/members/member_info/contract-2023/wga_proposals.pdf) * [2023 WGA Strike Rules](https://www.wgacontract2023.org/strike/strike-rules) […]

  • Basic Instincts
    Episode – 611 | Sep 5, 2023
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    John and Craig investigate our primal instincts and how they motivate our characters. Often referred to as the four F’s, these are the impulses hardwired into every animal in order to survive. But how do these base impulses guide a character’s behavior? And how can they be harnessed to make sure you don’t overcomplicate your […]

  • Sidecast: Picket Line Q & A
    Episode – SC29 | Aug 30, 2023
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    John answers the most common questions he hears out on the picket line, including the nervous, “Wait, why are you here? Is something wrong?” Links: * [wgacontract2023.org](https://www.wgacontract2023.org/) * [It’s All Relative](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D0RgdQDZlrg) on YouTube * [Summary of Negotiations: WGA proposals and AMPTP responses](https://www.wgacontract2023.org/uploadedfiles/members/member_info/contract-2023/wga_proposals.pdf) * [2023 WGA Strike Rules](https://www.wgacontract2023.org/strike/strike-rules) * [Strike Rules FAQ](https://www.wgacontract2023.org/strike/strike-rules-faq) * [Picket Schedules and […]

  • The Premise
    Episode – 610 | Aug 29, 2023
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    John and Craig examine the foundation of every story: the premise. What is your story *really* about? What questions is it trying to answer? How does that differ from your logline? And what should writers do to make sure those things match up? We also follow up on AI copyright, physical media, Esperanto and lingua […]

  • Sidecast: FTC Looks at Mergers
    Episode – SC28 | Aug 22, 2023
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    John and Drew inspect the Federal Trade Commission’s proposed merger guidelines and why they’re important for everybody – not just writers – to read and comment on. Links: * [FTC and DOJ Seek Comment on Draft Merger Guidelines](https://www.ftc.gov/news-events/news/press-releases/2023/07/ftc-doj-seek-comment-draft-merger-guidelines) by the Federal Trade Commission * [Publicly Comment on the FTC Draft Merger Guidelines](https://www.regulations.gov/commenton/FTC-2023-0043-0001) * [WGA Template […]

  • Dialogue and Character Voice
    Episode – 609 | Aug 22, 2023
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    John and Craig look at how well-written dialogue is used to give characters a unique voice. Using clips from previous episodes they present a history of dialogue and its evolution, how it informs your actors, and how communicating an idea sometimes comes down to the smallest words our characters say. How can writers use dialogue […]

  • Sidecast: Elections
    Episode – SC27 | Aug 16, 2023
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    With union elections on the horizon, John and Drew present an overview of the voting process and governing structures of the WGA, DGA and SAG-AFTRA. Links: * [SAG-AFTRA 2023 Elections and Voter Guides](https://www.sagaftra.org/about/governance/2023-sag-aftra-elections) * [SAG-AFTRA Governance](https://www.sagaftra.org/about/governance/) * [DGA Leadership](https://www.dga.org/The-Guild/Leaders.aspx?Filter=Board%20of%20Directors) * [WGAw 2023 Elections](https://elections.wga.org/) * [WGAe 2023 Elections](https://www.wgaeast.org/council-elections/2023-election/) * Find more about the 2023 WGA negotiations […]

  • Scriptnotes LIVE! at Dynasty Typewriter in LA
    Episode – 608 | Aug 15, 2023
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    John and Craig welcome guests Quinta Brunson, Rachel Bloom and Natasha Lyonne to join them for a live benefit for Hollywood HEART. Since they cannot discuss the shows they’re currently working on (strike rules!) they instead reflect on the surprising paths of their careers, how acting has influenced them as writers and directors, and how […]

  • Sidecast: 100 Days
    Episode – SC26 | Aug 10, 2023
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    On the 100th day of striking against the AMPTP, John heads to the picket line to speak with writers about what they’ve learned, how they’re feeling, and what has changed. Thanks to everyone who talked to us! Links: * [2023 WGA Writer’s Strike Gallery](https://jwhendricks.pixieset.com/) by [J. W. Hendricks](https://jwhendricks.me/) * [Summary of Negotiations: WGA proposals and […]

  • In the Beginning Was the Word
    Episode – 607 | Aug 8, 2023
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    John and Craig ponder the nature of words and what gives them meaning. Using new information on how large language models function, they look at the dizzying amount of connections words can create with other words, between humans, and their profound effect on the nature of consciousness. We promise we’re not high. We also follow […]

