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		<title>By: Oliver</title>
		<link>http://johnaugust.com/archives/2006/professional-writing-and-the-rise-of-the-amateur/comment-page-2#comment-126261</link>
		<dc:creator>Oliver</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2008 01:51:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Fantastic...very enjoyable to read. I am a director working in the television industry in Australia and this article reminded me of something that an aspiring young &quot;film maker&quot; said to me.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;We were at a party talking about a short film festival we had just been to and I was asked by him what I thought of the films (of which one of his was featured). I always try to offer constructive comments so I said that I could see what each film was trying to do but I felt that the filmmakers needed to take more care in the construction.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;(Basically what I was saying was that the editing was poor, the films were photographed badly and there was a complete lack of sound design, blah blah blah)&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;The response...&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&#039;Well these are amateur films! That&#039;s not fair, you&#039;re a professional, you get paid to do this kind of stuff.&quot; &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;What I liked about your article John is the idea that we are always judged.  The idea of the amateur is thrown around as an excuse for poor work. Well the professional world has no excuses. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;When my commercials get played on air they either work or don&#039;t (hopefully the former). It would be great if there was a little disclaimer saying &#039;Sorry, I didn&#039;t have much time to prepare&#039;, at the bottom of the screen. But there isn&#039;t. Your work just sinks or swims and then you move on. But the great thing about that is you learn from it. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;What this guy didn&#039;t realize is that he had made an excuse for his work. Which meant to me that in some way he wasn&#039;t proud of it. But he should be. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;So I guess my point is that, acting professional actually helps you in your career as an aspiring (insert profession here). It means that at the end of the job you can say that you did your best.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Which is all you can do. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Keep it up John.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Oliver&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fantastic&#8230;very enjoyable to read. I am a director working in the television industry in Australia and this article reminded me of something that an aspiring young &#8220;film maker&#8221; said to me.</p>

<p>We were at a party talking about a short film festival we had just been to and I was asked by him what I thought of the films (of which one of his was featured). I always try to offer constructive comments so I said that I could see what each film was trying to do but I felt that the filmmakers needed to take more care in the construction.</p>

<p>(Basically what I was saying was that the editing was poor, the films were photographed badly and there was a complete lack of sound design, blah blah blah)</p>

<p>The response&#8230;</p>

<p>&#8216;Well these are amateur films! That&#8217;s not fair, you&#8217;re a professional, you get paid to do this kind of stuff.&#8221; </p>

<p>What I liked about your article John is the idea that we are always judged.  The idea of the amateur is thrown around as an excuse for poor work. Well the professional world has no excuses. </p>

<p>When my commercials get played on air they either work or don&#8217;t (hopefully the former). It would be great if there was a little disclaimer saying &#8216;Sorry, I didn&#8217;t have much time to prepare&#8217;, at the bottom of the screen. But there isn&#8217;t. Your work just sinks or swims and then you move on. But the great thing about that is you learn from it. </p>

<p>What this guy didn&#8217;t realize is that he had made an excuse for his work. Which meant to me that in some way he wasn&#8217;t proud of it. But he should be. </p>

<p>So I guess my point is that, acting professional actually helps you in your career as an aspiring (insert profession here). It means that at the end of the job you can say that you did your best.</p>

<p>Which is all you can do. </p>

<p>Keep it up John.</p>

<p>Oliver</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: John Marsden</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Marsden</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Mar 2008 19:29:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Hi!&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I enjoyed reading &quot;Professional Writing and the Rise of the Amateur&quot; it
was very thought provoking. In the article you state:&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&quot;The barriers to entry have never been lower. You can make a short film with a $500 camera, and post it on YouTube.com, and be a worldwide sensation the next day&quot;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I am an armchair director and it seems to me that you are almost throwing up a challenge here. I wonder if I could trouble you to elaborate more on the &quot;$500 camera&quot; -- model/type etc. I am a complete ignoramus. Would greatly appreciate it. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;John Marsden,
Chicago IL&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi!</p>

<p>I enjoyed reading &#8220;Professional Writing and the Rise of the Amateur&#8221; it
was very thought provoking. In the article you state:</p>

