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		<title>By: pete</title>
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		<dc:creator>pete</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 May 2008 19:34:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;John,&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Just saw Iron Man over the weekend and loved it. I&#039;d be curious if you could be more specific about what you added to the project. If not, we&#039;ll understand...but know that each time a character (usually Tony) said something sharply hilarious, I immediately thought &quot;John August must&#039;ve contributed that.&quot; Also, the brilliant, final line of dialogue (pre-credits) - that was all you. Right?&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Pete&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>John,</p>

<p>Just saw Iron Man over the weekend and loved it. I&#8217;d be curious if you could be more specific about what you added to the project. If not, we&#8217;ll understand&#8230;but know that each time a character (usually Tony) said something sharply hilarious, I immediately thought &#8220;John August must&#8217;ve contributed that.&#8221; Also, the brilliant, final line of dialogue (pre-credits) &#8211; that was all you. Right?</p>

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		<title>By: Sean William Menzies</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sean William Menzies</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jan 2008 23:46:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;John, I agree. Saw it Saturday night and I think it&#039;s one of the greatest monster movies I&#039;ve ever seen. I firmly believe that it&#039;s up there with JAWS and ALIEN. I wonder why no one ever came up with this angle before. Framing it around the broken love of Beth and Rob was F-ing brilliant, and the use of the &quot;tape that should not have been recorded over&quot; is so good that I want to see the film again. I found it deeply disturbing and very frustrating because I was trying to see where the damned monster was but you only have the viewfinder to go by. We were so upset afterwards that we had to go somewhere quiet and sit and have a drink.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I found the film&#039;s flaws forgivable. Even JAWS has flaws (why does Hooper say the shark is a night feeder when Alex Kintner and Pippet were killed during the day??) but if you care about the people, then you&#039;ve got the audience by the you-know-whats and can take them almost anywhere.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Anyway, great film.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>John, I agree. Saw it Saturday night and I think it&#8217;s one of the greatest monster movies I&#8217;ve ever seen. I firmly believe that it&#8217;s up there with JAWS and ALIEN. I wonder why no one ever came up with this angle before. Framing it around the broken love of Beth and Rob was F-ing brilliant, and the use of the &#8220;tape that should not have been recorded over&#8221; is so good that I want to see the film again. I found it deeply disturbing and very frustrating because I was trying to see where the damned monster was but you only have the viewfinder to go by. We were so upset afterwards that we had to go somewhere quiet and sit and have a drink.</p>

<p>I found the film&#8217;s flaws forgivable. Even JAWS has flaws (why does Hooper say the shark is a night feeder when Alex Kintner and Pippet were killed during the day??) but if you care about the people, then you&#8217;ve got the audience by the you-know-whats and can take them almost anywhere.</p>

<p>Anyway, great film.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Avi L</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2008/tabula-rasa/comment-page-1#comment-118949</link>
		<dc:creator>Avi L</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jan 2008 22:30:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Why is it that people think the camera recorded for 7 hours?&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Did I miss something?&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;The IMDB lists the runtime of Cloverfield as 85 minutes. There would be approximately 5 minutes of old footage on the &quot;tape&quot; (it&#039;s unclear if they are shooting tape or memory cards. The camera rumored to be used by the characters in the film is the Panasonic AG-HSC1U, which uses SDHC cards), leaving 80 minutes of recorded footage throughout their ~7 hour adventure.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Apart from those 80 minutes, can we not assume the rest of the time the camera is in standby mode/off? Seems logical to me.&lt;/p&gt;

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&lt;li&gt;A&lt;/li&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Why is it that people think the camera recorded for 7 hours?</p>

<p>Did I miss something?</p>

<p>The IMDB lists the runtime of Cloverfield as 85 minutes. There would be approximately 5 minutes of old footage on the &#8220;tape&#8221; (it&#8217;s unclear if they are shooting tape or memory cards. The camera rumored to be used by the characters in the film is the Panasonic AG-HSC1U, which uses SDHC cards), leaving 80 minutes of recorded footage throughout their ~7 hour adventure.</p>

<p>Apart from those 80 minutes, can we not assume the rest of the time the camera is in standby mode/off? Seems logical to me.</p>