  • Sidecast: AMPTP Asks for a Meeting
    Episode – SC25 | Aug 2, 2023
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    The AMPTP has reached out to set a meeting with the WGA. What does this mean? How should we feel? And can John find a metaphor for it? Links: * [WGA Announcements: Discussion with AMPTP about Negotiations](https://www.wgacontract2023.org/announcements/discussion-with-amptp-about-negotiations) * [Scriptnotes LIVE! At Dynasty Typewriter](https://www.eventbrite.com/e/scriptnotes-live-tickets-674019238687) * [Writing Is Our Home](https://www.wgacontract2023.org/videos/writing-is-our-home) by WGA Negotiating Committee Co-Chair Chris Keyser […]

  • How to Write a Movie (Encore)
    Episode – 403 | Aug 1, 2023
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    Craig hosts a solo episode presenting his general theory on screenwriting. He covers the central dramatic argument, the ‘why’ behind plot points, and of course, umbrage on common script diagrams. Good luck, and go torture your heroes! In our bonus segment for premium members, John Gatins (Flight, Real Steel) tells us about his history with […]

  • Sidecast: Risk and Reward
    Episode – SC24 | Jul 26, 2023
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    John has opinions on the AMPTP’s new assertion that the studios are bearing all the risk when it comes to making a movie or a series, and therefore should be receiving all the reward. Links: * [AMPTP response to SAG-AFTRA](https://deadline.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/07/AMPTPSAG-AFTRA-Chart.pdf) * [‘Idiots’: Wall Street Analysts Unload on Hollywood](https://theankler.com/p/idiots-wall-street-analysts-unload?utm_source=substack&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share) by Claire Atkinson for The Ankler * […]

  • Character and Story Fit
    Episode – 606 | Jul 25, 2023
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    John welcomes back Pamela Ribon (My Year of Dicks, Moana) to talk about how to fit the right characters to your story. We know story comes from characters, but often an idea starts with a world, so how do writers find the right characters to build their story around? We also talk about writing for […]

  • Sidecast: Different Guilds, Different Needs
    Episode – SC23 | Jul 18, 2023
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    John and Drew take a look at SAG-AFTRA’s summary of negotiations to see what was asked for, what was offered, and what writers need to know. They also share insights on SAG-AFTRA’s new captain system. Links: * [SAG-AFTRA Summary of Negotiations](https://www.sagaftra.org/files/sa_documents/SAG-AFTRA_Negotiations_Status_7_13_23.pdf) * [SAG-AFTRA Strike Information Portal](https://www.sagaftrastrike.org/) * [kate bond’s thread](https://twitter.com/LadyKateBond/status/1680681140087304192) on Twitter * [Summary of […]

  • Medicine and Mayhem
    Episode – 605 | Jul 18, 2023
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    John and Craig look at four tales of science, medicine and mayhem and ask, how would this be a movie? Stories include a catatonic woman who woke up after 20 years, a white supremacist transformed by MDMA, a drugged crypto lawyer, and an in-depth account of alien biology. But first we have a very special […]

  • Sidecast: The Double Strike, Day One
    Episode – SC22 | Jul 14, 2023
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    On the first day of the the SAG-AFTRA strike, actors and writers on the picket lines tell us why this strike is so important to them and what advice they have for first-time picketers. Featuring Jim Rash and SAG-AFTRA negotiating committee members Nicole Cyrille and Joseph Melendez. Thanks to everyone who talked to us! Links: […]

  • Sidecast: SAG-AFTRA on Strike
    Episode – SC21 | Jul 13, 2023
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    SAG-AFTRA, the union that represents all the film and television actors in the US, has announced that their members are going on strike. John and Drew look at what that means, what to expect, and how it will impact the ongoing writers strike. Links: * [SAG-AFTRA Strike Notice to Members](https://www.sagaftra.org/files/sa_documents/Strike%20Notice%20to%20Members.pdf) * [A Message from the […]

  • Advice for a New Staff Writer (Encore)
    Episode – 368 | Jul 11, 2023
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    John welcomes Alison McDonald (Russian Doll, #BlackAF) and Ryan Knighton (In the Dark, Billions) to reveal the fundamentals and unspoken rules of working in a TV writers room. How did they get the job? How much should new writers talk? What should you wear? How much money do you make? And what’s for lunch? Our […]

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