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H.P. Lovecraft’s Commonplace Book

July 5, 2011 Genres, Writing Process

Bruce Sterling publishes a list of Lovecraft’s [undeveloped story ideas](http://www.wired.com/beyond_the_beyond/2011/07/h-p-lovecrafts-commonplace-book/):

> **96** Unknown fires seen across the hills at night.

> **97** Blind fear of a certain woodland hollow where streams writhe among crooked roots, and where on a buried altar terrible sacrifices have occur’d — Phosphorescence of dead trees. Ground bubbles.

> **98** Hideous old house on steep city hillside—Bowen St.—beckons in the night—black windows—horror unnam’d—cold touch and voice—the welcome of the dead.

Sterling doesn’t discuss the origin of the list, but all 221 entries seem distinctly Lovecraftian. Most of them don’t suggest plots per se, but rather focus on strange words or images. That makes sense for Lovecraft, who was never known for his characters, but rather his mood-making.

There’s not a single line of dialogue to be found. If future historians dug through my notebooks, that’s mostly what they’d find: bits of speech with very little context. Some of those lines are particular to what I’m writing at the moment, but many float untethered to any specific project.

I find myself scribbling down random ideas less now than I used to. Some of that is because of Evernote, which I use as my all-purpose in-box. My [Twitter feed](http://twitter.com/johnaugust) also soaks up a lot of these thoughts, at least the ones that can be rewritten to fit in 140 characters.

Outlines aren’t essential

June 10, 2011 QandA, Writing Process

questionmarkI looked at your outline for Big Fish and noticed you had it broken up into acts and what happens in each act. How exactly did you know what was suppose to happen? How do you start to figure it out?

For me, I might know some of the events pretty clearly but I might not know what happens in-between. Or I might know the middle and end, but not the beginning. I find it hard to break down my story the way you do.

Sometimes when I have a scene in my head, I’ll just start writing particular scenes and then go back to figure out more of an outline. Is that wrong?

— Ian Topple
Syosset, NY

answer iconIt’s not wrong. The correct way to write your screenplay is whatever gets it written.

My [original one-page outline](http://johnaugust.com/library) for Big Fish is really an anomaly. I rarely go into that level of detail.

Most scripts begin more the way you describe, with a few key moments and characters that gradually chain themselves together. I’ll always have a sense of where the story is going — I can write a third-act scene before I’ve written the end of the first act — but I won’t necessarily know how I’m going to get there.

The [sequence outline](http://johnaugust.com/library) in the Library came after the first draft, and charted what was actually happening in the script I wrote. It was a way of seeing how the movie was dividing its time between the real world and Edward Bloom’s stories.

Don’t beat yourself up over outlines. Save the self-flagellation for the scenework.

How do you read a script?

June 7, 2011 QandA, Writing Process

questionmarkHow do you read scripts these days? I am used to reading printed documents and writing and annotating and leaving notes in the margins, but it is becoming really expensive.

And as I look across your blog and other screenwriting sites I notice a lot of people read screenplays on their computer. How can I really learn from and analyze the work without having a physical copy to make notes on? Should I buy a Kindle? iPad? Use a notebook?

— Alandre Drakest
Silver Spring, MD

answer iconWhen I read Other People’s Screenplays, it’s almost always on my iPad. For a PDF, I use either the GoodReader app or iBooks. For an .fdx file, I use [FDX Reader](http://fdxreader.com). Because, you know, I made it.

Reading a screenplay on the iPad means you can’t circle typos or scribble thoughts in the margins. While some of the PDF apps do a fairly good job with notes and annotations, I haven’t found any of them to be better than paper and pen.

When I read My Own Screenplays, I either use FDX Reader or plain old paper. **Printing isn’t admitting defeat.** You see some things on paper that you miss on the screen.

For quick-and-dirty proofing, I often choose the two-up setting in the Print dialog box, giving me two smaller pages side-by-side. I do this for drafts I only expect to keep around for a day or two before recycling.

Working with a collaborator on an upcoming project, I’ve started using three-ring binders for my active scripts. I’d always been a brad man, and dismissed binders as un-screenwriterly. But I was a fool.

Binders are kind of awesome.

* Pages lie flat, and stay open.
* Scripts in three-ring binders don’t get mangled as easily.
* I can flip back and forth easily between sections.
* For some projects, divider tabs can help you jump to specific sequences. A musical, for example, will have tabs for each song. An action movie might have tabs for each action scene.
* When making notes, I can use Post-It notes and flags.
* Revised pages snap in nicely, so you don’t always need to reprint the whole thing.
* When a project goes into a holding pattern, that binder can sit on the shelf.

As to your Kindle question, the larger Kindle DX is the right size for screenplays, and was briefly popular among the more gadget-inclined screenwriters. But most of those people jumped ship for iPads. I don’t know any who are still using the Kindle for reading scripts.

The only ache should be in your soul

May 19, 2011 QandA, Writing Process

questionmarkI write six days a week, four hours a day. I’m putting together a portfolio for when I move out to L.A. next year. I’ve finished a musical comedy, am in the middle of a comedy drama, and have two children’s films outlined and in the queue. (One of which I’ve already written as a 35,000 word children’s novel.) So I’m on a surprisingly strict writing schedule considering I have no “real” deadlines.

My question to you is: Do your hands hurt?

Mine definitely ache. I stretch and ice them and beg for hand massages from friends and loved ones. I take ibuprofen, etc. I’m trying to determine if this is normal or if I should be freaking out?

Athletes live with a certain amount of pain for what they love. Same for professional writers?

Do you do anything special to take care of your hands?

— Asher Noël

answer iconTake it seriously. I’ve had problems in the past, and regretted waiting as long as I did to do something about it.

At my worst, not only would my hands hurt, my arms would go dead every night. Beyond pins-and-needles. I’d wake up with zombie appendages attached to my body. I’d have to flop over to get blood flowing into them.

I’m better now.

A Google search on ergonomics or carpal tunnel syndrome will give you a ton of information — too much information, probably — but I can synthesize it down for you thusly:

1. __You need to check your setup.__ Feet on the floor, arms at a comfortable 90-or-so degrees. I strongly believe in arm rests, but different things work for different people. Your typing surface probably needs to be a lot lower than you think. My desk lowers to just two inches above my knees. Everyone has different opinions on chairs. I’ve found the expensive ones aren’t necessarily better. Try a bunch.

2. __You need to change your keyboard.__ I use [this one](https://www.amazon.com/SafeType-Keyboard-Black-Color-V902/dp/B0049PFYWQ/ref=cm_cr_arp_d_product_top?ie=UTF8), which rightfully scares people, but I find works great. You may need to try a bunch of different ergonomic keyboards before you find one that works.

3. __You need to take breaks.__ A lot of them. Walk around. You’ll actually get more done if you’re not staring at the screen the whole time.

4. __Like crutches, gloves can help, but they’re not fixing the problem.__ These [Handeze support gloves](http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B00009LI88/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&tag=johnaugustcom-20&linkCode=as2&camp=217145&creative=399349&creativeASIN=B00009LI88) saved my life, but I’m happy not to need them now.

When it was really bad, I considered surgery. I’m glad I didn’t do it. I didn’t need it.

You won’t always be writing as much as you are now. But try to get into good habits now.

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