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Ph.D. on adapted screenplays

October 22, 2003 Adaptation, QandA

I intend to write a PH. D. on a theme about the connection between film and literature. As a screenwriter how do you approach a literary piece to adapt it for the big screen? Do you think an adapted script could be perceived as literary genre?

–M

To answer your second question first, I think it’s important to make sure we’re using the same terms. For me, “genre” means a group of works lumped together based on subject matter, theme or tone. Westerns, romantic comedies, and futuristic prison thrillers are all genres. I’ll use “medium,” (singular of “media”) for the various types of literary formats, such as novels, poems, screenplays and stage plays. Combine the two terms and you can begin to describe almost any literary work: “Riders of the Purple Sage” is a Western novel, while the Jean-Claude Van Damme/Dennis Rodman movie DOUBLE TEAM began as a futuristic prison thriller screenplay. Shudder.

Now that our terms are clear, is “adapted script” a literary genre? Not really. Screenplays adapted from other works have no signature subject matter, theme or tone. And as a medium, adapted scripts are not superficially distinguishable from any other screenplay.

“Adapted scripts” is just a way to group otherwise unrelated works.

That said, for purposes of your Ph.D., it’s probably a useful and interesting grouping of otherwise unrelated works. At least it’s more likely to get your thesis approved than, “A Textual Analysis of Screenplays Beginning with the Letter ‘K’.”

I’ve answered a lot of questions about the process of adaptation, so I’ll direct you to the archives for the everyday answers. But in order to help out with your thesis, I’ll try to get a little more intellectual.

Anytime you create a literary work derived from a pre-existing work, it’s a transformative process. That’s unavoidable. Unless you’re literally just copying it letter for letter, bit for bit, you are going to introduce new elements, or alter elements that were already there. Thus the novels “Sense and Sensibility” and “Bridget Jones’s Diary” are fundamentally different works, even though the latter is based on the former.

However, I would argue – and you might choose as your thesis – that the transformative process of adapting a novel into a screenplay is a hallmark of 20th century literature.

Think about it: Before the 20th century, there weren’t movies or screenplays. While books have been adapted into stage plays for hundreds of years, the phenomenon of a “literary property” to be exploited in various media is a very recent phenomenon. These days, even high-class writers have film rights in mind as they pen their novels.

Yet as intertwined as novels and films have become, it’s an awkward marriage. Books and movies simply work differently.

First and foremost is their relationship with the user. The reader of a book can re-read a chapter if she missed something, or set the book down to ponder a character’s motivation. But a movie never stops. It keeps playing along at 24 frames per second, no matter how confused the audience gets. So the screenwriter must ensure that the viewer knows exactly what she should at the right moment. What is often derided as “dumbing down” could just as easily be labeled “making sensible.”

Books and movies have a different relationship to their characters. A novelist can simply tell the reader what a character is thinking, or feeling, or what he had for breakfast. The screenwriter must find some outward way of expressing this information, generally though dialogue or action.

Finally, the novelist has many more available senses than the screenwriter. Books are filled with tastes and smells, textures and feelings that are completely banned from screenplays, which must only include things that can be seen or heard – the limits of film.

So, Lora, I hope I helped you get started on your thesis. Once your get your Ph. D., promise me you’ll use your power for good. The world doesn’t need another semiotic analysis of the androids in BLADE RUNNER. It needs champions of new and exciting literary forms.

Television specs

September 10, 2003 QandA, Television

I would like to write for a certain television show. I have studied
all the episodes throughout the years, watched the characters evolve, and
I have
written my own episodes in my spare time for practice. How would I get ahold
of the production company to find out about working for them? My school doesn’t
have the resources to help so I need to do it on my own. What is the best way
to approach the producers?

–Nils Taylor

Although it does happen occasionally, usually a writer is not hired for a
show based on a script he wrote for that specific series. That is, someone
is not hired for THE PRACTICE based on an spec script for THE PRACTICE. Instead,
he might get hired based on a sample episode of THE WEST WING, SIX FEET UNDER,
or another one-hour drama.

Which is weird on the face of it. Why wouldn’t David E. Kelley want to read
a writer exploring the characters and plotlines he created? There are a few
reasons.

First is the possibility of lawsuits. If the spec episode you wrote ends up
resembling a later episode of the series, the producers don’t want to be liable.
Even with signed releases, a lot of producers use this as a reason not to read
submissions of their own show. My assistant, Dana, used to work on SMALLVILLE,
which categorically refused to read any sample SMALLVILLE’s for just this reason.

Second, a producer for THE BERNIE MAC SHOW is going to be comparing your sample
episode to the dozens he’s read or written himself. He may have all sorts of
criteria for quality that aren’t readily apparent to someone outside the show:
how the kids are used, how often Bernie should talk to camera, et cetera. You
would be going in at a disadvantage relative to another writer with a sample
episode of a similar-but-different show, like GREG THE BUNNY or MY WIFE AND
KIDS.

