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Writing for Hollywood without living there

February 25, 2011 First Person, Los Angeles

I met Bradley Jackson at the Austin Film Festival, where he handed me his short film. It’s nicely made, and serves as a great calling card. I’m happy he’s finding success, and unsurprised.

Bradley volunteered to write up a post about his experiences trying to get a film career started while living outside Los Angeles. As with earlier First Person posts by [Adam Davis](http://johnaugust.com/archives/2007/starting-out-in-hollywood), [Jerome Schwartz](http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/jerome-schwartz-first-person) and [George Sloan](http://johnaugust.com/archives/2010/moving-to-hollywoo), I think most readers will find a lot of practical advice in it. Bradley is indefatigable. That plus talent tends to lead towards success.

You should know that I disagree with one of his central premises: *LA is for suckers.*

He doesn’t quite say that, of course, but there’s a distinct tone of having figured out the secret solution for having cake while eating it.

Yet that attitude and hustle is part of the reason I think Bradley will make it. So I didn’t ask him to tone it down.

————

first personMy name is Bradley Jackson and I’m a 26-year-old writer/director. On Twitter, I’m [@BradleyJackson](http://twitter.com/BradleyJackson).

bradley jacksonLike many of you who frequent this site I aspire to write and hopefully direct great films. Also like many of you, I don’t live–nor do I have the desire to live–in Los Angeles or in California. I currently reside in the great state of Texas and more specifically the even greater city of Austin.

Austin is an amazing place. I have great friends, pay cheap rent and have gotten to work on and make some quality films with amazingly creative people. Plus, my entire family lives in Texas. Moving to LA would seriously damage the good thing I’ve got going here.

However, I’m not an idiot. I know that the beating heart of the film industry resides on the west coast. So I’ve made it a point to visit as often as possible. I recently got back from a very productive two week stint in LA and I’m here to report to you fine readers the pros and cons of being a writer/director who doesn’t live in Hollywood-but wants to work for them.

Know who you are
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I don’t have an agent or a manager. I just optioned my first feature script (a high school comedy) to a company out in LA. I also recently won a 110K grand prize in a big film festival for a short film I wrote and directed last year called [The Man Who Never Cried](http://www.themanwhonevercried.com/watch).

I’m not telling you these things to be cocky, but rather to be honest. These are simple facts that people in the film industry will want to know if they’re going to set aside time in their busy schedule to meet with you. Without a letter of rec from Spielberg, very few producers, agents or managers will want to meet with you unless they’re impressed by something they’ve seen or read from you. If you’re a newbie writer with only a few loglines under your belt it’ll be much harder to get meetings than someone who’s got several (respectable) IMDB credits to your name. But that doesn’t mean you shouldn’t still try!

Write your filmography in a four-sentence email
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This is helpful because you’re probably going to be writing a lot of emails. If you’re emailing to try and set up a general meeting it really helps type a short, succinct (five sentences or less) email listing who you are and what you’ve done. Also, if you have a mutual connection it helps to list that. Here’s an example:

Dear Mr. Fancy Pants,

My name is Reginald McFutureOscarWinner and I’m a good friend of Timothy AwesomeFace who I believe line produced your last three films. I’m a screenwriter visiting LA for the next two weeks, and I’d love to find out a time to meet up with you to discuss potential projects. I recently wrote and directed a 10-minute short film that was accepted to SXSW and Palm Springs (include online link here if you have it), and I have a few screenplays and treatments that I feel would line up nicely with your production company. Please let me know if you’d like to meet up in the next two weeks. I’m also happy to send along the scripts and treatments if you’re interested in reading.

Best,

Reggie

Don’t be offended
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These people get a gazillion emails like this a week so don’t be offended if they don’t write back immediately or at all. Make a concerted effort to follow up if you don’t hear a response (wait two to three days) but if they don’t write back after the second email it’s probably because they’re too busy or just not interested in you (yet).

The important thing is you send out a ton of these emails because the likelihood of everyone agreeing to meet with you tiny. This leads me to my next point…

Make a list of your connections
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If you’re going to try to make your LA trip successful then you’ll want to mine every single connection you have. Depending on how green you are the in business don’t be afraid to take every single meeting or opportunity thrown your way.

