Comments on: Blood stains and clown pants

By: Michael Byrd

Michael Byrd — Thu, 03 May 2007 01:47:06 +0000

Sorry I missed the second Scene Challenge, as this one was really good and exactly what I wanted to get in on. Thanks for the tutlege, J.A.!

By: Eric Szyszka

Eric Szyszka — Tue, 01 May 2007 06:14:30 +0000

I didn’t try for this one since I was named behind Liz last time. I also didn’t get around to reading the entries… But you could so tie the two contests together! Okay, a guy needs to get the semen stains out of his starfleet uniform before he HAS to be at the sci-fi convention. Beat the clock — wait, even that sounds dirty. Too much, eh?

By: Jim Endecott

Jim Endecott — Mon, 30 Apr 2007 17:54:34 +0000

I am just starting out as a screenwriter and this little competition was fun. I learned quite a bit about myself and the craft in just 160+ posts.

A long way to go and I am enjoying the journey.

Thank you John.

-Jim

By: James Patrick Joyce

James Patrick Joyce — Mon, 30 Apr 2007 17:18:42 +0000

I think my use of Captain Marvel eliminated me.

By: Eric Pope

Eric Pope — Mon, 30 Apr 2007 17:17:24 +0000

I’m definitely going to rewrite mine before I post it next time. Lesson learned!

By: Felix

Felix — Mon, 30 Apr 2007 16:21:53 +0000

Thanks, John, for taking the time to go through all of our entries. This was pretty cool, and I enjoyed being part of it. Looking forward to the next one. Congrats to all who participated.

By: Dante Kleinberg

Dante Kleinberg — Mon, 30 Apr 2007 15:32:29 +0000

I'll admit, I couldn't make it through the first 20 entries myself, so what John did is pretty amazing. And for free

And to those above who ask, I'd rather he DIDN'T post the Top 25, because then I won't know that I didn't make it.

By: Earl Newton

Earl Newton — Mon, 30 Apr 2007 15:08:43 +0000

I have to hand it to you for READING them all, John. Good gravy.

By: Erin

Erin — Mon, 30 Apr 2007 14:53:52 +0000

reminds me of an old joke...

Q: What's the worst part about being a clown? A: Getting the blood stains out of your clown suit.

Q: What's the best thing about being a clown? A: Seeing how big your dick looks in those little hands.

By: Joel Glass

Joel Glass — Mon, 30 Apr 2007 07:51:44 +0000

As Hatch McCray shakes a french fry of his black sock onto the pavement and discretly shoves it back in his trunk.

The trunk is loaded with very dirty clothes enough to stink up the counter. Mr Mcray is polished except for the lack of care taken to his shoes. He places the worn garbage bag on the counter and returns to the car with a claim-stub and a pair of dirty breifs removed by the asian woman from the inside pant leg. Hes now off to the car wash. Can a man change his life on a Monday morning?

By: Paul Atkinson

Paul Atkinson — Mon, 30 Apr 2007 07:41:45 +0000

Somehow I didn't think of comedy at all when I read the scene set-up. Mine (#43) was supposed to be from something akin to a Jason Statham movie. Da well, there's always next time.

by the way, Danny's was hilarious. I can see why he wins. Great Dialogue.