So what are your sample scripts good for? Well, they could help you get a
job on another show you like. They could help you get a television agent or
manager, who will happily read scripts from any show. They could also give
you lots of good experience, since people write what they like better than
what they hate.

Most television shows choose their staffs during the aptly-named "staffing
season," generally late April through the end of May. If you’re good on
the phone, it’s worth calling the production company during that time and finding
out what scripts the producers are reading for staffing, so you’ll know if
you’re in the right ballpark. But almost no network show will take submissions
from an unrepresented writer, so finding an agent and/or manager will need
to be your first step. In previous columns, you can read a lot of discussion
on that.

First impressions

September 10, 2003 Education, QandA

What’s the first movie where the writing really made an impression on you?

–Kate

I remember watching WAR OF THE ROSES on videotape with my brother, and liking
it so much that I immediately rewound it and started watching it again. I wrote
down the dialogue for the first few scenes,
and suddenly realized that somebody really had to write this all first — the
actors weren’t just making their
lines up. There was an invisible plan behind the movie I was watching.

That seems strange to me now, because at the time I’d read plays and even
acted in a few. But plays are basically just dialogue, while a movie script
had to show what was happening even when no characters were talking. I wouldn’t
read an actual movie script until a few years later, but it didn’t stop me
from transcribing an entire episode of "Star Trek: The Next Generation." (Incidentally,
transcribing a show is a great exercise to get comfortable with standard formatting
and writing scene description, since the big work — structure, character,
dialogue and plot — are already handled for you.)

When someone says about a movie that "the writing was really impressive," I
always wonder if that means that some other aspect of the movie wasn’t very
good, such as the acting or the directing, which let you notice the words.
In my experience, if everything in is working at top form, you’re not even
aware the movie is written. It seems to simply exist.

It’s only as you stop to think back about what you saw that you recognize
how good the writing must have been. Experience has shown that you can make
a bad movie from a great script, but you can’t make a great movie from a bad
script.

Themes

September 10, 2003 QandA, Story and Plot

After viewing many films and reading many books on the craft of screenwriting
one of the most important aspects of film seems to be theme. I’m sorry, I’m
starting to ramble. My question is this: is it bad to formulate an entire screenplay
on the basis of a theme, or does that get in the way of creativity? Should
an idea stem from a theme, or should the idea produce the theme, or can it
work both ways? I thank you in advance for reading this, I know that you have
a tumultuous schedule.

–Brian Formo

"Theme" is one of those words that’s thrown around a lot without
any consensus about what it’s supposed to mean. Here’s my definition to add
the to mix:

Theme is the emotional, intellectual or spiritual issue at the core of the
story. It is the "dark matter" that gives a movie weight – you don’t
notice it directly, but when its missing, the movie seems frivolous and disconnected.

Sometimes, it can be summarized in a word. In X-MEN, the theme is mutation,
and all aspects of the story radiate around this word. The heroes and villains
are all "mutants," different than normal people. The villain wants
to change – mutate – all the world’s leaders. Rogue and the others suffer prejudice
and persecution because of their "otherness." In crafting the story,
the writers focussed on parallels in the real world: particularly Martin Luther
King versus Malcolm X, and the controversy over gay rights.

In ALIENS (the sequel), the theme is motherhood. Almost asexual at the start
of the movie, Ripley adopts a surrogate child in Newt. When Newt is kidnapped,
Ripley must face off against the alien mother, resulting in one of the best
lines of dialogue ever shouted: "Get away from her, you BITCH!" (Interestingly,
in Cameron’s original script we learn that Ripley did have a child of her own
once, but after all these years asleep in space, Ripley
has outlived her.)

In GO, the theme is shouted by several characters in crucial moments: "GO!" Which
means, "I don’t care which way you go, you have to go now!" In each
of the three stories, characters get in way over their heads, but there’s never
time to stop and think through to the best answer. You’ve made a mistake, but
you have to keep going.

Which comes first, idea or theme? Ultimately, I think they’re too inter-related
to divide. When I was brought in to work on TITAN A.E., I explained to the
studio executives that I loved how the Earth was blown up in the first three
minutes, but that the only way to thematically balance the Earth’s destruction
was to create a new world at the end. The story, which had previously been "Treasure
Island in Space," with the Titan holding the Earth’s fortune, became a
Genesis allegory, albeit with a lot of laser blasting and cartoon cleavage.
Thematically, it was now a movie about Home, and every beat of the story focussed
on some aspect of it, from the initial destruction, to the derelict station,
the drifter colony, and finally the Titan itself.

The movie tanked, but how ’bout those themes?
In your own work, it’s definitely worth sitting down and looking at whether
you’ve really explored the idea-within-the-idea. The world doesn’t need another
hollow action movie, but it could use another SPEED (you can’t slow down),
MATRIX (reality is an illusion), or RUN LOLA RUN (what if you could do it again).
It’s no coincidence that the best movies of a category generally have the best-explored
themes.

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