Make a list of all your old college friends who are now living out there. Did you make a random friend at a film festival two years ago? Email them! You never know what it will lead to. Even if they don’t work in the industry, send them a friendly email saying you’re making the trip and would love to meet up for coffee (and you’re buying). You’d be surprised at what connections even the most random people have.

And if you’re a generally friendly human being with a decent amount of talent most people are willing to at least help you try and set up meetings.

You’re a salesman not a writer this week
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Another cost of living away from LA is that when you do visit, it’s absolutely imperative to take advantage of every moment you’re there. This means writing six hours in a quiet coffee shop is not in the cards for you this week.

If you can, make sure your LA trip coincides with a time when you’ve finished a script or are between projects. That doesn’t mean you can’t have story meetings. In my ten day Hollywood trip I met with a director I’m writing a script with. We met about five times for a few hours at a time to work on a treatment. He lives in LA and I don’t so I figured it was worth it to get some good face time. It’s all about taking advantage of things you can’t get back home.

Not everything is a meeting. But it kind of is. Don’t be afraid of grabbing an after work drink with someone. Just because it’s not during business hours or at their office doesn’t mean that they don’t want to hear about you and your scripts. If a producer asks you to meet him at 8:00PM for a drink, that’s a good thing – just make sure they don’t get you drunk and try and make you sign something.

Have your pitches ready
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But don’t expect them all to ask for a pitch. When you pitch make sure you keep it short and brief and always offer to email them the script or treatment when you get home. DO NOT bring in a hard copy of your script (unless they ask for it ahead of time.) But DO BRING a DVD of your film if you have one. And bring more than one copy because it’s likely they can pass a copy along to another person in the office or to another office nearby.

Don’t just talk about yourself
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You’re there to sell yourself, but always ask people about their projects. Not only is it just good conversational practice, but also getting them to talk about themselves could lead to an interesting connection or opportunity.

The only reason I optioned my screenplay was because last time I was in LA I had a meeting with a junior exec and asked her “What kind of projects are your company looking for?” She immediately responded: “Comedies in the 7 to 15 million dollar range.” I had just finished a lower budget comedy so I told her I’d send it to her. Six months later I had my first ever option check in my hand.

Meetings should lead to other meetings
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One of my first meetings on this trip was with a rather BIG SHOT producer… I only had 30 minutes because he was preparing a shoot for a huge pilot for ABC. However, at the very end of the meeting I asked him “Who’s one person in Hollywood that I need to meet; and they need to meet me?” He looked at me skeptically for a moment. I thought he was about to blow me off, but he then named another big time production company (that I’d admired for many years) and told his assistant to give me all their email addresses. I had a meeting with that company two days later. To me it proves that if you make a good impression on people they’re at least happy to make a connection for you.

Smaller points of advice
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**Assistants and interns will be executives one day.** Don’t be afraid of taking meetings with an assistant or an intern. They’ll give you more time and they’ll probably be running the company in five years.

**Dress for LA.** If you’re a writer you don’t have to get dressed up for these meetings. However, it does get cold at night and you probably won’t go home all day so have a sweater or jacket in your car.

**Don’t take a day off.** Saturday and Sunday are workdays when you’re visiting LA. And it’s most likely someone will schedule a meeting for during normal business hours and then ask you to push to the weekend. These days are also good to set up more informal meetings with old friends and non-industry folks.

**Have your phone/email with you at all times.** Meetings change constantly so having handy access to your email is a necessity. You also might get lost a lot so a good smart phone or GPS can save your life.

**Have a car.** If people do end up wanting to meet you they’ll want you to come to them. And you’ll likely have at least two or three meetings a day all on different sides of town.

**You will be late.** LA traffic makes everyone late. If you’re gonna be more than ten minutes late, try and call or email your contact to let them know. Also keep in mind that just because your next meeting is 10 minutes away doesn’t mean you should allow yourself 10 minutes to get there. It always takes at least 5 minutes to find parking. Add another five minutes based on the fact that you’re not from LA and you probably don’t have a clue where this person’s office is. If the meeting is on a studio lot add another five minutes because those places are a maze that feel like Christopher Nolan designed them on a bender.

**Have cash and quarters on you at all times.** Parking sucks in LA so you might have to valet or pay a buck fifty in change to park on the street. Try and at least have 20 bucks in cash on you and two bucks in change on you (or in your car) at all times.

