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		<title>By: Lon Madnight</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2008/post-strike-update/comment-page-1#comment-146457</link>
		<dc:creator>Lon Madnight</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Jul 2008 18:43:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Just to Note: &quot;Billy Batson&quot; the comic did indeed hit the stands this week. It has an energetic,breezy feel and is clearly aimed at kids. But don&#039;t dispair because there are fun things for the adult reader as well. It&#039;s not quite the classic Captain Marvel of the Fawcett comics, and long time fans are already dividing over it. I personally have enjoyed what I&#039;ve seen, and even though I&#039;m sure John&#039;s script provides us a slightly different Captain Marvel than Mike Kunkel does, I think this is going to be a popular book.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just to Note: &#8220;Billy Batson&#8221; the comic did indeed hit the stands this week. It has an energetic,breezy feel and is clearly aimed at kids. But don&#8217;t dispair because there are fun things for the adult reader as well. It&#8217;s not quite the classic Captain Marvel of the Fawcett comics, and long time fans are already dividing over it. I personally have enjoyed what I&#8217;ve seen, and even though I&#8217;m sure John&#8217;s script provides us a slightly different Captain Marvel than Mike Kunkel does, I think this is going to be a popular book.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Lon Madnight</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2008/post-strike-update/comment-page-1#comment-142276</link>
		<dc:creator>Lon Madnight</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Jun 2008 16:48:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Just wanted to take the opportunity to mention The recent successes of Iron Man, The Hulk, and Get Smart. All of which to all reports have &quot;Trusted the material&quot;. They have taken influence from the most successful period of the original property. Not neccessarily the initial stories, but the period at which the formula was perfected for that character.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;With all my heart I hope this will be the direction &quot;Billy Batson&quot; goes.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just wanted to take the opportunity to mention The recent successes of Iron Man, The Hulk, and Get Smart. All of which to all reports have &#8220;Trusted the material&#8221;. They have taken influence from the most successful period of the original property. Not neccessarily the initial stories, but the period at which the formula was perfected for that character.</p>

<p>With all my heart I hope this will be the direction &#8220;Billy Batson&#8221; goes.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Memo</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2008/post-strike-update/comment-page-1#comment-138146</link>
		<dc:creator>Memo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Jun 2008 22:15:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Please Mr. August tell us. What it&#039;s happening just right now whit this proyect?
I appreciate so much.
Regards from MÃ©xico.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Please Mr. August tell us. What it&#8217;s happening just right now whit this proyect?
I appreciate so much.
Regards from MÃ©xico.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Memo</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2008/post-strike-update/comment-page-1#comment-138144</link>
		<dc:creator>Memo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Jun 2008 22:13:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Extraordinary trailer Lon, I was thinking this could be a teaser for the movie.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Extraordinary trailer Lon, I was thinking this could be a teaser for the movie.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: mdtk</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2008/post-strike-update/comment-page-1#comment-125598</link>
		<dc:creator>mdtk</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 03:49:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Good pitch Lon.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good pitch Lon.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Lon Madnight</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2008/post-strike-update/comment-page-1#comment-124481</link>
		<dc:creator>Lon Madnight</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 28 Mar 2008 12:17:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Actually, the issue of who Shazam is can be dealt with in the advertising, to a great degree. A posible TV ad as example:&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;OPEN in the wizard&#039;s chamber, flickering torches light the scene. The Bearded aincent looks slightly OC as he speaks.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;pre&gt;&lt;code&gt;                         SHAZAM
            For five thousand years I have used
            the power the gods have given me to
            battle evil. But my time is now ended.
            You shall be my successor.
            BILLY BATSON,speak my name!
&lt;/code&gt;&lt;/pre&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;CUT TO: BILLY. Track in as the young boy considers what he has heard. He looks up and into the camera.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;pre&gt;&lt;code&gt;                            BILLY
                         SHAZAM!
&lt;/code&gt;&lt;/pre&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;A powerful crack of thunder peals, a shot of a lightning bolt flashes. The scene washes with gleaming light. As the light subsides we see a mighty figure, indistinct in the glare. Only certain elements are visible: A red costume, a white cape, and fleetingly, the image of a lightning bolt on the chest. Camera zooms into the figure and we go black.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;TITLE: &quot;Billy Batson and the Magic of SHAZAM&quot;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Even the dullest moviegoer now knows the guy in the red suit is NOT Shazam, but they certainly want to know who he is.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;That&#039;s just my view, of course.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Actually, the issue of who Shazam is can be dealt with in the advertising, to a great degree. A posible TV ad as example:</p>

