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Realistic but Distracting

Episode - 626

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January 16, 2024 Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig investigate those details that are accurate and authentic, but can pull viewers out of the story. They look for ways to balance what is realistic with what is believable, and how to get rid of distractions and keep your audience focused on what matters.

We also discuss popular names, follow up on Icelandic pronunciations and the Mazinga toy, and answer listener questions on period details, defining biopics, writing during production, and whether or not to read the script before watching the movie.

In our bonus segment for premium members, John and Craig swallow their pride and ask, how can you tell when someone is just being nice?

Links:

* [First baby of the new year arrives at Dublin’s Rotunda Hospital](https://www.rte.ie/news/ireland/2024/0101/1424306-new-year-baby/)
* [Mazinger Z](https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0169473/)
* [Regicide](https://www.regicidegame.com/)
* [The Last of Us Comes in First at Saturday Creative Arts Emmys](https://www.emmys.com/news/awards-news/creative-arts-news-240106)
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* Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt and edited by [Matthew Chilelli](https://twitter.com/machelli).

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You can download the episode [here](http://traffic.libsyn.com/scriptnotes/626standardV2.mp3).

**UPDATE 2-5-24:** The transcript for this episode can be found [here](https://johnaugust.com/2024/scriptnotes-episode-626-realistic-but-distracting-transcript).

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