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		<title>By: Brian McCabe</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2008/tabula-rasa/comment-page-1#comment-118935</link>
		<dc:creator>Brian McCabe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jan 2008 19:10:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I saw this yesterday with a couple of friends.  Enjoyed it for what it was, a popcorn movie.  All three of us had headaches by the end of it.  One friend closed his eyes for parts during the middle in parts because he was getting overwhelmed with motion sickness.  &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I didn&#039;t mind the marketing.  And agree with poster above that most trailers spoil the film.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;As to complaints, sure camera functioning at high quality for over 7 hours is miraculous.  SPOILER: I thought he&#039;d at least put it down when crossing buildings.  But EVERY movie has those moments of disbelief.  You buy the conceit or not.  I did.  Or if I didn&#039;t, I didn&#039;t let it get in the way of my enjoyment.  &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;It had some genuine thrills and scares.  It didn&#039;t make promises it didn&#039;t keep.  It&#039;s stupid fun.  And sometimes, stupid fun is all that&#039;s needed.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I saw this yesterday with a couple of friends.  Enjoyed it for what it was, a popcorn movie.  All three of us had headaches by the end of it.  One friend closed his eyes for parts during the middle in parts because he was getting overwhelmed with motion sickness.  </p>

<p>I didn&#8217;t mind the marketing.  And agree with poster above that most trailers spoil the film.</p>

<p>As to complaints, sure camera functioning at high quality for over 7 hours is miraculous.  SPOILER: I thought he&#8217;d at least put it down when crossing buildings.  But EVERY movie has those moments of disbelief.  You buy the conceit or not.  I did.  Or if I didn&#8217;t, I didn&#8217;t let it get in the way of my enjoyment.  </p>

<p>It had some genuine thrills and scares.  It didn&#8217;t make promises it didn&#8217;t keep.  It&#8217;s stupid fun.  And sometimes, stupid fun is all that&#8217;s needed.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Anna</title>
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		<dc:creator>Anna</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jan 2008 09:33:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Regardless of whether people love or hate this movie, my question to John is how in the hell do you write a movie like that without having your reader beat you over the head with your script before using it as kindling? Before the onslaught of motion sickness, I was admitedly engaged with the whole party scene, but I found myself wondering what those scenes looked like on a page.  I&#039;m referring to the strings of disjointed, seemingly meaningless &quot;party dialogue&quot;, ad libs and the sporatic jumps around the room.  How do you get that to make sense on a piece of paper?  Can a newbie really get away with writing that way, or do you need to have a J.J. Abrams on your team before anyone will turn even the first page?&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Also, if there is anyone who wanted to love this movie, but didn&#039;t, do yourself a favor and rent THE HOST.  It is essentially the same water monster movie, but with a steadicam operator and a (kick ass) plot.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Regardless of whether people love or hate this movie, my question to John is how in the hell do you write a movie like that without having your reader beat you over the head with your script before using it as kindling? Before the onslaught of motion sickness, I was admitedly engaged with the whole party scene, but I found myself wondering what those scenes looked like on a page.  I&#8217;m referring to the strings of disjointed, seemingly meaningless &#8220;party dialogue&#8221;, ad libs and the sporatic jumps around the room.  How do you get that to make sense on a piece of paper?  Can a newbie really get away with writing that way, or do you need to have a J.J. Abrams on your team before anyone will turn even the first page?</p>

<p>Also, if there is anyone who wanted to love this movie, but didn&#8217;t, do yourself a favor and rent THE HOST.  It is essentially the same water monster movie, but with a steadicam operator and a (kick ass) plot.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Ben S.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ben S.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jan 2008 03:23:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I loved the marketing for the film.  I hadn&#039;t been so excited about seeing a film for quite a long time, while, at the same time, knowing so little about it.   &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Alas, I couldn&#039;t stand it.  I felt the movie was a inch deep and a foot wide.   I couldn&#039;t believe in the characters, from their personalities and motivations to the huge apartment and party they set up.  I was frustrated how the &quot;real time&quot; of the camera kept shortening and expanding without explanation at some points, and at other points the camera turned off and yet the tape kept running.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;All of that I could have forgiven if the monster story had captivated me.   But it didn&#039;t.   The monster, as I&#039;m sure was intended, wasn&#039;t a character at all, but a wandering disaster that arbitrarily affected the characters.  And I can&#039;t care about a disaster.   All that was left was the 20-somethings, and they fell flat.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I loved the marketing for the film.  I hadn&#8217;t been so excited about seeing a film for quite a long time, while, at the same time, knowing so little about it.   </p>