**Follow up twice.** For each person you meet, make sure to follow up with them when you get home at the end of the day (or first thing in the morning next day) and follow up with them when you get back home. This keeps you on their radar. And if you do end up sending them a script, film or treatment make sure to follow up with them every couple of weeks to see if they’ve read it.

**Follow the companies and people you met with.** Both on Twitter and in the news. If they make the trades for a film or a script then send them a congratulatory email. It may seem small, but small things can pay off big.

**Assess.** Was this your second or third LA trip? Compare and contrast this most recent trip with your past ones. Was this one better or worse? Were meeting easier to come by or harder? Based on this, figure out when the best time would be to return.

So what was my final takeaway from this trip? If you’re a writer you DO NOT HAVE TO LIVE IN LA.

In my aforementioned meeting with the Big Shot Producer I asked him if I should move to Hollywood. He said the following: “I’ve worked with writers in Australia, Detroit and Minnesota. You live in Texas -– that’s cool. And plus, you’re only a three hour plane ride away. So write where you want to because LA will always be here.”

At the end of the day I realized that, while I really do enjoy Los Angeles; my heart and soul reside in Austin. I feel creative and inspired while I’m here. I’m sure if I moved to LA my career might forge ahead a little faster; however, the joy of living where I do far outweighs the material gain I might glean from living in Hollywood.

I love Hollywood, but I can work for ‘em without living with ‘em.

——-

brad

John says:

As counterpoint, I know a hundred screenwriters, and can only think of two who managed to start a feature writing career while living outside Los Angeles or New York. Bradley might be number three. It seems early to be making sweeping pronouncements.

I’ll grant him this: If you’re going to insist on living outside LA, full-throttle gunning is probably the only way it could work. He’s being extremely proactive in trying to forge the contacts that might otherwise come up if he lived here.

But they’re contacts. They’re not relationships. I think it’s fair to ask: how is he helping the people who are helping him? Near-strangers are setting up meetings for him. That’s great and generous. But since he lives in Austin, does he have any way of repaying the favor?

Talent and luck accounted for part of my success during my first few years in LA. The rest of it was due to my peers: friends in film school, co-workers and fellow interns with whom I’d exchange scripts and offer notes. I got an agent through one of those friends. A writing job through another. But just as importantly, I was helping them get their careers going. And it didn’t feel like work. There was no calculation or list-keeping. These were people I was going hiking with, going to movies with. We were all in it together.

I don’t blame Bradley for not wanting to leave Austin. It’s a great town. But I’d caution against taking his approach as gospel. I think he’s giving up more opportunities than he realizes, and so would any other young college grad considering where to begin a film career.

Married and moving to Hollywood

February 18, 2011 Los Angeles, QandA

questionmarkThrough a very unlikely contact I was able to get my spec script read by a Hollywood producer with a strong track record. We spoke over the phone a few times about my script, and more specifically about what it is I want to do career-wise. I guess I chose my words wisely on our phone conversations because he’s hired me to be his assistant. I am beyond ecstatic that once his current assistant leaves in two weeks I begin my employment. So my bags are packed and my wife and I are driving across the country this weekend to chase my dream.

And I’m a little anxious about this transition. Once I get to Los Angeles my life is going to become very busy very fast. I am more than prepared for that. However I find myself stressing over the inevitable stress this is going to put on my relationship with my wife.

Any tips on being able to balance a 25-hour work schedule and a spouse at home? My wife has been MORE than supportive, and we’ve discussed the reality of the amount of time I’m going to (not) be around. But I still feel this is a cause for concern. Especially given the fact we are not going to know anyone when we first get there.

Giovanny
Miami, Florida

answer iconFirst off, congrats on the new gig.

You’re right: you will probably be working your ass off, both in the official components of your job and all the peripheral aspects — meeting folks, learning the landscape, and of course, writing more screenplays.

But I don’t know that starting your new job in Hollywood is much different than getting hired as an investment banker in New York, as a coder at a start-up in San Francisco or as a fighter pilot for the Air Force. It’s long hours and a lot of stress, regardless of the actual field you’re working in. It can take its toll on relationships.

So this advice applies to anyone moving somewhere new with a loved one.

