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		<title>By: Ehsan Alirezaei</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2007/short-answer-sprint/comment-page-1#comment-118910</link>
		<dc:creator>Ehsan Alirezaei</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jan 2008 11:48:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Dear John
I&#039;m studying Dramatic Literature in University Of Tehran, Tehran, Iran. But my interest is writing screenplays. So far, I have written several screenplays but as you may know making films in Iran is not easy due to extreme censorship and I have not had any opportunities in selling my screenplays in Iran. 
I am writing to ask you about an agency (I can find them on the web but I do not know which one is trustworthy) or a good screenplay festival, in which I can present my screenplays. I have sent one of my screenplays to the Screenplay Festival ( www.screenplayfestival.com) and I have been chosen as one of the semi-finalists, but I do not know how much that festival is valid and well-respected. I would appreciate it if you can tell me a bit about that festival too. 
Thank you in advance,
Ehsan&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear John
I&#8217;m studying Dramatic Literature in University Of Tehran, Tehran, Iran. But my interest is writing screenplays. So far, I have written several screenplays but as you may know making films in Iran is not easy due to extreme censorship and I have not had any opportunities in selling my screenplays in Iran. 
I am writing to ask you about an agency (I can find them on the web but I do not know which one is trustworthy) or a good screenplay festival, in which I can present my screenplays. I have sent one of my screenplays to the Screenplay Festival ( <a href="http://www.screenplayfestival.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.screenplayfestival.com</a>) and I have been chosen as one of the semi-finalists, but I do not know how much that festival is valid and well-respected. I would appreciate it if you can tell me a bit about that festival too. 
Thank you in advance,
Ehsan</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: aithon</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2007/short-answer-sprint/comment-page-1#comment-114672</link>
		<dc:creator>aithon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Dec 2007 21:29:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I liked the comment about the mix tape, and I also find it interesting. Often, when I&#039;m writing, I turn to other media for inspiration, partly because when I turn to writers as inspiration for writing, I end up changing my own personal style and emulating what I&#039;m reading. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I like music for writing inspiration b/c it&#039;s so personal. Recently, I was writing a character for a class and the instructor, rightly, pointed out that I didn&#039;t have a handle on who the character was, and so it wasn&#039;t coming across. I struggled and struggled until, in an unrelated way, I picked up the most recent Scary Kids, Scaring Kids album, where I found that several of the songs matched the mental state I was trying to create in the character. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I can&#039;t imagine, however, that those songs would ever get onto the soundtrack. They would be so obvious and uncomfortable, telling the story for me instead of creating a mood.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;sorry that took so long.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I liked the comment about the mix tape, and I also find it interesting. Often, when I&#8217;m writing, I turn to other media for inspiration, partly because when I turn to writers as inspiration for writing, I end up changing my own personal style and emulating what I&#8217;m reading. </p>

<p>I like music for writing inspiration b/c it&#8217;s so personal. Recently, I was writing a character for a class and the instructor, rightly, pointed out that I didn&#8217;t have a handle on who the character was, and so it wasn&#8217;t coming across. I struggled and struggled until, in an unrelated way, I picked up the most recent Scary Kids, Scaring Kids album, where I found that several of the songs matched the mental state I was trying to create in the character. </p>

<p>I can&#8217;t imagine, however, that those songs would ever get onto the soundtrack. They would be so obvious and uncomfortable, telling the story for me instead of creating a mood.</p>

<p>sorry that took so long.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Lex</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lex</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Dec 2007 21:10:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Re: Jim&#039;s Question&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Read Raymond Chandler&#039;s essay &quot;The Simple Art of Murder.&quot; It doesn&#039;t give any hints about how to create a good plot structure, but gives a lot of examples of what Chandler considered to be contrived mystery storylines.&lt;/p&gt;

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&lt;li&gt;Lex&lt;/li&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Re: Jim&#8217;s Question</p>

<p>Read Raymond Chandler&#8217;s essay &#8220;The Simple Art of Murder.&#8221; It doesn&#8217;t give any hints about how to create a good plot structure, but gives a lot of examples of what Chandler considered to be contrived mystery storylines.</p>

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		<title>By: OJ (not that one)</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2007/short-answer-sprint/comment-page-1#comment-114649</link>
		<dc:creator>OJ (not that one)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Dec 2007 12:58:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Regarding M&#039;s question on biopic structure, Scott Alexander and Larry Karaszewski (well, one of them) said in the audio commentary to Auto Focus that they like to focus on a defining period in the person&#039;s life, the one that is the most exciting and exemplifies their characteristics, rather than trying to cover their entire life.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;They have some experience on the matter, having written Ed Wood, Man on the Moon and The People Vs. Larry Flynt as well as producing Auto Focus. (Although I would argue that a different approach can work as well; Walk the Line comes to mind.)&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Regarding M&#8217;s question on biopic structure, Scott Alexander and Larry Karaszewski (well, one of them) said in the audio commentary to Auto Focus that they like to focus on a defining period in the person&#8217;s life, the one that is the most exciting and exemplifies their characteristics, rather than trying to cover their entire life.</p>