<p>Alas, I couldn&#8217;t stand it.  I felt the movie was a inch deep and a foot wide.   I couldn&#8217;t believe in the characters, from their personalities and motivations to the huge apartment and party they set up.  I was frustrated how the &#8220;real time&#8221; of the camera kept shortening and expanding without explanation at some points, and at other points the camera turned off and yet the tape kept running.</p>

<p>All of that I could have forgiven if the monster story had captivated me.   But it didn&#8217;t.   The monster, as I&#8217;m sure was intended, wasn&#8217;t a character at all, but a wandering disaster that arbitrarily affected the characters.  And I can&#8217;t care about a disaster.   All that was left was the 20-somethings, and they fell flat.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Batutta</title>
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		<dc:creator>Batutta</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jan 2008 02:47:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Yeah, and the camera records in near film quality HD, 7.1 surround sound and keeps perfect exposure and focus in nearly any lighting condition...I tried suspending my disbelief on this one. But I too got physically ill, both by the camera work, and the truly terrible vocal performance from the actor holding the camera. Didn&#039;t find him convincing at all. He didn&#039;t seem like he was actually there, because he probably wasn&#039;t, just recorded in post.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeah, and the camera records in near film quality HD, 7.1 surround sound and keeps perfect exposure and focus in nearly any lighting condition&#8230;I tried suspending my disbelief on this one. But I too got physically ill, both by the camera work, and the truly terrible vocal performance from the actor holding the camera. Didn&#8217;t find him convincing at all. He didn&#8217;t seem like he was actually there, because he probably wasn&#8217;t, just recorded in post.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Dan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Jan 2008 20:02:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I hated Cloverfield. I tried ignoring most of the marketing. The whole thing just seemed like a big gimmick that fell really short for me. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I kept thinking about how great that consumer camera that they were using most have been. It had an extremely long battery life, long recording time, was indestructible, had night vision, and a huge spotlight. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;From the beginning I just didnâ€™t get interested in the characters and the cameramanâ€™s character really begin to get tiresome. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;After the movie there was a very loud collect, &quot;Hmmpph.&quot; Iâ€™m interested in seeing how Cloverfield does over the next couple of weeks, because a lot of people walking out were saying stuff like &quot;That sucked&quot;, but I did hear a few people say &quot;It wasn&#039;t that bad.&quot; Was it similar at the theaters that anyone else went to?&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I hated Cloverfield. I tried ignoring most of the marketing. The whole thing just seemed like a big gimmick that fell really short for me. </p>

<p>I kept thinking about how great that consumer camera that they were using most have been. It had an extremely long battery life, long recording time, was indestructible, had night vision, and a huge spotlight. </p>

<p>From the beginning I just didnâ€™t get interested in the characters and the cameramanâ€™s character really begin to get tiresome. </p>

<p>After the movie there was a very loud collect, &#8220;Hmmpph.&#8221; Iâ€™m interested in seeing how Cloverfield does over the next couple of weeks, because a lot of people walking out were saying stuff like &#8220;That sucked&#8221;, but I did hear a few people say &#8220;It wasn&#8217;t that bad.&#8221; Was it similar at the theaters that anyone else went to?</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Westin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Westin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Jan 2008 17:41:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Oh yeah, like mike says, kudos to the marketing.  It didn&#039;t drive me insane like it did some people, but then, I&#039;ve had some training on how to deal with &#039;intentional mysteries&#039; thanks to X-files, Lost, ilovebees, etc.  I just filed it away under &#039;I&#039;m absolutely going to see this.&#039;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;JJ Abrams&#039; TED speech explains why he loves mystery so.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;http://www.ted.com/index.php/speakers/view/id/182&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I also loved the trailer for There Will Be Blood.  It also sets up the conflict of the movie without clearly giving away anything except that, well, there&#039;s gonna be some blood.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh yeah, like mike says, kudos to the marketing.  It didn&#8217;t drive me insane like it did some people, but then, I&#8217;ve had some training on how to deal with &#8216;intentional mysteries&#8217; thanks to X-files, Lost, ilovebees, etc.  I just filed it away under &#8216;I&#8217;m absolutely going to see this.&#8217;</p>

