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Writing vs. Speaking

April 28, 2013 Words, Words on the page

For screenwriters, John McWhorter’s TEDTalk on texting grammar is a useful reminder of the differences between how people talk and how they write.

Speech is made up of word clusters with no discrete punctuation. Because speech is almost always dialogue — you’re usually speaking *with* somebody — it’s structured in a way that allows interruption.

Compare that to written language, which is by its nature a unbroken monologue with punctuation to demarcate how thoughts should fit together, allowing complex sentences like this one with nested clauses (and even parenthetical asides) that you’d likely never attempt in speech.

As screenwriters, we’re often writing speech. Our goal is to make it feel unwritten.

With dialogue, I generally aim for a slightly optimized version of how people would actually talk. That is, I consider many ways a character could express an idea in that given moment and choose the one that works best. Not only am I looking at the “meat” of the line — the reason why they’re saying it — but also how the line ends. Ideally, each line of dialogue invites the next line, either through an implied question or challenge (“You wouldn’t say he’s arrogant, though.”), or patterns that suggest what’s to follow.

MARY

I just adore Reggie! His wit, his charm...

TOM

His money.

MARY

His money is adorable.

The danger is that being too clever can make something feel written — the audience becomes aware of the writer, rather than the character. You have to consider the genre and the audience. One of the most sobering jobs in a rewrite is killing dialogue that is terrific but wrong.

Back to the video: McWhorter argues that texting is best thought of as “fingered speech.” It looks like writing, but it’s an emergent form of language that is quickly developing its own conventions. I buy it.

I also really enjoyed McWhorter’s earlier book, [Our Magnificent Bastard Tongue: The Untold History of English](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1592404944/ref=as\_li\_ss\_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=1592404944&linkCode=as2&tag=johnaugustcom-20). I [wrote more about that](http://johnaugust.com/2009/our-magnificent-bastard-tongue) back in 2009.

Highland 1.01 in Mac App Store

April 8, 2013 Apps, Fountain, Highland

highland iconWe’ve had a great response to [Highland][2], our plain-text screenwriting app, with lots of five star ratings that make us blush. We’re working on new features, but first we’re squashing some bugs.

Here’s what’s [new in 1.01][3]:

– When you save (or autosave), Highland remembers where your cursor was. Because that’s How It Should Be.
– Highland retains newlines upon Save. So if you like to use a lot of blank lines for some reason, go right ahead. It’s your script.
– Drag-and-dropping text within the editing window is so much better now. Try it!
– When you import a PDF or FDX file, we treat it like a new Fountain file — which it basically is. The first time you save it, you’ll give it a name.
– Fixed a bug that caused an occasional crash during Save.
– Fixed Export menu command.
– Updated welcome screen text.
– There was some stray Fountain markup (====) in FDX export. Whoops. Fixed.
– In Dark Mode, we’ve made the scroll bar easier to spot. ((Did you know you can change the colors in Dark Mode in the Preferences panel? Nima was like, “But what if someone picks terrible colors, like pink-on-red?” And I said, “What are you, the Color Police?” Then he showed me his badge.))

If you haven’t tried out Highland, there’s a [demo available][2]. (Mac App Store rules won’t let us mention it in the product description.)

Keep sending your report cards and comments. That’s how Highland improves. And I’ll admit it: stars are nice, so if you’re enjoying Highland and feel like telling folks, leave us a review.

[1]: https://itunes.apple.com/us/app/highland/id499329572?mt=12
[2]: http://quoteunquoteapps.com/highland “Highland”
[3]: https://itunes.apple.com/us/app/highland/id499329572?mt=12 “highand mac app store”

[1]: http://johnaugust.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/03/highland-icon-200×200.png

Big Fish Rush

April 1, 2013 Big Fish, Broadway, Projects

Big Fish starts previews in Chicago tomorrow, April 2nd. Eep.

A bunch of readers asked about rush tickets, so I asked our general manager, who asked Broadway in Chicago, who consulted the great oracle of all things ticket-related. Here’s the official word:

> **$25 Student/Senior/Military/Industry Rush Tickets**
> A limited number of rush tickets will be available for all performances. Tickets will be available at the Oriental Theatre box office on the day of the performance only. Limit of 2 tickets per valid ID. Cash or Credit.

As I’ve said before, if you’re coming, let me know [on Twitter](http://twitter.com/johnaugust) or by [email](mailto:ask@johnaugust.com). Tell me your dates/times/seat numbers, and if I can I will stop by and say hi.

Highland ships

March 18, 2013 Apps, Fountain, Highland

highland iconHighland, our long-in-beta screenplay editor, is finally available in the [Mac App Store today](https://itunes.apple.com/us/app/highland/id499329572?mt=12).

It’s regularly priced at $19.99, but through the end of the month, it’s half-off at $9.99.

In addition to letting you write scripts in plain text, Highland converts files between PDF, Final Draft (.fdx) and Fountain formats. It works in all directions.

Yes, all directions — you can give it a PDF of a screenplay and it will melt it down to an editable file. That seems like magic, but it’s actually just a lot of hard work, and a year’s worth of report cards submitted by beta testers.

Melting PDFs is a feat that no other screenwriting app even attempts, so we made a [little video about it](http://player.vimeo.com/video/59698758?title=0&byline=0&portrait=0&autoplay=0):

We’ll never be able to convert every PDF, which is one reason we offer a [free demo version](http://quoteunquoteapps.com/highland/) so you can see how it works before you buy it.

With Highland, you can also tackle FDX files without Final Draft. We’ve found our users are often writing in Google Docs or TextMate or vim — or on their iPads. Whatever setup you prefer, Highland can get you into and out of Final Draft smoothly when you need special features.

Highland is a great bridge between apps, but over the last year we’ve found more and more users are simply doing their writing in Highland. It’s a full-featured editor, with spelling, versions and find-and-replace. Because it’s plain text, you can focus on the words and not the formatting.

The biggest changes to Highland are easy to spot: a new icon, a new UI, and two new fonts. Courier Prime is an obvious addition, but we’ve also included Highland Sans, a brand-new editing typeface that’s sharp on the screen and easy on the eyes.

highland fontsOther additions include Dark Mode for late-night writing, fast pagination and Apple’s speech-to-text dictation.

And there are more cool things in the works. But today is a major milestone, because Highland was such a long time coming. I want to thank Ryan, Nima, Stuart and our amazing beta testers for their perseverence.

Check out more information, including a FAQ, at [Quote-Unquote Apps](http://quoteunquoteapps.com/highland/).

You can find Highland on the [Mac App Store](https://itunes.apple.com/us/app/highland/id499329572?mt=12).

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