You’re getting a shot to do what you dream of doing, and while it’s great that she’s joining you, she shouldn’t simply be +1 to your ambitions. So I’d encourage your wife to make a list of what she’d most want to do if time/money/geography weren’t a factor. And then do them.

If she wants to teach karate, she should teach. If she wants to travel through Europe, she should probably travel through Europe — as inexpensively as possible. At some point, you’ll probably have kids and everything will get twenty times more complicated. If there are things she wants to do, she should do them now-ish.

Moving to Los Angeles isn’t like moving to a small town in Kansas, where there’s pretty much one experience. LA can be a vastly different place based on where you choose to live. But there’s one commonality: almost everyone here moved from someplace else. It’s a city of dreamers — though I feel a little nauseous just typing that.

When I hired Ryan as my Director of Digital Things, he moved from Missouri. On the blog, we talked about [where he should live](http://johnaugust.com/archives/2010/where-should-ryan-live) — and that’s a factor for you and your wife. You want an area that matches your goals and interests, filled with people roughly your age. Upon moving in, knock on doors and meet your neighbors. My experience is that LA people are generally friendly, but shy to introduce themselves. Take the initiative. Don’t just make passing eye contact on your way to the car. Get a grill. Make burgers. Borrow someone’s stepladder.

Your wife should get a job with people she likes. I know that in a tough economy any employment can seem like a luxury, but a shittier job with cooler people is absolutely worth it when you’re new to a place. A few work-friends will inevitably become actual-friends.

Finally, don’t build a giant wall between work and home. If you have to stay late at the office, she can bring dinner to eat together. Read scripts together. Quality time isn’t as important as face time.

Hollywood isn’t the CIA. Let her know what happens at work, and include your home life in work conversation. I’ve known all my assistants’ husbands and wives, girlfriends and significant someones. I’ve met most of their parents. Your wife won’t feel as isolated if you involve her in your work life.

To live and not die in LA

December 29, 2010 Los Angeles

Perhaps because of freak crimes like the Ronni Chasen murder, Americans perceive Los Angeles as being much more dangerous than it is.

For 2010, the murder total in Los Angeles has [dropped below 300](http://www.latimes.com/news/local/la-me-la-crime-20101217,0,1871598.story), its lowest number since 1967. ((And one should note that the population of LA grew 35% from 1967 to 2010, so the per capita is even lower.)) Yes, that is still a lot of dead folks. But keep in mind that Los Angeles has 3.8 million people:

> The city’s total translates into roughly 7.5 killings per 100,000 people and puts it in league with New York City and Phoenix as having among the lowest homicide rates among major U.S. cities.

In fact, the murder rate is lower than Memphis, Pittsburgh, or Oklahoma City. Or [twenty other cities](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/United_States_cities_by_crime_rate) you wouldn’t have guessed.

So if your parents are worried about you moving to Los Angeles, point them to the data. Maybe they’re the ones living in a comparative crime alley.

So you’re moving to Hollywood

May 18, 2010 First Person, Los Angeles

Because this site is largely aimed at aspiring screenwriters, I like to include their first-person perspective on those early steps, beginning with the move to Los Angeles. Over the last few years, we’ve had guest blog posts from [Adam Davis](http://johnaugust.com/archives/2007/starting-out-in-hollywood), [Kris Galuska](http://johnaugust.com/archives/2007/moving-to-la), [Jerome Schwartz](http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/jerome-schwartz-first-person) and [Jonny Summers](http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/showrunner-asst) — all of whom are due for an update.

George Sloan is a writers’ assistant on “How I Met Your Mother.” He graciously agreed to write up a primer for recent college grads considering making the move to Hollywood.

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first personHi. I’m George. You probably don’t know me. But that’s okay. We’re friends now.

Below is some information I’ve compiled over the last four-and-a-half years, based on my experience as a PA in the industry, as well as questions I’ve been asked by people considering the move to Los Angeles. Keep in mind, this is an unofficial and relatively shitty guide to working in Hollywood.

#The Big Move

Every year, thousands of 20-something guys and girls pack up their cars, leave their beloved suburban towns and head west to Los Angeles. And with good reason. LA is the international capital of television and motion pictures. Argue all you want about other places — Ne w York, New Orleans, Vancouver and Eastern Europe — but when all is said and done, LA is where you need to be. Granted, that may change over the next ten years, but as of 2010, LA is still the place.