<p>&#8220;The barriers to entry have never been lower. You can make a short film with a $500 camera, and post it on YouTube.com, and be a worldwide sensation the next day&#8221;</p>

<p>I am an armchair director and it seems to me that you are almost throwing up a challenge here. I wonder if I could trouble you to elaborate more on the &#8220;$500 camera&#8221; &#8212; model/type etc. I am a complete ignoramus. Would greatly appreciate it. </p>

<p>John Marsden,
Chicago IL</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Helen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Helen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Feb 2008 07:55:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I found this while searching for something else, but oh! what happy happenstance... Thanks for a great and encouraging read, John!&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I found this while searching for something else, but oh! what happy happenstance&#8230; Thanks for a great and encouraging read, John!</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Hector</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hector</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 27 Jan 2008 05:59:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Just printed out the pdf to read. Thanks.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just printed out the pdf to read. Thanks.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Donnie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Donnie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2007 23:50:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Wait... in the tabloid commentary, are YOU the older gay man or is Tom Cruise? Because rest assured, he WILL &#039;sue you in England!&#039;&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wait&#8230; in the tabloid commentary, are YOU the older gay man or is Tom Cruise? Because rest assured, he WILL &#8217;sue you in England!&#8217;</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: MARK11</title>
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		<dc:creator>MARK11</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Jun 2007 00:22:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;JUNE 4 2007&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I know...it&#039;s late. Over a year. But after reading your speech.
Thank you. John.
Thank you.
Thnak you.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Can&#039;t talk you how many debates (not really) I had at UCLA and after,
breaking into the industry where I was the only one who stood for professionalism having nothing to do with money or getting paid for it.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Guess it&#039;s all on the roads we choose.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;So...&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Thank you.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;MARK&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>JUNE 4 2007</p>

<p>I know&#8230;it&#8217;s late. Over a year. But after reading your speech.
Thank you. John.
Thank you.
Thnak you.</p>

<p>Can&#8217;t talk you how many debates (not really) I had at UCLA and after,
breaking into the industry where I was the only one who stood for professionalism having nothing to do with money or getting paid for it.</p>

<p>Guess it&#8217;s all on the roads we choose.</p>

<p>So&#8230;</p>

<p>Thank you.</p>

<p>MARK</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Andrew Sherman</title>
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		<dc:creator>Andrew Sherman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Feb 2007 01:23:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;one has to act like a professional before one is paid like one.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;That explains why writers such as Joe Eszterhas, Billy Wilder and Ben Hecht were so well paid and had access to so many paid assignements: They all came from a journalist background and already spent years understanding (and practicing) the importance of:&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Deadlines.
Logic. 
Accuracy.
Accountability.
Consistency.
Presentation, a.k.a. â€œGiving a shit.â€?
Meeting Peer Standards.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I doubt that a script sale or option will suddenly make a person a professional. I tend to think some of the reasons for the one-hit wonders and for the massive of amount of rewriting that is done on spec scripts by script doctors (and not by the spec writer himself) is becasue the spec writer is suddenly under pressure to be professional... ie., to meet the demands of a deadline.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;If we want to be paid like a professional, we need to be treated like a professional. And we&#039;ll only get treated the way we act.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Thanks for the article and website, John.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>one has to act like a professional before one is paid like one.</p>

<p>That explains why writers such as Joe Eszterhas, Billy Wilder and Ben Hecht were so well paid and had access to so many paid assignements: They all came from a journalist background and already spent years understanding (and practicing) the importance of:</p>

<p>Deadlines.
Logic. 
Accuracy.
Accountability.
Consistency.
Presentation, a.k.a. â€œGiving a shit.â€?
Meeting Peer Standards.</p>

<p>I doubt that a script sale or option will suddenly make a person a professional. I tend to think some of the reasons for the one-hit wonders and for the massive of amount of rewriting that is done on spec scripts by script doctors (and not by the spec writer himself) is becasue the spec writer is suddenly under pressure to be professional&#8230; ie., to meet the demands of a deadline.</p>

<p>If we want to be paid like a professional, we need to be treated like a professional. And we&#8217;ll only get treated the way we act.</p>