<p>OPEN in the wizard&#8217;s chamber, flickering torches light the scene. The Bearded aincent looks slightly OC as he speaks.</p>

<p><pre><code>                         SHAZAM
            For five thousand years I have used
            the power the gods have given me to
            battle evil. But my time is now ended.
            You shall be my successor.
            BILLY BATSON,speak my name!
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<p>CUT TO: BILLY. Track in as the young boy considers what he has heard. He looks up and into the camera.</p>

<p><pre><code>                            BILLY
                         SHAZAM!
</code></pre></p>

<p>A powerful crack of thunder peals, a shot of a lightning bolt flashes. The scene washes with gleaming light. As the light subsides we see a mighty figure, indistinct in the glare. Only certain elements are visible: A red costume, a white cape, and fleetingly, the image of a lightning bolt on the chest. Camera zooms into the figure and we go black.</p>

<p>TITLE: &#8220;Billy Batson and the Magic of SHAZAM&#8221;</p>

<p>Even the dullest moviegoer now knows the guy in the red suit is NOT Shazam, but they certainly want to know who he is.</p>

<p>That&#8217;s just my view, of course.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Lon Madnight</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lon Madnight</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Mar 2008 00:10:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;&quot;Billy Batson and the MAGIC of Shazam&quot; is the title of a comic that will debut in July from DC. Artist Mike Kunkel is the talent behind the book.
http://kunkelshazam.blogspot.com/&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Developing a servicible title for a Captain Marvel series is a task that has dogged a number of creative talents.The last regular series was &quot;The Power of Shazam!&quot; possibilities mentioned in the last few years have included &quot;Shazam!- Word of Power&quot;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I had thought of &quot;The Marvels of Shazam&quot;, which I still feel handles the issue nicely, as &quot;Captain Marvel&quot; isn&#039;t used. (Marvel Comics does not own the english word &quot;Marvel&quot;) Another option might be &quot;The World&#039;s Mightiest Mortal&quot; (Cap&#039;s perennial nickname).&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;But titles are of secondary importance to content. I&#039;d like to take this opportunity to offer again the advice I would give to anyone involved in the production of a comic-book film : Trust the Material. Look to the most successful period of the character&#039;s history and allow it to guide you. Simple logic suggests the elements for a sure-fire hit are there.
Spider-Man, Batman, these undeniable hits took much of their tone (even whole sequences) directly from the pages of the comics.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Such films go wrong when filmakers forget they&#039;re just playing with someone elses&#039; toys and should try to leave them in the condition they were found (Hulk, Superman Returns)&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I have faith that John will find the correct balance of new and old, tweak only just enough to keep it all fresh and accessible to a modern audience. And most importantly,without losing the essential sense of fun that is the core of Captain Marvel.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;And to whomever makes such decisions: Please don&#039;t &quot;improve&quot; or &quot;adjust&quot; Captain Marvel&#039;s costume. It&#039;s perfect as is.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Billy Batson and the MAGIC of Shazam&#8221; is the title of a comic that will debut in July from DC. Artist Mike Kunkel is the talent behind the book.
<a href="http://kunkelshazam.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">http://kunkelshazam.blogspot.com/</a></p>

<p>Developing a servicible title for a Captain Marvel series is a task that has dogged a number of creative talents.The last regular series was &#8220;The Power of Shazam!&#8221; possibilities mentioned in the last few years have included &#8220;Shazam!- Word of Power&#8221;</p>

