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	<title>Comments on: Writing better scene openings</title>
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	<description>A ton of useful information about screenwriting.</description>
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		<title>By: xmarisolx</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/entering-a-scene/comment-page-2#comment-171732</link>
		<dc:creator>xmarisolx</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Jun 2009 13:14:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Great re-write.  Some of this translates to other forms of writing as well.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great re-write.  Some of this translates to other forms of writing as well.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Spec Odyssey</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/entering-a-scene/comment-page-2#comment-170896</link>
		<dc:creator>Spec Odyssey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 10 May 2009 11:27:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Awesome stuff John, I am a screenwriter in England and these have really helped me! Cheers dog.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Awesome stuff John, I am a screenwriter in England and these have really helped me! Cheers dog.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Gary</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/entering-a-scene/comment-page-2#comment-170892</link>
		<dc:creator>Gary</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 09 May 2009 02:37:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Thanks John.  Keep on Scriptcasting.  Very helpful.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks John.  Keep on Scriptcasting.  Very helpful.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Richard</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/entering-a-scene/comment-page-2#comment-170878</link>
		<dc:creator>Richard</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 May 2009 02:40:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Burly man, bolo tie &amp; walrus mustache. &quot;I can sorta picture the actor who they would stick in that role.&quot; Well, Noble Willingham died a few years ago, so that only leaves Wilford Brimley.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Burly man, bolo tie &amp; walrus mustache. &#8220;I can sorta picture the actor who they would stick in that role.&#8221; Well, Noble Willingham died a few years ago, so that only leaves Wilford Brimley.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Andressa</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/entering-a-scene/comment-page-2#comment-170877</link>
		<dc:creator>Andressa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 May 2009 01:07:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I loved it. Thank you.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I loved it. Thank you.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: James Billy Hill II</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/entering-a-scene/comment-page-2#comment-170831</link>
		<dc:creator>James Billy Hill II</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 04 May 2009 04:22:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Simply brilliant. Thank you for this site and being willing and able to give what you have; it is encouraging as a screenwriter in his infancy.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Simply brilliant. Thank you for this site and being willing and able to give what you have; it is encouraging as a screenwriter in his infancy.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Nien Numb</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/entering-a-scene/comment-page-2#comment-170830</link>
		<dc:creator>Nien Numb</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 04 May 2009 02:19:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Really good stuff.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Really good stuff.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Eric M</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/entering-a-scene/comment-page-2#comment-170829</link>
		<dc:creator>Eric M</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 03 May 2009 23:43:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Love the scriptcasts.  Please, please keep &#039;em going.  And maybe a convenient link on the side of your page?&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;The masses are now making demands.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Love the scriptcasts.  Please, please keep &#8216;em going.  And maybe a convenient link on the side of your page?</p>

<p>The masses are now making demands.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Matt Bird</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/entering-a-scene/comment-page-2#comment-170824</link>
		<dc:creator>Matt Bird</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 03 May 2009 08:16:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;&quot;30&#039;s&quot; is incorrect everytime, unless you work at the NY Times, whose style-sheet clings to the outdated form.  When reading my screenwriting students&#039; work I whack those apostrophes with a big red &quot;x&quot; every time I see them.  I&#039;d mark up John too, but then I&#039;d just have white white out on my screen.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;30&#8217;s&#8221; is incorrect everytime, unless you work at the NY Times, whose style-sheet clings to the outdated form.  When reading my screenwriting students&#8217; work I whack those apostrophes with a big red &#8220;x&#8221; every time I see them.  I&#8217;d mark up John too, but then I&#8217;d just have white white out on my screen.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Ryan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ryan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 02 May 2009 16:20:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Thanks for the scriptcasts. They&#039;re great.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the scriptcasts. They&#8217;re great.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Paul Hudson</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2009/entering-a-scene/comment-page-2#comment-170816</link>
		<dc:creator>Paul Hudson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 02 May 2009 09:54:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Thanks for all the tips, everyone, I will definitely check out CeltX and compare all three products!&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for all the tips, everyone, I will definitely check out CeltX and compare all three products!</p>]]></content:encoded>
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