<p>Thanks for the article and website, John.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Andrew Sherman</title>
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		<dc:creator>Andrew Sherman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Feb 2007 00:45:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;one has to act like a professional before one is paid like one.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;That explains why writers such as Joe Eszterhas, Billy Wilder and Ben Hecht were so well paid and had access to so many paid assignements: They all came from a journalist background and already spent years understanding (and practicing) the importance of:&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Deadlines.
Logic. 
Accuracy.
Accountability.
Consistency.
Presentation, a.k.a. â€œGiving a shit.â€?
Meeting Peer Standards.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I doubt that a script sale or option will suddenly make a person a professional. I tend to think some of the reasons for the one-hit wonders and for the massive of amount of rewriting that is done on spec scripts by script doctors (and not by the spec writer himself) is becasue the spec writer is suddenly under pressure to be professional... ie., to meet the demands of deadline.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;If we want to be paid like a professioanl, we need to be treated like a professional. And we&#039;ll only get treated the way we act.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Thanks for the article and website, John.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>one has to act like a professional before one is paid like one.</p>

<p>That explains why writers such as Joe Eszterhas, Billy Wilder and Ben Hecht were so well paid and had access to so many paid assignements: They all came from a journalist background and already spent years understanding (and practicing) the importance of:</p>

<p>Deadlines.
Logic. 
Accuracy.
Accountability.
Consistency.
Presentation, a.k.a. â€œGiving a shit.â€?
Meeting Peer Standards.</p>

<p>I doubt that a script sale or option will suddenly make a person a professional. I tend to think some of the reasons for the one-hit wonders and for the massive of amount of rewriting that is done on spec scripts by script doctors (and not by the spec writer himself) is becasue the spec writer is suddenly under pressure to be professional&#8230; ie., to meet the demands of deadline.</p>

<p>If we want to be paid like a professioanl, we need to be treated like a professional. And we&#8217;ll only get treated the way we act.</p>

<p>Thanks for the article and website, John.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: david O'Hara</title>
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		<dc:creator>david O'Hara</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 14 Sep 2006 21:59:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Enjoyed the speech.  &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;But I would rather read a good story with spelling and grammatical errors, than a boring, formula-clone story professionaly written.   &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;All too often the RULES are the end-all, be-all of the untalented.  It&#039;s something to cling to.  A way to knock a better story.   When I was in school, I had teachers ding my work, then passing it around because it was worth reading.  &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;When I  watch a movie, I catch a lot of the screenwriter&#039;s misspelled words, but I won&#039;t walk out unless the movie sucks.&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Enjoyed the speech.  </p>

<p>But I would rather read a good story with spelling and grammatical errors, than a boring, formula-clone story professionaly written.   </p>

<p>All too often the RULES are the end-all, be-all of the untalented.  It&#8217;s something to cling to.  A way to knock a better story.   When I was in school, I had teachers ding my work, then passing it around because it was worth reading.  </p>

<p>When I  watch a movie, I catch a lot of the screenwriter&#8217;s misspelled words, but I won&#8217;t walk out unless the movie sucks.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Ben</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ben</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Aug 2006 23:48:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I stumbled across this, and loved it.  &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;With all the people talking in &quot;blogs&quot;, I wonder if that means we become a society of people who don&#039;t know how to listen?&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I stumbled across this, and loved it.  </p>

<p>With all the people talking in &#8220;blogs&#8221;, I wonder if that means we become a society of people who don&#8217;t know how to listen?</p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>By: Federico Paschino</title>
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		<dc:creator>Federico Paschino</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 26 Apr 2006 14:29:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Hi Mr. August, I am an Italian aspiring screenwriter. I loved your speech, I found it very useful and now I know the true difference between &quot;amateur&quot; and &quot;professional&quot;; finally I understood that everything I do I must do it in the best way possible.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Federico&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Mr. August, I am an Italian aspiring screenwriter. I loved your speech, I found it very useful and now I know the true difference between &#8220;amateur&#8221; and &#8220;professional&#8221;; finally I understood that everything I do I must do it in the best way possible.</p>

<p>Federico</p>]]></content:encoded>
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