<p>They have some experience on the matter, having written Ed Wood, Man on the Moon and The People Vs. Larry Flynt as well as producing Auto Focus. (Although I would argue that a different approach can work as well; Walk the Line comes to mind.)</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Brian</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brian</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Dec 2007 21:31:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;That&#039;s some nice advice, Doug.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s some nice advice, Doug.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Doug</title>
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		<dc:creator>Doug</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Dec 2007 12:05:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;To add to John&#039;s comments on writing non-standard English dialogue, don&#039;t write phonetically. I recently auditioned for a film with exceptionally rural Southern characters. This is an actual line of dialogue as written: &quot;Ma God, how cin ya say aâ€™ta me lik tha? &quot; The script itself was very good, but the phonetic writing was extremely distracting and created a lot of speed bumps for the reader. Even as a Southern actor who plays a lot of characters who talk this way, there were times where I would just stare at a line for a few minutes trying to figure out what the hell the writer was trying to say. Not just in the sense of the line, but also the words themselves -- what real word the writer&#039;s invented spelling represented. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;And to be frank, phonetic writing can also be pretty insulting to the culture you&#039;re trying to emulate. Imagine writing a period African-American character and giving him/her the line, &quot;I sho&#039; do likes you, Miss Clarice!&quot;  If you describe the character adequately, the clearer, &quot;I sure do like you, Miss Clarice,&quot; will give the reader and performer the proper flavor of what you&#039;re going for. But there&#039;s nothing worse than a writer who is nothing like you saying, &quot;This is how you people talk.&quot;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;In short, dialects are regional or cultural rhythms made up of slurs, word substitutions and words being dropped altogether: &quot;Y&#039;all, I walked down them stairs, nearly broke my neck.&quot; You can give a very strong sense of a dialect without having to insert random vowels or even drop a lot of g&#039;s. Trust the actor to do that for you. If they can do the dialect, they know where to adjust.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>To add to John&#8217;s comments on writing non-standard English dialogue, don&#8217;t write phonetically. I recently auditioned for a film with exceptionally rural Southern characters. This is an actual line of dialogue as written: &#8220;Ma God, how cin ya say aâ€™ta me lik tha? &#8221; The script itself was very good, but the phonetic writing was extremely distracting and created a lot of speed bumps for the reader. Even as a Southern actor who plays a lot of characters who talk this way, there were times where I would just stare at a line for a few minutes trying to figure out what the hell the writer was trying to say. Not just in the sense of the line, but also the words themselves &#8212; what real word the writer&#8217;s invented spelling represented. </p>

<p>And to be frank, phonetic writing can also be pretty insulting to the culture you&#8217;re trying to emulate. Imagine writing a period African-American character and giving him/her the line, &#8220;I sho&#8217; do likes you, Miss Clarice!&#8221;  If you describe the character adequately, the clearer, &#8220;I sure do like you, Miss Clarice,&#8221; will give the reader and performer the proper flavor of what you&#8217;re going for. But there&#8217;s nothing worse than a writer who is nothing like you saying, &#8220;This is how you people talk.&#8221;</p>

<p>In short, dialects are regional or cultural rhythms made up of slurs, word substitutions and words being dropped altogether: &#8220;Y&#8217;all, I walked down them stairs, nearly broke my neck.&#8221; You can give a very strong sense of a dialect without having to insert random vowels or even drop a lot of g&#8217;s. Trust the actor to do that for you. If they can do the dialect, they know where to adjust.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Andy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Andy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Dec 2007 11:08:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;It is so frustrating to hear of all these incredible opportunities to rub shoulders with so many great screenwriters who are out picketing, and yet I live so far away it is impossible to partake of these opportunities!!  Thank you for offering them though, and I hope those who can will make full use of them for those of us who cannot.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It is so frustrating to hear of all these incredible opportunities to rub shoulders with so many great screenwriters who are out picketing, and yet I live so far away it is impossible to partake of these opportunities!!  Thank you for offering them though, and I hope those who can will make full use of them for those of us who cannot.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Chas Magno</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chas Magno</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Dec 2007 09:34:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Now THAT&#039;S a sprint!&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Now THAT&#8217;S a sprint!</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Jared</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jared</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Dec 2007 04:37:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Yeah, the question re: defecation was pretty horrifying. Wow. For some reason I had to read it three times.

That aside- nice job getting through so many at once! Very fun/enlightening to read.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeah, the question re: defecation was pretty horrifying. Wow. For some reason I had to read it three times.

That aside- nice job getting through so many at once! Very fun/enlightening to read.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Tim W.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tim W.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Dec 2007 02:59:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Ya, I&#039;m surprised you threw in the `shit-camel&#039; comment.  I just can&#039;t believe that was a serious question.  &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Since you might still be in that `sprint&#039;-mode, maybe you could just answer a quick question.  How many pages do you generally write in a dedicated hour of writing?  I know this might be a difficult question, as in some hours you might write a couple of lines and in another hour you might be on a roll, but I&#039;m just looking for a ballpark figure.  &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Thanks&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ya, I&#8217;m surprised you threw in the `shit-camel&#8217; comment.  I just can&#8217;t believe that was a serious question.  </p>

<p>Since you might still be in that `sprint&#8217;-mode, maybe you could just answer a quick question.  How many pages do you generally write in a dedicated hour of writing?  I know this might be a difficult question, as in some hours you might write a couple of lines and in another hour you might be on a roll, but I&#8217;m just looking for a ballpark figure.  </p>

<p>Thanks</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Jake Hollywood</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jake Hollywood</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Dec 2007 02:18:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;In a seemingly unrelated question to this post, any idea when the Peter Hanson documentary (you&#039;re in it) will be made public?&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In a seemingly unrelated question to this post, any idea when the Peter Hanson documentary (you&#8217;re in it) will be made public?</p>]]></content:encoded>
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