Screenwriter and author John August

How many lines per page?

November 12, 2004 Formatting, QandA

Today’s question isn’t really a question at all, but rather an investigation into how many lines of type should fit on a standard screenwriting page. While this may seem frivolous — a little like “How Many Angels Can Dance on the Head of a Pin” — almost every screenwriter has tweaked and shuffled, nipped and tucked to get a draft a few pages shorter.

Lines-per-page translates into lines-per-script, which is arguably a better metric than page count for how long a script “really” is. So I applaud Jeff trying to figure it out.

I have a seemingly simple formatting question that I cannot find the answer to anywhere: How many lines should fit on a page?

I don’t ask for help with out trying to help myself first, but believe me, this one has got me stumped. My research yields vastly different results and even an interesting (disturbing?) modern trend. (I know it’s a long read for an e-mail, but I’ve done the research and I would really like your thoughts.)

I know all about setting margins and screenwriting software, but even following those suggestions, there appears to be a large discrepancy in the actual number of lines per page from script to script. Here’s how I have counted lines per page for purposes of this research:

Open a screenplay up to any page, start at the first line of screenplay on that page (a scene heading, character name, dialogue, action; not white space or a page number) and count that as ONE. Then, count every line after that (including white space) all the way to the last line of screenplay on that page (not including bottom CONTINUEDs if the script has them). The number you end up with is what I call Screenplay Lines per Page.
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His name is my name too

November 11, 2004 Film Industry, QandA

I am interested in screenwriting and would love to break into the business. My problem is that John August is my real name. Will I have to use a different name?

I have many scripts I’m working on. Any advice on the name situation would be great!

— John August
Oakland, CA

A quick Google search will reveal there are a bunch of us John Augusts. One guy wants to abolish the Australian state governments, and has been active on the internet since Usenet days. [John August Swanson](http://www.johnaugustswanson.com/default.cfm/PID=1.2.11) is a painter, while another John August does guitar instruction books. And one specializes in [interlocking pavers](http://www.geckostone.com/pavers.html).

My favorite non-me John August has a site dedicated to [diabetic foot problems](http://members.tripod.com/~JohnAugust/). And here I am just answering questions about [bad catering](http://johnaugust.com/archives/2003/craft-service).

Unlike the [Screen Actor’s Guild](http://www.sag.org), which forces actors to use a unique name, there’s no prohibition in Hollywood for multiple writers having identical names. As a practical matter, though, it’s quite inconvenient. But there are a few good solutions.

1. Use your middle name or initial. On [IMDb](http://www.imdb.com), there are at least eight David Steinbergs. But the one I know, a screenwriter, is David H. Steinberg, and he’s doing very well. He writes “David H. Steinberg” on his scripts, and no one gets confused.

2. Use your first and middle initials. Tom Smith is a pretty common name, so my friend’s scripts are marked [T. C. Smith](http://imdb.com/name/nm1049340/). He got the [Nicholl Fellowship](http://www.oscars.org/nicholl/), so something worked. Initials are also a good way of concealing your gender.

3. Do you like any of the variations on “John?” Jonathan, Jack, Juan, Johann? I was a week into pre-production on Go when I realized that the familiar-looking gaffer was actually a college acquaintance, John Lampassi. He was now going by [Giovani Lampassi](http://imdb.com/name/nm0483828/) — “Gio.” People are much more likely to remember his name because, frankly, how many Gios do you know?

4. How do you feel about your mother’s maiden name?

5. And remember, despite what you read on this site, there are other rewarding careers out there beyond screenwriting.

Any other ego-surfing John Augusts out there, please leave a comment so we can get a headcount.

Getting permission

November 9, 2004 QandA, Rights and Copyright

An alarmingly high percentage of reader questions contain some variety of the phrase, “Do I need permission to…”

The short answer is generally, “Yes.” The long answer continues, “…but don’t worry about it so much.” People get unnecessarily freaked out about copyright and trademarks, out of fear that Nabisco is going to sue them for millions of dollars. That’s simply not going to happen.

But to help you sleep a little easier, I’d highly recommend a new book from [Nolo](http://www.nolo.com) called [Getting Permission: How to License & Clear Copyrighted Materials Online & Off](http://www.nolo.com/lawstore/products/product.cfm/ObjectID/4835B5AF-0C35-4540-A4FE20738596443E/catid/2EB060FE-5A4B-4D81-883B0E540CC4CB1E). That’s a lot of ampersands for one title, but it’s a very good reference for the super-diligent writer who wants to make sure his Bob Dylan musical is on the up-and-up. (Section 5, page 21)

The book has all the forms you’re likely to need for most purposes, although it’s not film-centric. There are no rights-option agreements, for example.

Nolo has books on a wide variety of legal topics, which is of course catnip to the do-it-yourself-er like me. [How to Buy a House in California](http://www.nolo.com/lawstore/products/product.cfm/ObjectID/2B3C9AA5-19FF-45F8-B0E47338DEECD3F3/catid/AAFB97A1-F23E-4D6F-98DBD8C64C478126) was by far the most useful thing I read before I bought my first place a few years ago — I’ve lent it out to many friends. Even if you live outside of California, it’s a very good primer. In my case, I had dramatically mis-estimated what I could afford to buy, and would have ended up in the wrong house without it.

How wide to take your spec script

November 8, 2004 Film Industry, QandA

Assuming you have an agent, manager, lawyer and all the other must haves to sell a spec, do you think it’s wise for your reps to take the material wide (20-30 producers) or for them to slip it to individual producers three or four at a time in order to sell the piece?

— Alexander
NYC, NY

There’s no right answer. It depends on the script and the market, and even then you’ll get conflicting answers.

By targeting a few select producers, you hopefully put the script in the hands of the people who are most likely to (a) love it and (b) get it set up at a given studio. For a script that deals with challenging subject material, or which lacks obvious commercial appeal, this might be a smart move.

For instance, say you’ve written a sophisticated romantic comedy with leads in their 60’s, maybe a blue-collar version of [Something’s Gotta Give](http://imdb.com/title/tt0337741/). It might be smart to look at what producers (such as Scott Rudin), directors (such as James L. Brooks) or hyphenates (such as Clint Eastwood) would be natural fits for it. Target them first, so that they can take it to the studio with themselves attached.

On the other hand, if a script is just flat-out commercial, you can sometimes sell it for a lot of money by going to all (or most) of the studios at once. That was the case with [The Island](http://imdb.com/title/tt0399201/), a thriller that’s now in production.

The downside of going wide is that if your script doesn’t receive a great reception, it’s over pretty quickly. You don’t have a chance to change strategy mid-way through, such as targeting a specific director or piece of talent.

My best advice is to trust your instincts, but listen to your representatives.

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