<p>I had thought of &#8220;The Marvels of Shazam&#8221;, which I still feel handles the issue nicely, as &#8220;Captain Marvel&#8221; isn&#8217;t used. (Marvel Comics does not own the english word &#8220;Marvel&#8221;) Another option might be &#8220;The World&#8217;s Mightiest Mortal&#8221; (Cap&#8217;s perennial nickname).</p>

<p>But titles are of secondary importance to content. I&#8217;d like to take this opportunity to offer again the advice I would give to anyone involved in the production of a comic-book film : Trust the Material. Look to the most successful period of the character&#8217;s history and allow it to guide you. Simple logic suggests the elements for a sure-fire hit are there.
Spider-Man, Batman, these undeniable hits took much of their tone (even whole sequences) directly from the pages of the comics.</p>

<p>Such films go wrong when filmakers forget they&#8217;re just playing with someone elses&#8217; toys and should try to leave them in the condition they were found (Hulk, Superman Returns)</p>

<p>I have faith that John will find the correct balance of new and old, tweak only just enough to keep it all fresh and accessible to a modern audience. And most importantly,without losing the essential sense of fun that is the core of Captain Marvel.</p>

<p>And to whomever makes such decisions: Please don&#8217;t &#8220;improve&#8221; or &#8220;adjust&#8221; Captain Marvel&#8217;s costume. It&#8217;s perfect as is.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Kimota</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kimota</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Mar 2008 23:03:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I have to join in and say &quot;Billy Batson and the Secret of Shazam&quot; makes me nervous as a title. Does this mean the Shazam film is being pitched more at the junior audience as this is the implication. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;(Don&#039;t get me wrong, I am a complete Potter-phile, but I am protective of good ol&#039; Captain Marvel as I feel he&#039;s had such a rough deal over the years.)&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Keep the one word title. I love it. With clever marketing and a decent poster design, any potential confusion that this is the character&#039;s name can be reduced.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have to join in and say &#8220;Billy Batson and the Secret of Shazam&#8221; makes me nervous as a title. Does this mean the Shazam film is being pitched more at the junior audience as this is the implication. </p>

<p>(Don&#8217;t get me wrong, I am a complete Potter-phile, but I am protective of good ol&#8217; Captain Marvel as I feel he&#8217;s had such a rough deal over the years.)</p>

<p>Keep the one word title. I love it. With clever marketing and a decent poster design, any potential confusion that this is the character&#8217;s name can be reduced.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Bobby</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bobby</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Mar 2008 17:20:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;yippee! The Nines is out on DVD here in Ireland on March 31st!&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>yippee! The Nines is out on DVD here in Ireland on March 31st!</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Kiki</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2008/post-strike-update/comment-page-1#comment-122297</link>
		<dc:creator>Kiki</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Mar 2008 18:25:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;If we&#039;re voting here, I want him to say &quot;Shazam!&quot; a LOT -- and I want him to live in a big, lumbering RV. Just like the TV show. &lt;i&gt;Please.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Now, for those who like their superheroes more literately critically analyzed (like me): 
http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2008/03/10/080310fa_fact_chabon&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>If we&#8217;re voting here, I want him to say &#8220;Shazam!&#8221; a LOT &#8212; and I want him to live in a big, lumbering RV. Just like the TV show. <i>Please.</i></p>

<p>Now, for those who like their superheroes more literately critically analyzed (like me): 
<a href="http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2008/03/10/080310fa_fact_chabon" rel="nofollow">http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2008/03/10/080310fa_fact_chabon</a></p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Anonymous</title>
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		<dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Mar 2008 12:21:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Came across this and immediately thought of John: http://icanhascheezburger.files.wordpress.com/2008/02/funny-pictures-cat-punches-dog.jpg&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Came across this and immediately thought of John: <a href="http://icanhascheezburger.files.wordpress.com/2008/02/funny-pictures-cat-punches-dog.jpg" rel="nofollow">http://icanhascheezburger.files.wordpress.com/2008/02/funny-pictures-cat-punches-dog.jpg</a></p>]]></content:encoded>
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