Leaving home and saying goodbye to my family and friends, though incredibly difficult, was a necessity. But before I packed my ’98 Accord to the roof, I asked myself a question. It’s the same question that I pose to anyone considering the move to LA. “Aside from film and television, is there anything else you can see yourself doing with your life?” If the answer is no, pack your stuff and get out here.

George Sloan

##The Drive
Recruit a friend to drive with you, if possible. I drove alone, however, and loved every minute of it. Those five days in the car, thinking and listening to music, allowed me to prepare myself mentally for the enormous change I was about to experience.

##Saving Up
I moved to Los Angeles with $1,200 in savings. Dumb idea. I would suggest moving with no less than $5,000 in savings. LA is one of the more expensive cities in the country and you probably won’t have a job for the first few weeks. You’ll need enough to cover gas (about 50 cents more per gallon in LA than on the east coast), food, monthly bills (student loans, car loans, etc.), as well as your first/last month of rent and security deposit. You’ll also need money for furniture if you didn’t come out here with any. I moved in with a few guys I met on Craigslist who already had a fully-furnished house. That worked out well, but if you want to live alone, prepare to drop some cash at Ikea.

##The First Job
Finding a job in LA is not that hard. Finding a good-paying job that you enjoy is very hard. I did freelance PA (production assistant) work for my first year out here (additionally, I had worked as a PA back in Boston for over a year), working on some embarrassing low-budget feature films, as well as some embarrassing big-budget reality shows. The hours were impossibly long and the pay was hilariously low. The tasks I was asked to complete were menial and beneath anybody with a high school diploma. My friends like to refer to some of the jobs I had as “pride-swallowing.” I prefer the term “soul-crushing.”

##The Long and Winding Road
After a year or so, I got a job as an office PA on a big-budget studio feature. It was thrilling, but eight months later, I felt like I wasn’t learning anything new and decided to leave. I scored an internship at a well-respected production company, eventually transitioning into a full-time job as an executive assistant. But after a year, I again grew restless. I thought about why I moved to LA in the first place: to pursue my dream of writing and directing. My two years in LA had certainly not been a waste (I had fun, I learned a lot and I made some great connections), but I didn’t feel any closer to my dream of writing and directing. So I set what I considered to be a realistic goal for myself: I would become a writers’ assistant on a TV show. I had heard there was a “ladder” to climb in television writing (start as an office PA, get promoted to writers’ PA, then get promoted to writers’ assistant), and was growing increasingly frustrated by the fact that no such ladder exists in the feature world.

Luckily, around this time, I received a call from a former employer who said “How I Met Your Mother” was looking for a new office PA. It seemed destined, so I started there over the summer, and busted my ass. When shooting began in the fall, a writers’ assistant position opened up and I made it clear that I was interested and prepared to do the job. I got the promotion. It took me two and a half years to find a job that I didn’t consider “soul-crushing,” but it finally happened. I still consider myself “just starting out” in the industry, but I now feel more confident in my future.

##A Necessary Evil
The best advice I can give to anyone starting out in Hollywood is to find a job as a production assistant. It sucks hard, but it’s a necessary evil. Working as a PA is thankless. Truly. But it’s the nature of the beast. You must pay your dues. You’ll make shitty money, work long hours and be forced to swallow every ounce of pride that you have, but you’ll learn more in one day than you would in a lifetime of sitting in a classroom. You’ll also learn what you do and don’t want to do.

As a new PA on “How I Met Your Mother,” I was responsible for buying groceries and keeping the refrigerator stocked. Although it sounds silly, I took this job very seriously. Within a few days, the writers were telling me I was doing way better than the last guy and were offering to read any scripts I might be working on. Even the little things count. People notice.

##The Giant Whirlpool
I think of Hollywood as a giant, freezing-cold, bacteria-ridden whirlpool. On the outside of the whirlpool, closest to the shore (and financial security), are the executives, the studio heads, the big-name actors, writers and directors. As you move towards the center, you come upon the lower-level employees. And moving further inwards still, you come to the PA’s. There’s thousands of them, all clamoring and clawing, trying desperately not to get sucked into the deep, dark hole of anonymity and sadness. *Continues →*

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