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		<title>By: John</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/shazam-done/comment-page-1#comment-166633</link>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 20:57:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I&#039;m closing comments a bit early so it doesn&#039;t become a Warners-bashing pulpit. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I don&#039;t think there will be any new developments with my incarnation of Shazam!, but if there are, I&#039;ll let readers know when I can.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m closing comments a bit early so it doesn&#8217;t become a Warners-bashing pulpit. </p>

<p>I don&#8217;t think there will be any new developments with my incarnation of Shazam!, but if there are, I&#8217;ll let readers know when I can.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: DL</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/shazam-done/comment-page-1#comment-166604</link>
		<dc:creator>DL</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 19:45:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;John,&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Thank you for this post.  &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I recently had a script optioned by a producer who was very excited about the project.  I started rewriting the script based on his notes.  Since this was my first option I enjoyed the experience and did quite well.  Suddenly, things stalled and the producer and his partner cooled on my script because they no longer felt that it had any heat and due to circumstances that were beyond my control.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;So, I was left with an expired option, no cash (I went into debt since I was unemployed), and a half-rewritten script.  However, I had a blast.  Hopefully next time I&#039;ll see a check for my efforts.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;It means a lot to me to read how a pro like yourself deals with projects that fall apart.  &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Thanks again for your time and this website.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>John,</p>

<p>Thank you for this post.  </p>

<p>I recently had a script optioned by a producer who was very excited about the project.  I started rewriting the script based on his notes.  Since this was my first option I enjoyed the experience and did quite well.  Suddenly, things stalled and the producer and his partner cooled on my script because they no longer felt that it had any heat and due to circumstances that were beyond my control.</p>

<p>So, I was left with an expired option, no cash (I went into debt since I was unemployed), and a half-rewritten script.  However, I had a blast.  Hopefully next time I&#8217;ll see a check for my efforts.</p>

<p>It means a lot to me to read how a pro like yourself deals with projects that fall apart.  </p>

<p>Thanks again for your time and this website.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Shazamabama</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shazamabama</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 18:10:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;For Shazam to play well I believe the movie should be a 1940&#039;s period piece. I&#039;ve felt for a long time that Captain Marvel doesn&#039;t translate well to modern audiences, not because of his &quot;golly-gee shucks&quot; persona, but because he&#039;s a character of another time, much like Captain America, of which the movie is to be set during WW2. These heroes may lack a modern sense of cynicism and irony, but that doesn&#039;t mean they can&#039;t be very dark.  Harry Potter set in modern day Boston is a bad movie. It&#039;s all about the setting. Get the tone right, mix with great story, and you&#039;ve got a killer movie. The Rocketeer is the perfect example. Brilliant movie, fun, exciting story. The Rocketeer in 2009? That would never work. I feel the same thing applies to Captain Marvel. He needs to be in his  world, not ours. &quot;Golly-gee shucks&quot; can also be dark, exciting, and even at times frightening. I hope this movie gets made and made well.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For Shazam to play well I believe the movie should be a 1940&#8217;s period piece. I&#8217;ve felt for a long time that Captain Marvel doesn&#8217;t translate well to modern audiences, not because of his &#8220;golly-gee shucks&#8221; persona, but because he&#8217;s a character of another time, much like Captain America, of which the movie is to be set during WW2. These heroes may lack a modern sense of cynicism and irony, but that doesn&#8217;t mean they can&#8217;t be very dark.  Harry Potter set in modern day Boston is a bad movie. It&#8217;s all about the setting. Get the tone right, mix with great story, and you&#8217;ve got a killer movie. The Rocketeer is the perfect example. Brilliant movie, fun, exciting story. The Rocketeer in 2009? That would never work. I feel the same thing applies to Captain Marvel. He needs to be in his  world, not ours. &#8220;Golly-gee shucks&#8221; can also be dark, exciting, and even at times frightening. I hope this movie gets made and made well.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Stephanie</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/shazam-done/comment-page-1#comment-166567</link>
		<dc:creator>Stephanie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 17:27:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Dang it! I was seriously looking forward to this film.....&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dang it! I was seriously looking forward to this film&#8230;..</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: william</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/shazam-done/comment-page-1#comment-166556</link>
		<dc:creator>william</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 17:02:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;rock please come back 2 wwe
never mind doing movies&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>rock please come back 2 wwe
never mind doing movies</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Christopher</title>
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		<dc:creator>Christopher</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 16:57:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I like his idea of making Shazam more of a comedy and lighthearted than the other superheroe movies that have come out. But I would NOT make it a live action movie though, I would do it animated in the same style as The Incredibles. Hell, I&#039;d try to get Brad Bird to direct it if possible. It would be awesome and fun and a monster hit! Trust me, it would make a lot more money in that style than if it was live action. The only kink, or the major kink in the idea is that there are only two studios right now that really have the potential, know how, and skill to produce that kind of movie, Pixar and Dreamworks Animation and neither of them have the rights to it.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like his idea of making Shazam more of a comedy and lighthearted than the other superheroe movies that have come out. But I would NOT make it a live action movie though, I would do it animated in the same style as The Incredibles. Hell, I&#8217;d try to get Brad Bird to direct it if possible. It would be awesome and fun and a monster hit! Trust me, it would make a lot more money in that style than if it was live action. The only kink, or the major kink in the idea is that there are only two studios right now that really have the potential, know how, and skill to produce that kind of movie, Pixar and Dreamworks Animation and neither of them have the rights to it.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Rob</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 16:44:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Apparently the studio forgot that the lighter side of comics, even kid oriented comics can be wildly successful.  Maybe if they sat down and watched The Incredibles again.  &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Sorry to hear about Shazam.  While I was not a huge fan, I was excited by the casting of Dwayne Johnson as Black Adam.  It was an excellent choice and that alone gave me hopes the film might be good.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Apparently the studio forgot that the lighter side of comics, even kid oriented comics can be wildly successful.  Maybe if they sat down and watched The Incredibles again.  </p>

