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  • Creating a Visual Language
    Episode – 464 | Aug 11, 2020
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    John talks with writer-director Lorene Scafaria and costume designer Mitchell Travers about their collaboration on Hustlers, and how to think visually about story. We discuss locations, production design, cinematography, and choreography with a major focus on pre-production. And in our bonus topic for premium members, John catches up with Mitchell seven months after our initial […]

  • Writing Action
    Episode – 463 | Aug 4, 2020
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    John and Craig talk action! It’s an all-craft episode about how words on the page become high-adrenaline events on the screen. We also follow up on WGA news and agency lay-offs. In our bonus segment for premium members we try to discuss the Emmys but mostly talk about teenage girls’ obsession with Criminal Minds. Links: […]

  • Development Heck
    Episode – 462 | Jul 28, 2020
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    John and Craig discuss the special purgatory that projects can get lost in and how to navigate your way out. We also follow up on Assistant Pay, the 2020 WGA report, and Craig’s writing process for television. Finally, in our bonus segment for premium members we discuss wine! Links: WME, Endeavor Content Increase Assistant Pay […]

  • The Right Manganese for the Job
    Episode – 461 | Jul 21, 2020
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    John and Craig bring another round of How Would This Be A Movie, with a mix of stories from history and the headlines. In this episode we discuss an unexpected guest at a funeral, a lost Russian submarine and a social influencer murder plot. We also look at the latest WGA developments, including the new […]

  • Adapting with Justin Simien
    Episode – 460 | Jul 14, 2020
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    John and Craig welcome writer/director Justin Simien (Dear White People, Bad Hair) to talk adapting movies to television, the value of film school and the birth of independent cinema. We follow up on the WGA/AMPTP deal and answer a listener question on writing stories about problematic historical figures. Finally, in our bonus segment for premium […]

  • International Television
    Episode – 459 | Jul 7, 2020
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    John and Aline Brosh-McKenna co-host a special panel with writers Anna Winger (Unorthodox, Deutschland 83), and Tony McNamara (The Great, The Favourite) for the French television festival Serie Series. We cover writing coming of age stories, how to choose the best format for a story, and writing with act breaks. We also discuss the production […]

  • Collapsing Scenes
    Episode – 458 | Jun 30, 2020
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    John and Craig examine how and why it can be necessary to collapse scenes in a rewrite. They also follow-up on returning to production, portrayals of police on screen and assistant pay. We then welcome Michelle Amor, Hilliard Guess, and Bianca Sams — co-chairs of the WGA West’s Committee of Black Writers — to discuss […]

  • Getting Staffed in Comedy Variety
    Episode – 457 | Jun 23, 2020
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    John and Craig welcome writer and performer Ashley Nicole Black (Full Frontal with Samantha Bee, A Black Lady Sketch Show) to discuss comedy and variety shows — how they’re written and how to get a job writing them. We also talk about studio diversity programs, why additional training can send the wrong message, and how […]

  • Too Much at Once
    Episode – 456 | Jun 16, 2020
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    John and Craig follow up and give updates on the many topics we’ve been talking about the past few weeks, including police on screen, assistant pay, short seasons and restarting production. We also hear from a past Three-Page participant on their experience post-challenge and cover highlights from the WGA’s Inclusion and Equity report. In our […]

  • Police on Screen
    Episode – 455 | Jun 9, 2020
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    John and Craig discuss how police and policing are portrayed on screen, and writers’ responsibilities to thoughtfully reflect society. Then, we answer listener questions about freaking out in meetings, how we deal with feedback, and whether to write books or movies. And in our bonus segment for premium members, we’ll discuss the possibility that Craig […]

  • That Icky Feeling
    Episode – 454 | Jun 3, 2020
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    John and Craig explore that icky feeling something’s wrong with your script and what to do about it. They also discuss the difference between story and screenplay, both as official WGA categories and how we use those terms everyday. We follow up on French hours, whether you should send editable documents to producers, and offer […]

  • Getting Back to Set
    Episode – 453 | May 26, 2020
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    John and Craig welcome back Aline Brosh McKenna (Crazy Ex-Girlfriend, Your Place or Mine) and Rawson Marshall Thurber (Dodgeball, We’re the Millers) to share how we’re thinking about the future of film and television production. We talk about possible plans for getting back to set, how movies might change to adapt to the current circumstances, […]

  • The Empire Strikes Back with Lawrence Kasdan
    Episode – 452 | May 19, 2020
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    John and Craig welcome back Lawrence Kasdan for a deep dive on The Empire Strikes Back to celebrate this iconic film’s 40th anniversary. We talk about the inspiration behind Yoda, keeping the Skywalker/Darth Vader connection a secret, and balancing competing storylines. We also take a look at Kasdan’s original handwritten script, accompanied by table reads […]

  • There Are No Slow Claps
    Episode – 451 | May 12, 2020
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    John and Craig offer guidance on how to “flip the script” on tropes without landing on your face. We also answer listener questions about phone numbers, sluglines and short films. Finally, in our bonus segment for premium members, we discuss our personal video game histories and the possibility that John was raised in a cult. […]

  • Only the Interesting Scenes
    Episode – 450 | May 5, 2020
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    John and Craig propose a challenge for every screenwriter: only write interesting scenes. They discuss why following this precept is so important and offer tips for implementing it proactively. We also answer listener questions about set pieces, virtual rooms, and juggling multiple projects. In our bonus segment for premium members, we consider whether Covid-19 has […]

  • The One with Sam Esmail
    Episode – 449 | Apr 28, 2020
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    John hosts a discussion with writer/director Sam Esmail as a part of the Showrunner Sessions at the WGA. Sam describes his aversion to writing, where his inspiration comes from, and how he learned to run a room. We also dig into craft, talking about parentheticals and mastering the tension between creating mystery versus confusing your […]

  • Based on a True Story
    Episode – 448 | Apr 21, 2020
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    John and Craig welcome screenwriter Mike Makowsky to discuss the process of turning a story from the news into a movie and how he drew on real life experiences to create his upcoming film, Bad Education. We also follow up on writing with neurological trauma, trailblazing female screenwriters, and answer listener questions on speaking theme […]

  • Three Page Zoom
    Episode – 447 | Apr 16, 2020
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    John and Craig host another Scriptnotes Livestream Show with special guest Dana Fox (Isn’t It Romantic, Couples Retreat). They discuss her new show, Home Before Dark, and her thoughts on why creating a feeling is so important to developing television shows. Then we hold a Three Page Challenge and we invite each of our four […]

  • Back to Basics
    Episode – 446 | Apr 14, 2020
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    John and Craig take a step back to discuss what screenwriting actually is and explore its evolution. They cover the history of screenwriting, the construction of a scene, and what new and old writers need to keep in mind about the craft. We also cover how to approach ‘No Writing Left Behind’ during the time […]

  • The One with Phoebe and Ryan
    Episode – 445 | Apr 7, 2020
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    John and Craig enlist Phoebe Waller-Bridge (Fleabag, Killing Eve) and Ryan Reynolds (Deadpool, The Nines) to break the fourth wall on our first-ever live video Scriptnotes. We discuss when to address the camera, why Deadpool 2 is the saddest movie to watch on a flight, and how to take notes as an actor/writer. Then we […]

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