<p>JJ Abrams&#8217; TED speech explains why he loves mystery so.</p>

<p><a href="http://www.ted.com/index.php/speakers/view/id/182" rel="nofollow">http://www.ted.com/index.php/speakers/view/id/182</a></p>

<p>I also loved the trailer for There Will Be Blood.  It also sets up the conflict of the movie without clearly giving away anything except that, well, there&#8217;s gonna be some blood.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: mike</title>
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		<dc:creator>mike</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Jan 2008 17:30:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I have to strongly disagree with the complaining about how Cloverfield was marketed.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Personally, I think 95% of movies have terrible marketing, the trailer gives away the plot to the entire movie often including the ending (Zemeckis, I&#039;m looking at you).  Half the time I don&#039;t even bother going to see a movie just because I know it has been spoiled for me, and I&#039;ve already seen the best parts in the trailer.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I found it very refreshing to see a trailer that made it perfectly clear what the movie was about (&quot;monster attacks city&quot;) and gave the feel of the movie, but didn&#039;t show the monster at all.  I haven&#039;t seen it yet, and I haven&#039;t the foggiest idea what the monster is (and please don&#039;t spoil it for me).&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I really wish more movies would do that, leave way more to the imagination.  It&#039;s ironic that people are complaining that it was overhyped when it was one of the most secretive movie productions in years.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;And really, if you&#039;re not interested in a webgame, don&#039;t play the webgame.  It&#039;s definitely way easier to ignore than the usual nonstop commercials that make you tired of a movie before it&#039;s even out.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have to strongly disagree with the complaining about how Cloverfield was marketed.</p>

<p>Personally, I think 95% of movies have terrible marketing, the trailer gives away the plot to the entire movie often including the ending (Zemeckis, I&#8217;m looking at you).  Half the time I don&#8217;t even bother going to see a movie just because I know it has been spoiled for me, and I&#8217;ve already seen the best parts in the trailer.</p>

<p>I found it very refreshing to see a trailer that made it perfectly clear what the movie was about (&#8220;monster attacks city&#8221;) and gave the feel of the movie, but didn&#8217;t show the monster at all.  I haven&#8217;t seen it yet, and I haven&#8217;t the foggiest idea what the monster is (and please don&#8217;t spoil it for me).</p>

<p>I really wish more movies would do that, leave way more to the imagination.  It&#8217;s ironic that people are complaining that it was overhyped when it was one of the most secretive movie productions in years.</p>

<p>And really, if you&#8217;re not interested in a webgame, don&#8217;t play the webgame.  It&#8217;s definitely way easier to ignore than the usual nonstop commercials that make you tired of a movie before it&#8217;s even out.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Westin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Westin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Jan 2008 15:40:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I liked Cloverfield a great deal.  It seems like people are either offended by the conceit of the film or shocked at its &#039;meaning&#039;.  Dude!  It&#039;s a rediculous, entertaining monster movie.  &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;The theme doesn&#039;t need to be the reason for the movie&#039;s existence.  I mean, in this case no one is talking about (what I believe is) the theme.  Everyone&#039;s all &#039;this movie is about 9/11&#039; or &#039;this movie is about how stupid today&#039;s youth is&#039;.  It&#039;s about a guy in the middle of a breakup and he doesn&#039;t want to let go of the past.  Simple simple simple.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I liked Cloverfield a great deal.  It seems like people are either offended by the conceit of the film or shocked at its &#8216;meaning&#8217;.  Dude!  It&#8217;s a rediculous, entertaining monster movie.  </p>

<p>The theme doesn&#8217;t need to be the reason for the movie&#8217;s existence.  I mean, in this case no one is talking about (what I believe is) the theme.  Everyone&#8217;s all &#8216;this movie is about 9/11&#8242; or &#8216;this movie is about how stupid today&#8217;s youth is&#8217;.  It&#8217;s about a guy in the middle of a breakup and he doesn&#8217;t want to let go of the past.  Simple simple simple.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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