<p>Sorry to hear about Shazam.  While I was not a huge fan, I was excited by the casting of Dwayne Johnson as Black Adam.  It was an excellent choice and that alone gave me hopes the film might be good.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Kevin Arbouet</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/shazam-done/comment-page-1#comment-166538</link>
		<dc:creator>Kevin Arbouet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 16:04:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Brandon Finch:&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Warner Bros. greenlit a script that made Superman a deadbeat dad and then towards the end, Lex Luthor literally shanks Superman in the back with a piece of kryptonite.  &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Um...&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Brandon Finch:</p>

<p>Warner Bros. greenlit a script that made Superman a deadbeat dad and then towards the end, Lex Luthor literally shanks Superman in the back with a piece of kryptonite.  </p>

<p>Um&#8230;</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Joe</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 15:48:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Sorry to hear about it. If it makes you feel any better, their next &quot;dark and edgy&quot; superhero film will probably fail in spectacular fashion, since every tonal copycat tends to bomb (Titanic and Pearl Harbor, Lord of the Rings and Narnia, etc.). Execs just assume that this whole creative process is some formula you can apply to any property...lather, rinse repeat.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;As a fledgling writer, I&#039;m happy you at least got paid for your work, even if it won&#039;t come to fruition. Captain Marvel is certainly one of the harder properties to adapt into the contemporary mainstream, though you were definitely on the money in playing the teenage angle. Frankly, I felt the Raimi team made a gross misstep in denying the Spider-Man franchise the teenage angle that initially made the character such a huge success in comics. I mean, it&#039;s the teenage male contingent that admire such properties, and your idea involving playing off Cap&#039;s teenage roots would have done a fine job in tapping into that demographic. Alas, we can look forward instead to more copycat &quot;dark heroes&quot; that will undoubtedly fail. No, this is not sour grapes; rather, it is more faith in the Dark Knight&#039;s success benefiting greatly from a perfect storm of circumstances, hype, and general talent. If this sort of success were easy to replicate on a consistent basis, we&#039;d still be knee deep Titanic rip-offs.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;So kudos for trying to do something inherently faithful to the core material, and apologies for the rant. Glad to know the studios are still supporting you, as bothersome as they can be sometimes.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sorry to hear about it. If it makes you feel any better, their next &#8220;dark and edgy&#8221; superhero film will probably fail in spectacular fashion, since every tonal copycat tends to bomb (Titanic and Pearl Harbor, Lord of the Rings and Narnia, etc.). Execs just assume that this whole creative process is some formula you can apply to any property&#8230;lather, rinse repeat.</p>

<p>As a fledgling writer, I&#8217;m happy you at least got paid for your work, even if it won&#8217;t come to fruition. Captain Marvel is certainly one of the harder properties to adapt into the contemporary mainstream, though you were definitely on the money in playing the teenage angle. Frankly, I felt the Raimi team made a gross misstep in denying the Spider-Man franchise the teenage angle that initially made the character such a huge success in comics. I mean, it&#8217;s the teenage male contingent that admire such properties, and your idea involving playing off Cap&#8217;s teenage roots would have done a fine job in tapping into that demographic. Alas, we can look forward instead to more copycat &#8220;dark heroes&#8221; that will undoubtedly fail. No, this is not sour grapes; rather, it is more faith in the Dark Knight&#8217;s success benefiting greatly from a perfect storm of circumstances, hype, and general talent. If this sort of success were easy to replicate on a consistent basis, we&#8217;d still be knee deep Titanic rip-offs.</p>

<p>So kudos for trying to do something inherently faithful to the core material, and apologies for the rant. Glad to know the studios are still supporting you, as bothersome as they can be sometimes.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Mr. Chris</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mr. Chris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 14:58:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Sorry to hear about how the original draft got scrapped.  I just finished reading an article about how a lot of classic movies almost never got made because of studios trying to change everything.  If they keep pushing to appease the demographics, we&#039;ll never get any more classic movies, and I would&#039;ve preferred an action-comedy to a dark Shazam.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sorry to hear about how the original draft got scrapped.  I just finished reading an article about how a lot of classic movies almost never got made because of studios trying to change everything.  If they keep pushing to appease the demographics, we&#8217;ll never get any more classic movies, and I would&#8217;ve preferred an action-comedy to a dark Shazam.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Julian</title>
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		<dc:creator>Julian</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 13:05:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;That&#039;s really lame how WB made you change your vision for this project,but I guess that&#039;s just show biz,I greatly admire screenwriters and hope to be one myself someday,so keep plugging away John!&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s really lame how WB made you change your vision for this project,but I guess that&#8217;s just show biz,I greatly admire screenwriters and hope to be one myself someday,so keep plugging away John!</p>]]></content:encoded>
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