Formatting text shown on screen
First, it was such a pleasure to meet you in Austin last year. Hope to see you next year, too. I had a question that I’ve never gotten a straight answer on.
How do you format it when you’re trying to show text being written on a computer monitor, specifically showing the exchange between two people in an internet chat room (a la “Closer”, but I haven’t found that script)? I’m guessing INSERT: COMPUTER SCREEN would be a start, but what’s after that? Would the same be used to show the text message on a cell phone?
– Derek
Your instincts are right. I might choose slightly different words, but the net result would be the same:
- With a glance back over her shoulder to be certain no one’s looking, Sydney quickly types in the search parameters.
- ON THE SCREEN
- Bank records scroll past at unreadable clip, finally arriving at a single matched record:
- CREDIT DAUPHINE, 204394753, BRUSSELS
- ON SYDNEY
- She GASPS, recognizing her former faux-employer.
- SYDNEY
- (sotto)
- SD6.
I used a separate slugline (”ON SYDNEY”) to get us out of “ON THE SCREEN.” If you were crunched for space, you could probably omit it; it’s pretty clear in context.
I don’t often use “INSERT:” or “ANGLE ON:” in screenplays. They feel fussy, and rarely offer anything more than a single slugline in uppercase would.
And as far as a cell-phone screen, there’s really no difference:
- Hearing a strange CHIRP, Chloe digs out her cell phone. She’s gotten a new text message.
- ON THE SCREEN
- WHRE U AT?
- CHLOE
- grimaces, frustrated. Starts to dial.
- CHLOE
- (to Ruth)
- I swear, your brother could get lost in a closet.
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